Fandom Pokémon: Rise of Shadows (OOC)

[Assailant]

XDD Oh my gosh, that's funny. I was trying so hard to kill her off and I was like: "Dangit, Assailant, stop being so heroic!"

Alternate Universe: https://goo.gl/images/Cnu4CZ

 

[Daisie]

Alternate Universe: https://goo.gl/images/Cnu4CZ

That's gonna be like an inside joke or something now, lol. Whenever someone says 'I wish this would happen' or something, we'll just be like "Alternate universe!!".

 

[Assailant]

Alternate Universe: Amber lives.

*unblinking intense stare*

Wouldn't that be nice.

*slowly zooms in as the screen begins to turn red and shake*

I bet you wish that was this universe.
But I am not a merciful God.
I am spiteful and indignant.

*ominous music grows to a crescendo*

I only am satisfied by feasting upon your tears of emotional agony.

 

[Assailant]

I got a sentence or two of that out and totally forgot where I was going with the joke but I refused to stop so I just kept going.

 

[Daisie]

Alternate Universe: Amber lives.

*unblinking intense stare*

Wouldn't that be nice.

*slowly zooms in as the screen begins to turn red and shake*

I bet you wish that was this universe.
But I am not a merciful God.
I am spiteful and indignant.

*ominous music grows to a crescendo*

I only am satisfied by feasting upon your tears of emotional agony.

Me as I was reading this:

Spoiler

 

[Assailant]

Me as I was reading this:

Spoiler

Whenever I'm in a roleplay, I channel my inner Onceler and think... "how bad can I possibly be?" And then I do that

 

[Daisie]

Whenever I'm in a roleplay, I channel my inner Onceler and think... "how bad can I possibly be?" And then I do that

And then suddenly the demon inside you bursts out and is like "WHO NEEDS EMOTIONAL STABILITY?!"
Not even kidding, I get so invested in these RPs... I didn't wanna tell you cause I thought you'd feel bad, but after Amber's death I was like, out of it irl a solid 24 hours, lol. I have issues

 

[Assailant]

And then suddenly the demon inside you bursts out and is like "WHO NEEDS EMOTIONAL STABILITY?!"
Not even kidding, I get so invested in these RPs... I didn't wanna tell you cause I thought you'd feel bad, but after Amber's death I was like, out of it irl a solid 24 hours, lol. I have issues

*laughs*

Feel bad? Dude, you just made my week. I'm so proud of myself

 

[Daisie]

*laughs*

Feel bad? Dude, you just made my week. I'm so proud of myself

XD well that's good. Gah, seriously though ;^; I get too invested in these Roleplays.

 

[Assailant]

XD well that's good. Gah, seriously though ;^; I get too invested in these Roleplays.

Dude, me too. legit, for an upcoming scene, I've spent about 6 hours total in the past few days just planning it out in my head. I plan for things months in advance. It's insane. And I get hyperinvested in a lot of characters too. ArcApril makes me legit happy IRL.

*slowly moves hand to it like a cat with a glass on a table.*

Would be a shame if something were to...

*puts hand on ship and starts gently pushing it towards edge of table*

Happen to it

 

[Daisie]

Dude, me too. legit, for an upcoming scene, I've spent about 6 hours total in the past few days just planning it out in my head. I plan for things months in advance. It's insane. And I get hyperinvested in a lot of characters too. ArcApril makes me legit happy IRL.

*slowly moves hand to it like a cat with a glass on a table.*

Would be a shame if something were to...

*puts hand on ship and starts gently pushing it towards edge of table*

Happen to it

Seriously though I'd be so torn down ;A; I feel the same way about that ship.

 

[Assailant]

Seriously though I'd be so torn down ;A; I feel the same way about that ship.

Let me tell you this much.

I won't say how much of it is final. However... at one point or another, I have considered killing off each and every one of my characters. Not all at once, but each character still has potential to die.

*laughs evilly and rubs hands*

 

[Daisie]

Let me tell you this much.

I won't say how much of it is final. However... at one point or another, I have considered killing off each and every one of my characters. Not all at once, but each character still has potential to die.

*laughs evilly and rubs hands*

:S Makes me legitimately uncomfortable tbh haha

 

[Assailant]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHA

*sigh*

I'm a sadist it would seem. I've always just loved major character deaths. People are too scared to do it a lot, so I love when it IS done. We haven't even gotten to see exactly how she died yet, I have a whole scene planned out for the flashback too.

Although, I actually wanna ask you. Constructive criticism here, how do you think I handled Amber's death? Both leading up to it, at the time, and the repercussions.

 

[Daisie]

Although, I actually wanna ask you. Constructive criticism here, how do you think I handled Amber's death? Both leading up to it, at the time, and the repercussions.

Ah, man, I'm not sure if I have much criticism to offer. It was dramatic, it was gruesome, it was heartbreaking. From the moment I first began reading that post, I just had that gut feeling that something wasn't right. I think the repercussions were pretty good, stirring up some heavy emotions with April and all that. The scene was well constructed, definitely. But I'm not experienced enough to really point out any flaws. You got me invested, that was for sure, anyways.

