Tales of Salisonia: Rise of the Dragons [Official OOC Thread]

[Sen Pai]

@Mooalally


Sorry for the late reply, I wasn't getting any alerts. Yes, crossbows are allowed. ^^

 

[MrLlama]

It's fine if my character is a bit wealthy, right? I'm going to try to sort of play it into his history and his current clothing is of a more expensive kind. He isn't going to be filled to the brim with whatever the currency is, but still more than the average person. He won't ever really use it, either, it's just kind of there and he'll have some available with him.

 

[Mooalally]

I'll make the crossbow character tomorrow, if I'm still feeling good about it.

 

[MrLlama]

I can already tell my personality is going to suck for this character. He is an old man, old men can't be anything other than calm. They're just too adorable. Unless they are the old wizard guy from LoTR. 
Is Sebastian or Cressandra still on?!

 

[Croissant]

Ill be checking in once in a while but Im still suffocated with homework, and im exhausted..

 

[MrLlama]

It's fine now, I asked Seb. 
Finally done with my CS. I think it's a lot better than my one for Elvsyr, though still not the best.


Will someone else post something so it won't morph into a double-post?

 

[Flabbysaurus]

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[MrLlama]

|General Information|

​

• Name
• Gender
• Age
• Race
• Class
• Appearance Notes

• Arzur Rynildi
• Male
• 80
• Elf
• Warrior
• Arzur is 6'2" and weighs 167 (Used a ratio chart). His hair is close to being completely white, which is for the most part straight. His hair reaches down to a little past his shoulders. It is also combed backwards from his forehead, and thus he has no hair blocking a marking on it. A white beard grows from his neck, chin, and below his jaw, which connects with the hair growing from his head. From his chin, two thicker braids of hair seperate and come down to just below his pectoral muscles, and generally stay in the middle of his chest. They are seperate the whole way down and look like zig-zigs coming down, in all zig-zagging six times. The braid on the right side of his chest goes to the right, then the left, then the right, then the left, and finally ends by going back to the right. The same zig-zagging pattern is found on the left braid but the opposite. Above his upper lip, he has a moustache growing that starts out thick and as it comes down his face grows thin. It stretches past his chin, and is about 3 to 5 inches long for each side of the moustache. On his shoulders, he wears two armoured shoulder pads that are made of a black metal. On top each shoulder plate, there is a thick line of the black metal, with diamond-shaped symbols on top of that line, which are connected to each other. On the actual shoulder plate itself, is an intricate gold design. The inside, towards the middle of his chest, are two smaller 'sheets' of the black metal, also with the intricate gold design that are attached to eachother. Three diamond-shaped pieces of the black metal, again with the intricate gold design, are near the middle of his chest, with one in the direct center, all attached to eachother with a chain. This chain also attaches them to the two small pieces of metal connected to eachother and the shoulder plates. A chain also runs from the tip of each diamond-shaped piece of metal to another long piece of chain, connected to the previously said small-pieces of metal, which is right below his neck. It runs in the same area on the back of his body, too. Under that big piece of connected metal armour , is robes that run down his entire body from the shoulders to just barely above the floor. Multiple robes, in fact. One robe is a tighter robe that is closer in to his body and does not fall away too much. Another robe, worn over that goes down to his waist and splits. Both sides of the fabric that are at the split have another golden design along them, and a bigger one on his chest and abdomen. The last robe he wears is very open and is worn at his elbow and up on his arms, goes to his shoulder, ends, and then starts the same on the other arm. Very large designs, again in gold, decorate that aswell. Directly under the middle diamond of the three diamonds connected to his shoulder-plate armour is a ring, connected by a chain, which has high signifigance to Arzur. Around his waist are multiple brass coins, some filled with a simple black design, others having three green circles forming a triangle, one large emerald in the center, or a green cup with two golden dots on both sides of the cup. Four were on the actual waist itself, conected by two thick strands of leather, which had four more brass coins forming an X which started at the two outer coins on his waist, all connected by two thick strands of leather. On the left side of his body, the two brass coins at the waist of the large design has two strands of green fabric coming off, connecting to a brass coins with three small green circles, the same green in the fabric, which has one larger stand of the green fabric connecting to another brass coin, this one with a large bright green emerald in the middle of the coin. A sheath that is made from the black metal on his shoulder pads is connected to the green fabric and two coins and also has a gold design on it. A smaller sized katana is located in this sheath, which is made from steel. The hilt starts off as being black and then turns into gold. (Real gold or not can be decided by you guys.) On his forehead, is a large black symbol, that means nothing to anyone else but himself. He uses a large black staff with the design of a dragon's head at the very top of it for walking around when needed, and as an occasional weapon when he can't get to his katana in time..

