Fandom My Little Pony, The Final Generation (Characters)

[Justin93Daniels]

Timberwolves just ran the heck away from a pony with a flaming torch. Might be a chance for them to come across your character? '

 

[MyrnaCat236]

I don't even know how to jump back in ermmmm

if you need to jump back in you could be watching from the woods. They are still on the edge

 

[MyrnaCat236]

Timberwolves just ran the heck away from a pony with a flaming torch. Might be a chance for them to come across your character? '

The Timberwolf idea is good too actually!

 

[raven flame]

I saw your char was hanging or something is it over a river or something?

 

[Nonexisting]

Name:
Karma Cipher
nicknames:
karm,kar,the undertaker,guardian of the underworld,grim reaper's child
age:
500+
Gender:
male
Sexuality (Not Necessary):
pansexual
Species:
cursed unicorn
Hero or Villain?:
chaotic neutral, has his own ideals
Personality:
karma a bit strange compared to most as he sees sides of the world in eyes that others don't usually,he's rather dark minded as well as a bit dark humored and is very experienced when it comes to things of a more darker nature as well as a more super natural nature. karma is very intelligent,clever even and extremely blunt,to the point with things as he sees necessary. tough willed and nearly fearless due to his experiences over the years. karma is also slightly psychotic due to all of it and has a tendency to smoke and do drugs ESPECIALLY when he is stressed out. karma can come off as grumpy one minute or he can be flirty the next depending on his mood. despite his tenancies karma can be very playful at times and even childish.
Special Abilities:
karma is very skilled in magic especially the dark magic types
he is very skilled with alchemy/medicine
has a secondary form due to demonic contract

Strengths:
strong magical ability
sees between the planes of life and death as well as the astral plane (naturally)
is able to deal with demons,spirits,and the dead
Weaknesses:
his other form in uncontrollable and he must change every few nights
the demon he's bonded to will often drain his energy and he will need to rest and feed to recharge
cursed to drink blood
cursed with a painful form of "immortality" due to his demonic counterpart (bigger the damage longer it takes to generate)
Appearance (Can be a picture):
(you can't see the other eye but his right eye is pink. ps. i'm currently making a updated ref for him)

Backstory:
karma cipher comes from not entirely know background, it is said he served the queen of death herself as he came from a far away hidden away land only known about truly by few and he traveled around the world before settling down setting up shop and living with the mortician. karma started up his shop where he deals with the problems involving the spiritual realm,dead,and spells. usually ponies come to him for rather unique situations or if arranging a funeral. karma has been able to stand between the planes and see things with his extra sense since he was extremely young. when he was small he met a demon who he grown up along side and made a contract with too young to understand the consequences of their actions. the demon gave him a form of demonic power in exchange for his energy,it started feeding on his energy and would weaken him. not only that but he'd take different form every few
nights,having to feed on blood for the rest of his life,and gained a form of immortality but it was extremely painful every time his body started to regenerate. damned to live his life this way karma did.

*has a Russian/french accent*

 

[MyrnaCat236]

Name:
Karma Cipher
nicknames:
karm,kar,the undertaker,guardian of the underworld,grim reaper's child
age:
500+
Gender:
male
Sexuality (Not Necessary):
pansexual
Species:
cursed unicorn
Hero or Villain?:
chaotic neutral, has his own ideals
Personality:
karma a bit strange compared to most as he sees sides of the world in eyes that others don't usually,he's rather dark minded as well as a bit dark humored and is very experienced when it comes to things of a more darker nature as well as a more super natural nature. karma is very intelligent,clever even and extremely blunt,to the point with things as he sees necessary. tough willed and nearly fearless due to his experiences over the years. karma is also slightly psychotic due to all of it and has a tendency to smoke and do drugs ESPECIALLY when he is stressed out. karma can come off as grumpy one minute or he can be flirty the next depending on his mood. despite his tenancies karma can be very playful at times and even childish.
Special Abilities:
karma is very skilled in magic especially the dark magic types
he is very skilled with alchemy/medicine
has a secondary form due to demonic contract

