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Fantasy The Dark World (ooc)

his power is the personification of power and strength. based off the goddess bia. and because he's A class. if an A class is weaker then a B class... then they shouldnt really be an A class. should they?
And, she may have that strength and specialize in strength, but her body doesn't quite attack her if she uses her peak strength or her strength to much.

BIA was the goddess or personified spirit (daimona) of force, power, might, bodily strength and compulsion. She, her sister Nike (Victory), and brothers Kratos (Cratus, Strength) and Zelos (Rivalry), were the winged enforcers of Zeus who stood in attendance by his throne.
 
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his power is the personification of power and strength. based off the goddess bia. and because he's A class. if an A class is weaker then a B class... then they shouldnt really be an A class. should they?

BIA was the goddess or personified spirit (daimona) of force, power, might, bodily strength and compulsion. She, her sister Nike (Victory), and brothers Kratos (Cratus, Strength) and Zelos (Rivalry), were the winged enforcers of Zeus who stood in attendance by his throne.
thats fine what hes based on, but this is still an rp based in the real world, so his powers and dimensions need to reflect that, as i look at him he still seems too strong for A rank, basically he looks S rank claiming hes A rank, so you should tone him down, especially his speeds and what he can do in force pulse to reflect an A rank, so he can grow/become what you put there as S rank

20 tons may be too high for scarlet too, so i should prob have Kiroshiven Kiroshiven change that too
 
you can recover from having your eardrum popped. and he doesnt really ever use it. only against enemy's. i dropped them down again. now the max is fifteen tons. nothings higher then that. and the normal stuff is all below 10 tons. and hes naked cus i didnt add clothes yet, cus i was lazy. and yes, he is frowing.
 
you can recover from having your eardrum popped. and he doesnt really ever use it. only against enemy's. i dropped them down again. now the max is fifteen tons. nothings higher then that. and the normal stuff is all below 10 tons. and hes naked cus i didnt add clothes yet, cus i was lazy. and yes, he is frowing.
his speed numbers are also.. why does he have super speed? and why does he need to lift tons at all??

and idk the burst eardrums thing incapacitates anyone and "uses only on enemies" doesnt really matter, since its an aoe and can hit friendlies around him

ahh lazy lol whys he frowning?
 
his father died, and he is living with the weight of that. and well tons because someone else has tons, although if you want, i can keep it all bellow 10 tons, and not 15 tons. or hell even 5 tons. but again, that would make an A rank weaker then a B rank. and the super speed is from being able to exhurt so much force. his legs can move and push harder and faster then normal. ill get rid of the popping eardrums
 
his father died, and he is living with the weight of that. and well tons because someone else has tons, although if you want, i can keep it all bellow 10 tons, and not 15 tons. or hell even 5 tons. but again, that would make an A rank weaker then a B rank. and the super speed is from being able to exhurt so much force. his legs can move and push harder and faster then normal. ill get rid of the popping eardrums
and i reduced the power even more. its at all time lows now.
ok im still a tad worried about it all, but it deff is at an all time low for what you had, so ill accept it, but ill be watching it! ^^

and remember proper capitalization and punctuation in the actual rp! ^^
and idk, lol maybe give him some clothes XD

iy doesnt make him weaker than a b rank, it just makes that one aspect of his super strength less, but its ok, because your characters power can grow in the rp, and like i said scarlett should actually be a bit weaker at b rank
 
of course! im going to give him clothes, that wasn't in doubt. And really? scarlet's power is much stronger then Einua's at this point. And sorry, im just a tad bit lazy in occ. although....how should i start...and put my character into the story.....i don't quite know how to jump in ya know? ill do my best to stay out of the realm of godmodding....trust me i hate godmodding.
 
of course! im going to give him clothes, that wasn't in doubt. And really? scarlet's power is much stronger then Einua's at this point. And sorry, im just a tad bit lazy in occ. although....how should i start...and put my character into the story.....i don't quite know how to jump in ya know? ill do my best to stay out of the realm of godmodding....trust me i hate godmodding.
well like i said power increases like a muscle :) in this rp anyway

im grateful you dont want to godmode, cuz i was worried about that!

as for joining... hm... well... everyone is currently ina forest trying to get to the next town over, but theres others around like Randomfella Randomfella s character
or Ninth Ninth and Exanis Exanis characters
 
should my character maybe be in a coma in the forest, or? maybe he used his power to much that it put him into a coma and he hadn't woken from it for a while?
 
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thanks~!! so, should i write up my first response of my character being in the forest in a coma. or should i take up a different way of entering the story, also in you need some sleep. go ahead and get some.
 
thanks~!! so, should i write up my first response of my character being in the forest in a coma. or should i take up a different way of entering the story, also in you need some sleep. go ahead and get some.
up to u! ^^ ya im gunna head to bed, later! :>
 

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