general ostruppen
General Ostruppen
Alright alright I'll change up the powers and several other things thenYou can be inspired but...not a full on copy of the character. I encourage creativity with a character.
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Alright alright I'll change up the powers and several other things thenYou can be inspired but...not a full on copy of the character. I encourage creativity with a character.
Powers:
Enhance:
the equipment he uses from his body armor to his weapons are much better while in his hands. he once used a 9mm to take down a large mutant gorilla.
Strength:
He is stronger than a normal man hes not going to stop a train with his bear hands but he could stop an sixteen wheeler.
Enhanced sences:
Smell of a dog eyes of a hawk sorta thing
Mastery of power: as they are all passive things he does without thought he has completely mastered his power.
Enhancement he makes base things better his senses strength and the weapons hr usesThe powers have no real theme to them. How did he get all of these? It doesn't link up.
Enhancement he makes base things better his senses strength and the weapons hr uses
Ok editedSo you should write his powers as enhanced physiology. Unless he wants to enhance ONLY weapons or ONLY his body.
Name: Artyom Straif
Nickname: Spartan
Age: 28
Appearance:
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Height: 6'10"
Wieght: 290 lbs
Blood type: O negative
Affiliation: Vigilante
Power level: 2
Quirks:
He drinks a lot
He carries a pack of cigarettes that he sometimes taps on.
He will idlely check his gun
Fears: complete darkness
Personality: Artyom is a warrior by right and thinker by choice. He enjoys insulting people finding it to be the easiest way of getting a measure of someone's personality. He's never shy about his past but won't bring it up unless he's asked. He's violent by nature and normally has a one track mind when it comes to punishment ether being a beating or a execution. He likes the arts but trends not too show it off and due to his experiences with a certain amount of other worldly apparitions he is a very spiritual man.
Power:
General enhancement: from his own physiology to the equipment he uses he makes it much better with his touch.
Skills
Grand marksman
Handyman
Grand CQC
Knows enough about guns to normally repair them.
Actually very stealthy when he wants to be
Limits: the enhancement works with the items orginal power meaning if its weak it will still be shit. His smell and hearing is limited by the metal helmet he wears around normally.
Weaknesses:
Is quick to judge if someone deserves punishment.
Once he finds a target he will start getting sloppy if he evades him more than once
He is prone being over attached to comrades and easily trusts.
Bio: both his parents were heros his father bearing the enhancement gift his mother the enhanced abilities. He traveled all over the world as they worked as hero's. He watched over and over again villains breaking out jail kill hundreds only to be put back into jail. Not only that but true villains putting hundreds on the street not being punished. He vowed that when he taught a lesson it would be much harder to forget.
Extra
He owns
A Scoped ak-47 with foregrip
A 10gage browning BPS
A Dragunov
A FN90
A Five seven five
A browning hi-power
A DPMS G2 Recon
A G41 Gen4
A G43
A Heckler & Koch MP5K
A FN F2000
A Barret 50cal
A nitro express
A m2 browning
And a trench knife
Hm, acceptedName: Artyom Straif
Nickname: Spartan
Age: 28
Appearance:
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Height: 6'10"
Wieght: 290 lbs
Blood type: O negative
Affiliation: Vigilante
Power level: 2
Quirks:
He drinks a lot
He carries a pack of cigarettes that he sometimes taps on.
He will idlely check his gun
Fears: complete darkness
Personality: Artyom is a warrior by right and thinker by choice. He enjoys insulting people finding it to be the easiest way of getting a measure of someone's personality. He's never shy about his past but won't bring it up unless he's asked. He's violent by nature and normally has a one track mind when it comes to punishment ether being a beating or a execution. He likes the arts but trends not too show it off and due to his experiences with a certain amount of other worldly apparitions he is a very spiritual man.
Power:
General enhancement: from his own physiology to the equipment he uses he makes it much better with his touch.
Skills
Grand marksman
Handyman
Grand CQC
Knows enough about guns to normally repair them.
Actually very stealthy when he wants to be
Limits: the enhancement works with the items orginal power meaning if its weak it will still be shit. His smell and hearing is limited by the metal helmet he wears around normally.
Weaknesses:
Is quick to judge if someone deserves punishment.
Once he finds a target he will start getting sloppy if he evades him more than once
He is prone being over attached to comrades and easily trusts.
Bio: both his parents were heros his father bearing the enhancement gift his mother the enhanced abilities. He traveled all over the world as they worked as hero's. He watched over and over again villains breaking out jail kill hundreds only to be put back into jail. Not only that but true villains putting hundreds on the street not being punished. He vowed that when he taught a lesson it would be much harder to forget.
Extra
He owns
A Scoped ak-47 with foregrip
A 10gage browning BPS
A Dragunov
A FN90
A Five seven five
A browning hi-power
A DPMS G2 Recon
A G41 Gen4
A G43
A Heckler & Koch MP5K
A FN F2000
A Barret 50cal
A nitro express
A m2 browning
And a trench knife
If there is something I can do to improve the character I would love to Hear itHm, accepted
Besides grammar, you're goodIf there is something I can do to improve the character I would love to Hear it
I editedBesides grammar, you're good
It works better if you tag one of the adminsIs mine good?