Strengths:
strong magical ability
sees between the planes of life and death as well as the astral plane (naturally)
is able to deal with demons,spirits,and the dead
Weaknesses:
his other form in uncontrollable and he must change every few nights
the demon he's bonded to will often drain his energy and he will need to rest and feed to recharge
cursed to drink blood
cursed with a painful form of "immortality" due to his demonic counterpart (bigger the damage longer it takes to generate)
Appearance (Can be a picture):
(you can't see the other eye but his right eye is pink. ps. i'm currently making a updated ref for him)
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Backstory:
karma cipher comes from not entirely know background, it is said he served the queen of death herself as he came from a far away hidden away land only known about truly by few and he traveled around the world before settling down setting up shop and living with the mortician. karma started up his shop where he deals with the problems involving the spiritual realm,dead,and spells. usually ponies come to him for rather unique situations or if arranging a funeral. karma has been able to stand between the planes and see things with his extra sense since he was extremely young. when he was small he met a demon who he grown up along side and made a contract with too young to understand the consequences of their actions. the demon gave him a form of demonic power in exchange for his energy,it started feeding on his energy and would weaken him. not only that but he'd take different form every few
nights,having to feed on blood for the rest of his life,and gained a form of immortality but it was extremely painful every time his body started to regenerate. damned to live his life this way karma did.

*has a Russian/french accent*

Ok, so there are a few things I would like to point out.
I am trying to keep this mostly PG since MLP is that way itself. Your character smoking and doing drugs is inappropriate to the fandom and even though this has a twist with one character being from a different universe, drugs will not be accepted.
Another thing I would like to point out is that being able to see through the forms of reality can become very OP rather quickly. There needs to be a limit if your character can do that. Also control over the dead has no limits and must be retained by someway of a limitation.
I think that a character that has to share a demon part is a cool idea, but it being completely uncontrollable every few nights can also be OP.
Drinking blood is ok in moderation and as long as you don't get it by slaughtering other ponies.

If you want to use this character still, that is fine. This character could have a lot of potential if the things above are changed, but for now I cannot accept the character for those reasons.
DENIED.

 

[Nonexisting]

Ok, so there are a few things I would like to point out.
I am trying to keep this mostly PG since MLP is that way itself. Your character smoking and doing drugs is inappropriate to the fandom and even though this has a twist with one character being from a different universe, drugs will not be accepted.
Another thing I would like to point out is that being able to see through the forms of reality can become very OP rather quickly. There needs to be a limit if your character can do that. Also control over the dead has no limits and must be retained by someway of a limitation.
I think that a character that has to share a demon part is a cool idea, but it being completely uncontrollable every few nights can also be OP.
Drinking blood is ok in moderation and as long as you don't get it by slaughtering other ponies.

If you want to use this character still, that is fine. This character could have a lot of potential if the things above are changed, but for now I cannot accept the character for those reasons.
DENIED.

thanks anyway,it's your rp and this the only pony i wanted to use as he's related to a comic series i've been working on.
also here since you obviously don't know what pg is:

Rated G: General Audiences – all ages admitted.
Rated PG: Parental Guidance Suggested – some material may not be suitable for children.
Rated PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned – some material may be inappropriate for children under 13.
Rated R: Restricted – under 17 requires accompanying parent or adult guardian.

 

[Night Blade]

MyrnaCat236 Heyyyy :3 Here it is... finally.

-Name: Night Blade
-Gender: Female
-Age: Around young adult so somewhere in the range of 18-19
-Sexuality (Not Necessary): Straight
-Species: Demonic Alicorn
-Hero or Villain?: Chaotic Good
-Desired Element: Not really sure yet, but laughter is definitely NOT an option.

Personality: She is kind and does what she thinks is right. She tends to be untrusting until she gets to know you better and understands that you are not trying to kill her for what she is. She is loyal to those she trusts and will almost never break a promise she has made. She isn’t usually one to judge upon first meeting either.

Special Abilities: She has enhanced eyesight and because of this she is a marksman and swordsman. She can heal major wounds but not too severe, such as a missing limb. Since she is the daughter of Hades, she sends ponies to the afterlife, whether it be to Heaven or the Underworld. She can turn into her “Demonic” form and her “Angelic” form at will, but she usually only does so when she is tasked with bringing a creature into the afterlife.

