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Fantasy Lakoria High School

Ready for the time skip to the next day?

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GingerBread said:
Right okay, I guess that's an okay limit.
But since you have that power, I'm going to have to give you a small talk, just so there are no misunderstanding like there has been in the past.


Basically if someone made a post about an Npc doing something, then that is their Npc. So if you wish to have it do something or kill it or anything like that. You must ask the person who created them. Same goes for other people's characters. In lakoria every character is at the same level as yours, therefore you must treat them all with respect.


Bottom line, if you didn't make it or make the first post with it, then you do not have any right to do anything with it.


Now I'm not saying that you will do anything like that, but we have had a few incidences in the past. So this is just a precaution.


Also on the topic of Npc's, the one character rule still applies, they can be made for some things, like shop keepers. But nothing permanent. Only admins can make permanent Npc's.


I think that's everything. Welcome to Lakoria! :D If you have any questions, feel free to ask and me or one of the other admins will do our best to answer it. :)
I'll do my best not to reach any form of misunderstanding
 
Knight Artorias] [URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/22642-metalcity/ said:
@metalcity[/URL] Any chance I can look at Aptuls character sheet considering that I can not seem to find it for the life of me
Already got it. For reference, it was on the most recent page.

metalcity said:
Name:
Aptual Spetual


Gender:



Female


Age:



16


School year:



Junior


Species:



werewolf


Power(s):



All information needed can be found here - Werewolf Physiology - it says what a werewolf is, powers they have and what each power does. However Aptuel does not have a hunting instinct and likes like a "normal" person with out going on killing sprees.


She can also communicate with anything that is adorable!


Sexuality:


Bi-sexual


Appearance:


View attachment 239609


Personality:


Aptual is mostly happy, she is random and playful to everyone. She can be bossy and act needy at times. She hates being in a bad mood or slightly emotional, this triggers her werewolf side turning her into a large fluffy monster. Her werewolf mode doesn't make her angry or blood thirsty, she can continue to be a happy person. Overall she is a happy person.


Backstory:


Like most werewolf's, Aptual lived her life running from hunters. But this never stopped her from being happy, she got to explore more and more world and the threat of hunters became less and less of a worry as she saw more of the world. Eventually she decided that she needed to be taught how to be more normal and moved to the city and started to try live as a normal person, then she moved to the school.


(I know this is bland but I cant write back stories that are not depressing)


Extras:



loves food


@GingerBread :P


Lakota
 
Lotusy said:
Already got it. For reference, it was on the most recent page.
thanks

Knight Artorias] [URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/22642-metalcity/ said:
@metalcity[/URL] Any chance I can look at Aptuls character sheet considering that I can not seem to find it for the life of me
sorry, didn't see that i got a notification
 
GingerBread said:
Were you saying that Nyxen (The cat and my character) Was giving people Death stares?
Because although he was, he isn't anymore. He stopped giving everyone death stares before your character came over to us. So could you please fix that
Wow I need to be accurate with this
 
Nonalaka said:

~*Laika Flynn*~


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Name:


Laika Flynn



Gender:


Female



Age:


17



School year:


Senior



Species:


Human



Power(s):


Laika is technically a human, but her body contains the spirit of a wolf which is almost like a guardian in a way to her. It can lend her its form and give her strength. Her abilities include:



-Spiritual Meditation



-Animal Soul/Spirit



-Enhanced Endurance



-Enhanced Senses



-Enhanced Speed



-Enhanced Strength



-Enhanced Tracking



-Tracking Evasion



-Predator Instinct



-Stealth Tactics



-Night Vision.



-Skilled with Meelee attacks



-Skilled with a crossbow



Sexuality:


Heterosexual



Appearance:


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Laika has fair skin and a petite figure despite her training. Her hair is light brown in colour and falls just below her waist. Her eyes are a golden brown with the lighted of freckles dotted underneath them.



Personality:


Due to her upbringing in a battle orientated village she was taught to have a hard shell (even if she's quite bubbly underneath), weakness would get you beat up. Being obedient to the task given to her by her family,(as much as she'd love to do her own thing...) her only objective at the school is to learn, not make friendships but she will socialise with her peers if needs must. Where she comes from, you don't get close to people in case it interferes with your training.



Backstory:


Laika originates from a secluded village that's hidden in the woods, they're a whole society that are master craftsmen, warriors, thieves and assassins, trained only things that involve battle or monetary gain. Disobeying your orders deal harsh punishments towards you so its best to do as you're told.



