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Fantasy Seiunita OOC

Change that into 'simplify'.

You've just begun the road to 'detail' and it's just not a couple of flowery words stabbed together- it's more than that, bub, more than that.

You need to learn- you need to develop yourself, bub, and while it's going to take a shit ton of time, I'll always be here if you need any help.

Looking back at it, I think I'm starting to sound like Heis a lot. Damn.
 
Detail itself is explaining something well enough for the reader to imagine it happening, that's my personal definition.

Those flowery words add up in to a picture, then more, a animation, more, a full length movie, more, that movie has voice acting, it keeps going.

Well, flowery words will only make it purple prose. Detail is the ability to, well, write good. In a way that people can both understand, visualize and realize the depth of the scene.

And, that can be even achieved using dry, laconic words- my favourite style of writing. If you're going to stick with me, you have to learn the ins and outs of being both simple and cool at the same time.
 
i can be stupid but impressive. just like a cute litle monkey :9
i can be stupid but impressive. just like a cute litle monkey :9
i can be stupid but impressive. just like a cute litle monkey :9

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-_- because I didn't hit stop? xD I was just kinda'... in the zone reading? LOL I had put on Youtube because my baby was crying and the easiest way to get him to stop fussing is to play PPAP.
 
Im trying to do this but with a background. The problem is that for some reason one of the accordions is a little higher up then the other one
 

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