Weaknesses: Night can be impulsive at times and shows almost no regard for rules. It is these very traits that get her in trouble or in sticky situations that are hard to get out of. When she heals major wounds, it not only takes time but it leaves her weakened afterward as most big spells do. She is affected by the sun, standing in it for too long will cause her powers to weaken, and because of this she usually only comes out during the night. In her demonic form, she has the appearance of a skeletal horse and with that form, she is blind; she can “see” using her senses but this only works on the MOVING subjects, you stand still for example, you are completely safe (though, if you know your being sent to the Underworld, you most likely won’t be standing still).


Appearance (Can be a picture): Her mane is a silver color and her eyes are a dark purple with a rim of silver around it. A red flare comes from her eyes, much like King Sombra’s. A pair of black demon horns adorn her head and her coat is black. Her wingtips are iridescent white. She always wears a silver bat necklace and silver shoes (kind of like Princess Luna’s), being parts of her regalia. She owns quite a few weapons and always has at least one on her no matter what.

Backstory: Night is the daughter of Hades and Persephone and she grew up in the Underworld. When she was younger, she trained with her father constantly, mostly in swordsmanship and marksmanship. Since she is old enough to be out on her own, she moved to Ponyville to try to live a more normal life. She isn't the best at communication or emotions since she had only been exposed to pain and chaos growing up. Since she is essentially Death, she can sometimes have psychotic episodes, due to her duties as Death; these episodes don’t usually last for long, mostly in a range of 5 to 15 minutes. She is deathly (haha Get it? Get it? ...No?...okay...imma shush now...)afraid of spiders and will teleport a couple dozen feet away at the sight of even the smallest one. She didn’t have any friends besides some of the servant undead in her father’s castle growing up and since she is a mostly nocturnal creature, she hasn’t yet made any friends. Her home is closer to the Everfree Forest than the town of Ponyville and she likes it that way, enjoying the silence it provides. She still has a lot to learn about the “living” world and so she is open to new things and quite frequently will stare at things she hasn’t seen before. She also tends to poke them or sniff them.


Any Other Important Information: Her favorite weapons are a black bladed sword that has a short chain in the hilt; she often wears this sword along her right side, and a pair of black Desert Eagle Mark XIX .44 Magnum; she wears one on each side usually.

 

[MyrnaCat236]

MyrnaCat236 Heyyyy :3 Here it is... finally.

-Name: Night Blade
-Gender: Female
-Age: Around young adult so somewhere in the range of 18-19
-Sexuality (Not Necessary): Straight
-Species: Demonic Alicorn
-Hero or Villain?: Chaotic Good
-Desired Element: Not really sure yet, but laughter is definitely NOT an option.

Personality: She is kind and does what she thinks is right. She tends to be untrusting until she gets to know you better and understands that you are not trying to kill her for what she is. She is loyal to those she trusts and will almost never break a promise she has made. She isn’t usually one to judge upon first meeting either.

Special Abilities: She has enhanced eyesight and because of this she is a marksman and swordsman. She can heal major wounds but not too severe, such as a missing limb. Since she is the daughter of Hades, she sends ponies to the afterlife, whether it be to Heaven or the Underworld. She can turn into her “Demonic” form and her “Angelic” form at will, but she usually only does so when she is tasked with bringing a creature into the afterlife.

Weaknesses: Night can be impulsive at times and shows almost no regard for rules. It is these very traits that get her in trouble or in sticky situations that are hard to get out of. When she heals major wounds, it not only takes time but it leaves her weakened afterward as most big spells do. She is affected by the sun, standing in it for too long will cause her powers to weaken, and because of this she usually only comes out during the night. In her demonic form, she has the appearance of a skeletal horse and with that form, she is blind; she can “see” using her senses but this only works on the MOVING subjects, you stand still for example, you are completely safe (though, if you know your being sent to the Underworld, you most likely won’t be standing still).


Appearance (Can be a picture): Her mane is a silver color and her eyes are a dark purple with a rim of silver around it. A red flare comes from her eyes, much like King Sombra’s. A pair of black demon horns adorn her head and her coat is black. Her wingtips are iridescent white. She always wears a silver bat necklace and silver shoes (kind of like Princess Luna’s), being parts of her regalia. She owns quite a few weapons and always has at least one on her no matter what.

