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Amber: When I'm awake, yeah you're all I think about.
April: When I'm asleep, yeah you're all I dream about.
Amber: and I know someday I'll win your heart I mean it, I swear it.
April: I'll play it cool, I won't give it all away
Amber: And I will always give it all my everyday
April: I thought the problems at the time would go away but I know, I can do it.
Amber: Somehow I, can pull through it
April: So just give me time, 'cause I'm all warmed up now!
Amber: When you're around I get knocked down, why must we go through all this every time
April: The sound of your voice leaves me no choice
Amber: cutting right into me just like a knife
April: A thousand times, thousand times, that is how many times I give into this.
Amber: Driven them in
April: now I wear thin, throw me in
Amber: run away I can see you're so scared.
Amber: Question, question, answer me why must you run away from me?
April: Question, question, how did I ever know all about you anyway?
April: Question, question, tell me why you are before my very eyes
Amber: Question, question, how can you be so near yet you're oh so far away?
 
Hey guys, I really want to try to improve my roleplaying in general. So I want to ask that if you guys have any constructive criticism, I'd like to hear it. I just want to know if there's something I can do to be better.

Also, if you guys want me to return the favor, lemme know and I'll try to come up with some helpful tidbit.

Latios Latios Emperor Of Embers Emperor Of Embers Daisie Daisie
 
Hey guys, I really want to try to improve my roleplaying in general. So I want to ask that if you guys have any constructive criticism, I'd like to hear it. I just want to know if there's something I can do to be better.

Also, if you guys want me to return the favor, lemme know and I'll try to come up with some helpful tidbit.

Latios Latios Emperor Of Embers Emperor Of Embers Daisie Daisie
Well, I may be able to give some. To be a bit blunt... Your posts recently have been slightly lacking. A few details here and there about what they're thinking, how they're feeling, and what they're doing can be nice.
 
Well, I may be able to give some. To be a bit blunt... Your posts recently have been slightly lacking. A few details here and there about what they're thinking, how they're feeling, and what they're doing can be nice.
Ah, I can actually explain that. Usually it's because I'm on mobile since my computer broke, and typing on mobile is a pain. Furthermore, I only have so long on break at work, so I'm trying to get a post out before I have to get back to work. That said, thank you for the criticism! I'll keep that in mind.
 
-Looks up- Where the heck did all these posts come from? Notifications are weird when they pile them together.
 
Their busy trying to escape with Raikou. If they help at all they will lose concentration on keeping him afloat and Raikou will fall to his death.
 
Right...
Man, I'd do something to help, but I actually need to get a response from Emperor first. :S Don't do too much without me, will ya? I don't want Arcanus to stand around during a fight.
 
I'm gonna be heading off to work again in about 40 minutes, just so you know. I really really wanna participate in this battle. if you would wait, I'd be grateful. So sorry for the inconvenience.
 
Assailant Assailant Whoa whoa, you didn't even give me time to do anything!
He was being battered by electricity, shaken by a dragon, and attacked by steel birds. Any one of those alone, at the state he was in, would probably do him in. Besides, I'm not saying he's dead maybe.

I guess I can take back the post and let you do something first, I'm just not sure what you can do to get him out of this.
 
He was being battered by electricity, shaken by a dragon, and attacked by steel birds. Any one of those alone, at the state he was in, would probably do him in. Besides, I'm not saying he's dead maybe.

I guess I can take back the post and let you do something first, I'm just not sure what you can do to get him out of this.
I don't think there is anything I can do, either. But by the time Emperor of Embers would even be able to respond, we'd be out of the battle anyway! Again, my point about not leaving people behind. I still remember being left behind for three pages - out of an entire battle scene. And I'd really rather not have that happen to myself again. Or Emperor for that matter.
 
I don't think there is anything I can do, either. But by the time Emperor of Embers would even be able to respond, we'd be out of the battle anyway! Again, my point about not leaving people behind. I still remember being left behind for three pages - out of an entire battle scene. And I'd really rather not have that happen to myself again. Or Emperor for that matter.
*sigh* fair enough.
 

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