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[parrotsarekindaokay]

SUNPACK


Name: Skye


Age: 6


Appearance:

Pack: Sunpack


Rank: Deputy


Powers/Abnormalities: *Is capable of telepathic communication with other wolves, allowing them to also communicate silently


History: Skye is the former guard, and only survivor, of an unknown wolf pack that was killed by an enemy pack. Skye suffers amnesia and carries many scars from the battle that wiped out his former pack and remembers only being ganged upon by several wolves and nearly killed, yet survived with major injuries to torso area and to the head. After nearly starving to death days after battle, he discovered sunpack and swore loyalty to it, determined not to allow whatever previously happened to him happen once again.


Personality: Extremely loyal to superiors, and protective of pups. Quick to anger, will snap when talked back to. Highly self-loathing. Trustworthy to those who he believes are worthy of trust, and highly judgmental


*Likes: Loyalty, fighting, taking care of pups, and friendly conversation


*Dislikes: Liars, talking about memories, needing help


*Flaws: Highly judgmental, blindly obeys orders without thinking, quick to anger


*Crush: N/A


*Other: Is very sensitive in upper torso, often has nightmares believed to be related to past

 

[The Mechanist]

SUNPACK
Name: Skye


Age: 6


Appearance:

Pack: Sunpack


Rank: Deputy


Powers/Abnormalities: *Is capable of telepathic communication with other wolves, can also read others' minds to learn secrets, fears, etc.


History: Skye is the former guard, and only survivor, of an unknown wolf pack that was killed by an enemy pack. Skye suffers amnesia and carries many scars from the battle that wiped out his former pack and remembers only being ganged upon by several wolves and nearly killed, yet survived with major injuries to torso area and to the head. After nearly starving to death days after battle, he discovered sunpack and swore loyalty to it, determined not to allow whatever previously happened to him happen once again.


Personality: Extremely loyal to superiors, and protective of pups. Quick to anger, will snap when talked back to. Highly self-loathing. Trustworthy to those who he believes are worthy of trust, and highly judgmental


*Likes: Loyalty, fighting, taking care of pups, and friendly conversation


*Dislikes: Liars, talking about memories, needing help


*Flaws: Highly judgmental, blindly obeys orders without thinking, quick to anger


*Crush: N/A


*Other: Is very sensitive in upper torso, often has nightmares believed to be related to past

alright first off, welcome to RP nation, secondly, great character sheet, thirdly the power is a bit OP, you see that kind of ability would somewhat go against certain rules of RP'ing which refers to other peoples characters. It needs to be limited, the ability to completely tap into another persons character's mind without them being able to resist or even tell such a thing is happening is a no and can lead to conflicts among the actual RPers. Aside from that great sheet, just tone down the power to have limitations or completely change it.

 

[parrotsarekindaokay]

[QUOTE="Hollowed Kadaver]alright first off, welcome to RP nation, secondly, great character sheet, thirdly the power is a bit OP, you see that kind of ability would somewhat go against certain rules of RP'ing which refers to other peoples characters. It needs to be limited, the ability to completely tap into another persons character's mind without them being able to resist or even tell such a thing is happening is a no and can lead to conflicts among the actual RPers. Aside from that great sheet, just tone down the power to have limitations or completely change it.

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[QUOTE="Hollowed Kadaver]alright first off, welcome to RP nation, secondly, great character sheet, thirdly the power is a bit OP, you see that kind of ability would somewhat go against certain rules of RP'ing which refers to other peoples characters. It needs to be limited, the ability to completely tap into another persons character's mind without them being able to resist or even tell such a thing is happening is a no and can lead to conflicts among the actual RPers. Aside from that great sheet, just tone down the power to have limitations or completely change it.

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Is this better?

 

[The Mechanist]

Is this better?

yes, thank you welcome friend, i saw that you are new but your ability in writing shows youre gonna do just fine here, sorry about putting you on the spot like that.

 

[Catharsis]

Is this better?

Perfect, welcome to Rpnation. My admins are


@Hollowed Kadaver @Idea & @JokerValentine


So if you ever need anything, ask them or me. You can go in to post in the IC

 

[parrotsarekindaokay]

[QUOTE="Hollowed Kadaver]yes, thank you welcome friend, i saw that you are new but your ability in writing shows youre gonna do just fine here, sorry about putting you on the spot like that.

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Thanks, and I get it, you just have to make sure it's fun and fair for everybody.

 

[Catharsis]

Our bad. Wrong rp