Fantasy -Void-

[Idea]

[QUOTE="Taure Tavari]I know 18 is old, and (by my history and personality section) I intend on having Taure resemble an elderly wolf. The average life span of a wolf is 16, and the highest recorded is 20. I figured a decent in between would create a reasonable setting for an 'elderly' wolf. 23(!) however, I sort of wrote my bio as though my wolf was older than the alpha. Now, we can either ignore that, or I can just raise my wolf's age.

[/QUOTE]
Well, that`s up to you. I won`t interfere much. (Not that I had the authority anyway.)

 

[Wackadoodle0987]

Well, that`s up to you. I won`t interfere much. (Not that I had the authority anyway.)

While I know it's against the Alpha's Laws, I think Taure would absolutely love to meet Kluae. Hm, that's a shame.

 

[Idea]

[QUOTE="Taure Tavari]While I know it's against the Alpha's Laws, I think Taure would absolutely love to meet Kluae. Hm, that's a shame.

[/QUOTE]
He could try. If he gets caught, though, he`ll be banished from the pack and he get his leg bitten so he`ll starve.

 

[Wackadoodle0987]

He could try. If he gets caught, though, he`ll be banished from the pack and he get his leg bitten so he`ll starve.

I know. Taure wouldn't ever go against the Alpha's Laws, and definitely not intentionally. He's old, but he still very much understands his place and the necessity to respect the Alpha. He'd quickly get over it.

 

[Catharsis]

[QUOTE="Taure Tavari]I know. Taure wouldn't ever go against the Alpha's Laws, and definitely not intentionally. He's old, but he still very much understands his place and the necessity to respect the Alpha. He'd quickly get over it.

[/QUOTE]
You're accepted

 

[Violetti]

Name: Sage


Age: 3 years


Pack: SunPack


Rank: Hunter


Gender: Male


Powers/Abnormalities: Dynamic Camouflage, meaning he can blend in with his immediate surroundings.


Limitations of abilities: Users with enhanced senses may detect him, and he must remain still for the power to be in effect.


History: He actually grew up in Nightpack but after a year he felt his heart belonged to SunPack. So he left his original pack and was reluctantly accepted into Sunpack. For the next two years he spent beig an omega in the pack, given no real respinsibilites and being the last to eat in the pack. Finally on his third year the alpha has allowed him to become a hunter to prove himself loyal to the pack. Although other wolves sometimes look at him as a traitor for leaving his original pack and he remains under constant supervision when out on hunts and is watched every now and then at night.


Personality: Sage is a very playful wolf, often acting younger than his age at times, though he appears happy and joking all the time he actually is quite depressed. He is also quite daring so he will do just about anything anybody dares him to. Despite being a hunter he actually doesn't like hunting or killing. But he wants to prove himself to the pack.


*Likes: Playing, running, rivers, randomly pouncing on others


*Dislikes: When other wolves don't treat him equally or look down on him


*Habits: Rolling onto his back in the middle of conversations, he always has to be moving.


*Flaws: He doesn't let out his true feelings, he overestimates his strength sometimes


*Crush: He still has feelings for Luna the Alpha at NightPack when he was in Nightpack she hadn't become alpha yet but he never got to tell her his feelings, so sometimes he goes on his runs to see her across the territory border. But to try to go against his feelings for her he often involves himself around Snowhunter; he tries to brighten her rather sullen expression and anti-social attitude.


*Mate: None

Spoiler

Name: Aero


Age: 1 year


Pack: NightPack


Rank: Fighter


Powers/abnormalities: She actually has a poisonous bite when she wants to


Personality: Aero tries to be the best of fighters, she only just turned 1 year old and has moved from being an apprentice fighter to a full fledged one. She often trains every night by herself because she wants to be invincible. She often doesn't let wolves get too close to her, but she is polite around others and if she likes someone she will follow them around a bit. She is shy about her true feelings so she tries to hide them. She likes to hang around the pups and show them fighting moves when she can, she likes the energetic aura they have.


Likes: Fighting, training, eating, exploring


Dislikes: Lazy wolves, wolves who are arrogant, humans


Habits: Sleepwalking, her dreams take her places man, literally. Because of this she tries to stay awake as much as possible


Flaws: Sometimes she can't control when her bites laces poison, so she often tries to avoid biting other wolves during training.


Crush: I know he is still young but Leechfang. It's not a "Oh my god be mine" sort of feeling but she likes his personality and being around his aura, she doesn't really know what a crush is she doesn't have clear romantic feelings for anyone so anything could change or happen.


