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Fantasy The Dark World (ooc)

littleberry said:
hmpf... well anyways, I don't want Snow blood bonding with anyone so soon after Lucca. It messed her up a lil using her power. She's super guilty and thinks Lucca hates her and so she won't be eager to do it again. Also why do you want to give your character a power boost lol???
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its not so much as ofa power boost, as i want snow and einua to become closer, and i want einua to teach snow how to stand up and fight. but if need be i can wait.
 
NyxDarling said:
should imake another character?? i really need mycharacter to make friends man.... i mean snow is worried about einua, but i dont think they are friends yet littleberry littleberry FrostFire FrostFire
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I'm only making what I know I can handle lol - and I don't intend for any new characters to come in for awhile.... :puff:
I just wanted to stretch my wings a little and try something a bit different~
 
NyxDarling said:
should imake another character?? i really need mycharacter to make friends man.... i mean snow is worried about einua, but i dont think they are friends yet littleberry littleberry FrostFire FrostFire
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Your character has not really had a chance to interact much. IC time, you have been with the group for one night and then was gone and now at the end of a whole day are back all beaten up.

Everyone elses characters IC have had two days of bonding. So I would give it some time :)
 
NyxDarling said:
should imake another character?? i really need mycharacter to make friends man.... i mean snow is worried about einua, but i dont think they are friends yet littleberry littleberry FrostFire FrostFire
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I don't want to sound rude, but I feel you're trying too hard. Personally speaking. You're trying too hard to have something happen, that if feels like you're not letting your character naturally get involved with the group. Morgan has been around nearly as long as your character and doesn't have anyone to be considered a friend either. Heck, Ryuji, my most ACTIVE and FLIRTATIOUS character has barely scratched the surface of getting to know the group. Nobody within the group could really say they're friends with one another. More like acquaintances and that was by naturally letting them all grow together and interacting. I could honestly probably count the full number of lines your character has said to anyone on my hands. He hasn't really tried to talk to anyone or done anything to garner attention from people except getting hurt and fainting. I'm not trying to be mean here, I'm just sharing what I've observed so far.

Your character listens and observes according to the personality you wrote, but so far your character kind of has been going off as if desperate for people to notice him. When he could've been listening quietly in the bar and then opting into the conversation with Snow, Sera and Jackson at the table when Morgan left. There's potential, but I feel you're getting distracted by your desire to have him interact with people and get him into the group, along with trying to ship him, that you're not seeing some simple ways to get involved. Again, just my two cents, you may take it how you will.
 
Kiroshiven said:
I don't want to sound rude, but I feel you're trying too hard. Personally speaking. You're trying too hard to have something happen, that if feels like you're not letting your character naturally get involved with the group. Morgan has been around nearly as long as your character and doesn't have anyone to be considered a friend either. Heck, Ryuji, my most ACTIVE and FLIRTATIOUS character has barely scratched the surface of getting to know the group. Nobody within the group could really say they're friends with one another. More like acquaintances and that was by naturally letting them all grow together and interacting. I could honestly probably count the full number of lines your character has said to anyone on my hands. He hasn't really tried to talk to anyone or done anything to garner attention from people except getting hurt and fainting. I'm not trying to be mean here, I'm just sharing what I've observed so far.

Your character listens and observes according to the personality you wrote, but so far your character kind of has been going off as if desperate for people to notice him. When he could've been listening quietly in the bar and then opting into the conversation with Snow, Sera and Jackson at the table when Morgan left. There's potential, but I feel you're getting distracted by your desire to have him interact with people and get him into the group, along with trying to ship him, that you're not seeing some simple ways to get involved. Again, just my two cents, you may take it how you will.
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that was quite the reality check, thank you. i mean i kinda pushed my character farther away by getting him beat up, but ill tone it down heavily. and make him more of the listener type again.
 
littleberry said:
Not about what you just said up there but about the whole interest check thing lol
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Yeah, that timing was a bit off, but that other thread looks interesting.


NyxDarling said:
that was quite the reality check, thank you. i mean i kinda pushed my character farther away by getting him beat up, but ill tone it down heavily. and make him more of the listener type again.
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Nyx, you have a character with a lot of potential for growth. And that's amazing. He's someone I'm looking forward to seeing grow, change, and maybe even come to have a friend or two within the party. Just relax. Based off how everyone is still here after a few weeks, this RP will probably last a good while. *knocks on wood* Just play it patiently and ideas will come to you. I have faith in your ability as a writer. And if you're ever stuck on where to go with your character, talking with others is perfectly fine. I didn't develop Ryuji's dual personality thing until I was talking to littleberry littleberry about him and his past. Now he's got a bit more depth and a story arc that I'm looking forward to possibly having come up at some point.
 
ill make apost to change up the speed of my character. thanks again Kiroshiven Kiroshiven
Kiroshiven said:
Yeah, that timing was a bit off, but that other thread looks interesting.



Nyx, you have a character with a lot of potential for growth. And that's amazing. He's someone I'm looking forward to seeing grow, change, and maybe even come to have a friend or two within the party. Just relax. Based off how everyone is still here after a few weeks, this RP will probably last a good while. *knocks on wood* Just play it patiently and ideas will come to you. I have faith in your ability as a writer. And if you're ever stuck on where to go with your character, talking with others is perfectly fine. I didn't develop Ryuji's dual personality thing until I was talking to littleberry littleberry about him and his past. Now he's got a bit more depth and a story arc that I'm looking forward to possibly having come up at some point.
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and reaslly, your looking forward to seeing him grow? and thanks, i dont know how well i am doing at writing, but i hope it can become enjoyable for everyone, and that maybe on or two characters will befriend einua
 
Kiroshiven said:
Yeah, that timing was a bit off, but that other thread looks interesting.



Nyx, you have a character with a lot of potential for growth. And that's amazing. He's someone I'm looking forward to seeing grow, change, and maybe even come to have a friend or two within the party. Just relax. Based off how everyone is still here after a few weeks, this RP will probably last a good while. *knocks on wood* Just play it patiently and ideas will come to you. I have faith in your ability as a writer. And if you're ever stuck on where to go with your character, talking with others is perfectly fine. I didn't develop Ryuji's dual personality thing until I was talking to littleberry littleberry about him and his past. Now he's got a bit more depth and a story arc that I'm looking forward to possibly having come up at some point.
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Yea... that other one we're in is kinda slow hmm?

But aww, glad I could help with your charrie Twinsey ! ^.^
 
littleberry said:
Yea... that other one we're in is kinda slow hmm?

But aww, glad I could help with your charrie Twinsey ! ^.^
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The guy in charge has moved on. *rolls eyes* He started up another interest check on Tuesday. Thus, I don't think he'll be moving it along any time soon. But I know for one thing I won't be joining another RP of his. Sad to say.
 
Kiroshiven said:
The guy in charge has moved on. *rolls eyes* He started up another interest check on Tuesday. Thus, I don't think he'll be moving it along any time soon. But I know for one thing I won't be joining another RP of his. Sad to say.
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i noticed that. It totally sucks
 
And insert a little bit more of that flirty bastard I created.

Ryuji: I am not a bastard. I know who my father was.

Not that kind of bastard Ryuji.
 
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