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[Dragonlord318]

BobbyJoe this is where the VIllain/Hero (V/H) thread is:

 

[GrieveWriter]

Name: Petra Schulze

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Species: Human/Reptile Hybrid

Height: 6'2"

Weight: 170 lbs

Appearance:

Occupation: Student

Quirk Function: Mutation

Quirk Abilities: Her regenerative tail can grow thick, poisoned spikes which she can wield or throw using either her hands or the tail itself. She grows these same spikes on her head but they're involuntary and have to be shaved down periodically. The tail is actually quite faster and stronger than than her other limbs; allowing her to balance on it, leap around using it, or use it to strike with the force of a sledgehammer. Besides that, if she focuses she can upchuck globs of toxic sludge from her mouth though much more sparingly than her spikes. Using this toxic sludge or regenerating her tail often leads to her dehydrating quickly, the rate of which increases the more she has to do it in rapid succession

Personality: Petra might be a narcissist, but she likes to believe she's a self-aware narcissist. A smooth-talker with an unconditional respect for the monetary value of everything and everyone, her love of money is rivaled only by her fascination with herself. She's got absolutely no qualms with devising contrived teasing or sub-textual compliments for most folks around her, her amusement with the faults of others is only really tempered by her desire for wealth and status. As self-centered as she is, Petra's appreciation for a good laugh can't be understated. As comedy was one of the few things she could really turn to as a youth, it has become ingrained as an absolute necessity in her mind.

Bio: Raised in a household where having enough money was practically an alien concept, Petra learned young just how important financing was for even attempting to have anything resembling a life. Deeming both her parents incapable of providing her with anything more than the sub-standard living they'd grown accustomed to, Petra sought ways to gain a better life for herself with her own two hands. Born with a mutation Quirk, she stood out from the crowd at the public schools like a sore thumb. Eventually, Petra became accustomed to the looks she'd get from other students, eventually reveling in it. Eventually coming to absolutely adore how different she was, Petra developed a charismatic ego that would fuel her interactions going forward.

Compared to most students, Petra was nothing if not consistent, and began manipulating her classmates through confident wordplay that most simply weren't ready for in their young age. Assembling a following of friends, Petra subtly utilized her influence with them and other students to finally substitute the meager offerings of food her home life could provide her. A snack here, a bite there, as long as she stayed subtle about where she borrowed food she went from constant hunger to well-fed extremely quickly. Throughout all of this she began to take more and more pride in her tail and grayish skin-tone, as they were the main physical characteristics that differentiated her from the masses. Soon she began using her tail more and more for moving around, training it up so it could be even more noticeable.

But then she hit puberty and an unexpected result upended her years of work. Not too long after hitting her double digits, Petra began to grow her toxic spikes. It was an incident involving the sudden appearance of one which led to the hospitalization of one of her inner circle of acquaintances. Though she was fascinated by discovering a new aspect of her quirk, she knew the sudden danger it provided towards her social standing. So, while experimenting with her quirk in her past time, Petra began the long and arduous task of mending and fixing bridges before the incident ruined everything. Unfortunately for her, that inciting incident was merely a catalyst for her other acquaintances to discover just how far her manipulation went. For years now Petra had subtly been borrowing money for vending machines, only to resell the snacks at higher prices elsewhere to profit when eventually paying back. This discovery led to numerous other ones which ended up tanking her reputation in middle school.

But by that point Petra wasn't one to sweat her own missteps. What did she have to worry about? She was her after all. So with her classmates suddenly far more difficult to string along, she took her accumulated talents to the streets. Having relied on her own sense of humor to keep her grounded during her youth, Petra set up numerous street gags, performances and tricks in order to maintain an income. Soon she spent far more time out performing than she did at home or school, becoming her own breadwinner. It was during one of these performances that she accidentally got involved in Heroics. She just so happened to be there when the Pro-Hero Dice Roll was in the midst of pursuing a villain and just so happened to help him subdue that villain using a few accurate spike throws.
Though Dice Roll showed his appreciation to her for her assistance and noted how she might make a good hero one day, it wasn't until the conversation led to Dice's particular finances that Petra was fully interested. Dice took note of her sudden change in tone, the two of them genuinely managing to connect in a way that day. With a bit of Dice's guidance and his eventual recommendation to UA, Petra was sure she'd found her next claim to fame.