​

|Biography of (Arzur Rynildi)|

​

• Personality
• History

• Arzur is almost always calm, and never anything else than calm except for being noticeably sad at times, though that is rare. Growing up in wealth, and a father who was in the Council of the Elves, you would think he would be a bit snobby, or at least a little un-caring for lesser folk. He was actually quite the opposite of that. He was found always handing out coins to the poor elves in Ellegarde, even if it meant being chasticed by his parents. That's how he always was, helping the less-fortunate. If he found someone talking badly to one whom they thought as "lesser" than them, he would quickly get angered and immediately step in to tell the aggressor to back off and occasionally brawled with them. He would also anger quickly if someone harmed the one's he loved, be it physically or emotionally, and easily goes into a rage to protect his loved ones. At his current age, though, he is very reluctant to fight and will only do so when it is needed. He rather not fight due to the fact he won't be able to do too much.
  
  
  In his later years, being a well-trained swordsman who later trained others, he either had a lot of patience or none at all. If you are messing around with him and wasting time, he will not wait for you. If you are actually being true to him or trying your hardest, he will wait an entire lifetime. When he speaks, he has that sense of being wise in his voice that comes with many older-folk. One of his fears is the death of Elvsyr, if she died before him, or him dying and leaving her alone. He loves her like his own daughter and will be greatly hurt when she dies, but at the same time, he does not want to leave her all alone, as he knows she will become completely devastated. This is part of the reason why he left Ellegarde to travel in the first place, so that she wouldn't have to be faced with that event. Another reason he traveled was to simply gain knowledge on many different topics. A desire of his is to find Elvsyr and to finally reunite, even with his fears.
• As a child, Arzur grew up into a wealthy family. His dad was taking part in the Council of the Elves and thus his family was a little snobbish. Whenever he was out with his parents and saw poor(er) elves he would hand them a few coins or food, even if it meant that he would be chasticed. (Sorry for the repeat. ) He thought it was wrong that some people got to have more gold than they would be able to use in their entire lifetime whilst others had little to nothing, went days without food, and were thought of as less of a person.
  
  
  A few years later, when he was 16, Arzur began to take interest in sword fighting. He would constantly train whenever possible. Along with training, he also took time to study anything he could. It had kept him busy for his next few years of life.
  
  
  His father was seemingly going corrupt with greed, as it spread that he had tried to get many laws passed through that would create extraordinarily large taxes and the likes that would of gone straight into the council member's and the Queen's pockets, instead of being used to help fund other things. Thankfully, the other council members weren't this greedy and would deny the laws time after time.
  
  
  (If this next part is a little weird-fitting sorry. o3o) It got to the point that he would do anything to get more money, and he even hired assassins to kill the other council members. They were alerted to his scheme in time and were not harmed. Later on, he was executed along with his wife, who they found out to be the one that put the idea of hiring assassin's to kill the council members in his head in the first place.
  
  
  Being at the age of 16, Arzur could easily care for himself and spent the next few decades continuing to train and testing his sword fighting abilities with other elves.
  
  
  At the age of 72, he found a girl named Elvsyr while out walking the forest collecting different plants to bring home and experiment on later. She was only 12 at the time and living on her own. She had asked him to train her in the art of fighting, which he gladly accepted to do. Normally he would not have accepted to train someone so easily, or for nothing, but he saw that this child was in need of assistance in more ways than just training and due to his want of helping the less-fortunate, and the fact she was a child, it hit soft-spot in him. He fed and kept fresh clothes on her for the next five years until she was 17. They had grown into a powerful friendship and were like family to each-other. He had left due to his fears and the want for more knowledge. It was a hard decision but he thought it was for the better and eventually left Ellegarde. He traveled all over for the next three years and learned a lot along the way.

 

[Wynn Kamui]

