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It is a Saber for a reason they are known for being broken. Arturia was pretty busted, Mordred was strong, Siegfried is invincible, Gawain is practically unbeatable during the day, and heck Okita is a gag character but her agility is ridiculous to the point of where she can do a nothing personal kid and instantly kill you. I understand your issues with it, but personally for me its basically a feature of the Saber class at this point. Hell even Nero who pretty weak for a Saber could revive herself, and lets not even get started on Altera.
Yeah I know about the other sabers but talking about his character from an rp standpoint. Pretty sure no one wants a broken Saber in the rp? That wouldn't be fun and it would take the enjoyment out of the rp
 
Yeah I know about the other sabers but talking about his character from an rp standpoint. Pretty sure no one wants a broken Saber in the rp? That wouldn't be fun and it would take the enjoyment out of the rp
You are right I just want it to be known how unfair the Holy Grail War is, also Saber at least according to fgo has no skills below B rank. To be fair his Servant being so OP just encourages going out of your way to defeat Saber and her master through other means, assassination, alliance, blackmail if anything it makes it more constructive for rp but hey thats just me. Also if we wanna talk about OP your Master is pretty up there compared to toher Masters or at least I hope to GOD your character doesn't actually have Kiritsugu's origin bullets or else that would suck.
 
wdinatx wdinatx How to say this without being mean- Hmm constructive criticize time! Take it with a grain of salt but it's something that needs to be addressed.

Your Saber is pretty much a broken servant top to bottom, none of your parameters fall below a C. Both of your Strength and Endurance Skills are listed as A, listen you are not a berserker, you shouldn't be THIS tanky. All of your class skills are either A or B, even EX for that matter- NONE of them fall under C. And god forbidden with a luck stat of B, Protection of the Goddess B, with your stat up, anyone with attack of B or lower won't even be able to hit you. So just saying if your character has BOTH triforce and in a "dangerous situation", NONE of your stats would be lower than a B. That is RIDICULOUSLY omnipotent, hell that's even god modding.

And now even taking in account of Eye of the Mind (False) B, we have a impossible to kill servant that will steamroll everyone in this Holy Grail War. A servant that can see attacks coming, dodge them according, and walk out of a explosion like it's nothing. Huh? That's not even the worse part. Also-- I can begrudgingly bypass parameters but explain to me why, Battle Continuation A , a LANCER skill is on your SABER? That skill just makes you an even more unkillable servant, who is already broken through their raw stats alone. Magic Resistance EX most definitely needs a good nerf, I can accept EX but with it only dropping to an A rank--- that doesn't seem like a balanced skill.

Prime example, walking through a nuclear explosion unharmed then losing said gimmick, only to get attack again without leaving any marks again. Let's move onto Fairy's Support B, Navi support skill, the description is so mindbogglingly vague. So Navi is supposed to analyze enemy servants, analyze what exactly? It's okay if she can only analyze one or two stats but if she analyzes all stats then that's when I call bull. She shouldn't be able to analyze all of their weaknesses flat out. In addition, if Navi is able to analyze true names then might as well just give them their life on a full platter.

See my problem with your servant?
You have some good points and some bad points:
A, B, B, A, A+, A++ are Artoria's stats under Rin. Link has a lot in common with King Arthur so I thought she would be a good base.
Link is immensely skilled to the point they were the best in the land from what I remember.
Battle Continuation= Link getting up until he's dead.
Magic resistance= A Saber with exposure to magic+Triforce of courage.
Fairy's support was vague because I couldn't think of a better way to put it though I think it would take a few clashes for Navi to find true names. I could justify removing it but I mostly just think it would make more sense for her to have Bravery
 
Maybe lower Battle continuation a bit even I feel A may be a bit high I feel like C might fit more. I mean I don't think Link ever pulled a Cu and fought an army for weeks then dies standing up by attaching them self to a tree. So maybe A rank is a bit much
 
Maybe lower Battle continuation a bit even I feel A may be a bit high I feel like C might fit more. I mean I don't think Link ever pulled a Cu and fought an army for weeks then dies standing up by attaching them self to a tree. So maybe A rank is a bit much
It is justifiable maybe, saying that Link has it because she transcended the land of the dead might be a willpower feat though. Actually the more I type this the more I agree it should be lowered.
 
It is justifiable maybe, saying that Link has it because she transcended the land of the dead might be a willpower feat though. Actually the more I type this the more I agree it should be lowered.
Imagine the story implication of say one of the masters or the caster stealing the triforce that could be pretty cool
 
Also maybe lower endurance to B rank just to sorta round it out and make it seem a little more balanced. Still though all of that makes sense to me even the magic resistance, since Link deals with a lot of magic crap.
 
Also maybe lower endurance to B rank just to sorta round it out and make it seem a little more balanced. Still though all of that makes sense to me even the magic resistance, since Link deals with a lot of magic crap.
I'll do some revisions.
 
Hey I do agree that origin bullets suck but I only have a few origin bullets, thank gift from Kiritsugu, the rest are magic infused bullets specially made to suit my OC's playstyle. But at the same time, my character is weak in magic department so it's a bit justifiable why she would be using modern weaponry versus using magic craft spells. The whole gimmeck of my character is to play like assassin, since Kiri trained her in that way. EMIYAman EMIYAman

I'm not looking for a major nerf persay, just stated my opinion on the servant. If you want to nerf Saber then by all means go ahead. wdinatx wdinatx
 
Hey I do agree that origin bullets suck but I only have a few origin bullets, thank gift from Kiritsugu, the rest are magic infused bullets specially made to suit my OC's playstyle. But at the same time, my character is weak in magic department so it's a bit justifiable why she would be using modern weaponry versus using magic craft spells. The whole gimmeck of my character is to play like assassin, since Kiri trained her in that way. EMIYAman EMIYAman

I'm not looking for a major nerf persay, just stated my opinion on the servant. If you want to nerf Saber then by all means go ahead. wdinatx wdinatx
Yeah don't worry I am not saying your character is completely busted but I know a Kiritsugu clone when I see one. I am glad you at least made her weak in the magic department because if gives a reason for her to use all her equipment as a crutch and makes her susceptible to magic with her low resistance.
 
Hey I do agree that origin bullets suck but I only have a few origin bullets, thank gift from Kiritsugu, the rest are magic infused bullets specially made to suit my OC's playstyle. But at the same time, my character is weak in magic department so it's a bit justifiable why she would be using modern weaponry versus using magic craft spells. The whole gimmeck of my character is to play like assassin, since Kiri trained her in that way. EMIYAman EMIYAman

I'm not looking for a major nerf persay, just stated my opinion on the servant. If you want to nerf Saber then by all means go ahead. wdinatx wdinatx
If anything I feel like our characters are actually mirror images of each other at least in terms of being almost complete opposites
 
Yeah I noticed that as well, hope to see someone try to get her out of her shell. Am also working on another master since we need more of those, hope someone is working on the archer EMIYAman EMIYAman
 
Yeah I noticed that as well, hope to see someone try to get her out of her shell. Am also working on another master since we need more of those, hope someone is working on the archer EMIYAman EMIYAman
oh uh yeah totally I am getting RIGHT on that. mmmmmhm here I go, making Archer. I am committed...
 
OK I think I have an idea for Archer and if I can get the creative juices flowing and brush up on my lore I might be able to make something good here.
 

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