Fandom Boku no Hero: Peace Sign Academia Characters

[Idea]

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Virus Hero, Setsou

Name: Setsuo Nikuruisu



Age: 16



Height: 5'11



Gender: Male



Nicknames: Setso, Niki.



Chosen Extra Course: General Studies.



Likes: Large animals, Fungi, White meat meals, writing in his journal, video games, listening to music while he works. Professional Hero’s.



Dislikes: When people say his Quirk is too "Creepy", Swimming, When people mistake him for a villain in his costume, being woken up (Let the boy sleep.), coffee.



Personality: Kind, supportive of his friends, a but lazy when it comes to cleaning his room and doing school work, will often find any excuse to not work. Has a strong sense of moral “justice”, and will often act on impulse, giving little time to thinking of plans. Tends to hide any form of cowardice behind a false bravodo when in a fight. Hate’s when people dig into his food cache.



Fears: The ocean, Jellyfish, isopods, drowning.



Mannerisms: He tends to be laid back, and is almost always willing to talk to someone, no matter what he's doing. Always seems to be drinking some kind of mixed drink.



Background: {S}



Items: A large back pack, filled with all sorts of foods, (manly home cooked meals his mother had prepared for him, such as standard bentos and simple sushi dishes) one bottle of Vitamin C pills (100 pills, 5 gram per pill.), one bottle of Vitamin K (100 pills, 5 gram per pill.), and one can of “Bone Broth” mixable powder. (450 grams, 5 grams per scoop)



Relationships: Honaka Nishimura- Setsuo’s mother. A very carrying, and kind person.



QUIRK AND COSTUME, SKILLS

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  (Soon to be) Hero Costume
  
  

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  (If you want a better reference, look up Warframe Nidus.)
  
  Setsuo's costume is designed to act as both a conduit for his quirk, and as well as an aid. Made with hair cells, much like
  Spoiler

  Mirio Togata’s costume
  , Setsuo’s costume is able to act as a conduit for his quirk. As for the second part, Setsuo’s costume on the inside acts like on giant pressure cuff, and will put pressure on the first three afflicted wounds given to Setsuo at a time, stopping bleeding to the best of it’s ability. This only really works for open wounds like cuts and whatnot.
  
  Quirk: Flesh Virus- (This is NOT an infection/virus quirk. The name is purely because it sounds cool.) Setsuo is able to make structures of varying complexity using foods and vitamins he takes in throughout the day. The structures must come out of either Setsuo or his costume. Setsuo can make each of the following using his Quirk. Setsuo can really only use his quirk through his hands and feet, making regeneration nearly impossible in any other parts of his body.
• Flesh: The most simple structure to make. Relies on body fat, and is fairly useless in a fight.
• Bone: The second most complex structure to make, and one of the most useful ones. Uses Bone Broth to make. 500 grams will make two feet of bone. Durability relies on how much calcium and vitamin c he takes in.
• Muscle: The most complex structure to make. Relies on meat to make, and is fairly useless with Setsuo’s current skill. Most he can do with it currently is give his hands and feet a bit of a boost in strength and speed. To do something like that, he would need to eat around 325 grams of meat. (A lotta meat.)
  
• Seeing as how Setsuo is making structures based on human biology, it only makes sense for him to use A LOT of water when constructing these things, which means he’ll be taking in a lot of it.
• Special Moves: Flesh Lance- Setsuo will make a lance out of bone, flesh and muscle, that can either form in the palm of the hand to be used as a polearm. 6 feet in length. [15 grams of Bone Broth used, and two vitamin C pills if durability should be boosted.)
  
  
  Skills/Talents: Good with animals, fairly good listener, fast on his feet, some what of a cook.

-what's the difference between flesh and muscle?
-you're gonna have to keep a counter of how much he has to use in the IC
-I'm gonna need way more detail in that hero costume
-I'm not sure if I have your PM with the secret stuff. I need to check, but if I don't, ya gonna have tá send it already

 

[Idea]

Quote:
"Lets get this over with. It's lunchtime and I have a hearty appetite."
Name:
Kuba Koryusai
Nicknames:
Steak man
Desired Hero Name: {S}
Slymer
Age:
16
Gender:
Male
Chosen Extra Class:
General studies
Appearance:

Spoiler: Looks

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(soon to be) Hero Costume:

Spoiler: Costume

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Has a utility belt that contains some basics for stealth like smoke pellets, Bolas. he also has small plates of armor around his knee caps, shoulders, and fists. Each of these plates have some spikes on them to help deal some additional damage.
Height:
5'8
Weight:
168
Personality:
At first glance you can see Kuba as athletic, absent minded, and quiet. When you get to know him and he opens up, you learn that he is a solemn, prideful, and kind person . however this kid can't hold still if his life depends on it, this is mostly do to his ADHD. He has a hard time focusing in class, easily bored with subjects that he's not into, tho he tries his best to listen carefully if he can help himself. He also can't help but move at least one part of his body, otherwise he goes completely crazy. which is why he has a gripper to keep his body busy. If he doesn't have something to occupy him while holding still then he becomes impatient and begins to make loud tapping sounds with either his feet or fingers. Usually a lot people find this annoying and yell at him to stop, which he does but ends up doing it again after a few minutes. However his dedication and energy to working out and aiming for better improvement is notable. He's known to be pretty focused and tense when engaging physical training. He has a no fooling around policy when it comes to training, and even outside. He also doesn't waste time to be bluntly be honest with someone , if he hates the named person he'll go ahead and say it without any second thoughts. He will be upfront with you without thinking about your feelings. He also is known to be audacious as he has at times known to be disobedient when it came to helping a friend or close one. Like his friend Yasui he was always a target for bullying, which Kuba despises above all else. Willing to use his quirk despite breaking the rules and facing the consequences later.

He's also known not to be the brightest kid when it comes to academics and likes to be by himself. sometimes he's seen in class taking a nap in which case the teachers come and whack him on the head. He does his best to actually learn something and even engage in those lessons. But he most often forgets names and other essential information's so relying on him to remember is a no go since he struggles to bring out tid bits of what he remembers. His best subject however is history as those foretell the stories of great events of humankind and heroes. He usually keeps a history book dating as far as ancient times to read in his spare time. Any other subject tho he is only mediocre. Another book he has is his "Grudge book" which is a small leather handbook that he keeps on him where he writes down the name of those who he has a grudge. If someone wrongly does something that angers him tremendously, he writes that persons name. When he has a grudge on someone, it's to the point where he will not attempt to aid that person until they properly apologize for what they specifically did. Even telling every detail of what they did in order for him him to be satisfied.

It is known only by Yasui that Kuba envies generally everyone. He envies those who are very intelligent and can explain/understand things in a broader way. He feels drawn to them and can't help but feel belittled and hopeless. He may not express it but he thinks about it. He is self-conscious about his own intellect and doesn't like being made fun because of it. Those who do find themselves with a roundhouse kick to the face or a good fashioned full strength slap to the face.