Likes: Money, Humor, Performing, Wordplay, Self-Appreciation, Self-Care, teasing people, being called out for teasing people, Lemon-Spiced Ginger Ale

Dislikes: Being without money, folks who take themselves too seriously, Blind Optimism/ Blind Pessimism, Her Head Spikes being too long, Sweet-Sour Pork

Non-Quirk Skills: Athletic, Charismatic Speaker, Juggler, Finance Consultant, Street Performer, Blade Specialist, Straight-Faced Liar, General Wordsmith, Dancer​

 

[Kapowne]

Name: Petra Schulze

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Species: Human/Reptile Hybrid

Height: 6'2"

Weight: 170 lbs

Appearance:
View attachment 698990
Occupation: Student

Quirk Function: Mutation

Quirk Abilities: Her regenerative tail can grow thick, poisoned spikes which she can wield or throw using either her hands or the tail itself. She grows these same spikes on her head but they're involuntary and have to be shaved down periodically. The tail is actually quite faster and stronger than than her other limbs; allowing her to balance on it, leap around using it, or use it to strike with the force of a sledgehammer. Besides that, if she focuses she can upchuck globs of toxic sludge from her mouth though much more sparingly than her spikes. Using this toxic sludge or regenerating her tail often leads to her dehydrating quickly, the rate of which increases the more she has to do it in rapid succession

Personality: Petra might be a narcissist, but she likes to believe she's a self-aware narcissist. A smooth-talker with an unconditional respect for the monetary value of everything and everyone, her love of money is rivaled only by her fascination with herself. She's got absolutely no qualms with devising contrived teasing or sub-textual compliments for most folks around her, her amusement with the faults of others is only really tempered by her desire for wealth and status. As self-centered as she is, Petra's appreciation for a good laugh can't be understated. As comedy was one of the few things she could really turn to as a youth, it has become ingrained as an absolute necessity in her mind.

Bio: Raised in a household where having enough money was practically an alien concept, Petra learned young just how important financing was for even attempting to have anything resembling a life. Deeming both her parents incapable of providing her with anything more than the sub-standard living they'd grown accustomed to, Petra sought ways to gain a better life for herself with her own two hands. Born with a mutation Quirk, she stood out from the crowd at the public schools like a sore thumb. Eventually, Petra became accustomed to the looks she'd get from other students, eventually reveling in it. Eventually coming to absolutely adore how different she was, Petra developed a charismatic ego that would fuel her interactions going forward.

Compared to most students, Petra was nothing if not consistent, and began manipulating her classmates through confident wordplay that most simply weren't ready for in their young age. Assembling a following of friends, Petra subtly utilized her influence with them and other students to finally substitute the meager offerings of food her home life could provide her. A snack here, a bite there, as long as she stayed subtle about where she borrowed food she went from constant hunger to well-fed extremely quickly. Throughout all of this she began to take more and more pride in her tail and grayish skin-tone, as they were the main physical characteristics that differentiated her from the masses. Soon she began using her tail more and more for moving around, training it up so it could be even more noticeable.

But then she hit puberty and an unexpected result upended her years of work. Not too long after hitting her double digits, Petra began to grow her toxic spikes. It was an incident involving the sudden appearance of one which led to the hospitalization of one of her inner circle of acquaintances. Though she was fascinated by discovering a new aspect of her quirk, she knew the sudden danger it provided towards her social standing. So, while experimenting with her quirk in her past time, Petra began the long and arduous task of mending and fixing bridges before the incident ruined everything. Unfortunately for her, that inciting incident was merely a catalyst for her other acquaintances to discover just how far her manipulation went. For years now Petra had subtly been borrowing money for vending machines, only to resell the snacks at higher prices elsewhere to profit when eventually paying back. This discovery led to numerous other ones which ended up tanking her reputation in middle school.

