Tales of Salisonia: Rise of the Dragons [Official OOC Thread]
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MrLlama
As Straight As A Rainbow
Somebody, THAT AHS POWER, plis review my Arzur's CS and say if he is accepted or not... ;u;
OMG THANKYOU I LOVE YOU SO MUCH MARRY ME LET'S BE A HAPPY FAMILY FOREVER AND I'LL FILL OUR HOME WITH BUNNIES AND O,GMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOGMGOMGOMGOMGOMGG
OMG THANKYOU I LOVE YOU SO MUCH MARRY ME LET'S BE A HAPPY FAMILY FOREVER AND I'LL FILL OUR HOME WITH BUNNIES AND O,GMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOGMGOMGOMGOMGOMGG
Sen Pai
I'm back, baby.
Remember! If I don't clearly state that you are accepted then you're not.
@Sedrian
@Sedrian
Name: N/A
Gender: N/A
Age: N/A
Race: N/A
Class: N/A
Appearance Notes: N/A
Weapons: N/A
Personality: Overall, he sounds like a very well flawed character but I want you to add more. Go into more depth of his personality. He just sounds like an insane killer, rather shallow if you ask me. You know what they say, "All clouds have a silver lining." Or something like that. In here I want to see more detail added and perhaps a few good things about him. If you don't know what to add, explain how he would act to different circumstances, etc.
History: I'll just ask you questions for the two areas of his life. But overall, I want you to add more to his history. Twenty years is a long time, there's got to be lots of experiences for you to describe.
Early Age:
Why did his parents beat him?
- What caused them to become alcoholics?
- Did they even abuse him as a baby?
- If so, how did he survive?
Why wasn't Child Welfare called? Shouldn't his parents have been accused of child abuse?
How did he manage to get two grown ups strapped to a chair?
Where did he get the oil?
Where did he get the match?
If he set the house on fire, wouldn't he be inside it to?
- Could you explain what happened here?
Why did he wait until after they died?
How did he know they were dead?
What were his parents' reaction?
Aftermath:
Why didn't anyone investigate the murder of his parents?
Wouldn't Sedrian have been sent to live with someone else?
How did Sedrian handle living on the streets?
- Due to the fact that Salisonia was rather well off, there weren't many people on the streets. Was he living in the slums?
- Did anyone take care of him?
- Teach him the ways of thieving and surviving on the streets?
How did he steal from the wealthy? Don't they have good security?
How was he sent to an orphanage?
Why wasn't he sent to an orphanage earlier?
How did they "control" him?
- What was it like living in the orphanage?
How did he escape the orphanage?
Why did the guards beat him?
- Did he do something wrong?
How did he find the assassins?
What are "the assassins?"
Why did they start training him?
How did Sedrian even react to all of this?
It took him four years to become a full fledged assassin while in others, it took them their whole life practically. How did this happen?
Did Sedrian leave the assassins?
- If so, why?
@MrLlama
Accepted.
Gender: N/A
Age: N/A
Race: N/A
Class: N/A
Appearance Notes: N/A
Weapons: N/A
Personality: Overall, he sounds like a very well flawed character but I want you to add more. Go into more depth of his personality. He just sounds like an insane killer, rather shallow if you ask me. You know what they say, "All clouds have a silver lining." Or something like that. In here I want to see more detail added and perhaps a few good things about him. If you don't know what to add, explain how he would act to different circumstances, etc.
History: I'll just ask you questions for the two areas of his life. But overall, I want you to add more to his history. Twenty years is a long time, there's got to be lots of experiences for you to describe.
Early Age:
Why did his parents beat him?
- What caused them to become alcoholics?
- Did they even abuse him as a baby?
- If so, how did he survive?
Why wasn't Child Welfare called? Shouldn't his parents have been accused of child abuse?
How did he manage to get two grown ups strapped to a chair?
Where did he get the oil?
Where did he get the match?
If he set the house on fire, wouldn't he be inside it to?
- Could you explain what happened here?
Why did he wait until after they died?
How did he know they were dead?
What were his parents' reaction?
Aftermath:
Why didn't anyone investigate the murder of his parents?
Wouldn't Sedrian have been sent to live with someone else?
How did Sedrian handle living on the streets?
- Due to the fact that Salisonia was rather well off, there weren't many people on the streets. Was he living in the slums?
- Did anyone take care of him?
- Teach him the ways of thieving and surviving on the streets?
How did he steal from the wealthy? Don't they have good security?
How was he sent to an orphanage?
Why wasn't he sent to an orphanage earlier?
How did they "control" him?
- What was it like living in the orphanage?
How did he escape the orphanage?
Why did the guards beat him?
- Did he do something wrong?
How did he find the assassins?
What are "the assassins?"
Why did they start training him?
How did Sedrian even react to all of this?
It took him four years to become a full fledged assassin while in others, it took them their whole life practically. How did this happen?
Did Sedrian leave the assassins?
- If so, why?
@MrLlama
Accepted.
MrLlama
As Straight As A Rainbow
YES I LOVE YOU!
Am I going to have him put into a group with someone, join my group, or what?
Am I going to have him put into a group with someone, join my group, or what?
Sedrian
Three Thousand Club
Well I'm just unlucky
MrLlama
As Straight As A Rainbow
You never added Elvsyr to the accepted characters list. xD
MrLlama
As Straight As A Rainbow
She has to have a last name? ;u;
Sen Pai
I'm back, baby.
Does she have a last name?MrLlama said:
MrLlama
As Straight As A Rainbow
Technically, yes, but she never goes by it or even uses it for that matter.paipai900 said:
Sedrian
Three Thousand Club
You know I think I may just redo my character's history, I've read histories shorter or the same length as mine that were accepted, so I'll write it differently, and in a different style.
MrLlama
As Straight As A Rainbow
I'll just give you it.
Ysmyrlda
Ysmyrlda
Kagerou
Reaper
I love threatening me some Elvish women. ;}
Ixidor92
Game master
Sequel? Did you say sequel? SEQUEL?!
Sen Pai
I'm back, baby.
No, I said "squeal". *shot*
Ixidor92
Game master
*waves arms around frantically*
MrLlama
As Straight As A Rainbow
Elvsyr Ysmyrlda ran past Kasai, her scythe in hand. With a jump, she gracefully swirled in the air and off came Kasai's head.Kasai said:
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Sedrian
Three Thousand Club
don't expect him to change his personality though. I'm gonna write him born into the assassin's
Sen Pai
I'm back, baby.
I've gotten less lenient ever since Sebastian and Cressandra were dubbed as mods.Sedrian said:
MrLlama
As Straight As A Rainbow
Pai, who is Arzur getting grouped with? Elvsyr's group or another? 
O
O
Sedrian
Three Thousand Club
what does that mean?paipai900 said:
Kagerou
Reaper
*Is dead.*
