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[CloudyBlueDay]

Bio + Family relationships finished! Thoughts?

DEVAN, A

• Heroism
• Statistics

• Aspect	Scale
  COUR	?????????	07
  ALTR	?????????	03
  ORDR	?????????	01
  KIND	?????????	02
  PRCT	?????????	03
  DIPL	?????????	01

• Aspect	Scale
  HLTH	?????????	03
  STRN	?????????	02
  DEFN	?????????	03
  AGLT	?????????	04
  INTL	?????????	04
  WILL	?????????	07

• General
• Appearance
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name
  
  Alexis Akiko Devan
  
  Nicknames
  
  Alex, Al
  
  Codename
  
  N/A
  
  Gender
  
  Female
  
  Age
  
  Seventeen || 17
  
  Rank
  
  A
  
  Limiter
  
  Active, Lvl 3
  
  Role
  
  Student
  
  
• Race
  
  Japanese American
  
  Hair
  
  Straight black
  
  Eyes
  
  Black
  
  Height
  
  5'9"
  
  Figure
  
  Slightly curvy, fit
  
  Notes
  
  Has a secret tattoo on her
  
  https://www.tattoodo.com/images/690/581.webpleft hip
  
  https://www.tattoodo.com/images/690/581.webp
  
  
  
• Brave
  
  
  Alexis is fearless; nothing or no one seems to intimidate her, no matter how tough looking they are, she always rises up to the challenge. It gives her a thrill, actually, to go against odds.
  
  
  Quick Witted
  
  
  Alex can make good decisions on the fly. A lot of the time it works out for her, as she's got a good problem-solving mind, but sometimes making decisions so fast doesn't always end up so good.
  
  
  Realistic
  
  
  Alex chases dreams that she knows can be achieved. Perhaps she might not be as imaginative as some others, but it allows Alex to be confident in the goals she sets and it means she is a grounded person.
  
  
  Brutish
  
  
  Alex is very brutish in her actions -- she laughs at people's misfortune, communicates through punching you in the arm or shoving you, swears, curses, defies authority.. she is certainly not a model student.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Alexis only heard stories of her beautiful mother when her father was drunk, and not dead asleep or swinging at her. But the story changed every time, from princesses and dungeons to forbidden love and getting lost in Tokyo. The only thing Alex knew to be true was the picture she'd stolen from his wallet. Her mom was pretty -- too pretty to be her mom, she always thought. Angelic looking and almost fantasy-like, she couldn't ever imagine such a perfect being was related to her, and she'd consider the picture something her father had gotten off the internet if she thought he was smart enough to do that, and if he wasn't beside her in the picture.
  
  
  Yes, just two short years after Alexis had been born, her mother, Aiya Hashimato, had been killed when a man shot her in the chest three times for the paper in her wallet. Her father never recovered. They were already living in a shoddy neighborhood, filled with gang activity and shady figures, because her mother had been an illegal immigrant they were strapped for cash and couldn't afford any better place. So her father simply fell into the crowd; got high, got drunk, and was never really there for her like a father should have been.
  
  
  It wasn't like Alexis turned out better; she grew up the same. While she certainly was the one making sure her father didn't starve to death, she was also hanging with the wrong kids, doing stupid things at a very young age, but she learned how to handle herself. Though she was bitter towards her father, for never getting to have a real childhood, and always caring for him and not the other way around. But she lived like that for a long time, doing everything to keep them afloat, though why, she never knew.
  
  
  When she was sixteen, they had a fight. He was yelling at her because she never bought the things he wanted when she went grocery shopping, as if he had a right to yell at her about that. She made the money -- she sold whatever she could, had a part time job at the burger place down the street, and still he yelled at her. Alexis remembers getting so angry; not only about whatever stupid thing he was saying to her while intoxicated now, but all the times he should've been better. Unfortunately, around that time was also when her powers had begun to awaken.
  
  
  She set the place on fire.
  
  
  Her father died in that fire, and only the smallest part of her feels guilty about it. Just the teeniest, tiniest part. Or at least, that's what she tells herself. Alexis was sent to live with her grandmother in Baltimore, who's basically half dead, and rather then be sent "contained", it was agreed she attend AEGIS. Anymore slip ups and it was not going to be good. She's only been here a few months, but so far so good. No major incidents, though she does perhaps stick out her tongue at the occasional teacher.
  
  
  
• 
  
  
  John Devan -- Father -- Deceased
  
  
  A once pleasant man who became a drug addict and alcoholic after his wife was killed. He was a pretty terrible father to Alexis, and after a fight, she accidentally lit the house on fire and he died. She pretends like he got what he deserved, but she feels pretty guilty about it.
  
  
  Aiya Hashimato -- Mother -- Deceased
  
  
  She was killed by a robber when Alexis was two years old, and Alex has no memories of her. She does keep the photo that her father had of her on her at all times, though, or at least tries too. It gives her some sense of security and makes her wonder if she could've ever had a kinder life.
  
  
  May Devan -- Grandmother -- Alive
  
  
  Alexis was sent to live with her after she killed her father, and to be honest, Alexis has never liked a family member better then her Grandmother. Sure, she sleeps all day and can't see or hear for shit, but when they do talk she says stupidly funny things.
  
  
  
• Main Power
  
  
  Pyrokenisis -- Alexis has the ability to control fire. She can ignite a flame in her palm, breathe fire out of her mouth, throw fireballs, and more. She can also control existing fire, such as ones not lit by her. Alexis' own fire cannot harm her, but fire created from other sources if she doesn't take control of it in time, can.
  
  
  • Supporting Power A: Fire Mimicry/Flame Form -- A interesting extension of fire manipulation, Alex's powers activate when she musters up the focus and the energy to switch into her Flame Form, as she calls it. When she turns on her flame form, her entire body becomes made of fire. Intangible, but touching her burns. Her body acts exactly like fire, and Alexis can will the fire of her body to grow and shrink, though it always retains some sort of human shape or figure. Being in her Flame Form makes her fire abilities stronger and more powerful, but also harder to control, and easier to extinguish.
    
  • Supporting Power B: Flame Wings -- Using her pyrokenisis, Alexis sprouts wings made of fire on her back and is able to fly with them as long as she maintains the energy to maintain them.
    
  
  
  Limitations
  
  
  • Weakness 1: --- Energy - Alexis's powers are tied to her energy. If she is too tired, too weak, or even mentally exhausted, her powers will be weak or she might not even be able to use them.
    