Mate: None

 

[Idea]

Name: Sage
Age: 3 years


Pack: SunPack


Rank: Hunter


Powers/Abnormalities: He's faster than any other wolf


History: He actually grew up in Nightpack but he felt his heart actually felt right serving in the Sunpack, so he left Nightpack to live in Sunpack when he was around 2 years old. Now he lives in Sunpack as a solid hunter, and one of the best due to his speed. Although other wolves sometimes look at him as a traitor for leaving his original pack.


Personality: Sage is a very playful wolf, often acting younger than his age at times, though he appears happy and joking all the time he actually is quite depressed. He is also quite daring so he will do just about anything anybody dares him to. Despite being a hunter he actually doesn't like hunting or killing. He takes as much time running the prey around before he has to kill it.


*Likes: Playing, running, rivers, randomly pouncing on others


*Dislikes: When other wolves don't treat him equally or look down on him


*Habits: Rolling onto his back in the middle of conversations, he always has to be moving.


*Flaws: He doesn't let out his true feelings, he overestimates his strength sometimes


*Crush: He still has feelings for Luna the Alpha at NightPack when he was in Nightpack she hadn't become alpha yet but he never got to tell her his feelings, so sometimes he goes on his runs to see her across the territory border. But to try to go against his feelings for her he often involves himself around Snowhunter; he tries to brighten her rather sullen expression and anti-social attitude.


*Mate: None

Spoiler

Name: Aero


Age: 1 year


Pack: NightPack


Rank: Fighter


Powers/abnormalities: She actually has a poisonous bite when she wants to


Personality: Aero tries to be the best of fighters, she only just turned 1 year old and has moved from being an apprentice fighter to a full fledged one. She often trains every night by herself because she wants to be invincible. She often doesn't let wolves get too close to her, but she is polite around others and if she likes someone she will follow them around a bit. She is shy about her true feelings so she tries to hide them. She likes to hang around the pups and show them fighting moves when she can, she likes the energetic aura they have.


Likes: Fighting, training, eating, exploring


Dislikes: Lazy wolves, wolves who are arrogant, humans


Habits: Sleepwalking, her dreams take her places man, literally. Because of this she tries to stay awake as much as possible


Flaws: Sometimes she can't control when her bites laces poison, so she often tries to avoid biting other wolves during training.


Crush: I know he is still young but Leechfang. It's not a "Oh my god be mine" sort of feeling but she likes his personality and being around his aura, she doesn't really know what a crush is she doesn't have clear romantic feelings for anyone so anything could change or happen.


Mate: None

Before, I say anything else, I`ll just warn I am giving friendly advise, and am not a GM.


So, firs thing, it was stated before here, but wolfs are no longer pups after 1 year of age. A 3 year old wolf is not a pup.


Next, changing from one pack to another has huge implications, given the packs are at war. You might want to detail some restrcitions for your wolf or something that makes it more conceivable.


Next, powers cannot be comparisons. You can`t say "she`s faster than any other wolf", cause that constricts everyone else. At the most, she`s faster than most other wolves or than the average wolf.


That`s about what there is to say. Oh, and maybe this...


Thanks for choosing Leechfang as crush. Appreciated.

 

[Catharsis]

Name: Sage
Age: 3 years


Pack: SunPack


Rank: Hunter


Powers/Abnormalities: He's faster than any other wolf


History: He actually grew up in Nightpack but he felt his heart actually felt right serving in the Sunpack, so he left Nightpack to live in Sunpack when he was around 2 years old. Now he lives in Sunpack as a solid hunter, and one of the best due to his speed. Although other wolves sometimes look at him as a traitor for leaving his original pack.


Personality: Sage is a very playful wolf, often acting younger than his age at times, though he appears happy and joking all the time he actually is quite depressed. He is also quite daring so he will do just about anything anybody dares him to. Despite being a hunter he actually doesn't like hunting or killing. He takes as much time running the prey around before he has to kill it.


*Likes: Playing, running, rivers, randomly pouncing on others


*Dislikes: When other wolves don't treat him equally or look down on him


*Habits: Rolling onto his back in the middle of conversations, he always has to be moving.


*Flaws: He doesn't let out his true feelings, he overestimates his strength sometimes


*Crush: He still has feelings for Luna the Alpha at NightPack when he was in Nightpack she hadn't become alpha yet but he never got to tell her his feelings, so sometimes he goes on his runs to see her across the territory border. But to try to go against his feelings for her he often involves himself around Snowhunter; he tries to brighten her rather sullen expression and anti-social attitude.


