Lil Shirou
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I doont think it matters much. It just a name
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Wished there was a laughing reactionGod Phantom Thief of Hearts you can't ask people why they're white...
umm it can be multigendered?Milo's a boy's name tho
A Like from the GM or mods means you're acceptedExcuse me everyone ... But does a Like mean your accepted, or are you free to RP as long as you posted your character ? I didn't see any of the procedures for how the GM accepting in the Sign-Up, so I'm hoping I'm not making a mistake somewhere that's causing my character to be denied .
Thank you for speaking what we wanted to say to AndritaIT'S THAT TIME AGAIN! CRITIQUES FROM ME!
The Mad Queen You all ready know you're accepted
Phantom Thief of Hearts We already discussed you're new characters, so . . .
Peach Tea
A Common Man I'd consider Steven to be a Gamma threat
- your character's backstory doesn't seem to make sense, to me at least. If Milo was born during the Greek age, how would she have met Doctor Strange? Since she was around 16 when she befriended the alchemist, that'd mean within the next three years she'd already know Doctor Strange, who debuted in the 60's. Even so, he still wouldn't have been present in the Greek age.
- Hypnos doesn't exist within the MARVEL universe (or the lore we know), which means he wouldn't exist in this universe
- What forms of energy is she projecting?
- (nice drawing btw)
Andrita
As of now, your character is not accepted
- "Beyond Omega" threat? I don't mean to be rude, but, no . . .
- This RP has enough Alpha/Omega characters as is
- Your elaboration on her ability to create portals is a little fuzzy to me. Do these portals resemble singularities/black holes? What energy are they mimicking?
- Her weaknesses are rather psychological than physical -- mental blocks, if you will. Karcen holds a good point against you
Can it not be Omega or Alpha? We have a lot of those already.- I'll downgrade her to Omega for the sole purpose of this thread. I just wanted to make a Beyond Omega with Portal Abilities and finding versatility with it...
- ... Okay.
- It's more like tapping into her own 'potential' to create these portals, if you will. She is more or less literally 'weaponizing her own potential' , which due to said stated potential,is why her portal abilities are so powerful .
- Psychological Weaknesses are more effective to me as a RPer than Physical, because with Physical you can easily get pass them depending on what happens in the RP. With Psychological, deepened wounds they take far more time to heal, if not forever.
- Literally anyone in the RP could've beaten her based off of the weaknesses I gave her
... What exactly do you want me to adjust ?
Oops, my bad, I meant to say that the design would’ve been made after the Greeks god Hypnos, so it’s based off of what the Greeks believed in for gods. I also meant that when she met doctor Strange centuries would have already gone by when she looked 16. Her aging is a little bit slower. And then I will work on the weaknesses and other stuff.IT'S THAT TIME AGAIN! CRITIQUES FROM ME!
The Mad Queen You all ready know you're accepted
Phantom Thief of Hearts We already discussed you're new characters, so . . .
Peach Tea
A Common Man I'd consider Steven to be a Gamma threat
- your character's backstory doesn't seem to make sense, to me at least. If Milo was born during the Greek age, how would she have met Doctor Strange? Since she was around 16 when she befriended the alchemist, that'd mean within the next three years she'd already know Doctor Strange, who debuted in the 60's. Even so, he still wouldn't have been present in the Greek age.
- Hypnos doesn't exist within the MARVEL universe (or the lore we know), which means he wouldn't exist in this universe
- What forms of energy is she projecting?
- (nice drawing btw)
Andrita
As of now, your character is not accepted
- "Beyond Omega" threat? I don't mean to be rude, but, no . . .
- This RP has enough Alpha/Omega characters as is
- Your elaboration on her ability to create portals is a little fuzzy to me. Do these portals resemble singularities/black holes? What energy are they mimicking?
- Her weaknesses are rather psychological than physical -- mental blocks, if you will. Karcen holds a good point against you
No it's the fact we have too many Omega/Alpha Level characters.... Fine. I'll change it to an Inhuman or Meta-Human and remove the stuff about her being a Mutant . Is that it ?
Especially the realm of the ONE ABOVE ALLquestion why does she need portals that can go into every reality and threaten the realm of the one above all to be versatile?
question why does she need portals that can go into every reality and threaten the realm of the one above all to be versatile?
Yep.Especially the realm of the ONE ABOVE ALL
to be fair, it's safe to assume that Hypnos exists within the Marvel Universe... also her age should be how legitimately old she is not how old she appears to be to avoid confusion.Oops, my bad, I meant to say that the design would’ve been made after the Greeks god Hypnos, so it’s based off of what the Greeks believed in for gods. I also meant that when she met doctor Strange centuries would have already gone by when she looked 16. Her aging is a little bit slower. And then I will work on the weaknesses and other stuff.
And thus Amelia is a no good mary sueThe core idea of the character is too powerful. When you name-drop the omnipotent embodiment of the company being in jeopardy, you're too strong.
Yep.
I also got a name and a face for that mysterious alchemist, friend.Oops, my bad, I meant to say that the design would’ve been made after the Greeks god Hypnos, so it’s based off of what the Greeks believed in for gods. I also meant that when she met doctor Strange centuries would have already gone by when she looked 16. Her aging is a little bit slower. And then I will work on the weaknesses and other stuff.