Kuba also has a prideful side of him that doesn't make him back down when someone comes to shove. He prefers to fight one on one and doesn't like receiving help from others. His one golden rule is that no one is to interfere in his fight if someone challenges him. Like his father he prefers to fight with everything he's got when he meets a worthy opponent. That one rule however is overturned when those he cares the most are in danger, in which he swallows his pride to accept others help. Before fighting a strong opponent he usually gives off a sort of overconfidence, underestimating his opponents and believing that his battle is easy. He can of course get a bit hot headed when his opponents taunt him about his height or is beating him, which he then slowly starts to become reckless and oblivious to his surrounding. Taking daring actions that may backfire on him or possibly work in his favor. He becomes fixated on taking out his target before anything bad happens which ironically he only progresses future damage that he wishes to avoid.
Likes:
Food
working out
fighting strong opponents
helping out wherever he can
cats
baseball

Dislikes:
Soccer
Villians
cocky people
people making fun of his height
people pestering about his quirk
studying
being beaten in combat


Fears:
Losing those who he deems close
Losing himself

Mannerisms:
Always has a hand gripper to help keep him focused

Backstory:
Kuba was born on U.S soil in the state of Louisiana. His mother was the state champion within the Womens UFC. She even went to compete nationwide and got 1st place in her first tournament. After that tho she retired and decided to move the family to japan where Kuba's father was working as a hero. During his childhood his mother spent most of her time training Kuba in some martial arts and starting easy in physical training and thus picking it up as Kuba grew up. When he got old enough to take on heavier weights she decided to take Kuba to her gym and personally trained in all sorts of physical workouts. Of course having a mother who was also a nutritionist helped a lot. Whenever he wanted to train with his quirk he would ask his dad to help out which he gladly obliged whenever he had time.

When he started elementary school he was known to be very kind and was one of the first of kids to offer help in any sort of way to the teachers or volunteering to be someone's partner. He always got along with everyone, but some kids saw him as a nuisance. There were times when kids would attempt to fight him or pick on him. But usually he just ends up telling on them and informing the teachers that certain kids were trying to incite violence. When he was actually forced to fight, he would resort to using his quirk and thus barely winning or just running away.

When he was in middle school he moved to the city of musutafu things again got a bit hectic. When he was asked about his quirk he didn't want to say and thus rumors began about him being quirkless. It was put down to rest when he finally decided to show a bit of his quirk by turning only his feet to the venomous suit and walking up on the school walls for just a minute (He got in trouble and given detention for a week). At that point people finally left him alone and became more friendly with him. He didn't like that about people, having to have high expectation on someone's quirk and it having to determine that your a somebody.

Then in High school he met Yasui who happened to be a quirkless guy. Both were into sports and working out so they kinda hit it off pretty well. Everyone else saw this strange since he was mostly hanging out with a weakling. But he didn't care and he resumed his everyday life of working out, hanging out with Yasui, getting ok grades and finally getting to his junior year in one piece. The thing that everyone knows is that Kuba isn't really a smart kid when it comes to academics, but when his chances of going to Hero academia was on the line. He puts his heart and soul into studying, when he has a goal he makes sure that he gives his all. Yasui of course pitched in to help him study, tho in his description it was: "Like teaching a goldfish". In the end he managed to pass (barely) his exams. Now he has the opportunity to join the Hero Academia where he can achieve his dream of becoming a hero!

Relationships:

Misuki Koryusai- Mother of Kuba and a former U.S MMA fighter. She's known for her sticky goo like form in which she can shape to her desire. She also owns her own gym within Musutafu. (Her Father had chameleon like powers, so possibly that is the reason Kuba has a long tongue when using his suit)

Tazawa Koryusai- A Hero who has the quirk of "Bull" which grants him super strength but can expand it by expanding his muscle mass but slows him down.

Takai Koryusai-Annoying little sister who has a quirk climb walls and change color.

Yasui Kei- His best friend that has been with him since Freshman High school. He's known to have no quirk but is a funny and reliable friend. Both him and Kuba look at each other as brothers.



Quirk:
Slime suit: Kuba when not being able to defeat his opponents in his normal physical form, transforms into his humanoid slime form. This slime suit allows Kuba to stick to walls and climb, swallow outside materials to increase his attacks/defense like inserting stone into his body and placing it around his fist to do some extra damage or spit it out at his enemies. Plus he can swallow objects or things that are the size of a dog (full grown shepherd size or toddler) at a maximum weight of 180 lbs, tho he can carry this large weight it does weigh him down costing him a lot of mobility depending on what he has swallowed. Kuba may also manipulate his body for ranged attacks like tentacles to whip at enemies or grab at a range of 10 feet, or throw some of his slime at his opponents to slow them down or capture. His slime form can also grow to increase his strength and ranged attacks for the cost of mobility and speed. His slime is still prone to physical damages do to his body being converted only to 80% Slime and 20% Human (His tongue and teeth are proof).
His major weaknesses include fire which will cause his body to liquefy and hurt any internal organs within, electricity which mainly hurts the organs within, and extreme cold which causes the slime suit to become less mobile and fast.

Spoiler: Slime Suit

Special Moves:
All or nothing: Utilizing every part of his body he quickly assembles about 20 slim like slime tentacles and begins to assault his opponent. Quickly attempting to cause some damage and then aiming for the limbs to ensnare, which he then proceeds to quickly throw as many punches and whip attacks as he can on the opponent.

Items:
A gripper, a bunch of snacks, and a compass

Skills/talents:
(in training still) Mix martial arts
Is good with directions and maps

Theme Song:
(Just for hype reasons)
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-special move needs better limits
-still unclear as to how the physical damaging works with him

 

[Leovonis]

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-what's the difference between flesh and muscle?
-you're gonna have to keep a counter of how much he has to use in the IC
-I'm gonna need way more detail in that hero costume
-I'm not sure if I have your PM with the secret stuff. I need to check, but if I don't, ya gonna have to send it already

-Flesh is more of a spongey goop that he can make, and muscle is a hard fiber that he can put into his structures to either give them some form of movement via muscle spasms. But the most he can do with it right now is give his hands and feet a little boost in power.

-I'll keep a counter, don't you worry.

-Uh... sure? Whaddya want to know buddy?

 

[general ostruppen]

-special move needs better limits
-still unclear as to how the physical damaging works with him

The damage he takes from physical attacks are slightly less damaging as he is made of slime.

 

[yuckeroni]

Relationships: (includes family, friends, lovers, rivals, etc... NPC and player characters alike)

make sure to put ur characters family here and other NPCs u create.

{S}

make sure u send all secret parts of the cs to idea

 

[Susanoo]

make sure to put ur characters family here and other NPCs u create.
make sure u send all secret parts of the cs to idea

Is that it?

 

[yuckeroni]

Is that it?

in order to call this a complete CS and be analyzed by idea or any of the other co-GMs, yes. this does not mean u r accepted yet, there's still a process of editing ur character after it's been looked over.

 

[Idea]

-Uh... sure? Whaddya want to know buddy?

Well, everything. You've basically given me nothing. I need to know how the hero costume works exactly and exactly how it is composed in descriptive form since that image looks way too magi-techy to be approved without you justifying it isn't.

 

[Idea]

The damage he takes from physical attacks are slightly less damaging as he is made of slime.

By 80%?

