jjcoollay1434
jjcoollay1434
[QUOTE="Ami the breadling]As the GM permitted me to care for the characters from now on, i will try to care for anyone that had to wait. Anyone already accepted through a vote is accepted, no matter what i say here.
Accepted
Accepted, though you will only be allowed to use that manipulation on NPcs, not real player characters
Accepted. Though the additional Clan members will either be NPCs or need a own character sheet each.
Accepted, thpugh please add a appearance if possible. Discription would do as well, just at least something.
Accepted, though the mind manipulation may only be used on NPCs.
Accepted, i like the idea, though of course his speed may not give him a dogde on EVERY attack. I believe that is clear and understandable.
Pushing air out of someones lungs sounds a tad strong. Maybe you could add that he can only do so while concentrating on it, so if you use it on a person, he or she might do something against it.
Besides that, i would accept him.
Accepted, though enhanced speed may not lead to autodogding everything. Everyone gets hit SOMETIME.
Accepted
Accepted
Accepted, though if you use the Fevor of Bloodlust on a person, they wont automatically die.
i have multiple points to critizize here. Therefore i will do it in the following order.
1. Ipotane:
- The speed you gave is ridicoulus. In any fight, nobody would ever be able to either hit or dogde. I see the point in being faster, but please not that fast.
2. Siren:
- The song would only be used on NPCs, as controlling other characters is not allowed. OR the song would be somewhat preventable from directly leading to her, in some way being resistable.
-Controlling plants already is the ability of the Queen of Plant Kingom. I see why a forrest siren should be able to do so, though your character would only make them grow or die and not control them fully.
3. Companion
-Your character is already very strong, so adding a companion is a bit over the top. I see the point in a pet, but please keep it one that does not assist in combat then please.
The title makes me a bit confused. The kingdoms are already shown in the overview, so there is no such thing as a queen over all humans. THough of course she can call herself that.
Seems very good for being a dragon. Just notice that dragon scales are not able to protect him from being attacked or killed in a fight, he is not unkillable. Besides that, accepted.
If i forgot someone or anybody has any questions on what i said, please just ask me in the out of character chat.
As this is not longer true, i must ask you to delete this message.
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awesome! (:
Accepted
Accepted, though you will only be allowed to use that manipulation on NPcs, not real player characters
Accepted. Though the additional Clan members will either be NPCs or need a own character sheet each.
Accepted, thpugh please add a appearance if possible. Discription would do as well, just at least something.
Accepted, though the mind manipulation may only be used on NPCs.
Accepted, i like the idea, though of course his speed may not give him a dogde on EVERY attack. I believe that is clear and understandable.
Pushing air out of someones lungs sounds a tad strong. Maybe you could add that he can only do so while concentrating on it, so if you use it on a person, he or she might do something against it.
Besides that, i would accept him.
Accepted, though enhanced speed may not lead to autodogding everything. Everyone gets hit SOMETIME.
Accepted
Accepted
Accepted, though if you use the Fevor of Bloodlust on a person, they wont automatically die.
i have multiple points to critizize here. Therefore i will do it in the following order.
1. Ipotane:
- The speed you gave is ridicoulus. In any fight, nobody would ever be able to either hit or dogde. I see the point in being faster, but please not that fast.
2. Siren:
- The song would only be used on NPCs, as controlling other characters is not allowed. OR the song would be somewhat preventable from directly leading to her, in some way being resistable.
-Controlling plants already is the ability of the Queen of Plant Kingom. I see why a forrest siren should be able to do so, though your character would only make them grow or die and not control them fully.
3. Companion
-Your character is already very strong, so adding a companion is a bit over the top. I see the point in a pet, but please keep it one that does not assist in combat then please.
The title makes me a bit confused. The kingdoms are already shown in the overview, so there is no such thing as a queen over all humans. THough of course she can call herself that.
Seems very good for being a dragon. Just notice that dragon scales are not able to protect him from being attacked or killed in a fight, he is not unkillable. Besides that, accepted.
If i forgot someone or anybody has any questions on what i said, please just ask me in the out of character chat.
As this is not longer true, i must ask you to delete this message.
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awesome! (: