[One Piece: Eternal Quest] The Mess Room

Um, to give you a heads up, Jel, I think Victor was one of the reasons people got thrown for tone. And do they have to be npc'd if a character exists to fulfil that role? I asked about it because frankly, we need fewer characters in the scenes (or it seems that way to me, but then, I never liked being in groups larger than 7).
 
uh yeah i'm going to try to tone down his idiosyncrasies. not bring them up quite so much. honestly i viewed the character as being somewhat goofy and out of touch with most societies. he does not know much about the world, really. focus on those bits and i think it will be fine...the undead minion is probably going to cause problems though... the creepiness was mostly from being from a culture of mad scientists... for all that he is Chaotic Good. and i intend to play him as such. he does have a dark side but... he is one of the good guys.
 
Pity you can't be a scientist doctor who sews people up. The closest you can get is the cyborg feats, which could work.
 
... i'll try. been a while since i read a book with one in it though... do you think that having him warn people that they do not want to know would help?
 
er yeah that was something i had just improved. it seemed unusual and not too disturbing. not something i would eat but...
 
er the minion's body was made up of volunteers... yeah that sounds convincing and in character for them... and seeing the juxtaposition of zombie and eat brains, i have to ask did you think i was talking about cannibalism?


and yeah i said the character is good because for the most part he does not look for trouble. he isn't the sort to attack helpless people. he will honestly want to help innocent people when given a chance. probably the most evil thing he wants is for the world nobles to suffer. but his plans there is to round them up and place them on an island where no one can get to them, giving them the tools necessary survive. making them work for their lives. he might or might not end forgiving Admiral Pavo for his part in his friends death. that bit depends on how Shepsquared goes with the character really. but those are all the reasons why i said he is "Good."
 
That was the impression I got from talking with some of the folks who left due to tone, that's all. Can I ask a favor? I know it's a bit of a nitpicky thing to ask, but can you try to capitalize and punctuate roughly correctly? It's just that the English major in me dies a little inside whenever I read posts with no capitalization outside of names and such.
 
G'night, man. Also, thanks for bearing with me, Jel. I really appreciate it. :D


Well, finally reread up to Aokiji. So that's what our Captain has to work with, huh? :confused:


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By the way, is it fair to ask OOC what class the Nightmare fruit was? Just wondering so I know where to set Hammer's sights in terms of what Fruit she's aiming for.
 
Woah, lot went on while I was gone. If it's any consolation, I only threw Azeila into the scene because I'd just finished making her and had absolutely no idea what I was gonna do with her.


I actually made her to fill gaps as well, we had no rogue which may have caused problems and shep asked me to set her up with the whole 'black rain' doppleganger thing that genzo had, since he'd already written some scenes for it.
 
Yeah sure, I should probably improve its description in the paramecia thread anyway.


It gives the user the ability to turn into a nightmarish beast. Anyone who sees him has to make a will save or run. Further upgrades let him target specific people, become more nightmarish and affect more people at once. He gets a bonus to damage to people who are scared, but the form doesn't really give him many other bonuses
 
Shep, I'm almost done with my sheet, so would you like me to post what I have so far or wait till its done.
 
Yeah, I figured. Hope I didn't get the locations of various characters wrong, and I enjoy seeing flaws already coming into play
 
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