 

[Idea]

Quote: (Optional)

Name: Rin Shijito



Nicknames: Rin-chan, Rinny



Desired Hero Name: Thunder Cat



Age: 16



Gender: Slight male classification



Chosen Extra Class: General Studies



Appearance: Rin stands about 6 feet tall ,with a slim and, skinny build which many have underestimated others in their early years. Nyx has back length purple colored hair and, brown eyes. He shares some notable cat features, such as a nail and sharp claws that only becomes apparent when angered. Rin wears a white chest binder with a cat print in the middle, he also wears white leggings with black stripes for flexibility. His accessory includes a purple choker necklace and, white 12 inch armband on both of his arms.


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Spoiler: Hero Outfit

Weight: 124



Personality:
Rin has a flirty, playful and cunning type of personality. What separates themselves from other individuals no matter the situation, they always seem to have things under control and, doesn't let a few things get to him. In battle he adapts to his predatory like nature and, always focuses on taking out whatever that's in his way. Rin seems to be fascinated by other people quirks that they encounter, however some disturbs them and, not having any interest in dealing with the one who possess such a weird quirk. Rin can get easily flustered when something seems difficult for him to get out of or any problems that he can't manage to solve on his own. Though he mask it, with a little bit of their confidence. Not wanting to receive any sort of help, unless it's impossible for them to do and, would easily give up. Rin can get short tempered at times and, usually those times are when things doesn't go his way and, his plans just doesn't get go as it should be.



Rin is a very loyal and honest person. He isn't afraid of confronting someone about something he doesn't like. They're quite headstrong and, contains a heavy exterior that he doesn't allow just anyone to run right through. It's hard to bring down rin, words or physical it'll take a handful to defeat him. He doesn't give out a sign of giving up, unless it comes down to that point. Rin has many insecurities and emotional hangups, which in many ways can trigger his lightning quirk as it connects with his emotions. When he snaps and, go haywire his lightning quirk would activate and, will occur more violently. Rin is often struggle with self confidence, and always has doubts if he can even become the person that his mother wish him to be and, afraid of people that ridicule him.



Rin is very smart and, can get an easy understanding of a users quirk through scientific terms, but still struggles trying to prevent his own quirk from getting out of hand.​

Likes: Milk, yarn, cologne, sleep



Dislikes: sour food, dogs, wolves, women.



Fears: His secret as a thief revealed, and spiders.



Mannerisms: Rin would play with his hair a lot when he's nervous.



Backstory: At a young age, it was hard to classify rins gender. Both of his parents wanted a daughter at first and, originally their name was going to be sakura if both of his parents had a full fledged girl, but decided on calling them rin. Rin was often bullied for his gender classification and, called him a creep and a weirdo. When they crossed his breaking point, rin managed to unlock his lightning quirk and, threatened to kill the said bully if they try to mess with them again. Rins father was quite pleased about how they awakened their lightning style quirk, through anger. Their mother worried if rin would follow into their brothers footsteps, because of his temper issues that would need fixing.



As they grew up, rin didn't favor choosing what side to work with. Heros or villains. Rin always felt natural towards everyone and, about everything. Rin played the hero role, just for show and, did their own little thing behind the scene such as being a bold thief is what they really where. They never really got caught stealing anything until one time when he was 14, which was obvious that the authority saw him stealing. However they weren't quite sure who it was, as rin was wearing a stealth outfit during the time and, was lucky to even get out without his parents knowing. Rin always has that agitated feeling when their mother kept reminding him to not be like their brother and, living in his shadows. He practically didn't care and, moved on to what he does best being himself. During their free time rin and, his dad would go and train at the school training ground since he teaches their occasionally. Rin worked non-stop to be what his dad imagine him to be and, once they turned 16 their time to shine would have already came.



Relationships: (includes family, friends, lovers, rivals, etc... NPC and player characters alike)

Quirk: Sparking tundra - Rin has the ability to manipulate both lightning and ice, while rin can lower their body temperature and, uses it to fend off their opponents in battle such as creating clones and, is defense based. His lightning powers are more offensive, as he can heightened their speed by coating themselves with electricity and, generate attacks from within their hands for close combat.



While both of these have major draw backs. His ice can potentially give him frostbite and, dragging down their body temperature to the point it slows him down and, weakened him. His lightning can rapidly change his mood assets very quickly and, adapting towards their more wild and, inhumane characteristics that matches a cat in the wild. If that happens, the best option to get rins full attention is by a ring of a bell or a cologne scent.



Special Moves: Freeze the light is his signature move, in which he manipulate both ice and lightning. Rin body is mostly covered in electricity, such as their hands; feet and, tail. Rins back would appear to developed wings made out of ice. Once the transformation is complete, rin would generate a energy wave based attack composed of both lightning and ice that would deal great damage if it.



(up to 1) {S}


Items: (anything your character brought with them to the dorms and anything they usually carry) {S}

Skills/talents: Very flexible


Theme Song: (optional)
Favorites: (optional)

Other:
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- the image does not respect the type demanded by the CS template
-the personality is seriously lacking serious flaws
-the part in the backstory of stealing stuff without getting caught is quite unrealistic, frankly unbelievable. This is a world where people, law enforcement included, isn't just now equipped with superpowers, but the imposing of laws is doubling down. A child going around stealing stuff Willy nilly , especially one that joins a hero school later (which raises the question: what do you mean by "playing the hero"?), just doesn't quite fly.
-that quirk is horribly broken. A manipulation power in of itself is already pretty broken, lightning powers are , as per the nature of lightning , pretty strong and ice the same. I won't say it's downright rejected as a power, since it is salvageable, but it needs limitations in every area: in what it can do, for how long, to what extent and so on

 

[general ostruppen]

By 80%?

Forget the percentage that's just what how much he is made of, think of his body like a ballistic gel body but slimy. Now imagine only a few organs being in it but no bones which that is filled in by more ballistic gel

 

[Susanoo]

- the image does not respect the type demanded by the CS template
-the personality is seriously lacking serious flaws
-the part in the backstory of stealing stuff without getting caught is quite unrealistic, frankly unbelievable. This is a world where people, law enforcement included, isn't just now equipped with superpowers, but the imposing of laws is doubling down. A child going around stealing stuff Willy nilly , especially one that joins a hero school later (which raises the question: what do you mean by "playing the hero"?), just doesn't quite fly.
-that quirk is horribly broken. A manipulation power in of itself is already pretty broken, lightning powers are , as per the nature of lightning , pretty strong and ice the same. I won't say it's downright rejected as a power, since it is salvageable, but it needs limitations in every area: in what it can do, for how long, to what extent and so on

How is my persona lacking serious flaws when i know i listed some of them? What do you mean by "image doesn't respect the demand of cs" how is it broken and how am i suppose to put more limitations on it?

This is what i mean by helping me out instead of stressing me out.

 

[Idea]

How is my persona lacking serious flaws when i know i listed some of them? What do you mean by "image doesn't respect the demand of cs" how is it broken and how am i suppose to put more limitations on it?

This is what i mean by helping me out instead of stressing me out.

How is my persona lacking serious flaws when i know i listed some of them? What do you mean by "image doesn't respect the demand of cs" how is it broken and how am i suppose to put more limitations on it?

This is what i mean by helping me out instead of stressing me out.

The template says, in the images "anime or description". Your image is neither.

I avise consulting the definition of serious flaw in the rules. If it still doesn't help, the New i'm afraid you're gonna have to wait until Thursday when I am actually able to detail these things better

 

[Susanoo]

The template says, in the images "anime or description". Your image is neither.

