Tales of Salisonia: Rise of the Dragons [Official OOC Thread]

[Croissant]

Yes, tremble before my power weakling.


@MrLlama


Ill try to review now if you repost it plox

 

[MrLlama]

|General Information|

​

• Name
• Gender
• Age
• Race
• Class
• Appearance Notes

• Arzur Rynildi
• Male
• 80
• Elf
• Warrior
• Arzur is 6'2" and weighs 167 (Used a ratio chart). His hair is close to being completely white, which is for the most part straight. His hair reaches down to a little past his shoulders. It is also combed backwards from his forehead, and thus he has no hair blocking a marking on it. A white beard grows from his neck, chin, and below his jaw, which connects with the hair growing from his head. From his chin, two thicker braids of hair seperate and come down to just below his pectoral muscles, and generally stay in the middle of his chest. They are seperate the whole way down and look like zig-zigs coming down, in all zig-zagging six times. The braid on the right side of his chest goes to the right, then the left, then the right, then the left, and finally ends by going back to the right. The same zig-zagging pattern is found on the left braid but the opposite. Above his upper lip, he has a moustache growing that starts out thick and as it comes down his face grows thin. It stretches past his chin, and is about 3 to 5 inches long for each side of the moustache. On his shoulders, he wears two armoured shoulder pads that are made of a black metal. On top each shoulder plate, there is a thick line of the black metal, with diamond-shaped symbols on top of that line, which are connected to each other. On the actual shoulder plate itself, is an intricate gold design. The inside, towards the middle of his chest, are two smaller 'sheets' of the black metal, also with the intricate gold design that are attached to eachother. Three diamond-shaped pieces of the black metal, again with the intricate gold design, are near the middle of his chest, with one in the direct center, all attached to eachother with a chain. This chain also attaches them to the two small pieces of metal connected to eachother and the shoulder plates. A chain also runs from the tip of each diamond-shaped piece of metal to another long piece of chain, connected to the previously said small-pieces of metal, which is right below his neck. It runs in the same area on the back of his body, too. Under that big piece of connected metal armour , is robes that run down his entire body from the shoulders to just barely above the floor. Multiple robes, in fact. One robe is a tighter robe that is closer in to his body and does not fall away too much. Another robe, worn over that goes down to his waist and splits. Both sides of the fabric that are at the split have another golden design along them, and a bigger one on his chest and abdomen. The last robe he wears is very open and is worn at his elbow and up on his arms, goes to his shoulder, ends, and then starts the same on the other arm. Very large designs, again in gold, decorate that aswell. Directly under the middle diamond of the three diamonds connected to his shoulder-plate armour is a ring, connected by a chain, which has high signifigance to Arzur. Around his waist are multiple brass coins, some filled with a simple black design, others having three green circles forming a triangle, one large emerald in the center, or a green cup with two golden dots on both sides of the cup. Four were on the actual waist itself, conected by two thick strands of leather, which had four more brass coins forming an X which started at the two outer coins on his waist, all connected by two thick strands of leather. On the left side of his body, the two brass coins at the waist of the large design has two strands of green fabric coming off, connecting to a brass coins with three small green circles, the same green in the fabric, which has one larger stand of the green fabric connecting to another brass coin, this one with a large bright green emerald in the middle of the coin. A sheath that is made from the black metal on his shoulder pads is connected to the green fabric and two coins and also has a gold design on it. A double-edged longsword is located in this sheath, which is made from steel. The hilt is also made of the black metal with the gold intricate design on it. On his forehead, is a large black symbol, that means nothing to anyone else but himself. He uses a large black staff with the design of a dragon's head at the very top of it for walking around when needed, and as an occasional weapon when he can't get to his longsword in time..

|Biography of Arzur Rynildi|

​

• Personality
• History

• Arzur is almost always calm, and never anything else than calm except for being noticeably sad at times, though that is rare. Growing up in wealth, and a father who was in the Council of the Elves, you would think he would be a bit snobby, or at least a little un-caring for lesser folk. He was actually quite the opposite of that. He was found always handing out coins to the poor elves in Ellegarde, even if it meant being chasticed by his parents. That's how he always was, helping the less-fortunate. If he found someone talking badly to one whom they thought as "lesser" than them, he would quickly get angered and immediately step in to tell the aggressor to back off and occasionally brawled with them. He would also anger quickly if someone harmed the one's he loved, be it physically or emotionally, and easily goes into a rage to protect his loved ones. At his current age, though, he is very reluctant to fight and will only do so when it is needed. He rather not fight due to the fact he won't be able to do too much.
  
