The Order (forever accepting)

so... @SweetCat2319 where does he work again? because you have Cashpots, BlackLights and Ratman's all listed lol xD (in personality and under occupation)


@Penance i would like an age, list of abilities, and strengths and weaknesses.


@Nenma Takashi what do you mean by "normal" weapons?
 
@Jesters Court I mean anything that isn't made to kill something supernatural or isn't enhanced so a bat or a kitchen kinfe something a normal human could find and use.
 
@Jesters Court I said he works at Cashpot's and hangs out at Blacklights and Ratman's, stop skimming xD
 
@Nenma Takashi if take a kitchen knife and stick it in anybody's neck, then unless special circumstances have been stated before hand, then they better damn well die... it doesn't matter the weapon, all that matters is whos using it. You see where I'm coming from? so be specific, because im pretty sure anybody in the RP could take said kitchen knife and stick it down anybody's throat....


(@SweetCat2319 Approved.)
 
@Nenma Takashi that would be a form of passive immunity, because if i take said kitchen knife and cant stick him in the neck with it, or i shoot him in the head with a regular pistol and he doesn't die then that's just a bit broken... if you could modify that power in some way to nerf it, then maybe i would think about letting him have it, if not, then get rid of that power.
 
resistance... so lets see, hm... say so the extent of his skin is like the equivalent of tough leather? would that work for you? that way he can still be injured, but has some resistance?
 
Penance said:
@Jesters Court edited it
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Sure... Accepted, would have preferred a list of abilities, but oh well... you try to pull anything overpowered and KING may actually get to show up again... that is a warning to everyone... don't give KING the excuse.
 
[QUOTE="Nenma Takashi]@Jesters Court yeah sounds good.
 
Don't know who king is but don't think I want to.

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KING is like the super power character of this whole rp, and a plot twister. Be afraid. Be very afraid. Also...don't godmod, Jester gets pissed.
 
[QUOTE="Nenma Takashi]@Jesters Court done

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Approved.


 


SweetCat2319 said:
KING is like the super power character of this whole rp, and a plot twister. Be afraid. Be very afraid. Also...don't godmod, Jester gets pissed.
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well.... your partially right... im just waiting to introduce KINGS 4 subordinates who will be the main plot drivers... also, shes right, you godmod, and you will face my wrath.... (recall what happened to the wolves...)
 
[QUOTE="Jesters Court]Approved.
 



well.... your partially right... im just waiting to introduce KINGS 4 subordinates who will be the main plot drivers... also, shes right, you godmod, and you will face my wrath.... (recall what happened to the wolves...)

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Oh, okay, we only had the brief intro to KING so I was describing my impression!
 
Name: Shane Blake


Codename(s): BLAKE


Gender: Female


Species: Fairy


Sexuality: Bisexual


Age: 18


Height: 5'8"


Weight: 125lbs.


Appearance: Blond hair cut in a pixie-bob, small nose, pointed chin, round brown eyes, round-tipped silver colored wings


Mask(s): (x) chosen because it covers the most important pieces of person identification (bridge of nose and around the eyes) and for it's distracting nature


Occupation: Still a student, works at a small book shop after school and on weekends.


Personality:


Attitude towards others: Very sarcastic (especially with people that she doesn't know), very cold and keeps to herself, very select few that have gained her full trust and friendship


Likes: Working, writing books about the things she has faced as a member of The Order, night time


Dislikes: People who think they're friends with her, people who try to shoplift from the book store, strong scents


Phobias: Spiders, people finding out about her identity


Preferred Weapon(s)/equipment: Silver colored sword (kind of looks like a fencing sabre). A small button on the hilt can change things that the sword can do (Freeze, burn, poison, paralyze, put to sleep, and basic attack)


Abilities: Can shrink and fit into small places, can fly (not very useful if trying to escape as she panics when in danger)


Strengths: Immune to any sickness (can be killed if exposed to enough of this thing at once), has a force field (breaks after few hits, takes a while to regenerate), {magic, fast, clever, tricky, invisability - as stated by Sweetcat2319}


Weaknesses: Not very strong without her weapon, force field while helpful breaks easily, panics very easily, {cream, iron, silver, salt, sugar, Destroying the spell book they were summoned with - as stated by Sweetcat2319}


Recruitment story: As a joke, she filled out a fake resume thinking it was fake. She ignored the messages she got at first, thinking that it was a friend who knew she filled out the resume. Luckily, since it was her first assignments, The Order went easy on her when she didn't carry out her orders. She now does almost anything without hesitation as she loves the rewards she gets for a being a part of this group.


Background: She was left alone by her parents when she was only 15. She found a home with a friend until she was recruited by The Order at age 16. After completing a few missions, she was able to move into the apartment she was provided.
 
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scaryyangell said:
Name: Shane Blake
Codename(s): BLAKE


Gender: Female


Species: Fairy


Sexuality: Bisexual


Age: 18


Height: 5'8"


Weight: 125lbs.


Appearance: Blond hair cut in a pixie-bob, small nose, pointed chin, round brown eyes, round-tipped silver wings


Mask(s): (x) chosen because it covers the most important pieces of person identification (bridge of nose and around the eyes) and for it's distracting nature


Occupation: Still a student, works at a small book shop after school and on weekends.