I avise consulting the definition of serious flaw in the rules. If it still doesn't help, the New i'm afraid you're gonna have to wait until Thursday when I am actually able to detail these things better

What is the appearance for then if i described what he looks like in appearances?????

Still haven't answer my other questions

 

[Susanoo]

What is the appearance for then if i described what he looks like in appearances?????

Still haven't answer my other questions

My apologies if I'm getting too head over heels.

 

[Idea]

I did answer "you're gonna have to wait until Thursday when's i can be more detailed about these things"

 

[Susanoo]

I did answer "you're gonna have to wait until Thursday when's i can be more detailed about these things"

Well hopefully the ones i updated is better

 

[Idea]

Akira Fujimoto, Parasyte

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General Information

Quote: "Well, just act natural. Whatever that even means for ya."

Name: Akira Fujimoto. {S}

Nicknames: Fuji-san, Aki-kun, Kira, Paras, Nope, That Thing, Cliche Horror Monster, Escaped SCP, Spicy Big Dad and Fujimoto-san.

Age: 41. {S}

Gender: Male. {S}

What They Will Teach: Homeroom.

How He Helped The School: Mainly assisted with the carrying and transferring of heavy materials from one place to another, and all the heavy-lifting in general.

Appearance: Akira Fujimoto takes the appearance of a man with an impressive body physique, being quite muscular in his build. Despite his age, he's got quite the fit body. But once he wears clothing, his appearance of more rugged. With hair of a normal length, with a shade of a nearly complete black but he does have a few gray hairs here and there. It's normally quite messy. Akira's eyes are as shade of light blue, akin to the color of the sky during the day. A notable thing about Akira are his strangely sharp teeth, most noticeably the fangs, which is the only physical mutation he has related to his mother's quirk.

Height: 5 feet and 11 inches(6 feet and 1 inch when covered in full-body armor.).

Weight: 178lbs.

Personality

Personality: Akira's personality is one that gives off a certain vibe of nothing but a carefree feeling, generally being a person who knows what he wants to do with their life and does exactly that. In his case, it's to be a superhero who inspires those who've got low self-esteems to just be themselves. Somewhat of a cliche goal, but it's the goal he has in mind for being a hero. To inspire all of those who don't believe in themselves, and to show that even a guy like him can be an influential person. That kind of thing.

His general behaviour around others is one that's quite friendly, and some might even consider it too friendly. As he disregards the concept of private space itself and often just barges right in without a warning at all, and is often just in your face. Most find it quite uncomfortable, but it's just the way he likes to show affection to others. Though despite this very friendly behaviour, Akira is never one to try and get too close to someone in a personal way. With the main reason being horrible experiences in the past, and fear of losing control but isn't really a flaw of his at all.

Some also describe him as being mischievous, as he's got the habit of sometimes pulling pranks and teasing them to no end. And it makes him appear a bit more immature than one might expect when dealing with a person of his age group. Being the one who's most likely the oldest out of the teachers, people normally expect something more serious from him. Akira's playfulness knows nearly no bounds, nearly no bounds. As there are the times where he comes off as more serious.

And those times are typically when during the many missions he's gone on, but pops a joke or two in to lighten the mood at times. During those times, he shows a higher level of maturity and is more calm as well as composed. His expression goes from laid back to serious quick. It's shocking to the people who've only seen him as carefree to see him as someone who's actually serious. There aren't really that many opportunities to see him like this much. Another thing about him is that he can be quite hotheaded at times, those times being when he isn't fucking around at all.

Another thing about Akira is his determination and dedication towards things that he's more or less obsessed with or just very fond of, an example being when he first started to actually want to really be a hero. Dedication to the dream of wanting to be a hero, his sheer determination to become something that people would look up to rather than look at condescendingly. He'd be quite passionate when it comes to these things, and it shows quite clearly. Especially in the sheer amount of hard work he did when he wanted to become a pro hero.

Likes:
-Smoking
-Alcohol
-Memes
-Drawing
-Coffee
-Art{S}

Dislikes:
-Small Children(3-10 year old kids mostly.)
-Very Sweet Foods
-Noise
-Disturbances
-Commotions
-Pineapples {S}

Fears:
-Loss of control.
-Getting too close with others.
-Hurting people he's fond of.{S}

Mannerisms:
-Has a tendency to grab his chin whenever lying.
-Likes to mindfuck people(adding "No pun intended." after every sentence, look at someone's ear or something behind them to make them just wonder what the fuck he's looking at whenever he speaks to them, saying it's an uppercase or lowercase 7 or any other number when giving his number, etcetera.)
-Smokes a hell of a lot.
-Can be frequently seen speaking to his quirk.

Biography

Backstory: Before the manifestation of his quirk, Akira was the very definition of a normal child in a world where superheroes truly existed. Having been born to a family of 4 people, once the arrival of his little brother came when he was 3 years of age. They weren't a big family, nor were they rich but they were happy being the middle-class they are. The Fujimoto family were just one big happy family, and at that point in time, Akira was just another one of those kids who looked up to heroes and the like.

So, it was only natural for the boy to be excited about getting a quirk. Though little did he know about the change he would very soon have once he actually got it. The manifestation had been chaos for him, and all that he could vividly remember from that day was all the pain he experienced right afterwards. Upon him getting a quirk, it's sentience had been the one thing that fucked his life up until just one more fateful day. The quirk lashed out and just coated itself around him, getting out of control though nowhere as near as powerful as he is in the present.

The lashing out just so happened in their home, and the quirk manifested itself around him and morphed itself to form multiple small tentacles with sharp bladed tips. And these tips, they were definitely sharp. It caused his father to get hurt while trying to calm it down somehow, leaving the man with a very long-term scar that exists on his right forearm to this very day. The pain he felt on that day had been excruciating, because he was still a child. His entire body felt as if it was being poked by little needles all around, especially on his back.

The only way that they got him to actually stop was soon after a few minutes have passed since the manifestation of his quirk, when the pain had just become way too unbearable for him to the point that he had quite literally passed out. Only at that moment had he been able to have been transferred to the hospital, through the help of unconsciousness. It was at that moment that he felt the one thing that he'd be feeling nowadays. A new fear and phobia now having developed itself. The fear of their own quirk.

After the incident, Akira had to go back to school a few days after it. Days of which that Akira didn't look forward to, now just fearing what others would think of him now. The news hadn't been received well by his classmates, as afterwards they'd decided to call him a freak and bully him even despite the appearance of other freaks. Even those that he'd once considered a friend turned against him, and he was just a kid at that age too. He wouldn't be able to take such news well, and negative emotions had started building up extensively. So extensively in fact that it lashed out again, his quirk now just manifesting itself around him the same way he had a few days ago from the first day he'd gotten his quirk. Quirk counseling sessions were given to him too, in order to help with his quirk.

Marking the first years of a more depressed Akira, only barely holding his own head up high through the help of the one person who would never make fun of him, his younger brother Ryuji. Amongst all of the general hate people gave him for no apparent reason, Ryuji was his beacon of hope. The only one to believe in him. The one to tell him that he'd make a great hero when Akira asked if he could even become one, to not listen to what the other shitty students said. Even if some caught word of that, and told him he couldn't, he'd still have at least one supporter.

