Fantasy Raven Wing Academy (New and Improved)

[Veyd Sahvoz]

Btw, @GingerBread you up for joining the insurgency?

 

[GingerBread]

Oh, no.. no... You have mistaken yourself. As it turns out, you're not sneaky at all

I'm the most sneaky. You couldn't even see me typing this message

@GingerBread[/URL] you up for joining the insurgency?

The what?

 

[Kazehana]

I'm the most sneaky. You couldn't even see me typing this message
The what?

Aww it's so cute that you think that. You guys are so adorable

 

[SnowBird225]

Can I join your clan? @GingerBread

 

[GingerBread]

Aww it's so cute that you think that. You guys are so adorable

Can I join your clan? @GingerBread

Clan?

 

[SnowBird225]

Kaze told me you were a moderator and I put in my character.

 

[Veyd Sahvoz]

I'm a moderator too, I never got a notif for your cs...

 

[Kazehana]

Clan?

You took the time to go find that? I don't know, it seems like you're being awful cute :/

[QUOTE="Veyd Sahvoz]I'm a moderator too, I never got a notif for your cs...

[/QUOTE]
Aren't you one of the people that advocates for checking your watched threads? His CS went up yesterday

 

[SnowBird225]

I had no idea you were, but like Kaze said I put it up yesterday.

 

[GingerBread]

I had no idea you were, but like Kaze said I put it up yesterday.

Kaze told me you were a moderator and I put in my character.

Yeah I am, Sorry, I can't be saying I've been paying that much attention to this. I'll go look now

You took the time to go find that? I don't know, it seems like you're being awful cute :/

I didn't take any time to find it, I just have them, along with other pictures.


@Veyd Sahvoz What's the insurgency?

 

[Kazehana]

Yeah I am, Sorry, I can't be saying I've been paying that much attention to this. I'll go look now
I didn't take any time to find it, I just have them, along with other pictures.


@Veyd Sahvoz What's the insurgency?

"along with other pictures"


... K

 

[GingerBread]

Name:Chris Richardson
Nickname: Ryen


Age:17


Gender:Male


Your Gift:Electrocution


Abilities:Being able to electrocute people and objects only by touch, not infinitely however. Doing this will deplete energy and Chris often becomes thristy, tired, or both after doing this.


Personality:Chris is an active guy who sometimes spaces out into his own world. He tends to smile alot at many things and over all likes to be happy. He tends to be a consul and help people out often.


Bio:Being born from Natia and Will Richardson in farm country, Chris was often a happy, go lucky kid. Being an only child, he sometimes felt alone in the world but most times was not. He often did not see his father due to him working night shifts at the local police department while during the day his mother was a baker and often sold her goods at the local bakery shop. On one of the night shifts, Will was shot by minor drug trafficers who pulled the trigger in fear than anything else. Only three years old, Chris could not comprend the death of his father, only knowing the fact there was someone gone from his life.


Natia and Chris moved often, from home to home, just trying to get by in life. Chris grew up well, even though their conditions of how they lived were often in a poor state. He went to normal public schools for a while but that change shortly before he turned 17.


One day from a walk home from school, Chris came across a blue clouded yet vein like diamond stuck into the ground. Curious as ever, he reached down and touched it, but as soon as he did, sparks shot up through his arm and went straight to his heart, knocking out shortly afterwards. When he came to, he looked up infront of him on the ground and noticed that the diamond was gone. He got up and thought it was just him spacing off and he hit something that knocked him out on the way home. Finally approaching home, Chris notice a flyer on his door step to a special academy. "Raven Wing Academy". As he picked it up with one hand, the other sparked up. Chris felt as though he could not tell his mother of this, what would she think of him. So he decided while his mother was out to work, Chris would pack his bags, leave a goodbye for now letter, and go to this academy that accepts people more or less like himself.


Dorm Mate:N/A


Martial Status:Single


Appearance:View attachment 320803

So I've had a look, I've only got two things to say about it really.


One, the formatting isn't good, It kinda all blurs together for me, if you could put a couple of line breaks between each thing, like Bio and personality and that stuff. I'd appreciate that.


And the other thing is, how strong is the electrocution?

 

[GingerBread]

"along with other pictures"
... K

Do you not believe me? You're getting pictures now; You've done it.

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[SnowBird225]

So I've had a look, I've only got two things to say about it really.
One, the formatting isn't good, It kinda all blurs together for me, if you could put a couple of line breaks between each thing, like Bio and personality and that stuff. I'd appreciate that.


And the other thing is, how strong is the electrocution?

Yeah...sorry. Still new to this concept. It's not overpowered, it's more between medium low to lethal but lethal makes him pass out due to the fact he is not trained in this ability.

 

[Kazehana]

Do you not believe me? You're getting pictures now; You've done it.

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Oh my. I knew you were hiding something dirty, but this...

 

[GingerBread]

Oh my. I knew you were hiding something dirty, but this...

 

[Veyd Sahvoz]

You took the time to go find that? I don't know, it seems like you're being awful cute :/
Aren't you one of the people that advocates for checking your watched threads? His CS went up yesterday

I am but when I have work and a family gathering in the same day I don't really have time to go through all of my alerts.

 

[Kazehana]

You guys. You guys. This has no relevance to the conversation. But. Today is a great day.


I played two matches of league, okay? And I'm like, bad at the game. But today I got my first S ranking and got 0 deaths in another. And on that zero deaths? Survived a 1v2 against a Poppy and fed Rennekton as the support. I'm not terrible when I don't play with my brother and his friends, all ranked. So excited

 

[GingerBread]

You guys. You guys. This has no relevance to the conversation. But. Today is a great day.
I played two matches of league, okay? And I'm like, bad at the game. But today I got my first S ranking and got 0 deaths in another. And on that zero deaths? Survived a 1v2 against a Poppy and fed Rennekton as the support. I'm not terrible when I don't play with my brother and his friends, all ranked. So excited

Mate, 1v1 me. Club penguin

 

[Veyd Sahvoz]

Alrighty then. So we're on the topic of video games now, eh?

 

[GingerBread]

[QUOTE="Veyd Sahvoz]Alrighty then. So we're on the topic of video games now, eh?

[/QUOTE]
I guess so, Slow day people?

 

[Kazehana]

Mate, 1v1 me. Club penguin

what

[QUOTE="Veyd Sahvoz]Alrighty then. So we're on the topic of video games now, eh?

[/QUOTE]

I guess so, Slow day people?

I'm just really proud of myself because I'm garbage usually

 

[GingerBread]

what

How do you want me to expand on that? I thought it was straight forwards enough

 

[Kazehana]

How do you want me to expand on that? I thought it was straight forwards enough

I thought it was straight forwards enough

straight forwards

forwards

I can't believe this just happened

 

[GingerBread]

I can't believe this just happened

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