  
  In his later years, being a well-trained swordsman who later trained others, he either had a lot of patience or none at all. If you are messing around with him and wasting time, he will not wait for you. If you are actually being true to him or trying your hardest, he will wait an entire lifetime. When he speaks, he has that sense of being wise in his voice that comes with many older-folk. One of his fears is the death of Elvsyr, if she died before him, or him dying and leaving her alone. He loves her like his own daughter and will be greatly hurt when she dies, but at the same time, he does not want to leave her all alone, as he knows she will become completely devastated. This is part of the reason why he left Ellegarde to travel in the first place, so that she wouldn't have to be faced with that event. Another reason he traveled was to simply gain knowledge on many different topics. A desire of his is to find Elvsyr and to finally reunite, even
  
  
  with his fears.
• As a child, Arzur grew up into a wealthy family. His dad was taking part in the Council of the Elves and thus his family was a little snobbish. Whenever he was out with his parents and saw poor(er) elves he would hand them a few coins or food, even if it meant that he would be chasticed. (Sorry for the repeat. ) He thought it was wrong that some people got to have more gold than they would be able to use in their entire lifetime whilst others had little to nothing, went days without food, and were thought of as less of a person. At the same time, his parents constantly tried to teach to him that those people were nothing to him and that he shouldn't help him. He had trouble seeing which way was the right way. Another nobleman, by the name of Zargaln Miorir was quite the opposite of his parents and generally helped the poor, etc. Arzur thought that if others were acting kind to the poor, than obviously it isn't bad, but still wasn't completely sure on what to do. He asked Zargaln who simply told him to do what he felt was right. Simple words, but words that impacted the rest of Arzur's life.
  
  
  Him and his father steadily grew apart due to the way his father thought about the poor. A brawl occured between Arzur and his father because of Arzur being so enraged over his dad for spitting at a few homeless people and telling them to stop polluting the streets. Neither of them won as Arzur's mom quickly broke it up but it kept Arzur distant from his parents. Thankfully, they allowed to continue living with them but they did not speak to eachother unless necessary.
  
  
  A few years later, when he was 16, Arzur began to take interest in sword fighting. He would constantly train whenever possible. An elven man by the name of Urkori Ashtina (So Japanese, bro.) trained him in his later years. They some-what became friends but the extent of their relationship was simply training. Along with training, he also took time to study anything he could. It had kept him busy for his next few years of life.
  
  
  His father was seemingly going corrupt with greed, as it spread that he had tried to get many laws passed through that would create extraordinarily large taxes and the likes that would of gone straight into the council member's and the Queen's pockets, instead of being used to help fund other things. Thankfully, the other council members weren't this greedy and would deny the laws time after time.
  
  
  (If this next part is a little weird-fitting sorry. o3o) It got to the point that he would do anything to get more money, and he even hired assassins to kill the other council members. They were alerted to his scheme in time and were not harmed. Later on, he was executed along with his wife, who they found out to be the one that put the idea of hiring assassin's to kill the council members in his head in the first place. Many eyes darted towards Arzur, thinking he had gotten some of the greed rubbed off from his parents. It gave him a considerable drop in his reputation and he tried to think of ways to fix it. As his parents had a great amount of wealth, much larger than Arzur needed, he donated a large percentage of it to the poor-folks through buying a large order of food. He had a structure built to have the food handed out at. This steadily gained his reputation back to it's former glory.
  
  
  Being at the age of 16, Arzur could easily care for himself and spent the next few decades continuing to train and testing his sword fighting abilities with other elves.
  
  
  At the age of 72, he found a girl named Elvsyr while out walking the forest collecting different plants to bring home and experiment on later. She was only 12 at the time and living on her own. She had asked him to train her in the art of fighting, which he gladly accepted to do. Normally he would not have accepted to train someone so easily, or for nothing, but he saw that this child was in need of assistance in more ways than just training and due to his want of helping the less-fortunate, and the fact she was a child, it hit soft-spot in him. He fed and kept fresh clothes on her for the next five years until she was 17. They had grown into a powerful friendship and were like family to each-other. He had left due to his fears and the want for more knowledge. It was a hard decision but he thought it was for the better and eventually left Ellegarde. He traveled all over for the next three years and learned a lot along the way.