  • Weakness 2: --- Emotion - If Alexis is emotionally unstable, her powers can fall out of her control. Fire is an unstable element, and just light the tiniest of fires in her palm without letting it go out of control takes a lot of willpower.
    
  • Weakness 3: --- Water - Dumping a bucket of water on Alexis would extinguish her powers until she dries off, and being drenched in water in her Flame Form could very well kill her instantly, as her flame form is pure fire.
    
  • Weakness 4: --- Fire Extinguishers - As humiliating as it may be, a Fire Extinguisher will extinguish Alexis's powers the exact same way as water might.
    
  
  
  
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[yoikes]

@too much idea[/URL]
I personally think he'd be most definitely ranked an S.


Supers are classified on how much potential danger and destruction they can bring and given your descriptions, he sounds pretty damn dangerous if he's allowed to tag more than a few supers at a time.

Hm... I should limit the number of people he could tag (5?)

@too much idea
Profile looks nice. Welian would prefer no real-world pictures, though. That's probably the only issue I see with it, besides some spellcheck stuff, but that's not too problematic.

Whoops i forgot about it!

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Here's a modification of the profile pic. I found a free ap to turn pictures into 'drawings' for my iPad. Found it helpful in making a pic for Solo, along with some filters.

Thank you, but i think i will look for another picture for Dom


@CloudyBlueDay Now that's a grim bio. I really like the idea that fire extinguishers could be used to take her down! What about rain?

 

[CloudyBlueDay]

@CloudyBlueDay[/URL] Now that's a grim bio. I really like the idea that fire extinguishers could be used to take her down! What about rain?

Yup, I specialize in characters with tragic backstories. And yeah haha, rain could force her powers to sizzle out too!

 

[yoikes]

Yup, I specialize in characters with tragic backstories. And yeah haha, rain could force her powers to sizzle out too!

 

[Necessity4Fun]

I know it's late but, I finished Kendrick's CS WOOHOO


I got REALLY carried away with the History tho >.< It might be hard to read


(IDK if I can shorten it...)


Also toy-family has been moved to the gallery section, it just seemed too little to put in the relationships tab xD (There's obviously more but, I'll add their references as I mention them)


@Manic Muse How much is Izzy's popularity as a troublemaker known at the school? Would Kendri hear about her at some point? And would her hear about him?

HAYWOOD, K

• Heroism
• Statistics

• Aspect	Scale
  COUR	?????????	03
  ALTR	?????????	04
  ORDR	?????????	08
  KIND	?????????	03
  PRCT	?????????	02
  DIPL	?????????	07

• Aspect	Scale
  HLTH	?????????	01
  STRN	?????????	02
  DEFN	?????????	01
  AGLT	?????????	02
  INTL	?????????	03
  WILL	?????????	05

• General
• Appearance
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name
  
  Kendrick Haywood
  
  Nicknames
  
  Ken, Kendri,
  
  Kendy.
  
  Codename
  
  The Conductor (
  
  Puppeteer
  
  )
  
  Gender
  
  Male
  
  Age
  
  Sixteen
  
  Rank
  
  C Rank
  
  Limiter
  
  Inactive, Level 1
  
  Role
  
  Student
  
  
• Race
  
  Caucasian (British)
  
  Hair
  
  Blueish-Black
  
  Eyes
  
  Blue
  
  Height
  
  6' 2''
  
  Figure
  
  114.6 lbs, Athletic looking with some muscle mass.
  
  Notes
  
  Sometimes he is seem wearing a hat, similar to those train conductors wear. He is also known to own different colors of said hat.
  
  
• 
  
  
  • Fun-loving: Kendrick is a fun loving kid. He likes jokes, puns and riddles, and likes to make up his own. Firstly, his codename is a pun already, it can mean both an orchestra conductor (He conducts his toys) or a train conductor (toy trains are one of the most appeciated toys there are, even adults may collect them). He keeps this up even further by wearing a conductor hat.
    He'll laugh at jokes and repeat jokes he heard, when a window of opportunity shows up. He won't ever join in pranking though, because that seems mean to him. Toys of course, are the centerpiece of both his sense of fun, and his power.
    
  • Reticent: The first impression you'll get of Kendrick Haywood, is that he is a reserved, serious and maybe even a boring person. As you get to know him however, you'll realise that is merely a facade, and a well constructed one. There is just no way to know what Kendrick is thinking; his poker face is too good. (He learned it from toy soldiers!...and his father.) When he does show emotions clearly, it is jarring, and not completely believable. Sometimes he acts like a serious, adult person, others, he looks just like every other teenager you might know. This guy's mind is a rubik's cube...
    
  • Caring: Having absentee parents, Kendrick bonds very strongly with his friends and his toys. He may not show it but, he enjoys being there for the people he cares about, and will try to make them feel better when they're sad. You might be by yourself on a bench in a mellow mood and suddenly be approached by this guy offereing you an ice cream or something...
    With his toys too, the bond runs deep. Kendrick regards them as family, naming, cleaning and repairing them. If eventually one of them is broken beyond repair, he'll mourn for his fallen friend and, even if he gets a replacement toy, it will never feel the same to him.
    
  • Neurotic: Being raised in a rich family, Kendrick likes everything to be in perfect order, especially his things. He'll get caught on organizing and cleaning every now and then, and looks down on people who seem too messy or relaxed to him. His love for manners and rules can make him very irritating. He'll probably recite said rules to you, when you seem out of line to him. For Kendrick, a rule is a law, and as such, must be followed without question.
    
  
  
  History
  
  
  When Kendrick's grandfather died, and his father inherited the family's company, he did not think twice. Rupert Haywood took his wife and a two year old Kendrick, all the way across the Atlantic Ocean, from London to Baltimore, the company headquarter's location, to fill in the director's post.
  
  
  Due to growing up in a traditional and wealthy family, it was expected of Kendrick the 'way of a lord', even in such a young age. Toy's weren't allowed, he had difficult and boring classes such as violin, without the boy ever wanting to, and he was overwhelmed with rules and manners reciting every now and then. It was a completely uninteresting life style.
  
  
  To complete the hardship, the father was always working or talking about work, and the mother, she had the bad habit of attenting to social events and shopping. Both their life styles, made them absent parents, who didn't seem to care much about thier child.
  
  
  His first contact with a toy happened at his 5th birthday. Petra Combs, the household maid, used her economies to buy little Kendrick a teddy bear. She felt bad for the kid's everyday life and wanted to give him something fun, that the boy could play with. The curiosity in Kendri's face when he was given the wrapped present and, the joy that showered from him, when he realised what he had just been given, was enough to melt the kind lady's heart. Kendrick named the stuffed bear, Ted and played around with it happily.
  
