Fantasy Entrance to 'The Rift'

[Alphaius]

@Alphaius Yes I am. You are welcome to sign up.

Why thank you kind,sir do you have any positions open for a Brutish monster?

 

[YoungX]

@Alphaius At this RP we really don't have positions. You are welcome to be who you want, so long as you aren't OP. Creativity is always welcome.

 

[YoungX]

@Anyone I changed the rules a bit to be more lenient for everyone. You should check it when you have time as soon as possible.

 

[Trust]

How do you rp the proper way? I've always been using "*"

 

[YoungX]

@Trust You can still type in first person. It'll be like a character in first-person in a novel. