Tales of Salisonia: Rise of the Dragons [Official OOC Thread]

[Sedrian]

|General Information|

• Name
• Gender
• Age
• Race
• Class
• Appearance Notes
• Weapons

• Sedrian
• Male
• 20
• Human
• Assassin
• He weighs about 243 pounds when he is fully clothed and has all his equipment. Sedrian is a tall man 6 ft 4 is his height. Also his eyes are not red as shown in the image, they are onyx. Other than that everything else about his appearance is as shown, it's difficult for me to describe clothing, so I'll leave as is, and if you want I can post an image of some sort of attire for him.
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  this sword was specially crafted for Sedrian by the Assassin's, it offers good range and sharpness, Sedrian even keeps a rock with him to keep it sharp at all times.

|Biography of Sedrian|

• Personality
• History

• Sedrian is a very dark person, he doesn't show much compassion for others, but that's only because the assassin's trained him to be cold and ruthless to everyone around him. Deep down he is actually caring towards others, even though he never shows it. When he is around enemies he often acts as if he could care less about everything in existence, often keeping calm and collected in combat. Sedrian never allows people to mess with his mind or try to screw with his morality. When he is around people he cares about, he tends to be a little more open about things, sometimes starting conversation and even cracking a joke. However for the most part he keeps his cool demeanor. When he is around ones he loves he is more open than to anyone else and will protect that person as well as he possibly can.
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  Sedrian was born into a family of assassin's, the name of the family being Sakumi. This family is very notorious for their skills and are feared by those who know of them. The family is a very secretive family and are very strict about their rules. Sedrian was molded into what they wanted him to be since age 1. They took very careful steps to ensure Sedrian became a heartless person like them, only taking a bride to continue the family legacy, however despite the discipline, the teachings, and the talks, Sedrian kept his morality, but locked it away within the chasms of his heart for non to see. When he was old enough to walk his training had already begun, he was taught deception, and had demonstrated to be quite skilled with it, often deceiving his parents. Sedrian then trained in the use of weapons and tools. He mastered the use of those tools at age 18, in between those years he mastered the use of guns, swords, and knives. He studied many different forms of sword fighting and found he had a talent for it. He is also a skilled marksman, however he prefers to use his sword. After mastering weaponry he studied hand to hand combat, he began training with his parents, but was able to defeat them in a measly 2 years, he then began training with the elders of hand to hand martial arts and mastered hand to hand combat in 5 years. At the age of 25 he had begun missions of assassination and successfully completed every task laid down to him, most them being middle class targets. He, after 2 years of missions was finally given the title of full fledged assassin, now a full fledged, he took on more middle class missions until one day when he returned home to find it had been burned to the ground. Sedrian wept for days until finally deciding that he would find the culprits and kill them all and avenge his family. He now wanders Salisonia every day in attempts to hunt down and find the culprits.

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  DONE!

 

[Lucem]

|General Information|

• Name
• Gender
• Age
• Race
• Class
• Appearance Notes
• Weapons

• Sedrian
• Male
• 20
• Human
• Assassin
• He weighs about 243 pounds when he is fully clothed and has all his equipment. Sedrian is a tall man 6 ft 4 is his height. Also his eyes are not red as shown in the image, they are onyx. Other than that everything else about his appearance is as shown, it's difficult for me to describe clothing, so I'll leave as is, and if you want I can post an image of some sort of attire for him.
• 
  this sword was specially crafted for Sedrian by the Assassin's, it offers good range and sharpness, Sedrian even keeps a rock with him to keep it sharp at all times.

|Biography of Sedrian|

• Personality
• History

• Sedrian is a very dark person, he doesn't show much compassion for others, but that's only because the assassin's trained him to be cold and ruthless to everyone around him. Deep down he is actually caring towards others, even though he never shows it. When he is around enemies he often acts as if he could care less about everything in existence, often keeping calm and collected in combat. Sedrian never allows people to mess with his mind or try to screw with his morality. When he is around people he cares about, he tends to be a little more open about things, sometimes starting conversation and even cracking a joke. However for the most part he keeps his cool demeanor. When he is around ones he loves he is more open than to anyone else and will protect that person as well as he possibly can.
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  Sedrian was born into a family of assassin's, the name of the family being Sakumi. This family is very notorious for their skills and are feared by those who know of them. The family is a very secretive family and are very strict about their rules. Sedrian was molded into what they wanted him to be since age 1. They took very careful steps to ensure Sedrian became a heartless person like them, only taking a bride to continue the family legacy, however despite the discipline, the teachings, and the talks, Sedrian kept his morality, but locked it away within the chasms of his heart for non to see. When he was old enough to walk his training had already begun, he was taught deception, and had demonstrated to be quite skilled with it, often deceiving his parents. Sedrian then trained in the use of weapons and tools. He mastered the use of those tools at age 18, in between those years he mastered the use of guns, swords, and knives. He studied many different forms of sword fighting and found he had a talent for it. He is also a skilled marksman, however he prefers to use his sword. After mastering weaponry he studied hand to hand combat, he began training with his parents, but was able to defeat them in a measly 2 years, he then began training with the elders of hand to hand martial arts and mastered hand to hand combat in 5 years. At the age of 25 he had begun missions of assassination and successfully completed every task laid down to him, most them being middle class targets. He, after 2 years of missions was finally given the title of full fledged assassin, now a full fledged, he took on more middle class missions until one day when he returned home to find it had been burned to the ground. Sedrian wept for days until finally deciding that he would find the culprits and kill them all and avenge his family. He now wanders Salisonia every day in attempts to hunt down and find the culprits.

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  I can't read through the entire thing at the moment, but here's a few things I noticed:
  
  
  Having him be a master of all weaponry wouldn't be acceptable. Try to focus on one weapon to work at, like the sword you listed, instead of being skilled at everything. Also, guns do not exist in his RP.
  
  
  Also, I don't think he would be able to learn to be an Assassin at one year old.
  
  
  The timeline and his age doesn't match up. Instead of being twenty, he would be twenty-seven.

 

[Sedrian]

got it, but he didn't learn when he was one, besides he only learned to lie when he started walking.

 

[MrLlama]

Doooone. *Hopes it isn't too magical sounding*

 

[Mooalally]

Did you just throw PMS in powder form at her?

 

[Lucem]

Babies start learning to walk at a year old and that would be the same thing. He would barely be learning how to talk, so teaching him how to lie would be impossible.

 

[MrLlama]

Did you just throw PMS in powder form at her?

I LOVE YOU

 

[Lucem]

I don't think powders that invoke emotions would be allowed.

 

[Sen Pai]

*is still laughing at Mooalally's comment* xD

 

[Sedrian]

I'm slowly getting closer, how about now?

 

[MrLlama]

But, but... It's PMS in powder form. xD

 

[Lucem]

But, but... It's PMS in powder form. xD

When the real thing comes along, it will be stronger than any powder in the universe...

 

[MrLlama]

And if it changes anything, like I noted in the post, it's only if she is affected, plus Mord/whatever her new name is can change the extent of being affected, blah, blah, blah.

 

[Kagerou]

I have no idea what just happened. O.o

 

[Sedrian]

how's it looking now? And what am I suppose to do about the age?

 

[MrLlama]

I can't tell if you are writing a lengthy post about why it won't be allowed, are conversing with each-other on whether or not to allow it, or are just thinking about it long and hard.

 

[Mooalally]

how's it looking now? And what am I suppose to do about the age?

In your history it says he was twenty-five, and then he trained for two more years and he's now scouring the land, but in your age you wrote 20.

 

[Sedrian]

right I'll fix that, I forgot about that. 
there, now he's 27 

|General Information|

• Name
• Gender
• Age
• Race
• Class
• Appearance Notes
• Weapons

• Sedrian
• Male
• 27
• Human
• Assassin
• He weighs about 243 pounds when he is fully clothed and has all his equipment. Sedrian is a tall man 6 ft 4 is his height. Also his eyes are not red as shown in the image, they are onyx. Other than that everything else about his appearance is as shown, it's difficult for me to describe clothing, so I'll leave as is, and if you want I can post an image of some sort of attire for him.
• 
  this sword was specially crafted for Sedrian by the Assassin's, it offers good range and sharpness, Sedrian even keeps a rock with him to keep it sharp at all times.

|Biography of Sedrian|

• Personality
• History

• Sedrian is a very dark person, he doesn't show much compassion for others, but that's only because the assassin's trained him to be cold and ruthless to everyone around him. Deep down he is actually caring towards others, even though he never shows it. When he is around enemies he often acts as if he could care less about everything in existence, often keeping calm and collected in combat. Sedrian never allows people to mess with his mind or try to screw with his morality. When he is around people he cares about, he tends to be a little more open about things, sometimes starting conversation and even cracking a joke. However for the most part he keeps his cool demeanor. When he is around ones he loves he is more open than to anyone else and will protect that person as well as he possibly can.
• 
  
  
  Sedrian was born into a family of assassin's, the name of the family being Sakumi. This family is very notorious for their skills and are feared by those who know of them. The family is a very secretive family and are very strict about their rules. Sedrian was molded into what they wanted him to be since age 8. They took very careful steps to ensure Sedrian became a heartless person like them, only taking a bride to continue the family legacy, however despite the discipline, the teachings, and the talks, Sedrian kept his morality, but locked it away within the chasms of his heart for non to see. When he was old enough to walk his training had already begun, he was taught deception, and had demonstrated to be quite skilled with it, often deceiving his parents. Sedrian then trained in the use of weapons and tools. He mastered the use of swords at age 18. He studied many different forms of sword fighting and found he had a talent for it. After mastering weaponry he studied hand to hand combat, he began training with his parents, but was able to defeat them in a measly 2 years, he then began training with the elders of hand to hand martial arts and mastered hand to hand combat in 5 years. At the age of 25 he had begun missions of assassination and successfully completed every task laid down to him, most them being middle class targets. He, after 2 years of missions was finally given the title of full fledged assassin, at age 27 when he returned home to find it had been burned to the ground. Sedrian wept for days until finally deciding that he would find the culprits and kill them all and avenge his family. He now wanders Salisonia every day in attempts to hunt down and find the culprits.

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  take a look now

 

[MrLlama]

... So is it being allowed? D:

 

[Sedrian]

So? I'm so anxious!

 

[Mooalally]

Well, time to go work on my crossbow/Elf.

 

[Croissant]

I think I suggested stuff for your app sedrian, and im a mod now so.. Idk if it validates my past reviews xD

 

[Sedrian]

you did, I changed it.

 

[MrLlama]

Should I just assume it's been allowed or are ya'lls still discussing it? >.>

 

[Sedrian]

So, Pai Pai, is he finally ready? Also what do you think of the new pic?