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Lonerfemale said:
Me doing short replies is ok?
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Well short replies with me are discouraged because they fill pages too much, but if you could extend a sentence into a least at four sentence paragraph you're cool. I could even teach you how if you'd like. I know I used to do short replies a lot, but a short little paragraph won't be much either trust me
 
WoodenZebra said:
Well short replies with me are discouraged because they fill pages too much, but if you could extend a sentence into a least at four sentence paragraph you're cool. I could even teach you how if you'd like. I know I used to do short replies a lot, but a short little paragraph won't be much either trust me
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Really? You would teach me? A autistic female who had a hard time in high school English?
 
I think you could do it! Just fill it with side notes of thoughts or even detail of what they’re doing!
 
Lonerfemale said:
Really? You would teach me? A autistic female who had a hard time in high school English?
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Well the trick to getting more than just a short response is imagination. If you have imagination you can do this. Imagine you're your character. Think about how you would feel, how your body currently reacts to said thing, and how you think others would react to said thing. Then explain it. That's a bit it lol. Instead of saying something like || "Yes," Yuha said taking the boys hand|| think about how the character feels || Yuha wasn't really sure about the request. But he knew he should do it. "Yes," Yuha said taking the boys hand|| then think about how their body would react and feel at the moment || Yuha's body tensed up. He wasn't really sure about the request because it was so weird. But he knew he should do it. "Yes," Yuha said trying to relax by taking the boys hand|| Then don't forget how the character would think other's would react to said thing. Also, don't forget metaphors and similes and such to not make the post sound as bland|| Yuha's body tensed up like a dear in headlights. He really wasn't sure about the request because it was so weird but he knew he should do it. Anyone else would've said no, and or would've ran away already, but Yuha had to take the risk. "Yes," Yuha said breaking the mold around him by reaching out and taking the boys hand. || And that's just four sentences. Imagine what else you could do! Hope that helped. I'm not very good at teaching stuff lol. I'm not a teacher but hopefully I explained it well enough.
 
So about this new RP your making, is it a lot like this one? What’s the plot? When will it be up?
 
I think doing one where all the other characters of leaf still exist and are there but we (our characters) are the main focus this time. So it’s the same plot as the original naruto just focusing on those hidden (oc ) Characters and their journey and how they deal with it. With like different missions sprinkled in and adventures and mayhem going on on the oc side.
 
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