Upon receiving a letter to ask her to attend a highschool for gifted individuals such as herself, she received much scorn from her father at first, not wishing for his child to go astray from their strict ways as it would taint his own reputation. Her mother however, supported the notion wholeheartedly, wishing for a better world for her child. After much debate her mother convinced her father to let her go under the condition that she only learn useful things and not get attached to anything or anyone outside their village.



For now, she's following that order, not wanting in trouble and getting the opportunity to start a new taken from her. But that could change if influenced by the right people.



Extras:


She's scared of the dark and has a soft spot for animals.



Lakota



Right so I have a couple of issues with this.


First this, your powers seem to be kinda over powered, especially since this Rp isn't really combat focused. They also seem to be really quite vague, could you expand on them please?


Also this Roleplay isn't the most serious Rp around and as I said before, we rarely focus on any sort of combat or really any serious stuff. So there's a warning.
 
GingerBread said:
Right so I have a couple of issues with this.
First this, your powers seem to be kinda over powered, especially since this Rp isn't really combat focused. They also seem to be really quite vague, could you expand on them please?


Also this Roleplay isn't the most serious Rp around and as I said before, we rarely focus on any sort of combat or really any serious stuff. So there's a warning.
Ah, right, don't worry they're only a bit enhanced ((meaning a smidge over average)), not super super strong blowing up buildings or anything xD , basically she has some similar traits to a dog is all, sorry if it seemed that she's really like...battly super lady type thing xD I'm not a combat Rper.


She is in fact in a way joining to school to avoid that sort of thing since that's how things in her home is, its only her back story as all she won't be in anyway violent or extremely emotionally damaged, just clueless about normal human interaction because of a different way of being raised.


Hope that clears a few things up :'D
 
Nonalaka said:
Ah, right, don't worry they're only a bit enhanced ((meaning a smidge over average)), not super super strong blowing up buildings or anything xD , basically she has some similar traits to a dog is all, sorry if it seemed that she's really like...battly super lady type thing xD I'm not a combat Rper.
She is in fact in a way joining to school to avoid that sort of thing since that's how things in her home is, its only her back story as all she won't be in anyway violent or extremely emotionally damaged, just clueless about normal human interaction because of a different way of being raised.


Hope that clears a few things up :'D
Yeah, It does. However. I wasn't referring to the enhanced stuff really. It was more these things


-Enhanced Tracking


-Tracking Evasion


-Predator Instinct


-Stealth Tactics


Because the first two there seem kinda Op and the last two are really vague
 
GingerBread said:
Yeah, It does. However. I wasn't referring to the enhanced stuff really. It was more these things
-Enhanced Tracking


-Tracking Evasion


-Predator Instinct


-Stealth Tactics


Because the first two there seem kinda Op and the last two are really vague
Ooooh okay, same thing there, just dog stuff xD Tracking is just that she can track with her sense of smell, nothing to serious. The second one and fourth one just means she's good at sneaking around without getting caught. And the third one was being able to detect people if they move. I got the names for what they do online so that's probably why the names are confusing.
 
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Nonalaka said:
Ooooh okay, same thing there, just dog stuff xD Tracking is just that she can track with her sense of smell, nothing to serious. The second one and fourth one just means she's good at sneaking around without getting caught. And the third one was being able to detect people if they move. I got the names for what they do online so that's probably why the names are confusing.
Well, I guess I need to get a few words in before acceptance and stuff. First thing, I think what Gingy is saying (and rest of us are thinking) is that there may be a smidge too many powers, you feel me? I totally understand if you want them, and they're only a smidge above average, but the thing is, there's a lot of them. And with all those powers, she can basically take on any situation, from tracking, to escaping, to direct combat. I mean, there just need to be a limit. So with that in mind, could you keep it to 4-6 little bullet points? I mean, it's good that she's versatile, but this is just for the story's sakes, you know?
 
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Lotusy said:
Well, I guess I need to get a few words in before acceptance and stuff. First thing, I think what Gingy is saying (and rest of us are thinking) is that there may be a smidge too many powers, you feel me? I totally understand if you want them, and they're only a smidge above average, but the thing is, there's a lot of them. And with all those powers, she can basically take on any situation, from tracking, to escaping, to direct combat. I mean, there just need to be a limit. So with that in mind, could you keep it to 4-6 little bullet points? I mean, it's good that she's versatile, but this is just for the story's sakes, you know?
Yeah, I get cha :D I don't have a problem removing a few, im not stubborn like that~ ((other RPs I've been in would consider her pretty weak so I guess I'm used to going off them xD )) I'll remove the ones that were mentioned as well as the endurance and strength. Is there any others that need taken away? :3
 
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Nonalaka said:
Yeah, I get cha :D I don't have a problem removing a few, im not stubborn like that~ ((other RPs I've been in would consider her pretty weak so I guess I'm used to going off them xD )) I'll remove the ones that were mentioned as well as the endurance and strength. Is there any others that need taken away? :3
Well, I'll just leave that up to you. Any combination of 4-6 of the ones you have would be good, so after that's done, you're accepted!


