Fantasy The Land of Lynthia

[TheJipan]

It doesn't have to be too long. It's purpose is basically to bring us up with the rest of the RP, that's all.

 

[Yonsisac]

WIll reply late gota catch up with other rps i swear i will reply sorry

 

[TheJipan]

Fine, fine...

 

[Yonsisac]

Oh F it the rest can wait im gona Reply now just hold on

 

[Zerohex]

I'm still here waiting for things, actual things, to happen. Just thought I should let you know.

 

[KatsaNovari]

No worries, I'm working on a post now as we speak to have the King show up :3

 

[Yonsisac]

sorry if my post have been short was doing it to get things fast


BUT now that we are JUST IN DAM TIEM (we are so lucky) i guess we would take a seat then! gona wait for Jipan do xD


....I hope the king dosent kill us for being late xD

 

[KatsaNovari]

xD Nah, you're fine! I'm going to be sending a PM to Parsnip since we haven't heard from him for awhile, but otherwise I think everyone is here now?


Edit: Aaaaand just realized I can't PM him xD


So I'll tag him here!


@Parsnip

 

[Parsnip]

Hey.


Billy will show once everyone's out of town and all that. Not that I'm saying you need to rush or anything, just letting you know I haven't flaked out, is all.

 

[KatsaNovari]

Alright, awesome! Thank you for letting us know! ^^


I didn't want to risk leaving you behind or something, and people seemed to have trouble with notifications in the past so I was worried about that as well. That's a relief.

 

[TheJipan]

Quick question. Why is the castle apparently completely unguarded?

 

[KatsaNovari]

What makes you think the castle is "completely unguarded"?

 

[TheJipan]

I was referring to Yonsisac's post, where Natasha and Catherine literally just walk through all the doors, without any hint of their being guards trying to stop them, and without reference to being let in.

 

[Yonsisac]

well i whanted to hurry up and not be late like some said so i kinda made a dirrect post towards the castle sorry...whant me to fix it?

 

[TheJipan]

Well, all you really need to do is add a brief scene where a guard, probably at the front gates, tries to stop them, and they show the summons to the guard, allowing the guard to let them in.

 

[Yonsisac]

ok let me just fix it sorry /-\


 
There is that ok?

 

[TheJipan]

Rudimentary, but it'll do.

 

[Yonsisac]

Oh dear....this might get akward.. xD

 

[TheJipan]

Awkward how? You're embarrassingly flawed grammar? Sorry, couldn't help it. I get unintentionally annoyed by bad grammar.

 

[Yonsisac]

Oh.....better shut up sorry

 

[TheJipan]

I feel really tempted to help fix your grammar... Really tempted.

 

[KatsaNovari]

@Yonsisac


You're doing okay, Yonsisac :3


Please don't feel offended or intimidated when someone/some people are having trouble with your posts. It's completely understandable that you're having a hard time because English isn't your first language, and I completely understand you're trying your best. I also know you must feel pressured, which also doesn't help you when making your posts. A lot of people go through this, so just keep practicing and I know you'll get the hang of it eventually!


@TheJipan


Maybe you can give Yonsisac a few helpful tips on how to improve, and in a more polite manner..? I'm sure Yonsisac really wants to improve and any helpful tips/suggestions are welcomed! ^.^

 

[Zerohex]

Honestly the only advice here is "study english more", and there's no way to put that nicely. I say this as someone who is not a native speaker, spanish is my first language. Studying english more to learn proper spelling and grammar would be my advice here. Then reading a lot of stuff in english, not just websites but actual books, to see how that applies to writing. At this point though, running things through an online spellchecker should be a must, because at least that way we avoid the obvious spelling errors.

 

[KatsaNovari]

True, but I also think we can still be helpful and encouraging so no one feels intimidated or ashamed of making posts. Many people have stated how RPing has helped improve their writing and English greatly and they often had others who were understanding and patient with them. Then you have the majority who never got to because no one really helped and just kept getting irritated with them and insulting them.


Not that I'm implying that's the case here, at least I hope it isn't. Everyone should be having fun ^.^


 
Yonsisac has, unfortunately, decided to drop out of the RP.

 

[TheJipan]

Yonsisac dropped out?! O_O


Why do I have the feeling that this was my fault again...