*Mate: None

Spoiler

Name: Aero


Age: 1 year


Pack: NightPack


Rank: Fighter


Powers/abnormalities: She actually has a poisonous bite when she wants to


Personality: Aero tries to be the best of fighters, she only just turned 1 year old and has moved from being an apprentice fighter to a full fledged one. She often trains every night by herself because she wants to be invincible. She often doesn't let wolves get too close to her, but she is polite around others and if she likes someone she will follow them around a bit. She is shy about her true feelings so she tries to hide them. She likes to hang around the pups and show them fighting moves when she can, she likes the energetic aura they have.


Likes: Fighting, training, eating, exploring


Dislikes: Lazy wolves, wolves who are arrogant, humans


Habits: Sleepwalking, her dreams take her places man, literally. Because of this she tries to stay awake as much as possible


Flaws: Sometimes she can't control when her bites laces poison, so she often tries to avoid biting other wolves during training.


Crush: I know he is still young but Leechfang. It's not a "Oh my god be mine" sort of feeling but she likes his personality and being around his aura, she doesn't really know what a crush is she doesn't have clear romantic feelings for anyone so anything could change or happen.


Mate: None

Omg (@Idea ) you can be admin or whatever cos you pay a lot more attention than I do xD


Accepted, but keep in mind idea's suggestions and feel free to change the CS. Since the packs ARE at war, it could be an interesting plot twist. So you don't have to change it unless you want to.

 

[Idea]

Omg (@Idea ) you can be admin or whatever cos you pay a lot more attention than I do xD
Accepted, but keep in mind idea's suggestions and feel free to change the CS. Since the packs ARE at war, it could be an interesting plot twist. So you don't have to change it unless you want to.

I`d be honore to, but I won`t take any authority upon myself without being told that I have by the actual owner of the thread (you).


On a sidenote, I didn`t say the wolf couldn`t have changed packs, only that there would be complications. For example, I know for a fact that the current alpha (my character) has been in that position for longer than this wolf live and he forbids all kinds of contact with stray wolves or wolves from other packs.


@NyxNightmare you might want to read what`s above.

 

[The Mechanist]

While it is not required, it is recommended that each player create 2 or more characters from separate packs

*= Not required


-Name: Remus Silverfang


-Age: Unknown


-Appearance: All black fur save for a white (T) shaped spot in between his eyes


-Pack ( Packs are in the overview): Night Pack:


-Rank (Ranks are in the overview): Fighter, reconassaince


-Powers/Abnormalities: Has the ability to bend light around himself with a dark ichor like cloud to allow for absolute stealth during the night, and light distortation during the day. can be used as an offensive measure to burn ones eyes as well as freely manipulated to create forms, these forms do no actual damage (aside form eye irritation) other than to merely intimidate or distract. Can also throw off the senses of others, mainly smell for his dark cloud gives the scent of burning. On very rare occasions, can release a huge cloud of dark ichor that acts as both a smoke bomb and eye irritant to allow a hasty escape, has to be in a stressed panic state to achieve this.


-History: Has always been a lone wolf, trained to only sneak and spy as well as effectively fight in self defense.


-Personality: Is the perfect obedient soldier, when hes watched that is, during his recon missions, when hes alone, hes a free spirit, looking at creatures of nature, hanging out in flower patches


*Likes: Flowers, anything colorful, loves to paint and create art.


*Dislikes: Living with night pack, the other wolves treat him as an outsider, all except alpha, who is his only friend and whom he considers family.


*Habits: Getting distracted after his missions are complete


*Flaws: Being an outsider


*Crush: Has spotted a few sun pack wolves that caught his eye.


*Mate: None


*Other: Has an ability to paint with his paws and tail, developed a way to effectively clean the berry juice off his fur once done painting, had a sibling who went missing, alpha has kept it a secret


-Name: Olivia Quicktalon


-Age: Unkown


-Appearance: All white fur save for a black (T) shaped spot in between her eyes


-Pack: Sun Pack


-Rank: Fighter


-Powers/Abnormalities: Has the ability to call forth arcs of lightning from her fur and strike the ground withing a certain proximity, stunning but not killing anything that should get struck, effect is amplified when water is near by. Can also build it up into her fur to release an even stronger arc that causes temporary tetanus within the victim.


History: Is a tough cookie at times but does have a soft spot for others, especially her mentee Atticus.


