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Fantasy The War Never Won (Open, limited spots available)\[T]/

TheLoneRook

Death's Secretary
Here is where the chit of chat is communicated.


Speak as you wish.
 
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Hey, this looks really well thought out. Can I reserve the spot for taste? Also, can I PM you if I need help with the CS?
 
@thespacekid Yes you can and yes you can!


@Archie @Issa22 Just checkin' in to make sure everything going well!


I know I told everyone to take their time but we do want to get started before the week ends if at all possible. If anyone has any questions feel free to PM me.
 
Oh oh.. I'm sorry, but can I switch to smell instead? I didn't have any concrete ideas for taste but I do have one for smell!
 
TO ALL WHOM IT MAY CONCERN (you fucks)


I plan on getting us started tonight or tomorrow. Those of you who are still in the application process, since we only have one slot left it will be first come first serve. Once that happens, round two will be made open. The intro post won't be setting any events that characters need to partake in, it will just be a basic intro, but I'd like everyone to be ready to roll when it drops. Act accordingly.


Sincerely,


Da Rook
 
@AtlasAtrium @DarKnight36 @SniperBus


The beginning of the first post is up. The second piece will go live later on. Let this be a nice little piece to read and get all your creative juices going for what's to come, and maybe clear up a few questions you may have had. We're going to try to get some last minute applicants, but if that doesn't happen I'll let the four of us mess around a bit to try and draw in some more players. As always, you know where to find me with any questions.
 
@ the people who are in here and know this shit's about to go down


WE'RE LIVE BITCHES


Posting is now availbll


Cards will be delivered once everyone has gotten slightly settled, and remember as you begin to interact that ALL OF THESE PEOPLE HAVE KNOWN OR BEEN EXPOSED TO EACH OTHER FOR 6 YEARS


That is all


<3<3<3<3


Rook
 
@RyuShura @SniperBus @AtlasAtrium @DarKnight36


Okay, so obviously backstory and history is a big influence on the plot. That said, currently, there is little development in that regard.


To combat this, I want to implement an improv system. Basically as you post normally, whenever your character recounts a part of their past, you can incorporate other characters into that memory how you see fit. As long as the memory fits the character's general personality and attributes, what is said will stick (unless requested to not-stick). To make other players aware of this, simply tag them with their name in some sort of OOC mark *~-()-~* so that they know the difference.


I'm excited. I hope you guys are excited.
 
The roleplay is still alive! xD I just think the GM is busy. He'll get back to you as fast as he can.
 
@Sopranos where do I begin....


We'll start technical. I'm seeing a lot of grammar problems right out of the gate. Lack of punctuation, lack of proper plurals, consistently too not just here and there. I would assume based on the typos you have that you aren't a native English speaker, and while I understand it's hard as I have said before we hold everyone involved here to a certain standard, and your writing as it is now does not seem to meet that standard.


On the other hand, your character is literally Corvo from Dishonored. The pictures are both of Corvo. The history of your character is almost IDENTICAL to Corvo's history. The powers you have listed are either exactly the same as Tony's and or blatantly obvious game mechanics transitioned from Dishonored into this cs (blinking, dark vision). The only original things I see here are the name, and the name of the mask.


It's plagiarism. It shows that you cannot create an original character, and it's incredibly disrespectful to the writers and creators of Dishonored, as your are submitting their creation as your own.


For those reasons, and a plethura of other reasons, your character sheet is not accepted.
 
I'm sorry if you feel that way, but I don't think it's right to accuse me of disrespect anyone:


1st: the pictures are freely shared fan-art on the internet.


2nd: I admit that I was short on ideas about this character, but even when his background and abilities are similar to Corvo, they are ideas have been used for tons other characters on this RP site or anywhere else... And I didn't use exactly every single details of Corvo into him. In other words, he's not Corvo, I didn't use an original character, steal or disrespect anyone and I didn't violate any laws of copyright about the character of Corvo, Dishonored and Bethesda (Especially on this RP site, unless I copied anyone's Original Character, it's not exactly plagiarism)


3rd: Sorry if my character ability is similar to your and my English isn't up to the standard of this place... I guess.


Last thing, I do not want to change your mind or anything, this's just a few thing on my mind when I received your mention. I'll just leave this RP politely since I've lost interest and I wish the best luck to this RP.
 
Hey Ya'll. I'll be posting pretty soon. Character has only just gotten her Warbrand, but has been following the war as best she can through media outlets. Hopefully I won't dick around writing filler shit and'll get my character in the mix sooner rather than later.
 
You can join those wacky kids in the Dirt. Meanwhile, I'll be having margaritas with my succubus on a sunlit rooftop, thank you very much.
 
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