Fantasy Secrets of the Nightlife in New Orleans: OOC

[FLUFF_V]

Feel free to chat around with your fellow group members:

 

[Whitewolf787]

Feel free to chat around with your fellow group members:

Thank you very much Fluff for setting this all up for me/us. I just hope we can have a good game. I look forward to it.


Also a side note, the bartenders Mary and Alex, can be played by others if they wish.

 

[FLUFF_V]

Duly noted!
I'll try to get my post up by tonight or tomorrow.

 

[FLUFF_V]

Apologies for the DELAY! Had to rewrite my OC's intro and got busy.

 

[Whitewolf787]

I have my lap top back!! hoping to post regularly. But now its time to go catch up. One thing however, Fluff, I cant read your character. It is all jumbled together.

 

[FLUFF_V]

My bad, I'm still trying to figure out the coding. I'll get to work on that soon enough.
BUT!
Congrats on getting your laptop back!


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[Whitewolf787]

Thank you. I will try to post in a while. If not tonight then tomorrow. We were putting the x-mas tree up earlier and watching "The Polar Express".

 

[FLUFF_V]

You're welcome! Don't sweat it if you don't post it tonight! Have fun! Good luck with the tree! Enjoy the movie!


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[Laume]

Hey
@ FLUFF_V the light grayish in your most recent post is really hard to read against a white background, and doesn't become clearer when highlighted (since the highlight is also blue). Would you mind changing it ?
Also "socketless eyes" doesn't make a lot of sense to me, since the socket is they empty space that holds the eye. Did you mean eyeless sockets?

Also, I think we should all agree own a writing style, for consistency.
Right now, Whitewolf is using first person (I ...) while Fluff and I use third person (he ...) , and Whiltewolf and I are using past tense (X did, X wanted, X said) while Fluff is using conditionals "would do X, would Y, etc)

 

[Whitewolf787]

Im fine with 1st or 3rd peson,past tense. Ill let you two vote on it

 

[FLUFF_V]

Hey
@ FLUFF_V the light grayish in your most recent post is really hard to read against a white background, and doesn't become clearer when highlighted (since the highlight is also blue). Would you mind changing it ?
Also "socketless eyes" doesn't make a lot of sense to me, since the socket is they empty space that holds the eye. Did you mean eyeless sockets?

Also, I think we should all agree own a writing style, for consistency.
Right now, Whitewolf is using first person (I ...) while Fluff and I use third person (he ...) , and Whiltewolf and I are using past tense (X did, X wanted, X said) while Fluff is using conditionals "would do X, would Y, etc)

Yes! Thanks for catching that for me Laume!

 

[FLUFF_V]

Hmm... how odd.
When I changed up the font color and made it normal for that one particular area it seems to be darkened for myself when I switch on back over to dark mode.

 

[Whitewolf787]

Fluff I have my settings on dark, and with the changes half your post I can not read. Maybe try regular text color?

 

[FLUFF_V]

Fluff I have my settings on dark, and with the changes half your post I can not read. Maybe try regular text color?

I did that, but it's being odd for some reason. The more I try to fix the situation worsens.

 

[Laume]

I personally vote for third person, past tense. I realize that seems biased towards me, but:
-Those are where we have 2/3 overlap
-Thats the traditional way books and other works are usually written

 

[Whitewolf787]

sorry guys for not being around. There is alot of personal things with family going on. I will try to post when i can, and im sorry if, for the time being, im not on much.

 

[FLUFF_V]

I personally vote for third person, past tense. I realize that seems biased towards me, but:
-Those are where we have 2/3 overlap
-Thats the traditional way books and other works are usually written

Sounds good, I'll try to stick that up and fix how my use of conditionals.

 

[FLUFF_V]

sorry guys for not being around. There is alot of personal things with family going on. I will try to post when i can, and im sorry if, for the time being, im not on much.

Don't sweat it, take care for the meantime. I've been busy with school, I'll try to hop back on by next week after my Finals.

 

[Whitewolf787]

Wow. So much has happened over the holidays, and we also just found out my Husband will be leaving for his job to go to the Philippines for 4-6 weeks. Its been hectic but good. I will try to go catch up on everything now. SO SO sorry ive been pulled away!

 

[Laume]

Good to have you back, Whitewolf! I'll respond soon.

Some grammatical edits to your most recent post:

It had been great studying for the last hour, but now her attention was wondering. -> wandering
She tired the park, but usually the tables were full, or not very clean, and its not great to try to read in your lap and take notes. -> tried
"Can I get a refile on my soda please, and perhaps some "Mot" sticks?" I asked. -> refill, she
"Sure no problem. Ill go put that in for you and be back with your refile." He smiled and left.-> I'll, refill
"Here you go." said the waiter as he sat down the drink. -> set

 

[Whitewolf787]

I'm very bad at that sort of things, so thank you very much. I try spell check but it only catches so much.

Also thank you for the welcome back. I was worried you guys thought I ran away.

 

[Whitewolf787]

Laume can I have Ellie serve your character? And assuming he is werewolf, watered down as you put it, she should be able to smell the "werewolf" on him? Or does he had a trick, or trade to hide his scent? Otherwise any supernatural could probably smell him. Are you okay with that?

Would this response be okay with you? im not controlling your character, however I am making suggestions/assumptions, or what type of werewolf/breed he is. Please let me know if you are okay with this before i post. Thank you.

Ellie watched as the next band set up for their performance, Shortly after she heard a man order a drink.
"May I see you ID please, Club policy." She asked politely.
She noticed that he looked a bit nervous, or perhaps restless.
She smiled and had to stop herself as she caught his scent. Werewolf. It wasn't very strong, and she only vaguely remembered what type of werewolf he was likely to be by his scent. If her teaching and memory was correct he was a "watered" down breed. Most likely a bitten or an offspring of a bitten werewolf. Sadly if that was the case this breed of werewolf were the most likely to be found by humans.
Each individual was different, but from what she knew they were bound to the moon, and often shifted because of it. Some couldn't shift at all or only partially. Most however had strength enough to harm themselves are others if not careful. All were wolves, even the lowest breed had better strength then humans.
She wondered if he knew he was a werewolf, or if he had control over it. His nervousness or restless behavior was not a great first impression, however he could be nervous for other reasons.

She kept her smile in place while she waited for him to show her his ID.

 

[Laume]

Yes, that's all fine! Serving him is a natural way for them to interact (and why I had him end up in her bar), and her knowing he's a werewolf helps move the story along well. He doesn't have any ways of hiding he's a werewolf, since he's not very knowledgable on werewolves in general.

Thank you for checking with me first, your reply looks great.

 

[Whitewolf787]

Awesome. Ill post it then.

 

[Whitewolf787]

Who all is ready to continue the game? My characters are waiting for other responses. Ill be around here till then.