Personality: believes in self sacrifice, the exemplary attitude of knight, but only if its in sync with her morale code, she will break rules and disobey if need be for the sake of others, not caring what her alpha has to say at all.


Likes: Sparring, just sitting around and lazing about, as well as draw in the dirt with a stick.


Dislikes: Rules


Habits: Getting distracted and has a tendency to ignore those who annoy her, as well as the constant feeling that something is missing.


Flaws: Being an outsider


Crush: Has none due to that she believes a lot of sun pack annoys her.


Mate: none


Other: Is in fact Remus' long lost sibling.

 

[The Mechanist]

Before, I say anything else, I`ll just warn I am giving friendly advise, and am not a GM.
So, firs thing, it was stated before here, but wolfs are no longer pups after 1 year of age. A 3 year old wolf is not a pup.


Next, changing from one pack to another has huge implications, given the packs are at war. You might want to detail some restrcitions for your wolf or something that makes it more conceivable.


Next, powers cannot be comparisons. You can`t say "she`s faster than any other wolf", cause that constricts everyone else. At the most, she`s faster than most other wolves or than the average wolf.


That`s about what there is to say. Oh, and maybe this...


Thanks for choosing Leechfang as crush. Appreciated.

im a stickler for rules as well mate but for character creation wise, dont ask for too much from others, i understand where youre getting at, but just be careful, you dont want to make this not fun for others

 

[Violetti]

Yes I'll change the changing packs thing a bit, I kind of overlooked exactly how strict the alpha is. I did mention that he was looked upon as a traitor and looked down upon. But I guess I would just need some info on what kind of restrictions the alpha will have placed. And I probably didn't express enough in words but by faster than the other wolves I mean like he has increased agility. Which would therefore make him faster than other wolves by default. He's not like the flash haha so I didn't think it would hinder anyone else. Some other character's powers seem to exceed mine like shapeshifting or making plants grow ;__; but if you have a problem I can change /.\ and I don't think I implied sage was a pup anywhere though xD coming into the pack as a pup might have gone better for him though haha. He can just be omega for now if you want. @Idea

 

[Idea]

Yes I'll change the changing packs thing a bit, I kind of overlooked exactly how strict the alpha is. I did mention that he was looked upon as a traitor and looked down upon. But I guess I would just need some info on what kind of restrictions the alpha will have placed. And I probably didn't express enough in words but by faster than the other wolves I mean like he has increased agility. Which would therefore make him faster than other wolves by default. He's not like the flash haha so I didn't think it would hinder anyone else. Some other character's powers seem to exceed mine like shapeshifting or making plants grow ;__; but if you have a problem I can change /.\ and I don't think I implied sage was a pup anywhere though xD coming into the pack as a pup might have gone better for him though haha. He can just be omega for now if you want. @Idea

Please, do mention those restrictions. I won`t be bothering you with what they are, but they should be there.


My issue isn`t she being fast, is she being "faster". If another wolf wants a speed-based power, there is no guarantee yours would be faster. If it so happens she is, good for you. But if not, then you also have to accept it.


And for the pup part, you`re right, I misread.

[QUOTE="Hollowed Kadaver]im a stickler for rules as well mate but for character creation wise, dont ask for too much from others, i understand where youre getting at, but just be careful, you dont want to make this not fun for others

[/QUOTE]
I have to be harsh with them. The reason is continuity. My character is the sun pack`s alpha, and he is very strict about his rules. He has been the alpha for longer than most the wolves in this thread have lived, so naturally, I can`t let some things pass or we`d be left with the problem of the exception to the rules which shouldn`t exist.

 

[Violetti]

Is it better I editied Sage's character sheet. @Idea

 

[Idea]

Is it better I editied Sage's character sheet. @Idea

Much better, but I`d like to ask what "dynamic camouflage" means exactly. Moving invisibility, especially for long or undetermined periods of time tends to be overpowered.

 

[Violetti]

Me: Dammit Sage you have to be so difficult!


Sage: *Whimpers* Im sorry!!


I edited it again lol. Basically what I added was that he has to be still for the power to take effect. So it isn't like he can move around. And since its only camouflage and not invisibility he's not transparent. It just makes it harder to spot him like a chameleon. @Idea

 

[Idea]

Me: Dammit Sage you have to be so difficult!
Sage: *Whimpers* Im sorry!!


I edited it again lol. Basically what I added was that he has to be still for the power to take effect. So it isn't like he can move around. And since its only camouflage and not invisibility he's not transparent. It just makes it harder to spot him like a chameleon. @Idea

Ok, it`s good now. Sorry to bother you. Happy rping!