  
  It didn't, however, last long. When his parents got home, suprisingly earlier than they normally did, Ted was taken away from him. Kendri had the largest lecture of his life. It went to subjects such as 'That is not the way the future heir of the Haywood family should behave' to 'playing with toys won't accomplish you anything in life'. When asked who had brought such 'abomination inside', Kendrick lied and said he had bought it himself. Knowing his son was covering for someone else, (how could a 5 year old buy a toy?) they made the boy's punishment harsher, even more manners reciting and useless classes. But, at least, he had freed the maid of any trouble.
  
  
  The next day however, had been harsh on the kid. The violin teacher had yelled at him for not being concentrated, french classes had been tough, he just couldn't get any pronounciation right that morning, everything just seemed to be going bad. Also, as always, his parents weren't around and he had no one to talk to... Oh, if only someone would hug and console this little kid!
  
  
  That's when Kendrick felt little furry arm hug him. It was Ted! But how? He had been taken away to his parents room, hadn't him?
  
  
  Not paying much attention to, how could Ted have escaped his parents 'prison' and, how was he moving like that, the boy enjoyed the sudden company and regained his energy to finish the rest of the day's boring assignments. When he woke up the next day though, his parents had taken the toy away again. Wishing for Ted to come to him once more, Kendrick caught the sight of the toy walking towards his bedroom, exiting the dreaded 'prison'. That's when Kendri realised he was special.
  
  
  To his parents though, it had become a total mistery, how come everytime the toys were taken, they ended back with their son? After throught research on supernatural phenomena, Evangeline and Rupert Haywood concluded that their son might be a super and, as soon as they could, teamed up to ask Kendrick the reason of the 'mysteriously coming back toys'. The innocent child of course, explained it to them without omitting a thing. That Ted came back, all by himself, when he wished it to.
  
  
  From there on, his parents became even more strict and absent. The truth is, Kendrick's ability scared them, as it made it harder to disciplinate him and, could turn out to be dangerous.
  
  
  When he reached a more independent age, Kendrick started to buy the toys himself. His toy collection just seemed to increase and fill his once dull bedroom, with colors and shapes. On an attempt to not feel alone, the boy named and cared for each of his toys as, if they were his actual family. He had his favorites, of course, but every one of them was precious and irreplaceble.
  
  
  He would bring them to school too. It started with Ted and, a couple months later Kendrick was bringing a bigger bag than he actually needed, just to fill it, secretly, with toys.
  
  
  At the age of thirteen, his parents enrolled him at AEGIS, as always, without taking a no for an answer. Kendrick didn't even try to argue though, he enjoyed the idea of meeting other special people like him and, who knows, actually bond with others then his toys. (since his parents seemed to be unreacheable...)
  
  
  
• Family and Household:
  
  
  
  
  Evangeline and Rupert Haywood:
  
  
  Kendrick's parents. They won't admit it to their son's face but, they're scared of his abilities and always give excuses as to why they're not home. Kendrick has grown used to not having the two around. It's more surprising to see them, than not.
  
  
  Even though, their methods of parenting can be seen as harsh, Kendrick doesn't regard them with anger or dislike. Actually, deep down, he wishes they would stay beside him more...
  
  
  Duncan Haywood: Kendrick's deseased grandfather. Kendri doesn't know much about him, only that, he built the company from scratch, and his father inherited it when he passed away.
  
  
  Petra Combs: The household maid. She is a kind person and, the one who gave Kendri Ted. Sometimes Kendrick tells stuff about school to her. She is the closest to a friend the boy has, inside his house.
  
  
  Ivor Blecher: He is one of the family's bodyguards, who also works as driver. He used to transport Kendrick to school and back. At some point, Kendrick decided he didn't need the car, since the school was just a few blocks far. Ivor understood and Kendrick started walking to school, all by himself.
  
  
  Staff:
  
  
  
  
  Classmates:
  
  
  
  
  Isabella Chase: Izzy and Kendri attend to the very same school. He had heard countless times about what a troublemaker she was but, hadn't met her until nine months ago.
  
  
  That day, Kendrick was leaving the corridor to enter his next class, when he caught the sight of a cat-girl wandering around and stopping right in front of his locker. He took a while to remember the rumors of said cat-girl but, once he realised she was grabbing Maverick out of his locker, (how did she even open it?) he had no doubt that it was Izzy Chase that was stealing from him.
  
  
  Already late to class, the boy couldn't do anything besides worry for his bunny friend. He struggled to pay full attention to classes but, surprisingly managed to keep notes of the subjects.
  
  
  Once classes were over, Kendrick got up, fast as a bolt, and concentrated at the stolen bunny, 'calling' it back to him. At same time he called for the toy, Kendri also left the classroom, into the corridor and waited for it to get back.
  
  
  Unsurprisingly enough, Maverick wasn't the only thing that came his direction but, the culprit seemed to be chasing it as well. Giving a quickly look at the bunny and seeing as nothing serious had happened to it, the boy decided to pay no mind to the girl and retrieved the plush from the floor.
  
  
  Kendrick will never forget the day where, he could have lost Maverick forever, though.
  
  
  
• Toy Manipulation
  
  
  The ability to control toys to do his bidding. Kendrick can make a toy move according to his thoughts. If he pictures Ted the teddy bear grabing a pen, then Ted will do so accordingly. The toys under his control have enhanced strength and reflexes, so they can lift heavy objects as well as jump and run faster than a human would.
  
  
  • Vision Sharing: If he concentrates, Kendrick can momentarily see what his toy is seeing, while under control. It's very useful to spy on people. It only works with toys that actually have eyes though.
    
  
  
  Limitations
  
  
  • Need for Bounding: Kendrick's power requires extensive bonding with the toy, loving it, naming it, getting to know it and caring for it. That leaves him only his Toy-Family; he cannot use toys he has just met.
    
  • Range limit: Kendrick can control toys that are at a maximum of 1 block (263 feet 9 inches) from him, in any direction.
    
  • Mental and physical strain: The maximum number of toys that he can control at once is 5, that includes any entity. So, if Kendrick was manipulating chess pieces, he would only be able to control 5 of them. Attempting to control more than 5 will cause headaches and if kept on for a very long time, brain damage. The same goes for attempting to manipulate the toy for a range larger than 1 block. When using Vision Sharing, only one toy can be manipulated, as it takes much more concentration.
    