But by that point Petra wasn't one to sweat her own missteps. What did she have to worry about? She was her after all. So with her classmates suddenly far more difficult to string along, she took her accumulated talents to the streets. Having relied on her own sense of humor to keep her grounded during her youth, Petra set up numerous street gags, performances and tricks in order to maintain an income. Soon she spent far more time out performing than she did at home or school, becoming her own breadwinner. It was during one of these performances that she accidentally got involved in Heroics. She just so happened to be there when the Pro-Hero Dice Roll was in the midst of pursuing a villain and just so happened to help him subdue that villain using a few accurate spike throws.
Though Dice Roll showed his appreciation to her for her assistance and noted how she might make a good hero one day, it wasn't until the conversation led to Dice's particular finances that Petra was fully interested. Dice took note of her sudden change in tone, the two of them genuinely managing to connect in a way that day. With a bit of Dice's guidance and his eventual recommendation to UA, Petra was sure she'd found her next claim to fame.

Likes: Money, Humor, Performing, Wordplay, Self-Appreciation, Self-Care, teasing people, being called out for teasing people, Lemon-Spiced Ginger Ale

Dislikes: Being without money, folks who take themselves too seriously, Blind Optimism/ Blind Pessimism, Her Head Spikes being too long, Sweet-Sour Pork

Non-Quirk Skills: Athletic, Charismatic Speaker, Juggler, Finance Consultant, Street Performer, Blade Specialist, Straight-Faced Liar, General Wordsmith, Dancer​

Approved, rules acceptance received and accepted as well. Please wait to post

 

[J. Africa]

Name: Allanon

Age: 15

Gender: male

Species: human

Height: 6 '3"

Weight: 120 lb

Appearance:
View attachment 699764

Spoiler: Allanons suit

View attachment 699766

Occupation: student

Quirk Function: as Allanon is still a student all it does is 1 make im look cool and 2 kill/seriously hurt and or damage a person

Quirk Name (Pro Heroes and Villians Only):

Quirk Abilities: when Allanon is using his it damages his spin and all his other vital parts arm,leg,ribs but other than that if used the wrong way right now can kill someone.

Personality: Allanon despite what he is like on the battle field he is a very shy and kind person he has a very very very little ego he thinks of others more than himself if somebody is being bullied he will stand up for them and do his best to help them.

Bio: when Allanon was a child both his parents died and he had to be raised by his aunt and uncle and his quirk didn't start to manifest until he was 9 years old. Luckily his uncle was a retired pro - hero he had to retire because he lost his right arm in a battle and his quirk relied on his right arm so his uncle gave him a letter of recommendation from ALLMIGHT that they were holding on to from years ago. he was born with white hair because of his mothers quirk her quirk was a ice quirk that made it so if she had a kid it would freeze them and so he lost all of his pigment in his hair. when he's uses his quirk it gives him a lot of wounds and bruises it also drains a lot of blood because when he dose use it, it's because he gets super emotional and over does it, it causes his wounds to open and him to lose blood. he usually try's to use his own physical strength in battle. he needs to wear contacts on his right eye to make it look the same as his left and even then he needs to wear glasses to help him see of - course because that's what glasses are for. he has an interest in all genders and humanoid species for reasons not even he knows. he has an interest in ice witch is a factor that his quirk can use.

Likes: Lemon-Spiced Ginger Ale, swords, staff's, caring for others mainly people he's in a relationship with, exercising, tea, villains, and other stuff

Dislikes: bully's, people with big ego's, and other stuff

Non-Quirk Skills: being able to use dual blades, speed, stealth, aim, agility, strength, guitar, music writing, singing, raping, telling lie's, and blacksmithing.

Could you be a bit more descriptive about what exactly Allanon's quirk does and how it functions? He uses his blood as a weapon?
Also under non-quirk skills I think you mean 'rapping'.