Those words moved him deeply, and was what that caused him to have a sudden change in everything. That was the trigger for him to start changing himself for the better, to become what he is now. It was decided. When the time came for it, he would become a hero. A hero who would strive to inspire. A sudden decision to let go of the past he'd been holding on so much, and to look towards the present and what he's going to do then. What mattered now was the present, the future could wait.

The quirk counseling sessions had started to get better and better, as he'd actually been cooperative this time. He'd started to gain some form of confidence in himself, and started being the person he wanted to be. His quirk being as aggressive and ruthless as it is, had now been the one to act as the bully now. It wouldn't let him use it, refusing to and only spoke of harsh words in response. But at least it responded. But if he couldn't use it, then he would need to at least do something to make himself stronger. So he started working out.

Following his own training routine, slowly working on himself and slowly progressing more and more on that. But there was still the problem with his quirk being as uncooperative as it is. It was only until a couple more sessions that it actually use his quirk to some degree after so goddamn annoyed by the continuous pleas that it just couldn't take anymore. Though only to the extent of his arms and nothing else, which was fair enough. But upon using it, there was the problem of dealing with the pain that came with it.

As time passed on and on, Akira came to have changed more and more with each passing day since then. People at school started noticing, but he couldn't care less now. He and his quirk had more frequent talks and conversations, though mostly in private as some people would look at them funny when talking in public. It was as if the two finally started to truly coexist with each other in a peaceful manner. And it was all because of just a couple of words that he needed to hear being said to him truthfully. Something as simple as that resulted in all this.

Eventually the boy came to a compromise with his quirk, and it finally allowed him to use Virulent Mass freely. The sheer amount of hard work and dedication came to impress it, as well as the perseverance Akira showed in order to gain such a level of pain tolerance just so he could be a hero. He stopped having quirk counseling sessions soon after gaining it.

And Akira had finally applied himself for a hero's license once he felt he was ready. And through immense dedication, he finally got it at the age 25. And ever since then, he'd been working as a pro hero. Engaging himself in quite a lot of missions of different varieties to help the civilians of Japan in any way he can. As Parasyte, he mostly engages in a lot of villain capturing missions. However he also developed an addiction to smoking and drinking, for the reason of well, he wanted to try them and bam, now he's an alcoholic smoker.

But his parents were worried about one thing as he aged up further as a pro hero. Worried about his love life, or lack there-of due to being so dedicated to being a pro-hero. He had no room for romance in his life, and he was completely fine with it. His younger brother had already gotten married, and he still hasn't despite being the older of the two. Even after reaching forty, he still hadn't gotten married. Too much focus on work.

Now, he's a 41 year old hunk who's decided to move from the exciting life of a pro hero in the outside world to one that was in a classroom simply because he felt like a change of pace was needed. In the least, he was helping out with the creation of PSA. Helping out with the heavy lifting and general construction, he was glad that he got to help out. Also spending some of his money for the school to help. This was an opportunity for him to help those afraid of their own quirks and have low self-esteems, and he wasn't gonna pass it up.

{S}

fuckin hell is this shit

Reason For Becoming a Teacher: The reason he wishes to become a teacher is to help those that were once like him, fearing his own quirk and wishes to teach these students how to get over the fear of their own quirk. And also to help build their confidence, as to create future heroes who possess courage like none other. {S}

Relationships:
-Family
Yusuke Fujimoto, Father - The two share a close bond, despite the many times Akira's quirk has hurt his father physically. His father was one of the main reasons and motivations for him to become a hero. The quirk his father possesses is simply one that allows him to generate mass from his body.

Makoto Kawakami, Mother - Much like his father, the two are close as any child and parent would be. The two share the typical mother and child relationship, and she's also one of the people who have supported him in wanting to become a hero. She possesses a quirk that gives her the traits of a hyena, and is speculated to be what makes his quirk sentient and highly aggressive.

Ryuji Fujimoto, Younger Brother - Akira's only younger brother and the main motivator for him to become a hero as well as the one to make him have a change from a miserable edgy kid to what he is now, the first person to go and think his quirk was actually suited for a hero rather than a soon-to-be villain. He's quite fond and loves his younger brother very much, and is willing to go far to protect him. Their age gap is 3 years, making Ryuji 38. Ryuji's also the one who introduced Akira to memes, so you know who to blame.

Ann Fujimoto, Sister In Law - Ryuji's British wife who's a model. He was the best man at their wedding. They're on good terms, but that's pretty much it.

Futaba & Haru Fujimoto, Twin Nieces - The big spicy dad's nieces. Both of which are big fans of his that look up to the Grotesque Hero.

-Player Characters
TBA

Skills/Talents:
-Pain Tolerance - Throughout the years, Akira has grown a high pain tolerance due to one of his quirk's weaknesses.
-Art - In spite of his big appearance, he's got the hidden talent of being able to create art through drawing pictures and the such.

Theme Song:

Items:
-A flask filled with alcohol.
-A lighter.
-A pack of cigarettes.
-A pen, just in case.
-Wallet with a secret compartment for printed out memes to look at in order to brighten his day.

Other:
-Can be considered a wizard as he is still a virgin to this day.
-Occasionally wears a plain white shirt that has the text 'spicy big dad' put on it in orange comic sans font, because of dad memes.
-Makes original memes in his spare time but never shitposts them.
-Likes to draw weird art in his spare time too.
-Is not married, so no ring.

Hero-Related Items

Hero Name: The Grotesque Hero, Parasyte.

Hero Costume: The appearance that his costume takes is one that's quite simple, consisting of a hoodie and a plain white shirt underneath as well as a pair of black denim jeans. He chose this design for the reason that he thought it would help when it came to stealthier missions, using the hood as a way to conceal his face slightly and to give them less of an accurate description of him if spotted. And to also act as a way for him blend into the crowd, like a gray man. But in actual combat however, he manifests his quirk around his arms. Giving them a more black and red appearance, as well as making it easier for him to morph it into weapons if the situation requires it.

Spoiler: Accurate Depiction

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{S}

Notable Feats as a Hero:
-Has played many major roles when it came to missions requiring the capture of villains.
-Has taken down many villains in his years as a hero.
-Akira has single-handedly taken down multiple groups of villains before.
-He's responsible for the capture of many different villains.

Hero Style: Akira mainly engages himself in capture missions, as he finds his quirk suitable for that kind of work. Though if it comes to combat, Akira does quite well due to his quirk concentrating on mainly melee.

Quirk: Virulent Mass - A transformation type quirk possessed by Akira Fujimoto, allowing him to materialize a mass from straight under his skin, typically taking the appearance of a hideous and strange growth with a shade of black as it's primary color and a multitude of red glowing spots appearing alongside it. Grotesque and often giving people the impression he's a villain rather than a hero, though that's not the reason it's name is Virulent Mass. The most unique and notable thing about this quirk, is the fact it's sentient. Sentient, with a personality that's normally quite aggressive and ruthless.

In the perspective of the mass, Akira was just a host that it can't leave and needed. Like a sort of parasite, but rather in the form of a quirk. A result of the fusion of two quirks, and an ugly one at that but powerful. Virulent Mass is capable of speech, and speaks with one of those typical horror monster voices. It's deep and raspy, but has an aggressive tone. The capabilities of Virulent Mass are plentiful, ranging from offensive, defensive to even supportive ones. Out of the three, the one with the most options is the offensive capabilities category.