  • Toy Abilities Limitations: Even with it's enhanced strength, while in influence of Kendrick's manipulation, a toy cannot carry anything heavier than 5 times it's own weight. For example, a Teddy bear would be able to carry a pillow, even two but, not a television.
    As for the toy's hit strength, every hit has the strenght of an average human, with a plus, depending on the material the toy is made of. For example, A teddy bear's hit, would feel similar to being punched by a person wearing cotton filled gloves. A metal miniature of a car's hit, however, would feel similar to being punched by someone wearing brass knuckles.
    
  • Anihilation of a Toy: Destroying a toy to the point it can no longer move, invalidates Kendrick's ability and that toy can no longer be used by him. Since Kendrick and the destroyed toy were 'connected mentally', Kendrick also feels a ping of pain (and lots of sadness) when the connection is severed.
    
  
  
  
• 
  
  
  
  Toys:
  
  
  
  
  -> Ted (Caramel fur and green eyes), Kendrick is always carrying Ted no matter where to, and what bag he's using.
  
  
  
  
  -> Mr. Holeshot (Plastic, 9.8'' long)
  
  
  
  
  -> Harry (Made of metal, Red, 3.9'' long)
  
  
  
  
  -> Sparkles
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  -> Snowtail
  
  
  
  
  -> Maverick: Kendrick is reluctant to let him out of his house, ever since the incident with Izzy.
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  -> Chestnut
  
  
  

EDIT: Added Izzy's related information~

 

[ManicMuse]

@Necessity4Fun Yes, she has a bad habit of taking other people's belongings. Her father often uses his connections to smooth out the legal side of things. However, that has left her with a reputation for stealing and general odd behavior in school. Fighting with other students, who say there is no Santa Claus and other such things have happened.


Hmmm, perhaps she stole a toy, at one point, from him? Then he used his gift to locate the stolen toy? Have that be about 6 months back? Then she has been scared of him since. I mean having a toy come to 'life' and getting caught would sort of freak her out.

 

[Necessity4Fun]

@Necessity4Fun[/URL] Yes, she has a bad habit of taking other people's belongings. Her father often uses his connections to smooth out the legal side of things. However, that has left her with a reputation for stealing and general odd behavior in school. Fighting with other students, who say there is no Santa Claus and other such things have happened.
Hmmm, perhaps she stole a toy, at one point, from him? Then he used his gift to locate the stolen toy? Have that be about 6 months back? Then she has been scared of him since. I mean having a toy come to 'life' and getting caught would sort of freak her out.

What if she stole a rabbit plush from him, thinking it was actually the Easter Bunny held hostage? And when she realised it was just a toy, it was already too late and poor Izzy got scared for life when it simply moved away from her after class?


(Kendrick would be worried sick but if it happened during classes, he would have to wait until they're done. Can't risk getting bad grades...)


Would she try to run after it, perhaps?

 

[ManicMuse]

What if she stole a rabbit plush from him, thinking it was actually the Easter Bunny held hostage? And when she realised it was just a toy, it was already too late and poor Izzy got scared for life when it simply moved away from her after class?
(Kendrick would be worried sick but if it happened during classes, he would have to wait until they're done. Can't risk getting bad grades...)


Would she try to run after it, perhaps?

I love it! Maybe she stole it out of his locker right before class. She had seen it move at one point before and was convinced it was the real Easter bunny. Given their age differences, it was quite noticeable to Kendri that Izzy was not where she belonged. He saw her steal the bunny but knew he could not try to collect it until after school got out.

After school let out and most the kids had left, Kendri lead the rabbit out to a side court yard? Izzy followed it, confused and fascinated, like a cat chasing a mouse. Only to find that it was Kendri controlling the toy when he slipped out to collect the toy?

 

[Teh Frixz]

Might be fun to watch happen after classes get out~

 

[ManicMuse]

I think the idea is more this will be built history between the two characters prior to AEGIS. Which will create an interesting outcome when the two are faced with meeting one another again.


"You are the Easter Bunny thief!" -insert dramatic gasp-

 

[Necessity4Fun]

[QUOTE="Manic Muse]I love it! Maybe she stole it out of his locker right before class. She had seen it move at one point before and was convinced it was the real Easter bunny. Given their age differences, it was quite noticeable to Kendri that Izzy was not where she belonged. He saw her steal the bunny but knew he could not try to collect it until after school got out.

After school let out and most the kids had left, Kendri lead the rabbit out to a side court yard? Izzy followed it, confused and fascinated, like a cat chasing a mouse. Only to find that it was Kendri controlling the toy when he slipped out to collect the toy?

[/QUOTE]
Perfect I shall add Izzy to the relationships tab now~


I picked a different toy tho:

but I see how that one seems more mythcal like xD He can own both of them anyway~ *shrugs*


(Now what do I name this bunny?)

 

[ManicMuse]

Perfect I shall add Izzy to the relationships tab now~
I picked a different toy tho:

but I see how that one seems more mythcal like xD He can own both of them anyway~ *shrugs*


(Now what do I name this bunny?)

I almost went for that one! Maverick? Mel? Stephen?

 

[Necessity4Fun]

[QUOTE="Manic Muse]I think the idea is more this will be built history between the two characters prior to AEGIS. Which will create an interesting outcome when the two are faced with meeting one another again.
"You are the Easter Bunny thief!" -insert dramatic gasp-

[/QUOTE]
"I'm a Thief? Isn't that supposed to be you, little kitty cat?" -unnamused face-


haha! I'm excited already :33 (I also wanna draw them >.< )

[QUOTE="Manic Muse]I almost went for that one! Maverick? Mel? Stephen?

[/QUOTE]
I really like Maverick! That shall be his name D

 

[ManicMuse]

@Necessity4Fun


Added him to her profile. I was a little long winded but I like it.

Kendrick Haywood

Roughly nine months ago, Isabella Chase encountered this terrifying boy. She was innocently minding her own business, when one day on her way to class, she saw a white bunny shifting about in Kendri's locker.


Only a few days later did she put it all together with Easter around the corner. Her father had been working to explain to her, that she could not go to the Easter egg hunt that year. Izzy knew her father was working to protect her from the real reason she could not go, with a tale about her being too old.


No, the Easter Bunny had been kidnapped! That is why, the following day at school, she launched a rescue mission. To her surprise, it had been successful! However, at the end of the day, she started to worry, as the Easter Bunny really looked alot like just a plain old stuffed toy. Then, as the last students filed out of the classroom, the bunny sprung to life!


