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[Soviet Panda]

Quick question, what kind of pokemon is like a swallow? I think it's a fire type, but not sure. And I'm set on Oshwatt being my starter pokemon.

 

[Soviet Panda]

I KNOW THE POKEMON I WANT!! It's two. Well, three, but I'm planning on only choosing two. Oshwatt as my starter, and taillow and a second one as captured. And then there's another bird type that I want. I don't know the tames, but I'll post pictures tomorrow for ya'll to look at.

 

[Kyero]

I KNOW THE POKEMON I WANT!! It's two. Well, three, but I'm planning on only choosing two. Oshwatt as my starter, and taillow and a second one as captured. And then there's another bird type that I want. I don't know the tames, but I'll post pictures tomorrow for ya'll to look at.

Fletchling is a fire-type bird Pokemon.

 

[Soviet Panda]

Fletchling's the one. And Starly was the other one.


Now, I'm going to start my CS, but won't finish it until later because classes are going to start soon.

 

[Soviet Panda]

Someone want to take a gander at my character and see if it's so far so good?

 

[Kyero]

Someone want to take a gander at my character and see if it's so far so good?

So far he's doing all right, but I'd personally like you to dig deeper. Really flesh out the character into someone unique rather than a simple obligatory "fill out the minimum to get it over with" kind of character. Know what I mean?


If you need help, just say so.

 

[Soviet Panda]

Two things. The Legendary's bio, and I'm not sure if I got the build right for my character's height and weight. That's about it really. Everything else I can work on in bite sized chunks so I'm not overwhelmed by everything.

 

[Kyero]

Two things. The Legendary's bio, and I'm not sure if I got the build right for my character's height and weight. That's about it really. Everything else I can work on in bite sized chunks so I'm not overwhelmed by everything.

So long a the Legendary's bio has nothing to do with the manga/anime or video game Pokedex information and fits with the Legendary's basic type and a realistic life style, I'm good. Sounds like a lot but it's really not. Basically just create a life for it.


It's an ultra powerful being beyond the capabilities of any Pokemon Trainer or normal Pokemon to face on any even ground, so interaction is not something it will do unless there is a great need for it.


But answer the basic questions: Where was it born (be creative but adhere to its given location such as Johto for Entei)? When was it born? How old is it? Growing up, how did it learn to control its power? How did it come to realize its power was dangerous? What possessed it to learn to control its power instead of abuse it and subjugate other Pokemon? Has it encountered Team Rocket? Has it encountered other Trainers? What was the experience for both, or neither (depending on the answers to the previous two questions)?


Etc, etc.


Body types:


Endomorph: Arnold Schwarzenegger (stocky with major muscle build potential)


Ectomorph: Jay Baruchel (slim and not much muscle no matter what you do)


Mesomorph: Chris Pratt (middle of the road, which is what most people are)

 

[Soviet Panda]

Alright. The build's good then I believe. Now, to slowly finish my character. I'm currently on mobile, so if something looks funny or is spelled wrong I'm sorry.

 

[TerraBooma]

Not too happy with that post, but I've slept 5 hours in the last 30 or so, and frankly I don't thjink I can mentally pull off anything more complicated.


Edot: wasn't getting notifs, that's annoying.

 

[TerraBooma]

Hey @Kyero I have a somewhat scientific pokemon based question for ya.


How bulletproof are they? Like could conventional weapons hurt a rock type?


Don't ask why I'm wondering this

 

[D. Rex]

Onix is invincible to everything except plutonium tipped tomahawk cruise missiles and thermal imploders.


Just sayin....

 

[CloudyBlueDay]

Larvitar/Pupitar/Tyranitar tho.

 

[D. Rex]

Larvitar/Pupitar/Tyranitar tho.

Steelix.

 

[TerraBooma]

From the looks of things. Most Rock/Steel types xD

 

[Kyero]

Hey @Kyero I have a somewhat scientific pokemon based question for ya.
How bulletproof are they? Like could conventional weapons hurt a rock type?