|General Information|

​

• Name
• Gender
• Age
• Race
• Class
• Appearance Notes

• Arzur Rynildi
• Male
• 240
• Elf
• Warrior
• Arzur is 6'2" and weighs 167 (Used a ratio chart). His hair is close to being completely white, which is for the most part straight. His hair reaches down to a little past his shoulders. It is also combed backwards from his forehead, and thus he has no hair blocking a marking on it. A white beard grows from his neck, chin, and below his jaw, which connects with the hair growing from his head. From his chin, two thicker braids of hair seperate and come down to just below his pectoral muscles, and generally stay in the middle of his chest. They are seperate the whole way down and look like zig-zigs coming down, in all zig-zagging six times. The braid on the right side of his chest goes to the right, then the left, then the right, then the left, and finally ends by going back to the right. The same zig-zagging pattern is found on the left braid but the opposite. Above his upper lip, he has a moustache growing that starts out thick and as it comes down his face grows thin. It stretches past his chin, and is about 3 to 5 inches long for each side of the moustache. On his shoulders, he wears two armoured shoulder pads that are made of a black metal. On top each shoulder plate, there is a thick line of the black metal, with diamond-shaped symbols on top of that line, which are connected to each other. On the actual shoulder plate itself, is an intricate gold design. The inside, towards the middle of his chest, are two smaller 'sheets' of the black metal, also with the intricate gold design that are attached to eachother. Three diamond-shaped pieces of the black metal, again with the intricate gold design, are near the middle of his chest, with one in the direct center, all attached to eachother with a chain. This chain also attaches them to the two small pieces of metal connected to eachother and the shoulder plates. A chain also runs from the tip of each diamond-shaped piece of metal to another long piece of chain, connected to the previously said small-pieces of metal, which is right below his neck. It runs in the same area on the back of his body, too. Under that big piece of connected metal armour , is robes that run down his entire body from the shoulders to just barely above the floor. Multiple robes, in fact. One robe is a tighter robe that is closer in to his body and does not fall away too much. Another robe, worn over that goes down to his waist and splits. Both sides of the fabric that are at the split have another golden design along them, and a bigger one on his chest and abdomen. The last robe he wears is very open and is worn at his elbow and up on his arms, goes to his shoulder, ends, and then starts the same on the other arm. Very large designs, again in gold, decorate that aswell. Directly under the middle diamond of the three diamonds connected to his shoulder-plate armour is a ring, connected by a chain, which has high signifigance to Arzur. Around his waist are multiple brass coins, some filled with a simple black design, others having three green circles forming a triangle, one large emerald in the center, or a green cup with two golden dots on both sides of the cup. Four were on the actual waist itself, conected by two thick strands of leather, which had four more brass coins forming an X which started at the two outer coins on his waist, all connected by two thick strands of leather. On the left side of his body, the two brass coins at the waist of the large design has two strands of green fabric coming off, connecting to a brass coins with three small green circles, the same green in the fabric, which has one larger stand of the green fabric connecting to another brass coin, this one with a large bright green emerald in the middle of the coin. A sheath that is made from the black metal on his shoulder pads is connected to the green fabric and two coins and also has a gold design on it. A smaller sized katana is located in this sheath, which is made from steel. The hilt starts off as being black and then turns into gold. (Real gold or not can be decided by you guys.) On his forehead, is a large black symbol, that means nothing to anyone else but himself. He uses a large black staff with the design of a dragon's head at the very top of it for walking around when needed, and as an occasional weapon when he can't get to his katana in time..

​

|Biography of (Arzur Rynildi)|

​

• Personality
• History

• Arzur is almost always calm, and never anything else than calm except for being noticeably sad at times, though that is rare. Growing up in wealth, and a father who was in the Council of the Elves, you would think he would be a bit snobby, or at least a little un-caring for lesser folk. He was actually quite the opposite of that. He was found always handing out coins to the poor elves in Ellegarde, even if it meant being chasticed by his parents. That's how he always was, helping the less-fortunate. In his later years, being a well-trained swordsman who later trained others, he either had a lot of patience or none at all. If you are messing around with him and wasting time, he will not wait for you. If you are actually being true to him or trying your hardest, he will wait an entire lifetime. When he speaks, he has that sense of being wise in his voice that comes with many older-folk. One of his fears is the death of Elvsyr or him dying and leaving her alone. He loves her like his own daughter and will be greatly hurt when she dies, but at the same time, he does not want to leave her all alone, as he knows she will become completely devastated, which is part of the reason why he left Ellegarde to travel in the first place, so that she wouldn't have to be faced with that event. Another reason he traveled was to simply gain knowledge on many different topics. A desire of his is to find Elvsyr and to finally reunite, even with his fears.
• As a child, Arzur grew up into a wealthy family. His dad was taking part in the Council of the Elves and thus his family was a little snobbish. Whenever he was out with his parents and saw poor(er) elves he would hand them a few coins or food, even if it meant that he would be chasticed. (Sorry for the repeat. ) He thought it was wrong that some people got to have more gold than they would be able to use in their entire lifetime whilst others had little to nothing, went days without food, and were thought of as less of a person.
  
  
  A few years later, when he was 16, Arzur began to take interest in sword fighting. He would constantly train whenever possible. Along with training, he also took time to study anything he could. It had kept him busy for his next few years of life.
  