Izzy had been thrilled! Right up until the Easter Bunny turned tail and ran. Isabella had followed the rogue rabbit into the court yard. Just as she was about to give him a reassuring speech about how she was bringing him to safety, Kendri stepped out of the shadows. After watching him with the toy, she realized he had been controlling it! Izzy bolted from the court yard and has avoided the boy since. Given the rumors that have floated around school about Kendri, she has been terrified of him since. Fearful he would bring a toy army down upon her head.

 

[Necessity4Fun]

@Necessity4Fun[/URL]
Added him to her profile. I was a little long winded but I like it.

Kendrick Haywood

Roughly nine months ago, Isabella Chase encountered this terrifying boy. She was innocently minding her own business, when one day on her way to class, she saw a white bunny shifting about in Kendri's locker.


Only a few days later did she put it all together with Easter around the corner. Her father had been working to explain to her, that she could not go to the Easter egg hunt that year. Izzy knew her father was working to protect her from the real reason she could not go, with a tale about her being too old.


No, the Easter Bunny had been kidnapped! That is why, the following day at school, she launched a rescue mission. To her surprise, it had been successful! However, at the end of the day, she started to worry, as the Easter Bunny really looked alot like just a plain old stuffed toy. Then, as the last students filed out of the classroom, the bunny sprung to life!


Izzy had been thrilled! Right up until the Easter Bunny turned tail and ran. Isabella had followed the rogue rabbit into the court yard. Just as she was about to give him a reassuring speech about how she was bringing him to safety, Kendri stepped out of the shadows. After watching him with the toy, she realized he had been controlling it! Izzy bolted from the court yard and has avoided the boy since. Given the rumors that have floated around school about Kendri, she has been terrified of him since. Fearful he would bring a toy army down upon her head.

THAT'S THE BEST THING I EVER READ!! xD


I'm very amused and can't stop laughing, Bravo!!

 

[Necessity4Fun]

@Manic Muse


MIne got kinda big too xD


Isabella Chase: Izzy and Kendri attend to the very same school. He had heard countless times about what a troublemaker she was but, hadn't met her until nine months ago.


That day, Kendrick was leaving the corridor to enter his next class, when he caught the sight of a cat-girl wandering around and stopping right in front of his locker. He took a while to remember the rumors of said cat-girl but, once he realised she was grabbing Maverick out of his locker, (how did she even open it?) he had no doubt that it was Izzy Chase that was stealing from him.


Already late to class, the boy couldn't do anything besides worry for his bunny friend. He struggled to pay full attention to classes but, surprisingly managed to keep notes of the subjects.


Once classes were over, Kendrick got up, fast as a bolt, and concentrated at the stolen bunny, 'calling' it back to him. At same time he called for the toy, Kendri also left the classroom, into the corridor and waited for it to get back.


Unsurprisingly enough, Maverick wasn't the only thing that came his direction but, the culprit seemed to be chasing it as well. Giving a quickly look at the bunny and seeing as nothing serious had happened to it, the boy decided to pay no mind to the girl and retrieved the plush from the floor.


Kendrick will never forget the day where, he could have lost Maverick forever, though.

 

[Suzuki Mine]

[/drags self into thread]


So... I have someone that I'm working with... and they're slowly taking form into someone I'm becoming rather pleased with...


NOTE!: This is still a work in progress. Aspects are apt to change both with input and from further consideration on my part.

JANIK, S.

• Heroism
• Statistics

• Aspect	Scale
  COUR	?????????	00
  ALTR	?????????	00
  ORDR	?????????	00
  KIND	?????????	00
  PRCT	?????????	00
  DIPL	?????????	00

• Aspect	Scale
  HLTH	?????????	00
  STRN	?????????	00
  DEFN	?????????	00
  AGLT	?????????	00
  INTL	?????????	00
  WILL	?????????	00

• General
• Appearance
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Sarka Arlie Janik
  
  
  Nicknames
  
  
  
  
  
  
  N/A
  
  
  Codename
  
  
  
  
  
  
  N/A
  
  
  Gender
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Female
  
  
  Age
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Eighteen
  
  
  Rank
  
  
  
  
  
  
  D Rank
  
  
  Limiter
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Level 1; Inactive
  
  
  Role
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Student
  
  
  
• Race
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Caucasian/American
  
  
  Hair
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Brown/Dark brown
  
  
  Eyes
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Dark blue
  
  
  Height
  
  
  
  
  
  
  5'6"
  
  
  Figure
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Lean and curvy
  
  
  Notes
  
  
  
  
  
  
  A pink heart underneath her left eye.
  
  
  
• Amicable
  
  
  When not finding a way to dig her claws in and drag out what she wants from a person, Sarka is overall a rather friendly gal who can get along with folks. She's a bit laid back, easygoing and is up for anything that sounds like a good time. Normally it doesn't take long for her to gather a little circle of friends wherever she goes - if she's not with one already.
  
  
  Flirty
  
  
  Be it playfully or for real, it's hard to tell with just how often Sarka makes some kind of suggestive comment - regardless of gender or authority. Most of the times, if someone is able to get a bead on her intent, they're a little too deep and she's already begun spinning her web.
  
  
  Mischievous
  
  
  Sarka likes causing a little bit of trouble. Much of the time it's harmless pranks played between her and her social group. Her favorite kinds are more power intensive, which can sometimes result in some rather nasty (but quite amusing in her eyes) situations.
  
  
  Sly
  
  
  Sarka plays a graceful game of chess wherever she goes. In her mind control is the ultimate power, and if you can move a few pieces to the right position, that control will be absolute. For this, the end justify the means. She's not one who cares to sit right at the top though. Sarka's rather content at being a shadow queen and watching everyone else squirm in the spotlight. When she's lost interest in them, she tosses her pieces in the flashiest of ways and moves on to the next match.
  
  
  History
  
  
  COMING SOON...
• Other Character's Name
  
  
  Description of relationship with said character
• Lie Eater
  
  
  Sarka has the ability to draw out and nullify lies and secrets. If she's able to kiss an individual on the lips, she can pull a secret from the person's memory. The longer the kiss the longer she gets to search, and once she pulls it out the person loses possession of the secret. Also, if someone attempts to speak a lie within the same room as her, she can "eat" the lie and leave the truth behind. She can activate either of these abilities at will.
  
  
  
  
  
  • Preemptive Lie Detection: Sarka can detect when someone is going to lie, allowing her to act in time to "eat" it as it's being said.
    