Don't ask why I'm wondering this

Admittedly, I have not studied what each Pokemon is resistant to on that site King found for us.


However, everyone...


Since this RP is based off of how I view the Pokemon world realistically, no Pokemon is bullet proof. Bullet-resistant, yes. Bullet-proof? No.


Nix can be shot and killed like any Pokemon is armor-piercing rounds (or any high caliber rounds) are fired at medium to close range. The farther they are, the more resistant Onix is. Steelix is heavily resistant, but he too can be pierced by armor-piercing rounds and high enough caliber when fired at the same spot to damage integrity of its hide and then pierce all the way on follow up shots.


That site is nice, and I'll be drawing from it for some things. But that site's information is not the full basis of this RP's "realism".


Thank you!

 

[D. Rex]

Lol I was kidding about Onix.


And I'm glad you like the site. A good place to pick and choose what works and gives things to think about.

 

[TerraBooma]

This just in everyone


Tank is in fact, greater then Pokemon

 

[Soviet Panda]

Ok, personality and strenght/weakness is done. Give it a gander and tell me whats what.

 

[CloudyBlueDay]

Tyrannitar is like. Literally known to have incredibly tough skin. I want to say how many gunshot rounds it can take.

 

[TerraBooma]

Probably depends on Caliber. Like, a pistol would take hits then say, a Tank Shell

 

[D. Rex]

Ok, personality and strenght/weakness is done. Give it a gander and tell me whats what.

Well, I would suggest you finish the CS as a whole. That way feedback would be much more valuable to you since a CS constantly evolves until it's final draft.


But I suppose my ganders at it would reveal the following. Though be warned, I am feared among my people for being picking on things, so I will try to be gentle as you are probably not going to be used to my methods of feedback lol.


1. You would likely be better off finding a more accurate picture to fit the description. A simple google search will bring up troves of candidates begging to be models for an RP char. It would certainly save you a lot more trouble than trying to explain all the differences. Also, you said his hair was not grey, but you did not mention what his hair color is.


2. Route 2 is a ways away from where the location of the group is. Just a warning to possibly save you from needing to solo post to catch up. Also, with a starting point so far away(pallet town in your case), you may or may not be required to have to explain what has happened in your travel up until your current location in your character history. Or alternatively in the IC if you have a ways to go. My recommendation would be to start out at a town closer to your target destination. Like Vermillion City or Saffron. To possibly ease your workload some.


3. "Connor never really liked people. It's not that he disliked their company. Quite the opposite actually." Sounds a little confusing. You may want to add quite a few more sentences explaining him. From the look of it, from what there is, I doubt he would get along well with Ricky lol. Not that that is bad. But keep a heads up. Our char are not forced to be together as this isn't a linear RP, friction caused by personalities is something that can happen. Again, conflicting personalities isn't a bad thing. Just something to be aware of if you try to plan interactions. Having detail in a char's personality section can go a long way in helping organize relationships between other char.


4. "Though he is caring for his pokemon, he is cautios around wild ones, almost to the point of trying his best to avoid them completely. In fact, his taillow is still a bit bitter about being captured and is still warming up to him. Because of this, he doesn't go out of his way to capture pokemon. He would much rather trade for them or purchase them from a ranch." Though I am not sure what you have planned, Connor may want to opt out of the pokemon League challenge. This way he wouldn't be pressured into capturing pokemon or training in the wild.


Welp, that is all I can give for the time being until more is filled out. I hope it helped somehow.

 

[Kyero]

Hey guys. If you're waiting on me, don't. I have a big exam coming up to study for so go ahead and move forward without me. Just presume Sakura is sitting quietly and eating her meal in silence.

 

[TerraBooma]

alrighty, good to know!


Tiem to activate operation Pester King!

 

[Kyero]

Hey guys.


Sorry for my long absence. Life has conspired against me every step of the way as of late. But I am back now that midterms are over and should be good to resume my usual posting schedule.


Carry on!