 

[FROSTBITE4395]

Could you be a bit more descriptive about what exactly Allanon's quirk does and how it functions? He uses his blood as a weapon?
Also under non-quirk skills I think you mean 'rapping'.

fixed it

 

[RoseAstasia]

FROSTBITE4395 , what does his quirk do besides damaging him. Like what does it affect or do to other people/things

 

[Kapowne]

Name: Allanon

Age: 15

Gender: male

Species: human

Height: 6 '3"

Weight: 120 lb

Appearance:
View attachment 699764

Spoiler: Allanons suit

View attachment 699766

Occupation: student

Quirk Function: as Allanon is still a student all it does is 1 make im look cool and 2 kill/seriously hurt and or damage a person

Quirk Name (Pro Heroes and Villians Only):

Quirk Abilities: when Allanon is using his it damages his spin and all his other vital parts arm,leg,ribs but other than that if used the wrong way right now can kill someone.

Personality: Allanon despite what he is like on the battle field he is a very shy and kind person he has a very very very little ego he thinks of others more than himself if somebody is being bullied he will stand up for them and do his best to help them.

Bio: when Allanon was a child both his parents died and he had to be raised by his aunt and uncle and his quirk didn't start to manifest until he was 9 years old. Luckily his uncle was a retired pro - hero he had to retire because he lost his right arm in a battle and his quirk relied on his right arm so his uncle gave him a letter of recommendation from ALLMIGHT that they were holding on to from years ago. he was born with white hair because of his mothers quirk her quirk was a ice quirk that made it so if she had a kid it would freeze them and so he lost all of his pigment in his hair. when he's uses his quirk it gives him a lot of wounds and bruises it also drains a lot of blood because when he dose use it, it's because he gets super emotional and over does it, it causes his wounds to open and him to lose blood. he usually try's to use his own physical strength in battle. he needs to wear contacts on his right eye to make it look the same as his left and even then he needs to wear glasses to help him see of - course because that's what glasses are for. he has an interest in all genders and humanoid species for reasons not even he knows. he has an interest in ice witch is a factor that his quirk can use.

Likes: Lemon-Spiced Ginger Ale, swords, staff's, caring for others mainly people he's in a relationship with, exercising, tea, villains, and other stuff

Dislikes: bully's, people with big ego's, and other stuff

Non-Quirk Skills: being able to use dual blades, speed, stealth, aim, agility, strength, guitar, music writing, singing, rapping, telling lie's, and blacksmithing.

if your confused on what his quirk does here is a little thing to clear it up: his quirk is a quirk can be used to destroy planets when used the wrong way but Allanon is not using that way he uses it in a way wear it helps his outer strength, his quirk when activated shakes everything around

Try reading some of the other character sheets on here to get an idea of the description we are looking for. Also, let’s not make it so powerful it can destroy planets..... have to give him room to develop and grow in class

 

[FROSTBITE4395]

deleted it for now i'm going to remake it once I understand it

 

[Dragonlord318]

Name: Allanon

Age: 15

Gender: male

Species: human

Height: 6 '3"

Weight: 120 lb

Appearance:
View attachment 699764

Spoiler: Allanons suit

View attachment 699766

Occupation: student

Quirk Function: as Allanon is still a student all it does is 1 make im look cool and 2 kill/seriously hurt and or damage a person

Quirk Name (Pro Heroes and Villians Only):

Quirk Abilities: when Allanon is using his it damages his spin and all his other vital parts arm,leg,ribs but other than that if used the wrong way right now can kill someone.

Personality: Allanon despite what he is like on the battle field he is a very shy and kind person he has a very very very little ego he thinks of others more than himself if somebody is being bullied he will stand up for them and do his best to help them.

Bio: when Allanon was a child both his parents died and he had to be raised by his aunt and uncle and his quirk didn't start to manifest until he was 9 years old. Luckily his uncle was a retired pro - hero he had to retire because he lost his right arm in a battle and his quirk relied on his right arm so his uncle gave him a letter of recommendation from ALLMIGHT that they were holding on to from years ago. he was born with white hair because of his mothers quirk her quirk was a ice quirk that made it so if she had a kid it would freeze them and so he lost all of his pigment in his hair. when he's uses his quirk it gives him a lot of wounds and bruises it also drains a lot of blood because when he dose use it, it's because he gets super emotional and over does it, it causes his wounds to open and him to lose blood. he usually try's to use his own physical strength in battle. he needs to wear contacts on his right eye to make it look the same as his left and even then he needs to wear glasses to help him see of - course because that's what glasses are for. he has an interest in all genders and humanoid species for reasons not even he knows. he has an interest in ice witch is a factor that his quirk can use.