But anyways, for a while now, the admin team has been doing disclaimers for this RP. We're pretty crazy and crack-posty here. I mean, we have cupcake-baking kittens, crazy gorgon drug lords, toast that defies physics, and other stuff. Just keep your sense of humor about you, and you're good.
 
Lotusy said:
Well, I'll just leave that up to you. Any combination of 4-6 of the ones you have would be good, so after that's done, you're accepted!
But anyways, for a while now, the admin team has been doing disclaimers for this RP. We're pretty crazy and crack-posty here. I mean, we have cupcake-baking kittens, crazy gorgon drug lords, toast that defies physics, and other stuff. Just keep your sense of humor about you, and you're good.
Alright, I cut down the abilities down to the basic ones~ Sorry I didn't check the power levels of other characters first, I was just going off what I knew from other RPs so its my fault for not reading over the others to much, I didn't mean to kick a fuss or anything :0


A disclaimer? xD I've been in wackier Rps before so I think my sense of humour can handle it :P
 
GingerBread said:
Is that a challenge? I think them sounds like fightin' words boys :P
xD It could be, take it as you will, Though I can handle the weird you throw at me I promise you that :P
 
IIQueenestII said:

Name


Beatrix Attwater



Gender


Female



Age


16




67

School Year


Sophomore



Species


Possessed Doll (Ghoul)



Powers


-
Telekinesis


The ability to move objects or people through mind power.



-
Dowsing


Ability to locate any object.



-Psychometry


Obtaining information about a person or object, usually by touching or concentrating on the object or related object.



Sexual Orientation


Heterosexual



Appearance


View attachment 264197


Alot of her body parts were torn apart by the owner of the life sized girl, her doll name was Cindi.



Personality


She is very sly and manipulative and considers herself to be the smartest girl at the school, she hates the color black because she believes is the color of dark magic, she also has a talent of tap dancing and does it when she's alone or bored. She doesn't like to socialize too much and can't stand people who talk too much. Overall she's very Sneaky but also has high standards for who she talks to.



Backstory


TBR



Extras


Theme song:



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Hello there, thank you for taking the time to sign up to join us.


After looking over your character sheet I have found a few issues. First, you must have a back story. I understand that you want to keep some parts hidden but something must be there, for these parts add "for mysterious reasons" of something along those lines; then explain it at a later date. Another part you are missing is the secret word, this can only be found after reading the rules, as you can guess, it shows that you have read the rules. Lastly, which is the biggest problem, is the powers you have selected. It is great that you said what each one does, however these types of powers could be labelled as meta gaming. First power allows you to move objects and people, it would be better if you limited it down to just objects as moving people would be over powered. Second power as stated before is meta gaming, as you are able to find any object. I think it would be best if you reworked that ability as I see no way yo limit that with out it being pointless. Third ability has the same problems as the second, it is meta gaming can make many problems in certain situations. This would be better limited or reworked. Another point I would like to bring up is that we are not the most serious group, so keep that in mind.


Thank you for reading.
 
metalcity said:
Hello there, thank you for taking the time to sign up to join us.
After looking over your character sheet I have found a few issues. First, you must have a back story. I understand that you want to keep some parts hidden but something must be there, for these parts add "for mysterious reasons" of something along those lines; then explain it at a later date. Another part you are missing is the secret word, this can only be found after reading the rules, as you can guess, it shows that you have read the rules. Lastly, which is the biggest problem, is the powers you have selected. It is great that you said what each one does, however these types of powers could be labelled as meta gaming. First power allows you to move objects and people, it would be better if you limited it down to just objects as moving people would be over powered. Second power as stated before is meta gaming, as you are able to find any object. I think it would be best if you reworked that ability as I see no way yo limit that with out it being pointless. Third ability has the same problems as the second, it is meta gaming can make many problems in certain situations. This would be better limited or reworked. Another point I would like to bring up is that we are not the most serious group, so keep that in mind.


Thank you for reading.
Thank you for making me feel like worlds biggest idiot...
 

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