 

[wolfborn4]

Name: Raven


Age: 2 years (technically still a pup)

Pack: Rogue (but likes to linger near the Nightpack)


Rank: N/A (though she is highly skilled at hunting and fighting)


Powers/Abnormalities: She has the unique ability to be able to use three different powers Telepathy, Telekinesis, and...the most important...she can slow down time, though only for about half an hour...though she almost never dose it that long since it starts to hurt her after twenty minutes. On the outside it just looks like she has super speed. Though her telekinesis is weak and she can't control things larger than her, but it doesn't matter if they weight a bit more than her...so she can hurtle a small boulder at most. She can conjure a two way telepathic connection with another wolf if they are at least in a range of half a mile close to her, though the further away the weaker the signal. Her ability to slow down time is the most powerful since she can slow time in a range of a mile away from her.


History: Raven was born into a pack from another area, her parents where planning on moving since they got kicked out of the pack. They died along the way, leaving Raven to fend for herself... She just arrived in the territories and has been taking food fem both packs to survive. But recently she's been staying closer and closer to the Nightpacks camp...she's thinking about joining, they could use the help


Personality:


Raven dose what she wants, she lives on her own (for now), though she's highly protective and in battle she almost never says a word. Though she is fierce and relentless while fighting, she won't kill unless either ordered to or she is too ticked off.


Whenever she isn't hunting or fighting, she's pretty funny and laid back, she likes to sneak up on other wolves, which causes a play fight. Once she gets bored of that, she'll either take a nap, mess with the pups, hang out with the warriors or hunters, and or try to see if she can talk to the alpha about anything really...she likes to support her alpha or just ask for an extra patrol/hunting trip

 

[Idea]

Name: Raven
Age: 2

Pack: Rogue


Rank: N/A


Powers/Abnormalities: She has the unique ability to be able to use three different powers Telepathy, Telekinesis, and...the most important...she can slow down time, on the outside it just looks like she has super speed. Though her telekinesis is weak and she can't control things larger than her she can conjure a two way telepathic connection with another wolf if they are at least in a range of half a mile close to her, though the further away the weaker the signal. Her ability to slow down time is the most powerful since she can slow time and stop time in a range of a mile away from her.


History: Raven was born into a pack from another area, her parents where planning on moving since they got kicked out of the pack. They died along the way, leaving Raven to fend for herself... She just arrived in the territories and has been taking food fem both packs to survive.


Personality: free-spirited, brave, strong, curious, sarcastic, childish, rash, adventurous and playful

Okay, there`s a lot to say here... Firstly, you didn`t specify which pack your character belongs to now.


Second, her history has the same problem as Sages, this is, if this character is for the sunpack.


Third, you need to extend that personality. A list of adjectives doesn`t tell us how she behaves, it`s too vague.


Fourth, you need to be more specific on her powers. How heavy of a thing can she lift with telekinesis? What she do with telepathy? How long can she slow time for? Remove the stopping time entirely. It`s an OP ability, nomatter how you look at it.


Fifth, what does she do if she doesn`t have a rank? Does she just lazy around? How could such a wolf be allowed in any pack, and how could she not have been attributed a rank? You need to explain these.

 

[wolfborn4]

Ok I fixed it

 

[Wackadoodle0987]

@wolfborn4 -- You fixed some of the historical issues, however, there yet remains the precarious topic of your wolf's powers. Telekinesis, telepathy and time slowing are all very powerful abilities; and then to combine is something else altogether. However, it does not break any rules of godmodding etc.


Unfortunately, as @Idea has stated, the ability to stop time entirely sets you above all else in the RP and wouldn't be fair. An example would be, that a wolf with super speed could counter-balance your time slowing capabilities, to make conflict a little more even; however, stopping time would mean your wolf can do anything it wants and nobody could know or act upon it. It makes pushing the boundaries of the RP very easy, and will likely result in future arguments.


Also, not a complaint, but rather a recommendation. Considering that you mentioned your wolf is rogue, and like to sneak up on other wolves and playfight. If a rogue wolf attempted to sneak up on any other wolf, they would treat it as a threat and you would without a doubt be attacked. I would suggest refraining from that past time until you are widely trusted by certain wolves.


EDIT :: In fact, I just read the rest of the post. I'm not sure how close we are all sticking to wolves actual nature, but a rogue wolf such as yours wouldn't be allowed on pack territory, wouldn't be allowed near the den, and DEFINITELY wouldn't be allowed to step anywhere near the pups. You'd be killed without a thought. Again, ask @Lonelytaco as to how close to wolves nature we are sticking, but we're not RPing a human society. Wolves aren't nice to strangers, and you have three choices when encountering a pack as a rogue.