 

[Kagerou]

;#;

 

[Lunaumbra]

Do dragons have classes?

 

[Kagerou]

Are you allowed to role-play a dragon?

 

[Lunaumbra]

I thought so. I mentioned earlier that I might make one, and I'm ready to put her together, and no one told me not to... PAI *raises hand and calls for judge*

 

[Croissant]

I believe you CAN but you would have to ask pai directly and ask her about it, but the two players who were gonna rp dragons haven't posted once


*cough* @Akihito *cough*


So I'm not sure, gotta ask Pai first, see what she says about your dragon and she may give you the deets and requirements, but I suggest making a dragon your second because it's a big task to play one and It'd be better to get a feel of the rp first than just run in crazy crazy


@paipai900

 

[Kagerou]

She's afk.

 

[Lunaumbra]

Oh, definitely. Thanks Cressy~

 

[Kagerou]

OMGEE I JUST NOW FOUND OUT WHAT AFK STOOD FOR, I HAD TO LOOK IT UP. *Genius points.* xD

 

[MrLlama]

Did you review? ;u;

 

[Mooalally]

Yep, Air Force Munitions. Weird that people randomly say that, no?

 

[Kagerou]

@Mooalally Shhhh....


@MrLlama What. What are you doing. No. No. Just stop. You're not Pie.

 

[Wynn Kamui]

Yep, Air Force Munitions. Weird that people randomly say that, no?

That would be AFM, wouldn't it? 

@Mooalally Shhhh....
@MrLlama What. What are you doing. No. No. Just stop. You're not Pie.

He may not be Pai, but we all have her spirit inside of us somewhere


*applause*

 

[Mooalally]

WHY WOULD YOU CRUSH MY DREAMS?


Now I must go into a corner with a bowl of shame and some chopsticks, even though shame is a liquid and must be eaten with a spoon. I'll have to balance the shame on the actual chopsticks.


This is going to be a very long meal.

 

[Kagerou]

Anyways... I have business to attend to...

 

[Wynn Kamui]

WHY WOULD YOU CRUSH MY DREAMS?
Now I must go into a corner with a bowl of shame and some chopsticks, even though shame is a liquid and must be eaten with a spoon. I'll have to balance the shame on the actual chopsticks.


This is going to be a very long meal.

Silly Mooalally, chopsticks are for people with opposable thumbs :3

 

[Croissant]