  
  His father was seemingly going corrupt with greed, as it spread that he had tried to get many laws passed through that would create extraordinarily large taxes and the likes that would of gone straight into the council member's and the Queen's pockets, instead of being used to help fund other things. Thankfully, the other council members weren't this greedy and would deny the laws time after time.
  
  
  (If this next part is a little weird-fitting sorry. o3o) It got to the point that he would do anything to get more money, and he even hired assassins to kill the other council members. They were alerted to his scheme in time and were not harmed. Later on, he was executed along with his wife, who they found out to be the one that put the idea of hiring assassin's to kill the council members in his head in the first place.
  
  
  Being at the age of 16, Arzur could easily care for himself and spent the next few decades continuing to train and testing his sword fighting abilities with other elves.
  
  
  At the age of 228, he found a girl named Elvsyr. She was only 12 at the time and living on her own. She had asked him to train her in the art of fighting, which he gladly accepted to do. He fed and kept fresh clothes on her for the next five years until she was 17. They had grown into a powerful friendship and were like family to each-other. He had left due to his fears and the want for more knowledge. It was a hard decision but he thought it was for the better and eventually left Ellegarde. He traveled all over for the next three years and learned a lot along the way.

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• 
  Couple things;
  
  
  Why would he just immediately accept to train her? I mean, that's an awfully big commitment... Should probably expand on that.
  
  
  How did they meet? Did he just 'find' her, or did something happen that would later influence his choice to train the girl?
  
  
  Also, you should expand on the personality- with each of the examples about his life, you should say why it's significant.
  
  
  That's just my two cents, though. No real authority behind it

 

[Sen Pai]

Hey guys,


Due to some conflicting IRL issues, I won't be on very often for a bit. Hopefully it'll be resolved soon, but I just need to take care of some things. I hope you all understand. ^^" I'll still be on, just not as frequent. :3


Love,


Pai

 

[Wynn Kamui]

Hey guys,
Due to some conflicting IRL issues, I won't be on very often for a bit. Hopefully it'll be resolved soon, but I just need to take care of some things. I hope you all understand. ^^" I'll still be on, just not as frequent. :3


Love,


Pai

You told them that you needed an apprentice in the art of liking absolutely everything.


They didn't believe you, but I always did.

 

[MrLlama]

[QUOTE="Wynn Kamui]

Also, you should expand on the personality- with each of the examples about his life, you should say why it's significant.

[/QUOTE]
So, put an example in there, or what?


Read that wrong nevermind. I'll try to!

 

[Wynn Kamui]

So, put an example in there, or what?
Read that wrong nevermind. I'll try to!

Okay, I personally think it's much better now- the only thing left to his personality is a weakness. Yes he's a calm and collected person most of the time, but what makes him get angry or aggressive? He should have something that gets him angry and act in a way that he normally wouldn't.

 

[MrLlama]

[QUOTE="Wynn Kamui]Okay, I personally think it's much better now- the only thing left to his personality is a weakness. Yes he's a calm and collected person most of the time, but what makes him get angry or aggressive? He should have something that gets him angry and act in a way that he normally wouldn't.

[/QUOTE]
*scrunches up like a tomato* Hm. I have something but it kind of deals with what is already said, though it should probably work. >.> 
Sounds so taaaaaacky, but does it work? o-o

 

[Wynn Kamui]

@MrLlama


yeah, it works pretty well, except-


1: Simply fearing her death doesn't seem like an actual weakness in her personality- maybe he could lose his cool when people wish her harm?


2: Dat run on sentence 
Also, you imply she will die before him when you say 'He will be greatly hurt when she dies'

 

[MrLlama]

No, it's in the first paragraph.  
And I just added someone to that, too, with losing his cool. 
Well, I guess my personality thing is pretty much all of a paragraph, so ignore what I just said.

 

[Kagerou]

Merp. I kinda got grounded. I'll be on later.

 

[MrLlama]

Nice.

 

[Lucem]

@MrLlama I'll review your character when I get home. Sorry for the wait.

 

[MrLlama]

[QUOTE="Lucem Tenebris]@MrLlama I'll review your character when I get home. Sorry for the wait.

[/QUOTE]
It's fine, I've been getting help to improve it by Wynn, so it worked out.

 

[Lucem]

Once thing I can mention right now is the problem with his age. The aging rate between Elves and humans is a difference of only ten years. By what you put for his age, he would've been dead for around one hundred years.

 

[MrLlama]

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[Lucem]

I wish I knew what you were saying...

 

[Wynn Kamui]

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I agree completely. Great point.

 

[MrLlama]

I fixed it ._.