Fantasy Banners & Blood - OOC

[elie]

Ah okay. My bad, then. I have no good ideas of changing it, so I guess it's just what he assumes out of his own fear?
Sorry if I screw something up again by the way, haha. I haven't done any writing in awhile, so I'm getting back into the hang of things.
Grammatic

 

[WlfSamurai]

No keep it. It’s so perfect. I love that he’s calling Tanner our for walking away.

 

[Grammatic]

No no, in the context that is exactly what your character would probably pick up on. I am just protective of my characters and all that... Tanner would just shoot him if he heard.

 

[WlfSamurai]

I think that moment was pure gold. Absolutely perfect.

 

[Silvana]

Finally finished my OC. XD

 

[WlfSamurai]

Excellent. I’ll take a look as soon as I have a chance.

 

[Silvana]

Excellent. I’ll take a look as soon as I have a chance.

Hope you don't mind him not having a backstory yet.

 

[Silvana]

How should I enter now?

 

[Grammatic]

Maybe she is coming down the road from the opposite direction of the convoy, and rushes to help?

 

[Silvana]

She? Lol. I totally forgot to put that he was a male. Whoops. I need to change that.

I can come up with something that leads to that.

 

[Grammatic]

Could have fooled me from those pictures...

 

[WlfSamurai]

First, neat character.

Second, he doesn’t fit the “power level” of the rest of the party. The vampire enhancements + the spells + the powerful summons + the engineering is too much. We need to slim those down or limit them. If we keep all of them, the need to have more severe limitations.

The hard part is that I don’t have any hard and fast rules on that stuff. It’s more a feel thing. But I’m sure we can work out something that will work better.

 

[WlfSamurai]

Sorry that I tagged you again in post, MiraAutumn .

 

[Silvana]

I can edit him.

 

[Grammatic]

I can edit him.

"Him"

 

[WlfSamurai]

I can edit him.

Yeah, I don’t have any specific suggestions right at the moment other than maybe pick one set of powers/moves/abilities to focus on? I don’t know if that’s helpful.

 

[Grammatic]

The summoning would probably be the best to follow, rather than all the physical enhancements, as those will only really be partially available depending on what form you are in if I am reading that correctly. Or, entirely opposite, drop the summoning stuff and focus on being super strong and all that. You have the characteristics of a Warrior, Mage, and Vampire, so maybe focus on one view point?

Silvana

 

[Silvana]

I will start working on him right away. I may take away the vampire part.

 

[Grammatic]

This is a progressive rp, so I am sure there is room to expand into all the stuff you want, just later on when everyone is stronger as well probably.

 

[Silvana]

Lol. Well I will try to edit more about the summoning part. I thought I had clarified about the limits of it but I will limit more if need be.

 

[Teh Frixz]

I've provided a fix

 

[Silvana]

Whatever you have please voice it.

 

[Teh Frixz]

Okie!

 

[Teh Frixz]

Name: Lenora Silverlight
Age: 22
Race: Human
Sub-Race: Vampire
Gender: Male
Look:

Spoiler: Human Guise

Spoiler: True Form

Class: Engineer
Personality:
+Intelligent
+Imaginative
+Ventersome
+Calm
-Decetiful
-Frivolous
-Vacuous
-Impassive
-Amoral

Weapons & Armor:​

Weapon- Blade of the Vampyr (Katana)
Armor- (Shown in the picture)

Skills & Abilities:
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Blood in the Machine - Lenora can nearly any broken mechanical equipment as long as he has the right material and a blood sacrifice

Fleet Fingers - When building a machine or in general practice, Lenora is able to work with his hands at an unbelievable pace. Basic tool usage and assembly are sped up ten fold, though this requires exertion.

Swordsmen of the Night - Trained with the exotic ancestral blade of the Vampiric Clans, Lenora is a competent swordsmen using single edged blades. On their own the blade is a naturally impressive but when imbued with his Vampiric might, becomes capable of slicing clean all but the strongest of materials.

Imbue - As a vampire specialized in creation, Lenora is capable of sacrificing his own blood into items to temporarily enhance, power, or control basic and complex machinery. The power of which is directly related to how much of his blood is sacrificed.

Glamour - When fully sated, Lenora emits an aura of glamour that alters the way sentient perceive him, dulling down his vampiric visage to something more acceptable to mortal eyes.

Racial Abilities
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Vampire: A creature of darkness and the un-living personification of Domination, Vampires are a rarity in the world. Mostly hunted and slain when discovered, those that survive do so through guile and ability. With a strong connection to the blood of the living, a great number of Vampiric abilities are directly tied to the blood of sentient beings. In order to use these abilities, Vampires will feed directly on mortals, growing stronger or weaker based on their level of consumption.

• Mesmer - Even at their weakest, Vampires can mesmerize and convince mortals to lay down their arms to serve them, though even at their strongest, Mesmerizing mortals is difficult when they are in groups.
• Attraction - As the Vampire feeds and grows full, their appearance as one of the Undead grows fainter. The blood of life coursing inside them, they emit pheromones that the Living find irresistible. But when devoid of blood, they quickly grow more fearsome and bat-like, causing the opposite effect on non mesmerized beings.
• Strength - Inhumanly strong, Vampires gain strength from regular feedings. When unable, they will grow stronger as their bestial side shows, some more feral Vampires even becoming large bat-like monsters until they reach the point of starvation where their form becomes waifish and weak
• Agility - Like strength, Vampires are inhumanly agile and quick, waning and growing the same way.
• Transfiguration - The true form of the Vampire being that of an Undead Bat, Vampires are capable of altering their form to varying degrees of this, at most being a large bat monster or at best being a beautiful human, with all the in between possible.

Class Skill​

As an engineer, Lenora has considerable skill in creating, crafting, and forming mechanical creations. When imbuing blood into their works, Bio-Mechanical creations become possible and given enough time and blood, great blood powered creations can be brought into the world through his skill.

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History:​

WIP

 

[Silvana]

Honestly I really like it. Sadly though, I think I am just going to leave off the vampire part.