(I'm assuming I just start? If there is something else that needs to be done, let me know and I'll edit this post.)
Poi slowly began to awaken on the beach. The sea water (in no way reflecting its prior violent torment), lapped lightly at her toes before drawing back. Each lap created a tickling sensation which was perhaps what caused her to come out of unconsciousness. She stirs and coughs as some water expels from her lungs, a small groan emitting from the back of her throat. Even though she isn't fully aware of her surroundings quite yet, she does realize one thing: her head hurts badly. She would have reached up to gingerly test the wound, except that her body is quite stiff from the earlier bashing of the sea.
The sea had also taken her ragged clothing and disheveled it even further. Disheveled, wet, and stiff, she slowly starts to sense the sand sticking to her face, the salt tickling the wounds on her feet, and the sounds of general life stirring on the beach.
Poi slowly began to awaken on the beach. The sea water (in no way reflecting its prior violent torment), lapped lightly at her toes before drawing back. Each lap created a tickling sensation which was perhaps what caused her to come out of unconsciousness. She stirs and coughs as some water expels from her lungs, a small groan emitting from the back of her throat. Even though she isn't fully aware of her surroundings quite yet, she does realize one thing: her head hurts badly. She would have reached up to gingerly test the wound, except that her body is quite stiff from the earlier bashing of the sea.
The sea had also taken her ragged clothing and disheveled it even further. Disheveled, wet, and stiff, she slowly starts to sense the sand sticking to her face, the salt tickling the wounds on her feet, and the sounds of general life stirring on the beach.