  
  
  Limitations
  
  
  
  
  
  • Verbatum: Sarka can only "eat" lies when they're being spoken. If someone tries to write out a lie she cannot nullify it.
    
  • Lying Eyes: The lies that Sarka can nullify from individuals are restricted to those within her sight. If she cannot see the person she cannot strip away the lie.
    
  • Truth Drunk: Taking in a secret or "eating" lies affects Sarka in a similar way as one is by alcohol. She can handle a dozen or more throughout the day, but Lord forbid if she were to try and get a compulsive liar to tell the truth.
    
  • Deep Diving: If Sarka pushes too hard in trying to find a secret within someone's memory, she can actually lose her sense of self and potentially slip into a coma. So far the longest she's dared to "go under" has been half an hour.
    
  • Good Will: Individuals with stronger than average wills, as well as those with psychic barriers can fight back against or completely resist the influence of her kiss.
    
  
  
  
• 
  
  
  
  

  
  
  

  

  

  

  
  
  
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  [/media]
  
  
  

 

[Necessity4Fun]

[QUOTE="Suzuki Mine]
[/drags self into thread]
So... I have someone that I'm working with... and they're slowly taking form into someone I'm becoming rather pleased with...


NOTE!: This is still a work in progress. Aspects are apt to change both with input and from further consideration on my part.

JANIK, S.

• Heroism
• Statistics

• Aspect	Scale
  COUR	?????????	00
  ALTR	?????????	00
  ORDR	?????????	00
  KIND	?????????	00
  PRCT	?????????	00
  DIPL	?????????	00

• Aspect	Scale
  HLTH	?????????	00
  STRN	?????????	00
  DEFN	?????????	00
  AGLT	?????????	00
  INTL	?????????	00
  WILL	?????????	00

• General
• Appearance
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name
  
  Sarka Arlie Janik
  
  Nicknames
  
  N/A
  
  Codename
  
  N/A
  
  Gender
  
  Female
  
  Age
  
  Eighteen
  
  Rank
  
  D Rank
  
  Limiter
  
  Level 1; Inactive
  
  Role
  
  Student
  
  
• Race
  
  Caucasian/American
  
  Hair
  
  Brown/Dark brown
  
  Eyes
  
  Dark blue
  
  Height
  
  5'6"
  
  Figure
  
  Lean and curvy
  
  Notes
  
  A pink heart underneath her left eye.
  
  
• Amicable
  
  
  When not finding a way to dig her claws in and drag out what she wants from a person, Sarka is overall a rather friendly gal who can get along with folks. She's a bit laid back, easygoing and is up for anything that sounds like a good time. Normally it doesn't take long for her to gather a little circle of friends wherever she goes - if she's not with one already.
  
  
  Flirty
  
  
  Be it playfully or for real, it's hard to tell with just how often Sarka makes some kind of suggestive comment - regardless of gender or authority. Most of the times, if someone is able to get a bead on her intent, they're a little too deep and she's already begun spinning her web.
  
  
  Mischievous
  
  
  Sarka likes causing a little bit of trouble. Much of the time it's harmless pranks played between her and her social group. Her favorite kinds are more power intensive, which can sometimes result in some rather nasty (but quite amusing in her eyes) situations.
  
  
  Sly
  
  
  Sarka plays a graceful game of chess wherever she goes. In her mind control is the ultimate power, and if you can move a few pieces to the right position, that control will be absolute. For this, the end justify the means. She's not one who cares to sit right at the top though. Sarka's rather content at being a shadow queen and watching everyone else squirm in the spotlight. When she's lost interest in them, she tosses her pieces in the flashiest of ways and moves on to the next match.
  
  
  History
  
  
  COMING SOON...
• Other Character's Name
  
  
  Description of relationship with said character
• Lie Eater
  
  
  Sarka has the ability to draw out and nullify lies and secrets. If she's able to kiss an individual on the lips, she can pull a secret from the person's memory. The longer the kiss the longer she gets to search, and once she pulls it out the person loses possession of the secret. Also, if someone attempts to speak a lie within the same room as her, she can "eat" the lie and leave the truth behind. She can activate either of these abilities at will.
  
  
  
  
  
  • 
    Preemptive Lie Detection: Sarka can detect when someone is going to lie, allowing her to act in time to "eat" it as it's being said.
    
  
  
  
  Limitations
  
  
  
  
  
  • 
    Verbatum: Sarka can only "eat" lies when they're being spoken. If someone tries to write out a lie she cannot nullify it.
    
  
  
  
  
  
  • Lying Eyes: The lies that Sarka can nullify from individuals are restricted to those within her sight. If she cannot see the person she cannot strip away the lie.
    
  
  
  
  
  
  • Truth Drunk: Taking in a secret or "eating" lies affects Sarka in a similar way as one is by alcohol. She can handle a dozen or more throughout the day, but Lord forbid if she were to try and get a compulsive liar to tell the truth.
    
  
  
  
  
  
  • Deep Diving: If Sarka pushes too hard in trying to find a secret, she can actually lose her sense of self and potentially slip into a coma. So far the longest she's dared to "go under" has been half an hour.
    
  
  
  
  
• 
  
  
  
  

  
  
  

  

  

  

  
  
  
  [media]
  ​
  
  [/media]
  
  
  
  
  

[/QUOTE]
I love the power! It's so unique


Also, you managed to pick up the only Deco song I haven't heard yet xD

 

[Suzuki Mine]

I love the power! It's so unique
Also, you managed to pick up the only Deco song I haven't heard yet xD

Hnnnnng- Thank you~ 3


I came across the song while looking at pictures on Zerochan and just got hit by an inspiration train from it. Apparently the song was put up on YouTube just yesterday~


Well, now it's the day before yesterday.

 

[D. Rex]

Yup, I specialize in characters with tragic backstories. And yeah haha, rain could force her powers to sizzle out too!

You specialize in bubbly hyper innocent sparkle girls. With a generally tragic backstory.


Hello everyone! After doing a bit of reading, I think my interest has been piqued. Admittedly I have only done some light reading so far, but I intend to do some deeper research. Perhaps even attempt to read through the OOC.


Now I don't have true characters concepts in mind as of yet, but if nobody minds, I wouldn't mind talking about some ideas or listening to things people think would be cool to see. (Not being lazy, honest, I just enjoy good character discussion.)


Anyhow, this so far looks like a cheerful and active place. I would be quite happy to become a part of it, if I can.

 

[Sopranos]

Rose, L.