|General Information|

​

• Name
• Gender
• Age
• Race
• Class
• Appearance Notes

• Arzur Rynildi
• Male
• 80
• Elf
• Warrior
• Arzur is 6'2" and weighs 167 (Used a ratio chart). His hair is close to being completely white, which is for the most part straight. His hair reaches down to a little past his shoulders. It is also combed backwards from his forehead, and thus he has no hair blocking a marking on it. A white beard grows from his neck, chin, and below his jaw, which connects with the hair growing from his head. From his chin, two thicker braids of hair seperate and come down to just below his pectoral muscles, and generally stay in the middle of his chest. They are seperate the whole way down and look like zig-zigs coming down, in all zig-zagging six times. The braid on the right side of his chest goes to the right, then the left, then the right, then the left, and finally ends by going back to the right. The same zig-zagging pattern is found on the left braid but the opposite. Above his upper lip, he has a moustache growing that starts out thick and as it comes down his face grows thin. It stretches past his chin, and is about 3 to 5 inches long for each side of the moustache. On his shoulders, he wears two armoured shoulder pads that are made of a black metal. On top each shoulder plate, there is a thick line of the black metal, with diamond-shaped symbols on top of that line, which are connected to each other. On the actual shoulder plate itself, is an intricate gold design. The inside, towards the middle of his chest, are two smaller 'sheets' of the black metal, also with the intricate gold design that are attached to eachother. Three diamond-shaped pieces of the black metal, again with the intricate gold design, are near the middle of his chest, with one in the direct center, all attached to eachother with a chain. This chain also attaches them to the two small pieces of metal connected to eachother and the shoulder plates. A chain also runs from the tip of each diamond-shaped piece of metal to another long piece of chain, connected to the previously said small-pieces of metal, which is right below his neck. It runs in the same area on the back of his body, too. Under that big piece of connected metal armour , is robes that run down his entire body from the shoulders to just barely above the floor. Multiple robes, in fact. One robe is a tighter robe that is closer in to his body and does not fall away too much. Another robe, worn over that goes down to his waist and splits. Both sides of the fabric that are at the split have another golden design along them, and a bigger one on his chest and abdomen. The last robe he wears is very open and is worn at his elbow and up on his arms, goes to his shoulder, ends, and then starts the same on the other arm. Very large designs, again in gold, decorate that aswell. Directly under the middle diamond of the three diamonds connected to his shoulder-plate armour is a ring, connected by a chain, which has high signifigance to Arzur. Around his waist are multiple brass coins, some filled with a simple black design, others having three green circles forming a triangle, one large emerald in the center, or a green cup with two golden dots on both sides of the cup. Four were on the actual waist itself, conected by two thick strands of leather, which had four more brass coins forming an X which started at the two outer coins on his waist, all connected by two thick strands of leather. On the left side of his body, the two brass coins at the waist of the large design has two strands of green fabric coming off, connecting to a brass coins with three small green circles, the same green in the fabric, which has one larger stand of the green fabric connecting to another brass coin, this one with a large bright green emerald in the middle of the coin. A sheath that is made from the black metal on his shoulder pads is connected to the green fabric and two coins and also has a gold design on it. A smaller sized katana is located in this sheath, which is made from steel. The hilt starts off as being black and then turns into gold. (Real gold or not can be decided by you guys.) On his forehead, is a large black symbol, that means nothing to anyone else but himself. He uses a large black staff with the design of a dragon's head at the very top of it for walking around when needed, and as an occasional weapon when he can't get to his katana in time..

​

|Biography of (Arzur Rynildi)|

​

• Personality
• History

• Arzur is almost always calm, and never anything else than calm except for being noticeably sad at times, though that is rare. Growing up in wealth, and a father who was in the Council of the Elves, you would think he would be a bit snobby, or at least a little un-caring for lesser folk. He was actually quite the opposite of that. He was found always handing out coins to the poor elves in Ellegarde, even if it meant being chasticed by his parents. That's how he always was, helping the less-fortunate. If he found someone talking badly to one whom they thought as "lesser" than them, he would quickly get angered and immediately step in to tell the aggressor to back off and occasionally brawled with them. He would also anger quickly if someone harmed the one's he loved, be it physically or emotionally, and easily goes into a rage to protect his loved ones. At his current age, though, he is very reluctant to fight and will only do so when it is needed. He rather not fight due to the fact he won't be able to do too much.
  
  
  In his later years, being a well-trained swordsman who later trained others, he either had a lot of patience or none at all. If you are messing around with him and wasting time, he will not wait for you. If you are actually being true to him or trying your hardest, he will wait an entire lifetime. When he speaks, he has that sense of being wise in his voice that comes with many older-folk. One of his fears is the death of Elvsyr, if she died before him, or him dying and leaving her alone. He loves her like his own daughter and will be greatly hurt when she dies, but at the same time, he does not want to leave her all alone, as he knows she will become completely devastated. This is part of the reason why he left Ellegarde to travel in the first place, so that she wouldn't have to be faced with that event. Another reason he traveled was to simply gain knowledge on many different topics. A desire of his is to find Elvsyr and to finally reunite, even with his fears.
• As a child, Arzur grew up into a wealthy family. His dad was taking part in the Council of the Elves and thus his family was a little snobbish. Whenever he was out with his parents and saw poor(er) elves he would hand them a few coins or food, even if it meant that he would be chasticed. (Sorry for the repeat. ) He thought it was wrong that some people got to have more gold than they would be able to use in their entire lifetime whilst others had little to nothing, went days without food, and were thought of as less of a person.
  
  
  A few years later, when he was 16, Arzur began to take interest in sword fighting. He would constantly train whenever possible. Along with training, he also took time to study anything he could. It had kept him busy for his next few years of life.
  
  
  His father was seemingly going corrupt with greed, as it spread that he had tried to get many laws passed through that would create extraordinarily large taxes and the likes that would of gone straight into the council member's and the Queen's pockets, instead of being used to help fund other things. Thankfully, the other council members weren't this greedy and would deny the laws time after time.
  