Backstory: Night is the daughter of Hades and Persephone and she grew up in the Underworld. When she was younger, she trained with her father constantly, mostly in swordsmanship and marksmanship. Since she is old enough to be out on her own, she moved to Ponyville to try to live a more normal life. She isn't the best at communication or emotions since she had only been exposed to pain and chaos growing up. Since she is essentially Death, she can sometimes have psychotic episodes, due to her duties as Death; these episodes don’t usually last for long, mostly in a range of 5 to 15 minutes. She is deathly (haha Get it? Get it? ...No?...okay...imma shush now...)afraid of spiders and will teleport a couple dozen feet away at the sight of even the smallest one. She didn’t have any friends besides some of the servant undead in her father’s castle growing up and since she is a mostly nocturnal creature, she hasn’t yet made any friends. Her home is closer to the Everfree Forest than the town of Ponyville and she likes it that way, enjoying the silence it provides. She still has a lot to learn about the “living” world and so she is open to new things and quite frequently will stare at things she hasn’t seen before. She also tends to poke them or sniff them.


Any Other Important Information: Her favorite weapons are a black bladed sword that has a short chain in the hilt; she often wears this sword along her right side, and a pair of black Desert Eagle Mark XIX .44 Magnum; she wears one on each side usually.
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When, it comes to alicorns I am very skeptical, but this OC is very well made! Her abilities are balanced and will be useful. Being a daughter of Hades and Persephone are interesting considering that Hades is Greek (which opens a new world for the pony kinds). Don't overdo the psychotic episodes and you have a great character!

Perhaps the element of generosity is good for her (but doesn't have to be. See OOC for explaination on that) considering she heals.
ACCEPTED!!!!

 

[Justin93Daniels]

Ugh... I freakin' HATE Alicorn OCs. ¬_¬'

 

[MyrnaCat236]

Ugh... I freakin' HATE Alicorn OCs. ¬_¬'

Hey, now. No negativity towards anyone's characters. I understand that there is a strong dislike for Alicorn OCs but her character is no a Mary Sue OR overpowered because her abilities are limited.

 

[Best Trekkie.]

Name: E 49
Gender: N/A
Sexuality (Not Necessary): N/A
Species: Battle Unit
Status: 'Compromised'
Hero or Villain?: Both?
Personality: He loves nature and wildlife. However when angered he goes into war mode. His original combat programming. When in this mode he is impossible to communicate with. Will enter this mode when loud noises are present. Example: Woodpeckers. Also has major PTSD.

Special Abilities

Ironclad: A passive bonus; E 49 naturally takes 10% less damage from ballistic and ranged attacks.
Sentry mode: When active E 49 transforms into a massive turret. Which deals incredible damage at the cost of immobility and the loss of the ironclad bonus.
Recon mode: His standard mode. Ironclad is active in this form and his 5.56 battle rifle (His right 'hand') deals small amounts of damage over a short time period. (Longer range than sentry)

Strengths: Fast rate of fire, high damage, Good armor.


Weaknesses: High powered magic, Melee attacks.


Appearance (Can be a picture):
(I know it is bastion but remember all of his kind look identical)




Backstory: Built during the canterlot wars (A bloody pony on robot war). E 49 was part of a whole production line of robots. It has been 50 years since that war has ended and robots were scrapped. (That is why everything is medieval) He has reactivated autonomously and is now the last of his kind.

Any Other Important Information: THIS IS MY SIDE CHARACTER... He will meet up with the new mane six later.

 

[MyrnaCat236]

Name: E 49
Gender: N/A
Sexuality (Not Necessary): N/A
Species: Battle Unit
Status: 'Compromised'
Hero or Villain?: Both?
Personality: He loves nature and wildlife. However when angered he goes into war mode. His original combat programming. When in this mode he is impossible to communicate with. Will enter this mode when loud noises are present. Example: Woodpeckers. Also has major PTSD.