In offense, it concentrates on close to medium range combat. Mainly just consisting of melee and almost nothing else. Through Akira coating his own skin(or clothes) in Virulent Mass, he's capable of using it as a way to shape shift in a way. By manifesting the mass and controlling it at will, Akira can change the very shape of the mass to his liking. To a certain degree, of course. So long as the mass is connected to him, he's capable of changing it. The most common thing that Akira manifests his mass as is a grappling whip or a pair of claws, but can manifest multiple other melee-based weapons.

Such as large blades, hammers, whips, knuckles. When it comes to defense, Akira is capable of manifesting Virulent Mass as a barrier by extending it past his hands then just expanding it outwards to the sides but not forward and planting it in the ground. Another way that VM can be used in a defensive way is by manifesting a shield on his arm if he was to protect himself only or someone he's keeping close to him physically. But if he's protecting himself, Akira is capable of manifesting the mass as a durable full-body armor.

Though that isn't the only thing this quirk is capable of, through simply coating himself in the mass and not manipulating it in any way, Akira can strengthen and make himself more durable. Coating only his arms or legs, he can enhance his strength drastically. When arms are coated in the mass, Akira can lift approximately 22 times his own weight, coming at a whopping 3916lbs/1776.268kg. So at most, Akira is capable of lifting nearly 2 US Tons. In terms of durability however, Akira is capable of of withstanding at most a 2 grenade blasts. The maximum range that he can manifest VM at is 16m.

But with such a quirk, also comes with some extreme consequences for using it. The first of these weaknesses is one that might not come off as obvious to anyone at first, but manifesting Virulent Mass will hurt Akira. It's a feeling that he often describes as being poked by needles softly in a constant fashion so long as he keeps it manifested, and will only grow into more pain as he keeps it up for longer. But hardly ever noticeable by others, as he's grown to be tolerant of it to a certain extent.

Another one of these weaknesses is a simple time limit, where he can only keep it manifested for so long before it retreats back under his skin to 'recharge' in a way. Akira can only keep Virulent Mass for about 32 minutes, before it retreats. And at certain marks of time, the pain will only get stronger and stronger. By 5 minutes, the pain is doubled. And it keeps on doubling as 5 minutes pass more and more, it's around the 20 minute mark that Akira can't keep up the pain tolerance anymore. After it retreats, the quirk requires 20 minutes before being able to be used again.

The last and final weakness he's got is the fact that through negative emotions that Akira might possess at times, those emotions have the potential to make him lose him control in exchange for power. It's the one thing that he's afraid of about his quirk, and if he were to lose all control of his body, there is quite a high chance for Virulent Mass to take over his body instead. And if the aggressive and ruthless VM were to come out, there would only bring disaster. But he's never lost control once before, so the chances of this happening are quite low.

As per usual, to make this quirk simpler to understand, try thinking of Tokoyami Fumikage's Dark Shadow Quirk. Then change Dark Shadow being docile to extremely aggressive. This is the product, just more disgusting.

Spoiler: Weapon & Armor Depictions

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His claws.

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His whip.

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His blade(s).

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His armor.

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Special Moves:
-Nidus Virulence - A special move in which Akira manifests his quirk around his arms before drilling them into the ground to create a narrow path of spikes in front of him.

-Redlight Frenzy - A move where Akira manifests his quirk around his arms and morphs it into a pair of blades, then Akira jumps high into the air through manifesting powerful springs of VM underneath his feet and releasing them. Upon coming down, he comes aiming to slash whatever he's targeting. Once down on the ground again, he then does a series of slashes.

-Grappling Hurl - Manifesting his signature grappling whip, he then launches it towards his target with the intent to wrap it around them tightly then lift. Once lifted, he hurls them with as much force as he can.

-Serpentine Wrap - Quite like Grappling Hurl, he manifests his grappling whip then launches it towards his target with the intent to wrap it around them tightly like how a snake coils itself around it's prey, then Akira squeezes hard. It's his main way of capturing villains.


{S}

-please remove the marks from the secret system from parts where you are not using it, it's confusing
-personality needs serious flaws
-regarding the incident of his first quirk manifestation, quirks from children range from sparkling hands (in really strong quirks like bakugou's) to hardened knuckles and such. Basically, when a quirk first manifests it's too weak to do anything. The kind of incident you describe would be impossible.
-why do people hate him for no reason? I certainly don't believe rumors about that incident spreading since only his family was even present and they wouldn't go mouthing about it. It's not like you need that hate either, it has little to no actual impact on the personality or backstory. It just seems like a bit of pointless drama that enhances nothing and wastes potential
-before I review the quirk itself, it seems to me like it's actual concept is a little too vague and scattered. Could you please summarize it in a sentence (of course, without using references)?

 

[Roxasarass]

-please remove the marks from the secret system from parts where you are not using it, it's confusing
-personality needs serious flaws
-regarding the incident of his first quirk manifestation, quirks from children range from sparkling hands (in really strong quirks like bakugou's) to hardened knuckles and such. Basically, when a quirk first manifests it's too weak to do anything. The kind of incident you describe would be impossible.
-why do people hate him for no reason? I certainly don't believe rumors about that incident spreading since only his family was even present and they wouldn't go mouthing about it. It's not like you need that hate either, it has little to no actual impact on the personality or backstory. It just seems like a bit of pointless drama that enhances nothing and wastes potential
-before I review the quirk itself, it seems to me like it's actual concept is a little too vague and scattered. Could you please summarize it in a sentence (of course, without using references)?

with all the points you've brought up, would it be alright if i put the wip sign back on? after much thought on what to respond, your points have given me inspiration to revamp the entirety of the bio to hopefully create a much better backstory that makes more sense. with (hopefully) better reasons as to the reason why people don't like him(but at a much later age instead), and etcetera. also, here's that quirk summary in a sentence.

Virulent Mass(in a nutshell) - A transformation type quirk that allows the user to host an aggressive sentient flesh monster which pains the user whenever used that he can materialize from his body and use said flesh monster's mass to form a multitude of constructs and diminish it as freely as he can materialize like a sort of extension.

 

[Idea]

with all the points you've brought up, would it be alright if i put the wip sign back on? after much thought on what to respond, your points have given me inspiration to revamp the entirety of the bio to hopefully create a much better backstory that makes more sense. with (hopefully) better reasons as to the reason why people don't like him(but at a much later age instead), and etcetera. also, here's that quirk summary in a sentence.

Virulent Mass(in a nutshell) - A transformation type quirk that allows the user to host an aggressive sentient flesh monster which pains the user whenever used that he can materialize from his body and use said flesh monster's mass to form a multitude of constructs and diminish it as freely as he can materialize like a sort of extension.

Yeah feel free to revamp the character if you want.

As for the quirk though, that's way too vague of a power. Words like "monster" and "constructs" can mean practically anything , making he actual properties of the quirk about as unclear as they could possibly be. Please modify the quirk into something more concrete and less malleable.

 

[GinkyGotBack]

"I want to be someone that others aspire to be. That sounds conceited doesn't it..?"​

Name: Mizuki "Mizu" Suima
Desired Hero Name: Land Shark
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Chosen Extra Class: General Studies

Appearance:
Mizu is a young man of above-average height and slim to athletic build. He has black hair with dyed green bangs that frame his face.