Likes: Lemon-Spiced Ginger Ale, swords, staff's, caring for others mainly people he's in a relationship with, exercising, tea, villains, and other stuff

Dislikes: bully's, people with big ego's, and other stuff

Non-Quirk Skills: being able to use dual blades, speed, stealth, aim, agility, strength, guitar, music writing, singing, rapping, telling lie's, and blacksmithing.

if your confused on what his quirk does here is a little thing to clear it up: his quirk is a quirk can be used to destroy planets when used the wrong way but Allanon is not using that way he uses it in a way wear it helps his outer strength.

Hey man.

So...you said his quirk can destroy planets...

As Kapowne said, that's a bit far-fetched for a student. Please take the "description" at the end off.

Also, here's your quirk function and description:

Quirk Function: as Allanon is still a student all it does is 1 make im look cool and 2 kill/seriously hurt and or damage a person

Quirk Abilities: when Allanon is using his it damages his spin and all his other vital parts arm,leg,ribs but other than that if used the wrong way right now can kill someone

So, here's what we see:

What happens after he uses the quirk.

There's nothing in there about why it hurts him or damages other students.

It could be a super-speed quirk, or a quirk that twists reality, or even a telekenetic quirk.

You need to add the function that it has. Does he move rocks? Like J. Africa said, does he use his own blood?

I see you said it damages his spin. What does that mean?

 

[Kapowne]

deleted it for now i'm going to remake it once I understand it

Fair enough. Really looking forward to seeing the finished product

 

[BobbyJoe]

read my Jimmy oc
it should help FROSTBITE4395

 

[FROSTBITE4395]

Name: Allanon

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Species: human

Height: 5 '9"

Weight: 100 lb

Appearance:


Occupation: student

Quirk Function: Spectral limbs that he generates from his body, called Kagunes.

Quirk Abilities:He summons ghoulish animal parts and uses them to attack or defend, and using them improperly can damage his body. The more his adrenaline is pumping, the stronger his kagunes are. For instance, if a close friend is in danger his quirk will subconsciously activate and attack anyone nearby.

Spoiler: bikaku kugan

Personality: his personality is shy, and kind, he has a very small ego, he puts others before himself, he is a helper and a very hard worker, he hides his personal life from many of his friends, he stops bullies, he doesn't like to show emotion but when his quirk activates you know it's for a good reason

Bio: when Allanon was born his mom died and a year after his dad who was a pro hero died but much like Deku who had his quirk passed down to him Allanon also had his quirk passed down to him, he had to be raised by his uncle and aunt when he turned 15 he got a letter of recommendation from ALLMIGHT that his uncle had been holding on for him until then, Allanon didn't know that his quirk was passed down to him he didn't even think that he had a quirk because his uncle(dad) and his aunt(mom) didn't have quirks but when his quirk was suddenly activated it was because a childhood friend was in danger to Allanon being the caring guy he is almost broke his back for this guy as he would with any of his friends, he especially loves the pro - hero manipulator he has books and books on him as well as posters he even has a bookshelf full of notes on his moves and ability's, when he is using his quirk he can only hold it for an hour or two because of the pain, and has villain like thoughts.

Likes: dual swords, sleeping, books, writing music, raping, guitar, and singing

Dislikes: bullies, killing people (but does it when he loses control to his emotions), and large crowds

Non-Quirk Skills: he does his best to only use his dual blades in battle

Spoiler: dual blades

, speed (he can run super fast cause he used to go jogging with his friend who had a speed quirk that also helps him draw his blades), jumping (he can jump on to the sides of buildings and give himself a huge boost to get to another building), drawing (he can draw really wall), raping (when he's not in school he's a rapper), he is really good at comforting people, and he's good with kids.

