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Fantasy Reaper 3: Final March OOC

Which is your favorite ship from Reaper?

  • Yulura (Aura x Yulier)

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  • Yeah (Yato x Leah)

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Evayne (Vayne x Eve)

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Deulika (Deus x Celika)

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Kirev (Krev x Kirsa)

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Mianoir (Revnoir x Mia)

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Kirsanoir (Revnoir x Kirsa)

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Xillnoir (Revnoir x Xillia)

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
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Welp! Gtg for the night~! I'll be a bit late getting on tomorrow night, I'll be back around 7 pm eastern because of jazz band!
 
Kiritsu Senpai] [FONT='Trebuchet MS'][COLOR=#b30000]"You know what... Fuck this shit I'm out..." [/COLOR][/FONT][FONT='Trebuchet MS'][COLOR=#808080]Yato turned around right away at the sight of the familiar figure. He turned away and slowly walked into a sprint. He couldn't risk his life at the moment.[/COLOR][/FONT][FONT='Trebuchet MS'][COLOR=#808080] [/COLOR][/FONT][IMG]http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/924/686/9bb.gif[/IMG][FONT='Trebuchet MS'][COLOR=#808080] [/COLOR][/FONT] [/QUOTE] <p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_12/57a8c6263421e_Tallyhooooo.gif.a841ca7e45e75d9fefcdbff10a66820e.gif" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="90122" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_12/57a8c6263421e_Tallyhooooo.gif.a841ca7e45e75d9fefcdbff10a66820e.gif" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p> <p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_12/Nope.gif.57d1a0a630dbb6f40629c9431c99ed5f.gif" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="90123" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_12/Nope.gif.57d1a0a630dbb6f40629c9431c99ed5f.gif" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p> [URL="/monthly_2015_12/57a8c6263421e_Tallyhooooo.gif.a841ca7e45e75d9fefcdbff10a66820e.gif said:
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[QUOTE="Aurath Moonblood](Rev is elsewhere and Aura is talking to yato. Also a little ways away from the bace.)

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If this was even directed towards me


I know, I didn't miss much. But, if I recall correctly, Yato was carrying Leah with him.
 
Damn I'm sorry for what I'm gonna say but I'm gonna be really sleepless for a week because I have a lot of things to do this is a pain in the ass but I'm sorry but don't worry if anyone wants to pilot or control my character please feel free to do so....again I'm So Sorry.
 
Alternated said:
Damn I'm sorry for what I'm gonna say but I'm gonna be really sleepless for a week because I have a lot of things to do this is a pain in the ass but I'm sorry but don't worry if anyone wants to pilot or control my character please feel free to do so....again I'm So Sorry.
Thank you for the notice, we'll be sure to keep your character away from the removed list ^^ -slaps him on the wrist- no cookies for you!
 
Oh dear....


I think, that there will only be one other occasion during which I will be this grateful that I'm relatively asocial.


I've decided that, when the time comes, I'm skipping every prom or formal ever. Unless it's hosted by TriM, (music honors society thingy) I'm not going.


According to a friend of mine, some middleschooler spiked the drinks with vodka, and she was hung over the next day.


Yep. Nope.
 
Spazzycat101 said:
Oh dear....
I think, that there will only be one other occasion during which I will be this grateful that I'm relatively asocial.


I've decided that, when the time comes, I'm skipping every prom or formal ever. Unless it's hosted by TriM, (music honors society thingy) I'm not going.


According to a friend of mine, some middleschooler spiked the drinks with vodka, and she was hung over the next day.


Yep. Nope.
Lol, prom is actually just a waste of money. It's for people who enjoy being extremely social and making complete idiots of themselves. I'm not going to mine, that's for sure. Why get dressed up and wear uncomfortable shoes when you can stay at home and sleep?
 
Alternated said:
Ahh also to be clear I have no Intention of quitting this roleplay I never quit a roleplay anyway...
Okay. So are you just taking a pause?
 
ThePumpkinQueen said:
Caspian turned to tell Espen to get Revnoir, but she sat down next to them and told Cas to go get him.
Espen's threads slowly traveled to the girl's mouth. Some were green, some were brown. To reassure Kirsa that she meant no harm, she explained, "Plants have healing powers. Just-Just hold still."
Explain.
 
0w0 Espen has Earth threads, so she does stuffs with plants and dirt and rock. She was using her threads(lavender(plant) and Ashwagandha(herb), both able to naturally calm their consumers) so Kirsa wouldn't go into shock.
 
ThePumpkinQueen said:
0w0 Espen has Earth threads, so she does stuffs with plants and dirt and rock. She was using her threads(lavender(plant) and Ashwagandha(herb), both able to naturally calm their consumers) so Kirsa wouldn't go into shock.
Ok just making sure you weren't making some sort of healing magic bullshit.
 
[QUOTE="Tylor guillory](Ok tried to spread the feels hope it worked if not oh well I tried)

[/QUOTE] Just wanna give you some constructive criticism if you'll have it ^^ The dialogue seems a bit... Forced. I think that's the word. It doesn't flow very well, and is, well, actually a little cheesy. That and we need a few commas in there. And periods. And exclamation marks. Ex. "Oh no Deus there's no time go!" That would be read all together as one yelling sentence. 'Fixed': "Oh no... Deus, there's no time..! Go!" Personally I think it sounds more natural for a person to say this ^^
Anyhow, that was just a bit of good ol' Umbra Criticism for ye!
 

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