 

[Assailant]

Ah, man, I'm not sure if I have much criticism to offer. It was dramatic, it was gruesome, it was heartbreaking. From the moment I first began reading that post, I just had that gut feeling that something wasn't right. I think the repercussions were pretty good, stirring up some heavy emotions with April and all that. The scene was well constructed, definitely. But I'm not experienced enough to really point out any flaws. You got me invested, that was for sure, anyways.

Mmmm. Well, thank you for the feedback! That was everything I'd hoped. I'd like for feedback from the other two ( Latios Emperor Of Embers ), but I'm glad it at least had that effect.

As much as I love torturing my characters, and as much as I love major deaths, I'm actually fairly inexperienced writing death scenes. So I'm really happy it worked so well.

 

[Emperor Of Embers]

Mmmm. Well, thank you for the feedback! That was everything I'd hoped. I'd like for feedback from the other two ( Latios Emperor Of Embers ), but I'm glad it at least had that effect.

As much as I love torturing my characters, and as much as I love major deaths, I'm actually fairly inexperienced writing death scenes. So I'm really happy it worked so well.

I honestly think it was good. I am quite experienced with Death Scenes, since I have done them a lot. But, you could use a little more detail on the cause of death (because I imagine it as a movie, and like to watch those kinds of scenes in my head.) maybe you could show us what the characters do not know, like what happened to kill (insert character here)

 

[Assailant]

I honestly think it was good. I am quite experienced with Death Scenes, since I have done them a lot. But, you could use a little more detail on the cause of death (because I imagine it as a movie, and like to watch those kinds of scenes in my head.)

Oh, that will be done. I plan to have April have a flashback to the moment of death at some point. If anyone asks her, it'll trigger then, and if not, I'll just have it happen at some poing

 

[Latios]

No, I'm laughing too. I remember constantly trying to save Umbra, and it got so bad that Latios PM'd me and basically said "f**k off she wants to die"

XDD Oh my gosh, that's funny. I was trying so hard to kill her off and I was like: "Dangit, Assailant, stop being so heroic!"

First off, I didn't tell you to F off. I kindly asked you to stop saving her. I'm not like that, if I ever do get rude to people like that it's because I'm REALLY pissed off. And boy will you be able to tell. Thankfully it's hard to piss me off to that point. Even when I am annoyed really badly (like when we had "Darkri's" Latios character, who was literally going to be called Lati until I told him to change it [forgot to what though] ended up breaking SEVERAL rules here and was trying to derail this entire RP from the very beginning when this RP started. This got me really mad and I ended up having to kick him [the first time I kicked someone. I'm usually trying to be so nice to people]. But dispite how angry o was there I never was a total dushe and swore at people.)

As for your question about Amber. I have to say. You did well on it. You pulled my heart strings. I, however, won't be killing any of my characters. My main cast of Pokemon RP characters are too important to me to simply kill. Any other that don't relate to the main cast is fair game.

 

[Daisie]

First off, I didn't tell you to F off. I kindly asked you to stop saving her. I'm not like that, if I ever do get rude to people like that it's because I'm REALLY pissed off. And boy will you be able to tell. Thankfully it's hard to piss me off to that point. Even when I am annoyed really badly (like when we had "Darkri's" Latios character, who was literally going to be called Lati until I told him to change it [forgot to what though] ended up breaking SEVERAL rules here and was trying to derail this entire RP from the very beginning when this RP started. This got me really mad and I ended up having to kick him [the first time I kicked someone. I'm usually trying to be so nice to people]. But dispite how angry o was there I never was a total dushe and swore at people.)

Just want to point out that Assailant was overreacting for comedic effect.

 

[Assailant]

First off, I didn't tell you to F off. I kindly asked you to stop saving her.

It was hyperbole for the sake of comedy, I never thought you were actually angry. I'm starting to see what you mean that you can't tell tone over the internet

 

[Latios]

... Oh... Yeah... I can sometimes take thing too seriously. Amd that plays a lot with understanding sarcasm over the Internet.

 

[Assailant]

As for your question about Amber. I have to say. You did well on it. You pulled my heart strings. I, however, won't be killing any of my characters. My main cast of Pokemon RP characters are too important to me to simply kill. Any other that don't relate to the main cast is fair game.

Well, I'm flattered that you think that. I'm glad to hear that brutally slaughtering a beloved character had the right effect. Well, now I know how to go about killing my next one!

I mean...

Uh...

I said nothing.

 

[Latios]

I swear if you kill more than half of your characters I don't think I could take it. Especially if those characters are some of the most important. And it might not be a good thing to put the GM out of commission.

 

[Assailant]

I swear if you kill more than half of your characters I don't think I could take it. Especially if those characters are some of the most important. And it might not be a good thing to put the GM out of commission.

*slowly crosses out a page saying "kill them all*

Right... of course, why would I do that?