Spoiler: (Soon to be) Hero Costume

Mizu wears black long leg swim pants with a green pattern on them. He wears green tinted goggles over his eyes so he can see while swimming underground. This outfit allows Mizu to use his quirk comfortably and with ease.
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Height: 5'9 ft.
Weight: 128 lb.
Personality:
Mizu is somewhat socially awkward, which is usually apparent when interacting with him for the first time. Mizu unknowingly avoids making eye contact with others and can often be seen slouched over. When he starts to get nervous, Mizu speaks very quietly. To make up for this, Mizu tries to stand within a few inches of a person's face so they can hear him better. Because of this shyness, Mizu often has trouble communicating with his teammates, and so he often leaves the strategizing to others.

Mizu is most awkward around girls, especially ones he likes. When a girl he's interested in approaches him, Mizu is unable to form words and starts to break into a cold sweat. The type of girls he finds most attractive tend to be aloof and prissy, although he can't explain why he feels that way.

Mizu can also be rather geeky at times, often obsessing over his favorite manga or music when left to his own devices. However, he would be embarrassed if anyone discovered this side of him and so he goes to great lengths to make sure no one finds out.

While he doesn't believe himself to be useless, he doesn't see himself as anything special either. This coupled with his awkwardness makes Mizu dislike being the center of attention. As such, compliments make him somewhat uncomfortable. Mizu does not feel like he can live up any high expectations people might place on him and thus begins to worry that he might disappoint them.

Despite this, Mizu is usually a calm and pensive person although this sometimes results in losing himself in thought. Both of these aspects come in handy in combat and missions as it lets him keep his nerves and continue to think clearly in high-stress situations. While his lack of confidences may occasionally cause him to underestimate his abilities, it in return prevents him from underestimating others making Mizu a cautious and reliable ally as well as a dangerous and crafty opponent.

Of all of Mizu's flaws, his eagerness to please others may be his worst. Mizu is afraid of disagreeing with or displeasing his friends and teammates, and so he puts himself at risk and keeps his opinions to himself for their sake. In a team mission or conversation, Mizu never criticizes or speaks honestly, often doing things he doesn't think is a good idea or agreeing with people when he thinks they're wrong.

Likes

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  • Electronic music
  • Fighting games
  • Prissy and aloof girls
  • Swimming

Dislikes

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  • Getting compliments
  • Embarrassing himself
  • Spinach and other bitter vegetables
  • Working out in front of other people

Fear

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  • Any reptile or amphibian
  • Letting people down
  • Conflict/Disagreeing with his Friends/Teammates

Mannerisms

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  • Blinks twice when scared/surprised
  • Leans in close to peoples faces when he talks to them
  • Slouches

Backstory:

Mizu lives a quaint and peaceful life with his mother and younger brother. For as long as he can remember, Mizu has always loved to swim, and although he's never had much faith in his skill as a swimmer, people he knew would always praise his abilities. His younger brother, Sui has always looked up to him and always told his Mizu that he wanted to be just like him. This adoration only grew when Mizu developed his quirk and led to Sui believing his brother would become a great hero.

Mizu was in despair thinking about how disappointed he would be if he didn't become a good role model for him. His mother, who was always supportive of her sons convinced Mizu that if he wanted to become someone his brother could look up to, that he would have to try. And so although he was a bit reluctant, Mizu applied to Peace Sign Academia in hopes of bettering himself so he could be someone Sui can be proud of.

Relationships:
Aoi Suima - Mother (39)
Sui Suima - Brother (15)

Quirk:
Swim
Mizu's Quirk allows him to swim in solid matter such as grounds and walls as if it were water, the latter even allowing him to swim upwards, seemingly disregarding gravity. It also allows Mizu to submerge into the ground as if he were swimming underwater. Mizu can also dive into the ground to avoid colliding with it as if he were performing a high dive. Objects that Mizu swims through retain their physical properties such as weight and solidity regarding other people than himself.

Mizu cannot breathe while submerged in the ground and so he must surface for air every so often. Mizu is on average able to hold his breath for up to four minutes.

Mizu is unable to swim through objects that are smaller than he is as there wouldn't be enough space for him to fit. It would be like someone trying to swim in a puddle or a raindrop. Mizu is, however, able to swim through moving objects such as a car or a huge chunk of earth thrown into the air. Normally, it would not be possible for Mizu to swim through people or animals. However, that is only because there wouldn't be enough space for him to swim. This would change if he came across a living being that was much, much larger than himself.

Mizu is unable to make different parts of his body swim as opposed to using his whole body. That is unless there is something to hold him back from falling in like someone holding onto him or a rope tied to his leg that keeps him from fully submerging.

Special Moves:
Dive Down
Mizu dives underground and swims around his opponent in an attempt to sneak up on them. Once he's behind them, he suddenly surfaces, and either attacks them or grabs onto them to keep them from moving.
Items: N/A
Skills/Talents:

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  • Apart from when he uses his Quirk, Mizu would often swim in his free time back in his hometown. He can swim like an expert and has often been praised for his abilities as a swimmer.
  • Mizu is a natural at video games, especially fighting games. He often mains 'charge' characters.

Spoiler: Theme Song

Favorites:
Loves playing fighting games, his guiltiest pleasure are the ones with attractive female characters and jiggle physics.

 

[Idea]

(give me the appearance like the appearance section, but also give me a detailed description of the function of anything that isn´t merely aesthetic)

Appearance: (anime or description)

As you can see the template makes a clear request that only anime images or a description are used in all appearances. I realize this is a limiting demand, but it serves both to keep the aesthetic of the roleplay as well as to keep me more objective, without getting distracted by the sheer ugliness that I find most realistic of semi-realistic images to possess.
In short, that picture is agaisnt the demands of the template, even if you did add a description.

Rin has many insecurities and emotional hangups, which in many ways can trigger his lightning quirk as it connects with his emotions.

Well, and those insecurities and emotional hang-ups are?

Rin is very smart and, can get an easy understanding of a users quirk through scientific terms, but still struggles trying to prevent his own quirk from getting out of hand.

This is pure BS and should be removed at once. Even not considering that this is a skill not a personality, understanding quirks scientifically is something no one in the boku no hero universe actually managed to do. Ever. Some info has been found, but an overall understanding of quirks in general, or worse, an actua understanding of individual quirks at a scientific level at a glance, that's probably just impossible.

At a young age, it was hard to classify rins gender. Both of his parents wanted a daughter at first and, originally their name was going to be sakura if both of his parents had a full fledged girl, but decided on calling them rin.

This may just be my own ignorance on the matter speaking but how exactly is classifying a gender difficult? I mean, I get that some people have difficulty classifying their own gender out of some kind of confusion or something along those lines, but classifying someone else, or a young child with gender identity issues (at an age where they would barely be able to speak much less be able to question their own born gender) seems a bit too far fetched.

Their mother worried if rin would follow into their brothers footsteps, because of his temper issues that would need fixing.

And his brother did what?

Rin had been a thief for awhile, until his long run lasted when rin turned 15 and, had gotten caught by the authorities. He ended up having very little respect towards authoritative figures and, everything got a lot more interesting when his dad got involved.