 

[Kapowne]

Name: Allanon

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Species: human

Height: 5 '9"

Weight: 100 lb

Appearance:
View attachment 699893

Occupation: student

Quirk Function: his quirk is usually based of his Adrenalin levels but his also works off of his emotions like for instance if a close friend of his is in danger his quirk will randomly activate and he wont be able to stop it because he's the one who starts it. when he uses it he gets wounds and bruises because of the pain it inflicts upon his body like his spine and brain the only reason it does this is because his quirk requires years to fully manifest and he started to show signs of having a quirk when he was 9 so when he's in his 20's he'll be able to fully use it because by then he will be able to perfectly link his spine and brain together.

Quirk Abilities: his quirks ability's are hard to explain but he can form shapes that are called ukaku, koukaku, rinkaku, and bikaku Kugans

Spoiler: bikaku kugan

View attachment 699919

Personality: his personality is shy, and kind, he has a very small ego, he puts others before himself, he is a helper and a very hard worker, he hides his personal life from many of his friends, he stops bullies, he doesn't like to show emotion but when his quirk activates you know it's for a good reason

Bio: when Allanon was born his mom died and a year after his dad who was a pro hero died but much like Deku who had his quirk passed down to him Allanon also had his quirk passed down to him, he had to be raised by his uncle and aunt when he turned 15 he got a letter of recommendation from ALLMIGHT that his uncle had been holding on for him until then, Allanon didn't know that his quirk was passed down to him he didn't even think that he had a quirk because his uncle(dad) and his aunt(mom) didn't have quirks but when his quirk was suddenly activated it was because a childhood friend was in danger to Allanon being the caring guy he is almost broke his back for this guy as he would with any of his friends, he especially loves the pro - hero manipulator he has books and books on him as well as posters he even has a bookshelf full of notes on his moves and ability's, when he is using his quirk he can only hold it for an hour or two because of the pain, and has villain like thoughts.

Likes: dual swords, sleeping, books, writing music, raping, guitar, and singing

Dislikes: bullies, killing people (but does it when he loses control to his emotions), and large crowds

Non-Quirk Skills: he does his best to only use his dual blades in battle

Spoiler: dual blades

View attachment 699911

, speed (he can run super fast cause he used to go jogging with his friend who had a speed quirk that also helps him draw his blades), jumping (he can jump on to the sides of buildings and give himself a huge boost to get to another building), drawing (he can draw really wall), raping (when he's not in school he's a rapper), he is really good at comforting people, and he's good with kids.

extra information on his quirk: his quirk ability's are weapon type things that his body creates and when that happens his right eye changes shape and color, it changes into a full circle and then the pupil turns into a very small red dot and everything around it is black, when his quirk is at full extent his eye looks like it's going to burst.

Alright much better, we’re almost there. But we still need to know more about the quirk itself. Is it just all of the kakugane combined into one quirk? And for those that aren’t familiar what are those abilities? You want to be very very clear on what your characters quirks are so that the other players can reference back to it when they are RPIng with you. Try looking at the character sheets I made for Desmond and heavens man as an example. I give specific instances of how their quirks can be used. What their effects and draw backs are.

Examples of questions you could try answering could be: what does an attack using his quirk look like? How does it manifest? In what non combat ways can he utilize the quirk? (I know these questions might not exactly work with regards to your character) but it gets you thinking. The more you endersrand the specifics and limitations of your quirk, the easier to put to words and this the easier for us all to understand

 

[Dragonlord318]

Name: Allanon

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Species: human

Height: 5 '9"

Weight: 100 lb

Appearance:
View attachment 699893

Occupation: student

Quirk Function: his quirk is usually based of his Adrenalin levels but his also works off of his emotions like for instance if a close friend of his is in danger his quirk will randomly activate and he wont be able to stop it because he's the one who starts it. when he uses it he gets wounds and bruises because of the pain it inflicts upon his body like his spine and brain the only reason it does this is because his quirk requires years to fully manifest and he started to show signs of having a quirk when he was 9 so when he's in his 20's he'll be able to fully use it because by then he will be able to perfectly link his spine and brain together.