  
  (If this next part is a little weird-fitting sorry. o3o) It got to the point that he would do anything to get more money, and he even hired assassins to kill the other council members. They were alerted to his scheme in time and were not harmed. Later on, he was executed along with his wife, who they found out to be the one that put the idea of hiring assassin's to kill the council members in his head in the first place.
  
  
  Being at the age of 16, Arzur could easily care for himself and spent the next few decades continuing to train and testing his sword fighting abilities with other elves.
  
  
  At the age of 72, he found a girl named Elvsyr while out walking the forest collecting different plants to bring home and experiment on later. She was only 12 at the time and living on her own. She had asked him to train her in the art of fighting, which he gladly accepted to do. Normally he would not have accepted to train someone so easily, or for nothing, but he saw that this child was in need of assistance in more ways than just training and due to his want of helping the less-fortunate, and the fact she was a child, it hit soft-spot in him. He fed and kept fresh clothes on her for the next five years until she was 17. They had grown into a powerful friendship and were like family to each-other. He had left due to his fears and the want for more knowledge. It was a hard decision but he thought it was for the better and eventually left Ellegarde. He traveled all over for the next three years and learned a lot along the way.

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  Problems I see
  
  
  also Katanas are from Maitao nature and Salisonia is based off european weaponry like broadswords. The only person to cross Fae's sea is Jia of Arc, she was the only Maitao person on the continent of salisonia. I think having a Katana kinda shifts the history too much, and I already did that so we don't want too many shifts... So I suggest switching Katana with a longsword or broadswords, greatswords? But make then european or nordic in style

 

[Croissant]

I skimmed the post EPICLY so Ill make a better review on the computer, just some problems I spotted out

 

[Croissant]

Fixed that illusion thing, kinda brain farted

 

[MrLlama]

No, all of that is in her own bio of her teaching blah blah blah. He just taught her fighting techniques. 
I fixed ittt.

 

[Croissant]

Okay looks better, you sure you want part of the blade's hilt or whatever made from gold? Gold is a super weak material and it bends very easy unless it's a certain purified type with science which isn't advanced that far here. Also I wont accept you yet since im not on my comp but ill try later

 

[MrLlama]

He won't really use it much, just due to being so old and it's more decorative. I can change it if you think it would be better, though.

 

[Mooalally]

All right @MrLlama *rolls up sleeves*


I GOT DIS.


First off, holy crap that is a large appearance description.


Secondly, wasn't he influenced by his parents at all? Your parents/guardians usually have the biggest impact on your life because you trust them (most of the time) and they raised you. So, did he have any internal conflict happening? Did he have an external influence (friend, relative, something, possibly even the Queen as a role model) to help him become this way?


Who was he trained by? Possibly delve into that? I mean, probably some (Elven? Elvish? Elfish? Elfen?) trainer, but does he or she have a name? Did he have special treatment because he was born of royalty? Did he feel bad because he got special treatment, and others didn't even have the chance to, since he feels bad for the other things (food, gold)?


After his parents were executed, why didn't they suspect him? I mean, blood is thicker than water. Wait, no, I meant the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. If they were evil and tried to kill the other council members, wouldn't they think that they might've passed on their bad tendencies to him? If anything, he should've lost some kind of reputation (this is an example. I'm not saying it absolutely should have it). Possibly had to eat a bowl of shame like I did.


Did he love his parents? I mean, before they were executed. Because if so, you said his parents chastised him whenever he tried to help the poorer Elves, which probably meant they thought of them as lesser beings. They probably discussed this matter before, and might've even explained to Arzur that it was wrong to help these Elves. And like you said, he angered quickly and told them to back off. And even in the spur of the moment, he possibly even fought his father, which would lead to even MORE anger since his loved ones were physically harmed.


Why does his staff seem so magicky?


How does he have the strength to carry such a large weapon as a broadsword in his old age? Does he even lift, bro? In all seriousness though, does he work out? Is that how he managed to keep his strength for so long?


How did his parents get on the Council in the first place if they're mean to poorer Elves, but the Queen is so fair?


These are just some things that ran through my head whilst reading your application.


Notice: I have no power. Feel free to ignore me.

 

[Croissant]

Its your choice no worries just wondering because it can be a hassle