• Heroism
• Statistics

• Aspect	Scale
  COUR	?????????	09
  ALTR	??	02
  ORDR	????	04
  KIND	?????	05
  PRCT	????	04
  DIPL	???	03

• Aspect	Scale
  HLTH	?	01
  STRN	??????	06
  DEFN	????	04
  AGLT	???????	07
  INTL	?	01
  WILL	?	01

• General
• Appearance
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name
  
  Laurent Rose.
  
  Nicknames
  
  ---
  
  Codename
  
  Lone Wolf
  
  Gender
  
  Male
  
  Age
  
  27
  
  Rank
  
  B
  
  Limiter
  
  4 - Active
  
  Role
  
  Student
  
  
• Race
  
  Caucasian
  
  Hair
  
  Red
  
  Eyes
  
  Black
  
  Height
  
  6 ft 00
  
  Figure
  
  Average build
  
  Notes
  
  ---
  
  
• 
  
  
  Independent: One thing you can know for sure that Laurent doesn't like a crowd. He doesn't like to make friends and tends to solve his problem his own way, with his own hand more than has to rely on someone. But this also isn't mean he wants to make an enemy out of anyone.
  
  
  Pride: People say that pride is Laurent's huge weakness, but of course he doesn't listen. He sure has more than enough confident in his ability and isn't bothered when someone say something different.
  
  
  Serious: Laurent is indeed a serious man, he takes every moments serious . You won't see him as the type who crack joke around or hit on women just for pleasure.
  
  
  Impatience: Laurent isn't the calm and gentle kind. He can get reckless and violent easily when provoke. This is also a deadly weakness of him.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Laurent has never in his life seen his real parents, he was adopted and raised by a bar owner in New Orleans. He enjoyed his life there, it wasn't much but it was simple,. He was taught martial art, taught to play the Saxophone, to mix drink,... It was his home, and he couldn't be more grateful to the man who had raised him. When he was an adult, Laurent was a Jazz artist, everything was fine to him, especially when he didn't know about his power.
  
  
  Until a day, an incident happened that turned his life around. It was just a regular day, he was performing in his father's bar, then there were a group on men. To nobody expectation, there were gun shots, and then they started to assault everyone inside, smashed the bar too. Laurent was no exception, outnumbered, he was beaten to almost a certain death. But their target was his adopted father, they shot him in the head as Laurent was lying in pain. This was the first time his superpower revealed. He was shock and in pain, Laurent started to cough blood, so painful that he thought he would died... But then the most horrifying thing happened, he stood up, like a living corpse, gave out a deadly look, walked toward these killers. They were scared, shot him with a gun. The bullet went through his body, but he kept on walking despite the bleeding hole, like it didn't matter anymore. They tried to throw a punch at him, Laurent caught it, and with a tiny move, he broke all 5 fingers. What happened next was a total massacre, one man died due to blood lost by a wound from his neck, it was like being torn apart by hands. When the police came, Laurent was the only one alive, he was fainted among all the others corpses.
  
  
  After this incident, he was revealed to be a Super and sent to the Facility 108 to learn about his Superpower.
  
  
  
• Other Character's Name
  
  
  Family:
  
  
  Paul Rose (Deceased/Civlian)): Laurent's adopted father.
  
  
  Marie Rose (Alive/Civilian): His adopted sister, still live in New Orleans.
  
  
  AEGIS - Facility 108:
  
  
  Vanessa Bellamy (Alive/Faculty): She is a psychiatrist appointed to treat Lauren the first day he got to the facility, her job was to collects data about his superpower. With her help Laurent started to become stable and was allowed to see other students and join other programs. She is still appointed to see Laurent weekly for treatment. Her superpower is unknown.
  
  
  
• 
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Berserk: When he experience a shocking event or to be provoked, Laurent starts to lost his mind and his alter ego takes control of his body, known as the Wild Laurent. In this form, his eyes glowed, his skin color changed, he can barely speak, and Laurent is a completely angry, sadistic, wild beast. He will attack anything or anything that in his way, friends or foes. Also in this form, his strength, agility and resistance are remarkably enhanced.
  
  
  • Unlimited: Without his sense of pain or safety, Wild Laurent won't feel pain even though if you shoot him with a gun, stab him with a knife. Therefore, he will keep going up for the fight until he is calm, unconscious or dead.
    
  • Enhanced Strength and Agility: In this state, not only that Laurent is stronger, his reflexes is also greatly increased. Hand to hand combat with him would be extremely difficult.
    
  
  
  Limitations
  
  
  • Weakness 1: Though he is stronger, faster and tougher in Wild Form, he is also more vulnerable in combat since he does't have any sense of pain or safety anymore.
    
  • Weakness 2: With the right emotional manipulation, you can control Laurent quite easy. To calm him down from Wild form or just provoke him into a weapon of destruction.
    
  • Weakness 3: When return to his normal self, as all his sense return, also his wounds. This is Laurent's one of the most vulnerable moment and can lead him to a certain death.
    
  • Weakness 4: In wild form, his skin adopts a shade of violet and somehow is more and vulnerable again heat. His eyes are dilated and glowing, also more sensitive with light.
• 
  
  
  
  [media]
  
  
  
  [/media]
  

I'm finish my CS, what do you guys think ?

 

[yoikes]

@Necessity4Fun[/URL]
Added him to her profile. I was a little long winded but I like it.

Kendrick Haywood

Roughly nine months ago, Isabella Chase encountered this terrifying boy. She was innocently minding her own business, when one day on her way to class, she saw a white bunny shifting about in Kendri's locker.


Only a few days later did she put it all together with Easter around the corner. Her father had been working to explain to her, that she could not go to the Easter egg hunt that year. Izzy knew her father was working to protect her from the real reason she could not go, with a tale about her being too old.


No, the Easter Bunny had been kidnapped! That is why, the following day at school, she launched a rescue mission. To her surprise, it had been successful! However, at the end of the day, she started to worry, as the Easter Bunny really looked alot like just a plain old stuffed toy. Then, as the last students filed out of the classroom, the bunny sprung to life!


Izzy had been thrilled! Right up until the Easter Bunny turned tail and ran. Isabella had followed the rogue rabbit into the court yard. Just as she was about to give him a reassuring speech about how she was bringing him to safety, Kendri stepped out of the shadows. After watching him with the toy, she realized he had been controlling it! Izzy bolted from the court yard and has avoided the boy since. Given the rumors that have floated around school about Kendri, she has been terrified of him since. Fearful he would bring a toy army down upon her head.