Special Abilities

Ironclad: A passive bonus; E 49 naturally takes 10% less damage from ballistic and ranged attacks.
Sentry mode: When active E 49 transforms into a massive turret. Which deals incredible damage at the cost of immobility and the loss of the ironclad bonus.
Recon mode: His standard mode. Ironclad is active in this form and his 5.56 battle rifle (His right 'hand') deals small amounts of damage over a short time period. (Longer range than sentry)

Strengths: Fast rate of fire, high damage, Good armor.


Weaknesses: High powered magic, Melee attacks.


Appearance (Can be a picture):
(I know it is bastion but remember all of his kind look identical)

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Backstory: Built during the canterlot wars (A bloody pony on robot war). E 49 was part of a whole production line of robots. It has been 50 years since that war has ended and robots were scrapped. (That is why everything is medieval) He has reactivated autonomously and is now the last of his kind.

Any Other Important Information: THIS IS MY SIDE CHARACTER... He will meet up with the new mane six later.

I don't want there to be too much technology in this Roleplay because it clashes a lot with the fandom and lore itself. And At this moment a person is only allowed to have 1 OC but may play multiple characters if they have appeared in the MLP Universe. I'm sorry if this is not what you want to hear.
DENIED.

 

[Best Trekkie.]

That Is fine.

 

[magic is science]

Name: Argenteus.
Gender: A stallion, obviously.
Sexuality (Not Necessary): ... not defined.
Species: Unicorn.
Hero or Villain?: Something in between. It's hard to choose one certain side.
Personality: A typical scholar - focused on his task, intelligent, wise and... nervous, to the point where he can’t even properly interact with other ponies? Makes a point when he doesn't want to talk, can be quite irritating, but, overall, is a nice stallion, lacking independence and confidence in his thoughts and emotions.

Special Abilities: Although he is still getting to know various branches of magic, he is a promising unicorn, equipped with a swift, strong magic. He can manipulate matter with it (to some extent - he can't manipulate something too big or undefined, such as some unknown artefact or energy), project pure energy out of it, perform magical rites and even research it.
Strengths: Basic-Intermediate magic, analysis (a very useful skill, is it?), strategy.
Weaknesses: Raw force, unicorn of a higher mastery of magic, anxiety.

Appearance (Can be a picture): A tall young stallion, who hasn't got any prominent features. His hair is curly, dark, and his skin is almost parchment-white. His cutiemark is a
Backstory: Born to a couple of an earth pony and a unicorn, Arge had an opportunity to live a peaceful life in the countryside, away from the fuss and rush of the capital. But, instead, he chose to apply for scholarship, and, getting accepted, left his family for a long period of time. He can't tell much about his education, mainly because he doesn't know where to start, but he was promoted to a higher academy due to his strengths in learning.
Currently, he occupies a room in one of Canterlot's houses, regularly attending academy.
Any Other Important Information: Contrary to most unicorns, he likes to do things by hoove. He is often seen drawing, sculpting (not so good) and even playing on instruments with his own hooves! That seems extraordinary.

 

[MyrnaCat236]

Name: Argenteus.
Gender: A stallion, obviously.
Sexuality (Not Necessary): ... not defined.
Species: Unicorn.
Hero or Villain?: Something in between. It's hard to choose one certain side.
Personality: A typical scholar - focused on his task, intelligent, wise and... nervous, to the point where he can’t even properly interact with other ponies? Makes a point when he doesn't want to talk, can be quite irritating, but, overall, is a nice stallion, lacking independence and confidence in his thoughts and emotions.

Special Abilities: Although he is still getting to know various branches of magic, he is a promising unicorn, equipped with a swift, strong magic. He can manipulate matter with it (to some extent - he can't manipulate something too big or undefined, such as some unknown artefact or energy), project pure energy out of it, perform magical rites and even research it.
Strengths: Basic-Intermediate magic, analysis (a very useful skill, is it?), strategy.
Weaknesses: Raw force, unicorn of a higher mastery of magic, anxiety.

