Webs Elk
Find me a prince or princess, I'm not picky.
I did my due diligence to look through these and here's what I've got, I apologize if I read too much into things:
@IIIREXIIIARCHERIIIII
Just a few things I'd like clarified about his powers. On the subject of photokinetic combat, I'm not sure how light manipulation would necessarily make him faster, though I could certainly see a Tien-brand Solar Flare coming into play from that.
As for Umbrakinetic combat, I'm assuming he can only manipulate shadows if he's touching them. After all, martial artists gain their abilities by manipulating their ki/aura/chakra, so he'd have to pass his ki into a shadow to manipulate it, I'd assume via physical contact? Please clarify.
Cryokinetic combat is good. Interested to see why he came to learn these three particular elements.
Once those clarifications are made, I'd say it's good to go.
@Storm Guardian
I see no problems here. Powers are clarified well. Got my good vote.
Webs Elk
Overall really good, though I will say the Reality Warping(art) and the dragon summoning seem a touch out of place given the overall theme of the character. Maybe I'm just not looking at it the right way though.
A little clarification on those powers, otherwise good to me.
As for the art power, it comes from the fact that Benzaiten is an Arts Goddesses.
As for the dragon, it comes from the history of Benzaiten. She married a water serpent (dragon in some stories) to calm him down. Because of this, Myu is able to get help form a clone of the water serpent.
Either way, they're both things you wouldn't know unless you studied the goddess. XD
