Tales of Salisonia: Rise of the Dragons [Official OOC Thread]

Somebody, THAT AHS POWER, plis review my Arzur's CS and say if he is accepted or not... ;u; 
OMG THANKYOU I LOVE YOU SO MUCH MARRY ME LET'S BE A HAPPY FAMILY FOREVER AND I'LL FILL OUR HOME WITH BUNNIES AND O,GMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOGMGOMGOMGOMGOMGG
 
Remember! If I don't clearly state that you are accepted then you're not.


@Sedrian

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Personality: Overall, he sounds like a very well flawed character but I want you to add more. Go into more depth of his personality. He just sounds like an insane killer, rather shallow if you ask me. You know what they say, "All clouds have a silver lining." Or something like that. In here I want to see more detail added and perhaps a few good things about him. If you don't know what to add, explain how he would act to different circumstances, etc.


History: I'll just ask you questions for the two areas of his life. But overall, I want you to add more to his history. Twenty years is a long time, there's got to be lots of experiences for you to describe.


Early Age:


Why did his parents beat him?


- What caused them to become alcoholics?


- Did they even abuse him as a baby?


- If so, how did he survive?


Why wasn't Child Welfare called? Shouldn't his parents have been accused of child abuse?


How did he manage to get two grown ups strapped to a chair?


Where did he get the oil?


Where did he get the match?


If he set the house on fire, wouldn't he be inside it to?


- Could you explain what happened here?


Why did he wait until after they died?


How did he know they were dead?


What were his parents' reaction?


Aftermath:


Why didn't anyone investigate the murder of his parents?


Wouldn't Sedrian have been sent to live with someone else?


How did Sedrian handle living on the streets?


- Due to the fact that Salisonia was rather well off, there weren't many people on the streets. Was he living in the slums?


- Did anyone take care of him?


- Teach him the ways of thieving and surviving on the streets?


How did he steal from the wealthy? Don't they have good security?


How was he sent to an orphanage?


Why wasn't he sent to an orphanage earlier?


How did they "control" him?


- What was it like living in the orphanage?


How did he escape the orphanage?


Why did the guards beat him?


- Did he do something wrong?


How did he find the assassins?


What are "the assassins?"


Why did they start training him?


How did Sedrian even react to all of this?


It took him four years to become a full fledged assassin while in others, it took them their whole life practically. How did this happen?


Did Sedrian leave the assassins?


- If so, why?


@MrLlama




Accepted.
 
@paipai900


I love how you went into detail with Sedrian's cS.


Then with MrLlama...eh, accepted.


xD Not picking, just finding it funny. *hides from gamemaster*
 
You know I think I may just redo my character's history, I've read histories shorter or the same length as mine that were accepted, so I'll write it differently, and in a different style.
 
Kasai said:
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Sedrian said:
You know I think I may just redo my character's history, I've read histories shorter or the same length as mine that were accepted, so I'll write it differently, and in a different style.
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I've gotten less lenient ever since Sebastian and Cressandra were dubbed as mods.
 
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