Appearance (Can be a picture): A tall young stallion, who hasn't got any prominent features. His hair is curly, dark, and his skin is almost parchment-white. His cutiemark is a
Backstory: Born to a couple of an earth pony and a unicorn, Arge had an opportunity to live a peaceful life in the countryside, away from the fuss and rush of the capital. But, instead, he chose to apply for scholarship, and, getting accepted, left his family for a long period of time. He can't tell much about his education, mainly because he doesn't know where to start, but he was promoted to a higher academy due to his strengths in learning.
Currently, he occupies a room in one of Canterlot's houses, regularly attending academy.
Any Other Important Information: Contrary to most unicorns, he likes to do things by hoove. He is often seen drawing, sculpting (not so good) and even playing on instruments with his own hooves! That seems extraordinary.

I like this character a lot actually. He sort of reminds me of Twilight in a way, but if you were hoping to get the Element of Magic, it is already taken. The element that is left is Laughter (or, if changed, something similar) Sorry for any inconvenience.

 

[MyrnaCat236]

However, if you would like to be a helper of the new 6 that is also acceptable. If you wish to obtain laughter then your character is indeed accepted!

 

[Andrita]

( WIP... But I have a question... Is it okay so far ? I am writing up the History right now . MyrnaCat236 )

Name: Sweet Love

Gender: Female

Race: Unicorn [ Her Horn is under her hair ]

Sexuality: Uhmm... She's a filly ? In other words, she is a bit too young to make that decision yet ( If anyone wants any relationships with others... I don't care... Just let me know. )

Role: ( She is sort of going to be like a 'Spike' of the group of sorts. Like the Pony of Shadows when with the Pillars before he was corrupted by desire . )

Occupation: Current Student of Princess Celestia [ The Former being obviously Twilight Sparkle, who is now an Alicorn + The Princess of Friendship ] .

Hero or Villain : Undetermined. ( Definitely leaning towards Good so far, but this is subject to chance . If she's given the 'Pony of Shadows' treatment, she could be given a Evil alignment . And considering her potential... And her intelligence ... That isn't exact the smartest idea. )

Personality: As her name implies, Sweet Package is an incredibly kind filly who truly loves to see others happy and carefree. However, she doesn't believe that she deserves that happiness herself , as she hasn't "earned it yet" by her own words. She is a pure filly who truly doesn't have any sort of hatred in her body towards anyone [sans herself] , no matter what they have done in the past. She can also be seen as a very shy bookworm, as she loves to read and study practically everything that has to do with Magic. She is not very good with people, almost to Fluttershy-esque levels ( Yes... I used " Fluttershy " as an adjective for shyness. I'm certain it works here ) . She would much rather read a complex book than talk to another living pony . She has an appetite to learn and will over study quite a bit compared to the norm . She is usually known by the majority of her class as an overachiever and 'massive nerd' due to her tendencies for wanting to at least has some impact on the world around her. Despite her scholarly knowledge and her almost uncanny learning potential, she still acts like a child at times. This was shown when she once got a fit over not knowing a specific equation at first .

Special Abilities: She was stated to have quote on quote to have " Massive Reserves " of magical potential by a Magic Professor & Scholar , and almost has an sort of intuition for Magic. She was compared to Starlight Glimmer & even Princess Twilight in terms of pure magical potential by Celestial herself, despite the later being an Alicorn currently , albeit her current magical strength doesn't reflect it . She's motivated by seeing people such as The Elements of Harmony succeed and practices hard to one day assist them in their adventures . She can use teleportation at a young age , a barrier, and telekinesis, and fire a laser or two . However, her learning aptitude is quite high, so she will likely learn quite a few spells before the adventure is over. She is also noted as stronger magically than most well-trained Unicorns [ due to her learning aptitude , determination , and magical potential ] , and has the potential to surpass the former Student of Celestia , Princess Twilight Sparkle .

Strengths: Vast, Scholarly knowledge on Magic & Equestrian Lore as a whole [ She always knew a lot more about the subjects than ever her teacher. It is because she studied well beyond the normal of almost any student at the time. She was also able to figure out how most of Starswirl's Ancient Magic Spells work, something only Twilight Sparkle & Starlight Glimmer has ever done. Albeit hasn't ever performed them due to lack of magical strength necessary to accomplish such a task . She writes books for Magic and History under the alias " Hearts of Scholars " so she can expand her work , and even impressed Starswirl with her knowledge under said alias, which she always keeps engraved in her memory . ] , Photographic Memory [ She has shown this several times throughout her life, even before officially becoming an adult. She learned the entire layout of Equestria, able to recognize almost any landmark that has been there. ] , Incredible aptitude for Learning , Grand analytical skills.

