Fable
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You need to try and imply a passage of time. It's too quick of a recovery basically, to have a character be removed, then write within two sentences they have returned to exactly what they were doing. It takes away the opportunity of others to react that are still within the gym.by that do you mean the effort it took on the character or the description of the writing?
I'm not saying you can't do it, but that your character needs to infer some sort of "Fack, I'm all the way over here, I gotta get over there. I'm gonna run, oh hey, need a lift my fellow?! CHARGE!"
not exactly like that, but hope it gets the point a bit