Beta
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Riddle, you magnificent and lucky bastard. Part of me can't honestly believe you rolled that with such perfect timing.
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ALRIGHT. So Beta wanted an unbiased review of this application and so I (Chaotic) agreed to look. (Yay?)
1. I disagree with beta on the personality issue. It is possible to internalize a great deal of empathy while putting on a stone-like visage to the outside world. Such stoic characters are often knightly and somewhat righteous but doable.
2. I agree with the big NO on the power at this point. "Magic" might as well be the omnipower that says I can blow up the city by manipulating this strand of magic or I could fly because i say so .... or hey! I mimic the abilities of every other character in the RP because my undefined magic can be manipulated to do so.
***My suggestion to this is pick one functionality of it that would be your primary ability (for example .. you seem to like the idea of using your ability to enhance your speed and manueverability) and a secondary and weaker ability (for example the ranged damage energy animal usable for x amount of seconds/minutes)
3. Your history confused me. Your parents are being attacked by the government assassins why? And if they are in fact being attacked already then how would your powers have threatened them farther? The mutant hunters are just another aspect of government . . . so perhaps it would send 2 divisions after them . . . but other than that I don't see the situation as really worsening much.
Good Luck with your application and I hope to RP with you soon!
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Chaotic