Weaknesses: Lack of social skills, her own lack of self-confidence & self-doubts , her almost 'lust' for knowledge [ Very similar to Midnight Sparkle , Which could potentially set her down the wrong path ] . She also isn't good for physical activities of any sort ( Due to being a filly ), so shelikely won't be going out on too many missions . She doesn't care about her own well-being .

Appearance: Sweet Love is a Filly . She has auburn hair , medium length mane with a pink braid to get it together in one side ponytail. She has cream colored skin, blue irises and black pupils. Her cutie mark, if she ever received one, would be one of a scholar's hat that is wrapped in a heart shaped aura.

HIstory:

 

[MyrnaCat236]

( WIP... But I have a question... Is it okay so far ? I am writing up the History right now . MyrnaCat236 )

Name: Sweet Love

Gender: Female

Race: Unicorn [ Her Horn is under her hair ]

Sexuality: Uhmm... She's a filly ? In other words, she is a bit too young to make that decision yet ( If anyone wants any relationships with others... I don't care... Just let me know. )

Role: ( She is sort of going to be like a 'Spike' of the group of sorts. Like the Pony of Shadows when with the Pillars before he was corrupted by desire . )

Occupation: Current Student of Princess Celestia [ The Former being obviously Twilight Sparkle, who is now an Alicorn + The Princess of Friendship ] .

Hero or Villain : Undetermined. ( Definitely leaning towards Good so far, but this is subject to chance . If she's given the 'Pony of Shadows' treatment, she could be given a Evil alignment . And considering her potential... And her intelligence ... That isn't exact the smartest idea. )

Personality: As her name implies, Sweet Package is an incredibly kind filly who truly loves to see others happy and carefree. However, she doesn't believe that she deserves that happiness herself , as she hasn't "earned it yet" by her own words. She is a pure filly who truly doesn't have any sort of hatred in her body towards anyone [sans herself] , no matter what they have done in the past. She can also be seen as a very shy bookworm, as she loves to read and study practically everything that has to do with Magic. She is not very good with people, almost to Fluttershy-esque levels ( Yes... I used " Fluttershy " as an adjective for shyness. I'm certain it works here ) . She would much rather read a complex book than talk to another living pony . She has an appetite to learn and will over study quite a bit compared to the norm . She is usually known by the majority of her class as an overachiever and 'massive nerd' due to her tendencies for wanting to at least has some impact on the world around her. Despite her scholarly knowledge and her almost uncanny learning potential, she still acts like a child at times. This was shown when she once got a fit over not knowing a specific equation at first .

Special Abilities: She was stated to have quote on quote to have " Massive Reserves " of magical potential by a Magic Professor & Scholar , and almost has an sort of intuition for Magic. She was compared to Starlight Glimmer & even Princess Twilight in terms of pure magical potential by Celestial herself, despite the later being an Alicorn currently , albeit her current magical strength doesn't reflect it . She's motivated by seeing people such as The Elements of Harmony succeed and practices hard to one day assist them in their adventures . She can use teleportation at a young age , a barrier, and telekinesis, and fire a laser or two . However, her learning aptitude is quite high, so she will likely learn quite a few spells before the adventure is over. She is also noted as stronger magically than most well-trained Unicorns [ due to her learning aptitude , determination , and magical potential ] , and has the potential to surpass the former Student of Celestia , Princess Twilight Sparkle .

Strengths: Vast, Scholarly knowledge on Magic & Equestrian Lore as a whole [ She always knew a lot more about the subjects than ever her teacher. It is because she studied well beyond the normal of almost any student at the time. She was also able to figure out how most of Starswirl's Ancient Magic Spells work, something only Twilight Sparkle & Starlight Glimmer has ever done. Albeit hasn't ever performed them due to lack of magical strength necessary to accomplish such a task . She writes books for Magic and History under the alias " Hearts of Scholars " so she can expand her work , and even impressed Starswirl with her knowledge under said alias, which she always keeps engraved in her memory . ] , Photographic Memory [ She has shown this several times throughout her life, even before officially becoming an adult. She learned the entire layout of Equestria, able to recognize almost any landmark that has been there. ] , Incredible aptitude for Learning , Grand analytical skills.