@Manic Muse
MIne got kinda big too xD


Isabella Chase: Izzy and Kendri attend to the very same school. He had heard countless times about what a troublemaker she was but, hadn't met her until nine months ago.


That day, Kendrick was leaving the corridor to enter his next class, when he caught the sight of a cat-girl wandering around and stopping right in front of his locker. He took a while to remember the rumors of said cat-girl but, once he realised she was grabbing Maverick out of his locker, (how did she even open it?) he had no doubt that it was Izzy Chase that was stealing from him.


Already late to class, the boy couldn't do anything besides worry for his bunny friend. He struggled to pay full attention to classes but, surprisingly managed to keep notes of the subjects.


Once classes were over, Kendrick got up, fast as a bolt, and concentrated at the stolen bunny, 'calling' it back to him. At same time he called for the toy, Kendri also left the classroom, into the corridor and waited for it to get back.


Unsurprisingly enough, Maverick wasn't the only thing that came his direction but, the culprit seemed to be chasing it as well. Giving a quickly look at the bunny and seeing as nothing serious had happened to it, the boy decided to pay no mind to the girl and retrieved the plush from the floor.


Kendrick will never forget the day where, he could have lost Maverick forever, though.

... Fluffiest relationship in this RP?

Rose, L.

• Heroism
• Statistics

• Aspect	Scale
  COUR	?????????	09
  ALTR	??	02
  ORDR	????	04
  KIND	?????	05
  PRCT	????	04
  DIPL	?	03

• Aspect	Scale
  HLTH	??	02
  STRN	??????	06
  DEFN	????	04
  AGLT	???????	07
  INTL	??	02
  WILL	?	01

• General
• Appearance
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name
  
  Laurent Rose.
  
  Nicknames
  
  ---
  
  Codename
  
  Lone Wolf
  
  Gender
  
  Male
  
  Age
  
  27
  
  Rank
  
  A
  
  Limiter
  
  4 - Active
  
  Role
  
  Student
  
  
• Race
  
  Caucasian
  
  Hair
  
  Red
  
  Eyes
  
  Black
  
  Height
  
  6 ft 00
  
  Figure
  
  Average build
  
  Notes
  
  ---
  
  
• 
  
  
  Independent: One thing you can know for sure that Laurent doesn't like a crowd. He doesn't like to make friends and tends to solve his problem his own way, with his own hand more than has to rely on someone. But this also isn't mean he wants to make an enemy out of anyone.
  
  
  Pride: People say that pride is Laurent's huge weakness, but of course he doesn't listen. He sure has more than enough confident in his ability and isn't bothered when someone say something different.
  
  
  Serious: Laurent is indeed a serious man, he takes every moments serious . You won't see him as the type who crack joke around or hit on women just for pleasure.
  
  
  Impatience: Laurent isn't the calm and gentle kind. He can get reckless and violent easily when provoke. This is also a deadly weakness of him.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Laurent has never in his life seen his real parents, he was adopted and raised by a bar owner in New Orleans. He enjoyed his life there, it wasn't much but it was simple,. He was taught martial art, taught to play the Saxophone, to mix drink,... It was his home, and he couldn't be more grateful to the man who had raised him. When he was an adult, Laurent was a Jazz artist and he was in a band, everything was fine to him.
  
  
  Until a day, when a group of mobsters stepped in the bar, they wrecked that bar up, beat up everyone. Laurent was no exception, outnumbered, he was beaten to almost a certain death. But their target was his adopted father, they shot him in the head as Laurent was lying in pain. This was the first time his superpower revealed. He was shock and in pain, as he shouted out for his father, Laurent started to cough blood, so painful that he thought he would died... But then the most horrifying thing happened, he stood up, like a living corpse, gave out a deadly look, walked toward these mobsters. They were scared, shot him with a gun. The bullet went through his body, but he kept on walking despite the bleeding hole, like it didn't matter anymore. They tried to throw a punch at him, Laurent caught it, and with a tiny move, he broke all 5 fingers. What happened next was a total massacre, one man died due to blood lost by a wound from his neck, it was like being torn apart by hands. One was burned to the worst death. When the police came, Laurent was the only one alive, he was fainted among all the others corpses.
  
  
  After this incident, he was revealed to be a Super and sent to the Facility 108 to learn about his Superpower.
  
  
  
• Other Character's Name
  
  
  ---
• 
  
  
  Pyrokinesis: Laurent has the ability to create a purple flame from thin air. He also create fire balls, deliver punches of fire, create pillars of fire and put his own body on fire. The same is he can hold an enemy or an object and put them on fire. He is not immune to other types of fire. He cannot control other fires that he didn't create.
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Berserk: When he experience a shocking event or to be provoked, Laurent starts to lost his mind and his alter ego takes control of his body, known as the Wild Laurent. In this form, his eyes glowed, he can barely speak and Laurent is a completely angry, raw, wild beast. He will attack anything or anything that in his way, friends or foes. Also in this form, his strength, speed and resistance are remarkably enhanced. For example, he won't feel pain like he is in normal form and will keep going even if you thrust a blade through his back. And in a fight he can easily bring down a group of normal person, lift up car and other heavy objects and reflex faster. (I mean it's not superman strong, it's just... Thor's strong ?)
  
  
  Limitations
  
  
  • Weakness 1: Though he is stronger, faster and tougher in Wild Form, he is also more vulnerable in combat since he does't have any sense of pain or safety anymore.
    
  • Weakness 2: With the right emotional manipulation, you can control Laurent quote easy and even make him your weapon of destruction.
    
  • Weakness 3: When return to his normal self, as all his sense return, also his wounds. This is one of the most vulnerable moment in his superpower.
    
  
  
  
• 

I'm finish my CS, what do you guys think ?

I believe there is someone with Pyrokinesis ability posted just several pages back?

 

[Lemon Boy]

@Sopranos


His secondary power doesn't really seem to be related to his Main power at all and I think secondary powers are always meant to tie into the main somehow. So, personally, I would suggest changing it into something that actually relates to his main power in some way. It kind of sounds like you're trying to mix in Enhanced condition with Pyrokinesis, which aren't really linked in anyway. So I don't think Welian would really allow that.

 

[Lemon Boy]

Woops, sorry, double post.


@Suzuki Mine


Oooohhh, I love her character!


She seems really interesting character and I can't find a single thing wrong about the profile!


Like Too Much Idea said, her power seems super unique and I would never have thought about something like it.


Can't wait to see what the finished product is!


Oh and I love the soft lavender colour you use in her profile!

 

[welian]

Forty-two alerts while I slept.