Quirk Abilities: his quirks ability's are hard to explain but he can form shapes that are called ukaku, koukaku, rinkaku, and bikaku Kugans

Spoiler: bikaku kugan

View attachment 699919

Personality: his personality is shy, and kind, he has a very small ego, he puts others before himself, he is a helper and a very hard worker, he hides his personal life from many of his friends, he stops bullies, he doesn't like to show emotion but when his quirk activates you know it's for a good reason

Bio: when Allanon was born his mom died and a year after his dad who was a pro hero died but much like Deku who had his quirk passed down to him Allanon also had his quirk passed down to him, he had to be raised by his uncle and aunt when he turned 15 he got a letter of recommendation from ALLMIGHT that his uncle had been holding on for him until then, Allanon didn't know that his quirk was passed down to him he didn't even think that he had a quirk because his uncle(dad) and his aunt(mom) didn't have quirks but when his quirk was suddenly activated it was because a childhood friend was in danger to Allanon being the caring guy he is almost broke his back for this guy as he would with any of his friends, he especially loves the pro - hero manipulator he has books and books on him as well as posters he even has a bookshelf full of notes on his moves and ability's, when he is using his quirk he can only hold it for an hour or two because of the pain, and has villain like thoughts.

Likes: dual swords, sleeping, books, writing music, raping, guitar, and singing

Dislikes: bullies, killing people (but does it when he loses control to his emotions), and large crowds

Non-Quirk Skills: he does his best to only use his dual blades in battle

Spoiler: dual blades

View attachment 699911

, speed (he can run super fast cause he used to go jogging with his friend who had a speed quirk that also helps him draw his blades), jumping (he can jump on to the sides of buildings and give himself a huge boost to get to another building), drawing (he can draw really wall), raping (when he's not in school he's a rapper), he is really good at comforting people, and he's good with kids.

extra information on his quirk: his quirk ability's are weapon type things that his body creates and when that happens his right eye changes shape and color, it changes into a full circle and then the pupil turns into a very small red dot and everything around it is black, when his quirk is at full extent his eye looks like it's going to burst.

I second Kapowne 's assessment. As I said before, you should describe how he uses the Kagumes.

 

[FROSTBITE4395]

hopefully thats good

 

[FROSTBITE4395]

wait explain how he uses it or what it's main function is

 

[Dragonlord318]

wait explain how he uses it or what it's main function is

Ok. So, he summons ghoulish animal parts and uses them to attack or defend, correct?

And using them improperly can damage his body, correct?

And the more his adrenaline is pumping, the stronger his kagunes are, correct?

 

[FROSTBITE4395]

exactly wow that was the more correct than any one else has guessed

 

[Dragonlord318]

exactly wow that was the more correct than any one else has guessed

Ok. Well, to be fair, this is the most you've ever explained it lol.

Approved. Please wait for intro post before starting.

I'll edit your CS to make it easier to read.

 

[FROSTBITE4395]

k thats great

 

[Dragonlord318]

k thats great

Done.

 

[FactionParadox]

J. Africa

I'm here

 

[J. Africa]

FactionParadox
Ok, I like it a lot, it's really cool. Just a few things.
First, I think the Destruction and Time magic powers might be too overpowered. Maybe over time he could discover his ability to use 1 of these, but both I think would be too much.
Second, what would the MP be in this context? Physical or mental energy? Some third well of energy that's reserved for his quirk? And how would he keep track of it and know how much has been used or unused?

 

[FactionParadox]

I'm thinking he'd likely discover destruction magic as a counterpoint to creation magic since the ability to alter time feels like it could get OP quickly and would negate his glass cannon status by simply being too fast.
MP is a mental energy and as for how he can tell how much he has used or has left, it's like a battery bar.
There's no numbers, but he has a pretty good idea of how much he has left and how long it will take to "recharge".
As for how MP recharges, he produces it naturally and it's like resting your muscles, but it's a slow process.
J. Africa

 

[FactionParadox]

We could lock destruction magic to Trance State at 20% or higher anger as he loses his inhibitions about his magic and begins lashing out, willing to push his Quirk in a more violent and dangerous direction.