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I've done was way better, and, if I really get into the swing of things here, I will with my next character. I place partial blame on me being out of practice, and because I'm mobile(it's a lot harder for me to make good posts on mobile for some reason)

I get that way too XD. The feel is very different compared to being on a PC. Affects the way you write in a way.
 
I like how reading through the IC is like reading a history textbook. I'm only sort of interested but I feel obligated to do so.
 
Thalia_Neko Thalia_Neko the more I think about how Marrick turned out, the more disappointed with out rushed and thrown together he feels to me. I know this might be a pain, but I think I'm going to scrap Marrick and start from scratch tomorrow on my computer from an entirely different angle. I might come back to him when I feel more prepared to write him properly, but for now, if it's okay with you, I think I'm going to delete his CS.

Sorry, I just don't like submitting something I don't take pride in.

EDIT: the suspense is terrible
i hope it will last
 
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Not a good analogy. sorry >_<
lol no worries

I'm probably gonna take down my first IC post now that I'm caught up on the story.
AHH up to you! :o
i still cant believe peeps read the whole thing XD

Thalia_Neko Thalia_Neko the more I think about how Marrick turned out, the more disappointed with out rushed and thrown together he feels to me. I know this might be a pain, but I think I'm going to scrap Marrick and start from scratch tomorrow on my computer from an entirely different angle. I might come back to him when I feel more prepared to write him properly, but for now, if it's okay with you, I think I'm going to delete his CS.

Sorry, I just don't like submitting something I don't take pride in.

EDIT: the suspense is terrible
i hope it will last
Hmm.. I understand that, still its up to you :) If you want to change your character, feel free, though I dont see much wrong with Marrick haha

and what suspense?


Also I finally put up a post! ^w^
 
lol no worries


AHH up to you! :o
i still cant believe peeps read the whole thing XD


Hmm.. I understand that, still its up to you :) If you want to change your character, feel free, though I dont see much wrong with Marrick haha

and what suspense?


Also I finally put up a post! ^w^
Thank you. For the time being, Marrick has been removed from the character list to my workshop so I can make the necessary edits to make him a satisfactory character. He may or may not return; make arrangements on the assumption he won't. In the meantime, I'll have a different, better character in the works tomorrow.
 
wait do sages have couriers too, or is that just the witches?
the witches, sages do not, they are couriers

Thank you. For the time being, Marrick has been removed from the character list to my workshop so I can make the necessary edits to make him a satisfactory character. He may or may not return; make arrangements on the assumption he won't. In the meantime, I'll have a different, better character in the works tomorrow.
sounds fine! :>
 
WAIT WHAT LOL XD why are you making such a guess/claim? XD


what was rude? D:
Well gee I dunno
>Magically stronger than everyone, in spite of allegedly contracting with a Wild Lord
>"More Angel than Witch"
>"So perfect that she's almost sinisterly so"

That might have something to do with it. I dunno, I'm not exactly the best with foreshadowing lol
 
Well gee I dunno
>Magically stronger than everyone, in spite of allegedly contracting with a Wild Lord
>"More Angel than Witch"
>"So perfect that she's almost sinisterly so"

That might have something to do with it. I dunno, I'm not exactly the best with foreshadowing lol
haha i may heavily foreshadow with her ^^
but why specifically "shes awakened"?
 
haha i may heavily foreshadow with her ^^
but why specifically "shes awakened"?
Honestly her being a Consumed Witch or actual Spirit is more likely because of that second line, I said awakened because it was the first phrase that came to mind
 

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