Historical Storyteller
Four Thousand Club
I'll keep that in mind if I want to break into someone's car! MWHAHAHHAHAA.
*Punches car window and gets my fist shattered*
Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck!
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I'll keep that in mind if I want to break into someone's car! MWHAHAHHAHAA.
*Punches car window and gets my fist shattered*
Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck!
BubbleButt
TFW 8 seconds have passed after Za Warudo
Damn, didn't know that.
Wandering Grim Hollow
I want to be happy but my gun says no.
Car windows are a whole other deal. See, the glass is in-between two plastic slips. The glass breaks but not the plastic. That's why car windows don't really shatter if hit in the middle.
*The more you know rainbow*
Elephantom
Chicken Broth Paragon
Huh?
I removed your insane usage of 'would', and humanized the speech a bit. Yours sound like some kinda Stephen Hawking dialogue.
Historical Storyteller
Four Thousand Club
My first impression? Easy to read. Action flows smoothly. Good view of other characters from Jean's perspective. Shows Jean's underlying hatred of Elysians.
If I want to see flaws, I have to get a more in-depth read into your work. Its easy for me to fail the spot check, Eleph.
Elephantom
Chicken Broth Paragon
Yes!
Nogoodname
Did nothing wrong
ayyy pathfinder references.
Historical Storyteller
Four Thousand Club
And... what's that?
Elephantom
Chicken Broth Paragon
Nogoodname
Did nothing wrong
Oh, nvm then, pathfinder is basically an old version of D&D, a spot check is a check used to determine weather or not you can see something or someone that's hidden or obscured.
archur
watch for the flash
Old? So it's recently been refurbished then, or is that just nerd talk for 3.5?
Nogoodname
Did nothing wrong
Eh, It was just an easier way to describe it without going too into the details.
archur
watch for the flash
I dunno, I like me some good old 3.5 so I can invest all my stats into "Bluff" as a Bear Rogue.
Then I can bluff that I know how to speak english.
Good times.
Nogoodname
Did nothing wrong
....I know that /tg/ post...
Elephantom
Chicken Broth Paragon
archur
watch for the flash
Nogoodname
Did nothing wrong
Frayed knot, post it!
Elephantom
Chicken Broth Paragon
BubbleButt
TFW 8 seconds have passed after Za Warudo
I did use would again... fuck me.
Elephantom
Chicken Broth Paragon
Would isn't any great leveller that should be used repeatedly; it's a killer, a stone cold, crazy killer.
Nogoodname
Did nothing wrong
Elph you might wanna take your memes out of the oven quicker, that one's burnt.
archur
watch for the flash
You have to type with confidence, it's not would, it's will. It will happen, he does chop through that log of wood.
Elephantom
Chicken Broth Paragon
You're turning Bub's brain into mud, Ace, no wonder you've been exiled.
Well, let me teach you some of the basics,
BubbleButt
:He would punch him, and he would fall back.
He punched him, and he fell back.
He would pick up the glass to give it to mister Pike.
He picked up the glass, and passed it towards mister Pike.
He would hit the ground with a thud.
He hit the ground with a thud.
He would strike him with a punch.
He struck him with a callous fist.
Roleplay Skittle
Eternally Awkward
My demon is "as," I use as too much.
Historical Storyteller
Four Thousand Club
You're turning Bub's brain into mud, Ace, no wonder you've been exiled.
Well, let me teach you some of the basics,
He would punch him, and he would fall back.
He punched him, and he fell back.
He would pick up the glass to give it to mister Pike.
He picked up the glass, and passed it towards mister Pike.
He would hit the ground with a thud.
He hit the ground with a thud.
He would strike him with a punch.
He struck him with a callous fist.
Bubblebutt, I think you should address him as Master Eleph from now on.