His father contemplated if rin should stay caged up like his brother, despite giving his other son chances. He came up with a conclusion, that if he is caught stealing again his secret as a thief under a different face will be revealed to the whole school. Rin had no other choice but, to a bid by those commands and, be an "angel" rather than a careless vigilant. His father didn't want to look like a fool in front of everyone else, because of his son doing illegal act throughout town.

I think you may not have understood what I was implying the first time.

If you are arrested at such a young age, for a crime as serious as theft, even if by some miracle you are out of prison in time to attend a normal highschool at the right age, you wouldn't be allowed into a HERO school, If your character, a kid, went out and started robbing, that character is out of this roleplay. Committing crimes before the start of this roleplay is a BIG no no unless you have a really amazing justification as to why they didn't get caught.

Quirk: Sparking tundra - Rin has the ability to manipulate both lightning and ice, while rin can lower their body temperature and, uses it to fend off their opponents in battle such as creating clones and, is defense based. His lightning powers are more offensive, as he can heightened their speed by coating themselves with electricity and, generate attacks from within their hands for close combat.



While both of these have major draw backs. His ice can potentially give him frostbite and, dragging down their body temperature to the point it slows him down and, weakened him. His lightning can rapidly change his mood assets very quickly and, adapting towards their more wild and, inhumane characteristics that matches a cat in the wild. If that happens, the best option to get rins full attention is by a ring of a bell or a cologne scent.

I'll be honest with you here. The more I think about it, the more I think I should just outright reject this power. I simply can't see it working. However, it still isn't completely unfeasable that it might work, so I'm gonna give you one more chance to show me something that's at least fixable.
To this end, I will give a list of problems with elemental type powers, and possibly some of your elements in specific:
-elemental powers have infinite resources: especially if you generate ice and eletricity yourself, an elemental power can just manipulate powers like this indefintely.
-defintion is poorly defined: what is lightning, what is ice? Because depending on the exact defintion, things change a lot.
-time and space of manipulation are bound only by the imagination: if you can generate it, who says you can't do it inside your enemy's body for example? And how fast and for how long exactly? Generally, you are either extremely slow or you are effectively untouchable with these powers.
-the difference between states of matter is basically meanignless: if an element can change between being fluid and solid at your whim, you can hit without being hit back without worries
- THE SHEER AMOUNT OF OPTIONS: elemental manipulation gives you waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too many options in what to do

now for some problems with your elements in specific:
-two rips offs in one, one strong, one broken, both upgraded without even the fact that they are jointed here: You took Todoroki and Kaminari, gave them both a boost to one's ice powers and the other's eletric powers (going from just lowering temperature and generating ice to ice manipulation and going from slight eletricity generation with potential side effects to full LIGHTNING manipulation) and then put them together.
-ice is deadly and can cause serious injuries just by getting caught in it. But ignoring that, freezing things, especially if you can do it fast, it's quite the broken ability, as I'm sure the anime itself made quite a point of in the first season and second as well.
-lighting powers are plain instakill. You simply CAN'T hit someone with lightning and expect them to survive without serious injuries.

PS: I just realized this, but you're gonna have to explain to me in one effect how lightning and ice are connected, otherwise these are two quirks not one and I canot approve it.


So, try to give it a go at fixing these problems but you may also just want to scratch this ability completely. It's as I said earlier completely broken on all sides, and frankly not too imaginative, I know you can do a lot better. But I'm still gonna give you this chance if you really want this ability, so good luck.

 

[Susanoo]

As you can see the template makes a clear request that only anime images or a description are used in all appearances. I realize this is a limiting demand, but it serves both to keep the aesthetic of the roleplay as well as to keep me more objective, without getting distracted by the sheer ugliness that I find most realistic of semi-realistic images to possess.
In short, that picture is agaisnt the demands of the template, even if you did add a description.



Well, and those insecurities and emotional hang-ups are?


This is pure BS and should be removed at once. Even not considering that this is a skill not a personality, understanding quirks scientifically is something no one in the boku no hero universe actually managed to do. Ever. Some info has been found, but an overall understanding of quirks in general, or worse, an actua understanding of individual quirks at a scientific level at a glance, that's probably just impossible.



This may just be my own ignorance on the matter speaking but how exactly is classifying a gender difficult? I mean, I get that some people have difficulty classifying their own gender out of some kind of confusion or something along those lines, but classifying someone else, or a young child with gender identity issues (at an age where they would barely be able to speak much less be able to question their own born gender) seems a bit too far fetched.


And his brother did what?


I think you may not have understood what I was implying the first time.

If you are arrested at such a young age, for a crime as serious as theft, even if by some miracle you are out of prison in time to attend a normal highschool at the right age, you wouldn't be allowed into a HERO school, If your character, a kid, went out and started robbing, that character is out of this roleplay. Committing crimes before the start of this roleplay is a BIG no no unless you have a really amazing justification as to why they didn't get caught.


I'll be honest with you here. The more I think about it, the more I think I should just outright reject this power. I simply can't see it working. However, it still isn't completely unfeasable that it might work, so I'm gonna give you one more chance to show me something that's at least fixable.
To this end, I will give a list of problems with elemental type powers, and possibly some of your elements in specific:
-elemental powers have infinite resources: especially if you generate ice and eletricity yourself, an elemental power can just manipulate powers like this indefintely.
-defintion is poorly defined: what is lightning, what is ice? Because depending on the exact defintion, things change a lot.
-time and space of manipulation are bound only by the imagination: if you can generate it, who says you can't do it inside your enemy's body for example? And how fast and for how long exactly? Generally, you are either extremely slow or you are effectively untouchable with these powers.
-the difference between states of matter is basically meanignless: if an element can change between being fluid and solid at your whim, you can hit without being hit back without worries
- THE SHEER AMOUNT OF OPTIONS: elemental manipulation gives you waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too many options in what to do

now for some problems with your elements in specific:
-two rips offs in one, one strong, one broken, both upgraded without even the fact that they are jointed here: You took Todoroki and Kaminari, gave them both a boost to one's ice powers and the other's eletric powers (going from just lowering temperature and generating ice to ice manipulation and going from slight eletricity generation with potential side effects to full LIGHTNING manipulation) and then put them together.
-ice is deadly and can cause serious injuries just by getting caught in it. But ignoring that, freezing things, especially if you can do it fast, it's quite the broken ability, as I'm sure the anime itself made quite a point of in the first season and second as well.
-lighting powers are plain instakill. You simply CAN'T hit someone with lightning and expect them to survive without serious injuries.

PS: I just realized this, but you're gonna have to explain to me in one effect how lightning and ice are connected, otherwise these are two quirks not one and I canot approve it.


So, try to give it a go at fixing these problems but you may also just want to scratch this ability completely. It's as I said earlier completely broken on all sides, and frankly not too imaginative, I know you can do a lot better. But I'm still gonna give you this chance if you really want this ability, so good luck.

Maybe i should just leave, would that make anything better? And that picture is for the costume not the entire character. I'm starting to get irritated, I'm trying and you're not giving me any sort of slack. Just bs here and there.

 

[Susanoo]

I'm doing as much as I possibly can and I'm really restraining myself from a temper tantrum.

 

[yuckeroni]

Maybe i should just leave, would that make anything better? And that picture is for the costume not the entire character. I'm starting to get irritated, I'm trying and you're not giving me any sort of slack. Just bs here and there.

we've ALL been through this process... if you can't handle constructive criticism, then maybe this isn't for you...