Name: Jennifer Hyatt Alias/Nickname: Jenny Gender: Female Age: 27 |
Your posts are very good if I were an admin I would approve them which sounds wierd but I read over both your posts now an I thought they both sounded awesomeIs mine good?
Name: Finn Rickman
Alias/Nickname: Bandage
Gender: male
Age:15
Appearance:
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Height: 5' 8"
Weight: 106 lb
Blood Type:
O-
Affiliation: sidekick
Rank in Affiliation/Threat Level: 1
Quirks: chews on the sides of his finger nails which leads to his habit of wearing white gloves.
Fears/Phobias: Not being able to help those in pain
Personality: He's freindly and well mannered always asking what he can do to help. This leads to him being a little over apologetic apologizing for what he hasn't done. He's a bit more quiet than most his age sometimes preferring the company of books over people. This however doesn't overrule the kindness in his heart as he works to be a hero like the world has never known. A snappy dresser with a passion not for combating his foes but helping the innocent.
Power(s):
Healing : he can release healing energy from up to 15 meters away painlessly repairing the damage done unless the patient is already dead.
Healing touch: physical contact makes the healing far more effective and allows him to remove diseases.
Medical knowlage: He like all of his family was born with an vast wealth of medical knowledge placing him on part with most doctors in their respective fields.
Mastery of Power: Decent but under stress he can find it hard to heal from a distance
Skills:
Gore resistant: He ,unlike most kids his age can handle gore like a practiced surgion
Good with laundry
Weaknesses: He isn't proficient in any form of combat at all and isn't all that strong. He also has really bad hand writing. Also has a weak decent case of ashma he noticeably breathes a little harder normally.
Backstory: He was born into a family of hero's everyone in his family had healing abilities making him common hat amongst them. Then they were killed by a group, he never knew who they were or why they did it. They also took his brother and he never found out where and he never saw him again . With his family dead and his brother gone he was given over to the hero association who gave him to the local orphanage. His normal seclusion has made him unknown to many of the other children and the care takers while nice he's purposefully avoid forming boss with them ,after all his destiny is else where
Extra: he has the basic body structure and facial characteristics of David just different colored eyes and hair also he's not as pale
Name: Jennifer Hyatt
Alias/Nickname: Jenny
Gender: Female
Age: 27
Affiliation: G-NewsRank in Affiliation: Reporter-New
Fears and Phobias: She's afraid of getting her heart broken again, and she's scared of death.
Personality: She's shy and quiet. She is very intelligent and her brain is like a sponge as it absorbs all the things she learns. She is a lot more wary of people due to her recent breakup.
You heard about that, right?
And she doesn't appreciate her family anymore because of what her sister did, and the fact that her mother and father are okay with it just angers her. So don't expect her to be lovey-dovey with her family, okay?
Quirks: She's very shy and not that outgoing, but if you push her out of her comfort zone, she will try new things. She is still hurting over her recent breakup. Here's a summary:
DerekmeHey babe!meHey!meBabe?meR u ok?meUr scaring me
Derekthemim sorry. i was busythembut i have something to tell umeur scaring methemu have to promise not to do anythin drasticmewhat is it?
Derek[messaage=me]Derek?[/message] [messsage=them]I slept with ur sister[/message]themhello?themJenny?thempls don't do anything drastic
Who?We already have a healer.
Is this a work in progress?
Who?
Yes it is.We already have a healer.
Is this a work in progress?
Name: Richard Kliener
Alias/Nickname: Kliener
Gender: Male
Age: 39
Appearance:View attachment 326285
Height: 6'1
Weight: 169LB
Blood Type: [Optional] AB-
Affiliation: Himself and his company 'Stratum'
Rank in Affiliation/Threat Level: threat level 2.
Quirks: Loves suits. Even while he works.
Fears/Phobias: fears losing his wealth. And his life.
Personality: he is a greedy self centered asshole. But ultimately, has humanities best interest in hearth. Even if it's a small part of his heart. (This is a fairly 2 dimensional personality. I guess you should explain HOW he's an ass?)
Power(s): [Include a description]
[Super human reflexes] under correct conditions. He can dodge gunshots, throwing weapons, and strikes.
[Improved mental falculties] (Explain this)
Mastery of Power: masterful
Skills: [Human skills]
Has took buisness classes
Is skilled in hand to hand combat from experience
Skilled manipulator and lier
Very convincing, charismatic
Limits: [Power's Limits]
Reflexes only work so far and he can still be surprised
He might be smarter and can predict things much more realistic than others. But he is by no means a genius
Weaknesses: [Human/Power Weaknesses]
He has a hurt back. Suffering from constant pain.
Backstory: [Optional] in RP
Extra:
His company 'Stratum' is dedicated to containing certain dangerous superhumans and human beings. As well as using there abilities to create new non lethal weapon for the police and to aid the civilian population through these breakthroughs. Though it's methods are questionable.
Will edit. Ty.I left some notes in quoted text