doneanddusted
Two Thousand Club
that took way too long sorry guys
i did get ellie to react tho
i did get ellie to react tho
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She was a wee bit late as the others were already kinda there. XDQUEEN ONE HAS LANDED
I REPEAT: QUEEN ONE HAS LANDED
oh that's absolutely fine I'm so sorry!!Cosmos Hey, would you mind toning down your post a bit? I seriously doubt that the crowd would do that to a feeder out of the blue, much less a pregnant one. Vampires can tend to be assholes in this world, but this is a school that multiple species attend, and there's also an entirely different situation going on. I hate to ask people to edit, but it just didn't sit with me well.
Danke danke! It's fine. Thank you for being cool about it.oh that's absolutely fine I'm so sorry!!
aw it's fine sorry was half distracted writing it, guess I got a bit too over driven in the thought trail "^w^ I feel so bad about it~…. Edited it now though so I left the annoying male who I may bring back later but had her defended and the other guy practically shut down, giving her a much more reasonable reaction and action towards the situation in the second paragraph as well, I really hope it's okay!Danke danke! It's fine. Thank you for being cool about it.
changed it. XD
Much better! I like it~ She's got quite the fighting spiritaw it's fine sorry was half distracted writing it, guess I got a bit too over driven in the thought trail "^w^ I feel so bad about it~…. Edited it now though so I left the annoying male who I may bring back later but had her defended and the other guy practically shut down, giving her a much more reasonable reaction and action towards the situation in the second paragraph as well, I really hope it's okay!
"^w^ tanksMuch better! I like it~ She's got quite the fighting spirit
It seems fine, but same as with her post, you're going very dramatic. Most of the focus here would likely be on the Purebloods and the almost fight that's breaking out, not so much your character's cut.Deathkitten : I’ve altered it a little to incorporate what Cosmos cjanged, but not by much. That okay?