Weaknesses: Lack of social skills, her own lack of self-confidence & self-doubts , her almost 'lust' for knowledge [ Very similar to Midnight Sparkle , Which could potentially set her down the wrong path ] . She also isn't good for physical activities of any sort ( Due to being a filly ), so shelikely won't be going out on too many missions . She doesn't care about her own well-being .

Appearance: Sweet Love is a Filly . She has auburn hair , medium length mane with a pink braid to get it together in one side ponytail. She has cream colored skin, blue irises and black pupils. Her cutie mark, if she ever received one, would be one of a scholar's hat that is wrapped in a heart shaped aura.

HIstory:

Ok, I like the idea of her being a helper like spike but there are a couple things wrong with this character.

Her age (filly) makes it a little OP that she knows so much at such a young age, even if she can't do all the magic, her aptitude is way too high and considering she knows more than what Twilight knew at that age sets up an OP character already. Impressing Starswirl with her knowledge is ok for the most part but comparing her to Twilight and Starlight makes for a copy of them. Her lust for knowledge isn't a bad thing but saying that if she gets "the pony of shadows treatment" and she goes evil can once again be deemed as a copy since that isn't a very original idea for turning evil.
DENIED.

 

[Andrita]

MyrnaCat236

Ouch. I can change her age though . That isn't difficult . Also, the main reason I compared them was to compare magical potential. What they do with it is another thing altogether. She wants to impress Twilight Sparkle + The Former Elements, and that is why she studied and trained as hard as she did . Plus, I never meant for her to be a direct copy, I meant for them to have similar potential levels. Pony of Shadows was just an example of what could potentially happen, not what I planned to do with her. Deleting that portion isn't a problem. Is there anything else I'm missing ?

 

[MyrnaCat236]

MyrnaCat236

Ouch. I can change her age though . That isn't difficult . Also, the main reason I compared them was to compare magical potential. What they do with it is another thing altogether. She wants to impress Twilight Sparkle + The Former Elements, and that is why she studied and trained as hard as she did . Plus, I never meant for her to be a direct copy, I meant for them to have similar potential levels. Pony of Shadows was just an example of what could potentially happen, not what I planned to do with her. Deleting that portion isn't a problem. Is there anything else I'm missing ?

The only thing I would change is make her a prodigey of a DIFFERENT PRINCESS. I see so many people wanting to be the students of Celestia and it bothers me. Making her a student of a different Princess would help to make her more original! After that, no, there is nothing that you need to do further with her, but I just wanted you to be aware of it and I appreciate you willingness to participate!
Just change the age so her aptitude matches her abilities and emphasize more that she wishes to impress and you are good, my friend!

 

[Andrita]

MyrnaCat236

Ouch again. There was a particularly specific reason I choose for her to have Celestia . I can easily change it to Luna or Cadence though if it grinds your gears that much. And no problem.... I haven't done a MLP RP in a long time... And I am generally interested.

 

[MyrnaCat236]

MyrnaCat236

Ouch again. There was a particularly specific reason I choose for her to have Celestia . I can easily change it to Luna or Cadence though if it grinds your gears that much. And no problem.... I haven't done a MLP RP in a long time... And I am generally interested.

No problem, and I'm sorry if it seems like I don't like your character at all. I honestly think it is a nice idea for her to be a helper and having such a smart helper will definitely prove to be useful, especially if the characters might not know how to handle a situation. It's just Celestia as a mentor is too overused, especially because so many characters were her students before. I would just like to see something new is all. If you really want her to be Celestia's student then by all means do so! It was just a suggestion.

 

[Andrita]

No problem. I appreciate the feedback more than a ' Get out ' sort of response I usually receive on other RP forums . It's a nice change of pace.

 

[Justin93Daniels]

Y'know, Celestia DOES own a school. While not a PERSONAL student of hers, you could have your character be a student of her school, right? Like, with a bunch of teachers instead of her as your mentor?