Personality:


Attitude towards others: Very sarcastic (especially with people that she doesn't know), very cold and keeps to herself, very select few that have gained her full trust and friendship


Likes: Working, writing books about the things she has faced as a member of The Order, night time


Dislikes: People who think they're friends with her, people who try to shoplift from the book store, strong scents


Phobias: Spiders, people finding out about her identity


Preferred Weapon(s)/equipment: Silver sword (kind of looks like a fencing sabre). A small button on the hilt can change things that the sword can do (Freeze, burn, poison, paralyze, put to sleep, and basic attack)


Abilities: Can shrink and fit into small places, can fly (not very useful if trying to escape as she panics when in danger)


Strengths: Immune to any sickness (can be killed if exposed to enough of this thing at once), has a force field (breaks after few hits, takes a while to regenerate)


Weaknesses: Not very strong without her weapon, force field while helpful breaks easily, panics very easily


Recruitment story: As a joke, she filled out a fake resume thinking it was fake. She ignored the messages she got at first, thinking that it was a friend who knew she filled out the resume. Luckily, since it was her first assignments, The Order went easy on her when she didn't carry out her orders. She now does almost anything without hesitation as she loves the rewards she gets for a being a part of this group.


Background: She was left alone by her parents when she was only 15. She found a home with a friend until she turned 18 and could get her own house. She was recruited into The Order at age 16, while she was still living with her friend. She used this as a personal excuse, only telling her friend that she didn't want to trouble them anymore, as to why she began living on her own as soon as she could.
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you do know we have someone else playing as a fairy right? well because of that, i would like to keep the powers similar... like for instance we have established that silver is poisonous to fairies and is painful to even touch... so for the sake of consistency, i would like you to take a look at SweetCat2319's first bio, and make the weaknesses and some of the innate abilities the same. Im not saying you must be a carbon copy, you can have vastly different powers and what not, but something like the silver and what not i would like to have similar effects.
 
[QUOTE="Jesters Court]you do know we have someone else playing as a fairy right? well because of that, i would like to keep the powers similar... like for instance we have established that silver is poisonous to fairies and is painful to even touch... so for the sake of consistency, i would like you to take a look at SweetCat2319's first bio, and make the weaknesses and some of the innate abilities the same. Im not saying you must be a carbon copy, you can have vastly different powers and what not, but something like the silver and what not i would like to have similar effects.

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I will look at their profile, thank you for telling me. For further reference, though, I meant silver in color. I'll edit this so that's more obvious.


{EDIT} I changed it up a bit. Tell me if there's anything that needs to be changed/more specific :)
 
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well aside from the fact it could use massive formatting changes and images, its not bad... I'm kind of having a hard time reading it because of how its formatted... also, for your strengths and weaknesses and what not you have some missing words, making it extremely hard to read.... i know i probably sound like a grammar nazi or perfectionist right now, but i'm trying to see if there is anything i would consider broken or anything that could be used as a loop hole, so if you would could you please make it a bit easier to read? (from what i can tell right now i cant see anything wrong, i would just like to do this as a precaution... also, if you need to, then just post the newly formatted bio as a second post, you dont have to edit the one thats already up...)
 
Jesters Court]well aside from the fact it could use massive formatting changes and images said:
x[/URL]) chosen because it covers the most important pieces of person identification (bridge of nose and around the eyes) and for it's distracting nature


Occupation: Still a student, works at a small book shop after school and on weekends.


Personality:


Attitude towards others: Very sarcastic (especially with people that she doesn't know), very cold and keeps to herself, very select few that have gained her full trust and friendship


Likes: Working, writing books about the things she has faced as a member of The Order, night time


Dislikes: People who think they're friends with her, people who try to shoplift from the book store, strong scents


Phobias: Spiders, people finding out about her identity


Preferred Weapon(s)/equipment: Silver colored sword (kind of looks like a fencing sabre). A small button on the hilt can change things that the sword can do (Freeze, burn, poison, paralyze, put to sleep, and basic attack)


Abilities: Can shrink and fit into small places, can fly (not very useful if trying to escape as she panics when in danger)


Strengths: Immune to any sickness (can be killed if exposed to enough of this thing at once), has a force field (breaks after few hits, takes a while to regenerate), {magic, fast, clever, tricky, invisability - as stated by Sweetcat2319}


Weaknesses: Not very strong without her weapon, her force field only keeps weaker enemies out as it breaks very easily, panics very easily, {cream, iron, silver, salt, sugar, Destroying the spell book they were summoned with - as stated by Sweetcat2319}


Recruitment story: As a joke, she filled out a fake resume thinking it was fake. She ignored the messages she got at first, thinking that it was a friend who knew she filled out the resume. Luckily, since it was her first assignments, The Order went easy on her when she didn't carry out her orders. She now does almost anything without hesitation as she loves the rewards she gets for a being a part of this group.


Background: She was left alone by her parents when she was only 15. She found a home with a friend until she was recruited by The Order at age 16. After completing a few missions, she was able to move into the apartment she was provided.
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Again, the strengths and weaknesses are unclear and missing words, but at least this time it is readable.


....Fine... Accepted.
 
Application:


Name: Unknown


Codename(s): SILENCE


Gender: Male


Species:

  • Boggart: Boggarts are creatures of fear, and tend to lurk in dark places. They can see instantly what anyone fears when approached, and will transform into that to bring their adversaries to their knees. No one knows their origonal shape, as they are only seen in a fearful form of some sort.


Sexuality: Straight


Age: 90


Height: 6 feet


Weight: 120


Appearance:
images



Mask(s): SILENCE


images



Is a stealthy silent man, no mercy.


Occupation: Hacker


Personality: Quiet and never speaks....ever


Preferred Weapon(s)/equipment:


-Silenced pistols


-Throwing Knives


Abilities: Transform into pure fear, Lockpicking pro, Hacking, stealth


Strengths: Remaining Anonymous, Keeping quiet, Not getting caught


Weaknesses: Light, Explosives


Recruitment story: Haunted the City as a mercenary then was hired by The Order to do a job, he had a liking so decided to join.


Background: [DATA REDACTED]
 
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