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So, final draft
My Plasma Mage OC, from the Sci Fi part of the site

And a psionic character. I'm gravitating towards him coming from the XCOM world but frankly, I'm considering having the psionic come from something like D and D or something
 
I mean, and forgive me for this, but your reason doesn't exactly scream 'commitment' to me. Instead of 'i wanna RP with this character i absolutely adore', i just get a sense that you could literally not think of any other character that would fit in a scenario like this. Also, may i summarise your character for my own usage? The way you describe his abilities makes it slightly confusing.
  • Can copy any weapon and physical abilities of anybody (par divine beings).
  • Super strength, super durability and super speed.
  • Resistance to magic, absorption and mind attacks.
  • Telescopic vision.
  • Can summon near infinite weapons from a portal of some kind, firing them at opponents at high speeds.
And for his weapons (I believe he can also fire these from his portals?): -
  • A dagger able to instantly destroy anything either vaguely magical or human.
  • A sword that distorts space and time and can penetrate anything and everything - and explodes violently on impact. If magic is used anywhere near it, it is dispelled and instantly kills anything that tries to teleport away from it.
  • Twin swords that bolster Shirou's defenses when wielded by an unknown amount, and can return to him when thrown. They also can perform a technique than instantly hits multiple times without a chance to defend.
  • A sword that can instantly kill anything by attacking it nine times in a moment.
Is that correct? The way it is written, and from my limited knowledge of the Fate series, make it seem that way.
Let go down the list.
1: I just was going to do someone else and paniked when I found a flaw. IDK how true your statement was.
2: He can copy any weapon and the wielder's skill with the weapon. Its just strong in fate pecause everyone has cool weapons.
3: Since when was snapping trees in half that OP?
4: True, although his magic resistance is barely there
5: True
6: As far as I can remember he never fires the weapons outside of the UBW, which is the source of the weapons. Also (not that it matters) he really is creating a copy, not sending them through a portal like Gilgamesh.
7: It only is strong enough to work on normal humans and the magic dispelling has a limit
8: It can hit "anything and everything" no matter what, but it doesn't ignore conventional durability. Also I have no idea where you got the second half of your summery.
9: While they do bolster his defenses to an unknown level they are only attracted to each other (Though if Shirou projects another pair they'll boomerang towards him.). Plus the technique is just an attack from the front followed by a simultaneous attack from the front and back via the first attack coming back.
10: It can attack nine times in a moment with strength surpassing Berserker. But that's it.
 
Let go down the list.
1: I just was going to do someone else and paniked when I found a flaw. IDK how true your statement was.
2: He can copy any weapon and the wielder's skill with the weapon. Its just strong in fate pecause everyone has cool weapons.
3: Since when was snapping trees in half that OP?
4: True, although his magic resistance is barely there
5: True
6: As far as I can remember he never fires the weapons outside of the UBW, which is the source of the weapons. Also (not that it matters) he really is creating a copy, not sending them through a portal like Gilgamesh.
7: It only is strong enough to work on normal humans and the magic dispelling has a limit
8: It can hit "anything and everything" no matter what, but it doesn't ignore conventional durability. Also I have no idea where you got the second half of your summery.
9: While they do bolster his defenses to an unknown level they are only attracted to each other (Though if Shirou projects another pair they'll boomerang towards him.). Plus the technique is just an attack from the front followed by a simultaneous attack from the front and back via the first attack coming back.
10: It can attack nine times in a moment with strength surpassing Berserker. But that's it.

you know what? i could write up a massive post saying why i've summarised as i have, but i'll TLDR the main issue for you. you haven't explained anything. you use Fate specific things, such as the Gates or Berserker as a reference point, but why should we know what that is? how thick are the trees that are being snapped? how strong is Berserker? how quickly does the Gate fire? and so on. you didn't really explain the UBW or the MArble very well, either - it seemed to me you were summarising it for someone who hasn't seen the show in a while, as opposed to people who have never seen it.

i do apologise about this, Zamasu Zamasu , btw - i am not arguing or being hostile, i just wanna know exactly what their character can do.
 

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