1) You act submissive, and the alpha can either accept you into the pack; or all the wolves will rip you apart. Sort of 50/50 chance, depends on the alpha I guess.


2) You be aggressive and try to fight the alpha. As there's only one of you, this will result in death.


3) This isn't really among the choices given to you, but rather something you might risk if things go south. You can run. With your slow time ability you could probably escape the pack territory.


Wolf Biology and Behavior - Western Wildlife Outreach


Basic Wolf Life History Facts (FAQs) - Western Wildlife Outreach


It's A Wolf's Life


There's just a few pages with a bunch of information on wolves, just to give you a little bit of an idea.

 

[wolfborn4]

@wolfborn4[/URL] -- You fixed some of the historical issues, however, there yet remains the precarious topic of your wolf's powers. Telekinesis, telepathy and time slowing are all very powerful abilities; and then to combine is something else altogether. However, it does not break any rules of godmodding etc.
Unfortunately, as @Idea has stated, the ability to stop time entirely sets you above all else in the RP and wouldn't be fair. An example would be, that a wolf with super speed could counter-balance your time slowing capabilities, to make conflict a little more even; however, stopping time would mean your wolf can do anything it wants and nobody could know or act upon it. It makes pushing the boundaries of the RP very easy, and will likely result in future arguments.


Also, not a complaint, but rather a recommendation. Considering that you mentioned your wolf is rogue, and like to sneak up on other wolves and playfight. If a rogue wolf attempted to sneak up on any other wolf, they would treat it as a threat and you would without a doubt be attacked. I would suggest refraining from that past time until you are widely trusted by certain wolves.


EDIT :: In fact, I just read the rest of the post. I'm not sure how close we are all sticking to wolves actual nature, but a rogue wolf such as yours wouldn't be allowed on pack territory, wouldn't be allowed near the den, and DEFINITELY wouldn't be allowed to step anywhere near the pups. You'd be killed without a thought. Again, ask @Lonelytaco as to how close to wolves nature we are sticking, but we're not RPing a human society. Wolves aren't nice to strangers, and you have three choices when encountering a pack as a rogue.


1) You act submissive, and the alpha can either accept you into the pack; or all the wolves will rip you apart. Sort of 50/50 chance, depends on the alpha I guess.


2) You be aggressive and try to fight the pack for territory. As there's only one of you, this will result in death.


3) This isn't really among the choices given to you, but rather something you might risk if things go south. You can run. With your slow time ability you could probably escape the pack territory.


Wolf Biology and Behavior - Western Wildlife Outreach


Basic Wolf Life History Facts (FAQs) - Western Wildlife Outreach


It's A Wolf's Life


There's just a few pages with a bunch of information on wolves, just to give you a little bit of an idea.

I fixed the powers, sorry about that...and Um with the whole rogue thing, you do know she isn't fully grown yet right...she's like a young adult. Canines become adults at 3 so if the pack attacked and killed her it would show Sunpack that they are so cruel that they would practically kill a pup, and that could either be interpreted as something to fear, or to show that they don't have a heart giving Sunpack all the more reason to be at war with them. Sorry if that sounded rude at all.

 

[Wackadoodle0987]

I fixed the powers, sorry about that...and Um with the whole rogue thing, you do know she isn't fully grown yet right...she's like a young adult. Canines become adults at 3 so if the pack attacked and killed her it would show Sunpack that they are so cruel that they would practically kill a pup, and that could either be interpreted as something to fear, or to show that they don't have a heart giving Sunpack all the more reason to be at war with them. Sorry if that sounded rude at all.

It's fine. PS - Wolves fully mature between 2 and 3 years, and thus are considered (as you said) young adults before that point. It's completely likely that your wolf hasn't yet fully matured, but as a rogue, it would imply that either your parents died and you were left alone; or that you fully matured and thus set out on your own.


As your wolf's parents did die, I'll agree that your wolf hasn't fully matured. It would make the Night Pack's alpha more likely to recruit you, but even as a young adult, if you are a rogue; they will still kill you if you get too close. Especially if you endanger the pups.

 

[Violetti]

Your wolf is sexy If i was a wolf I would be that wolf xD


@wolfborn4

 

[wolfborn4]

Your wolf is sexy If i was a wolf I would be that wolf xD
@wolfborn4

Why thank you xD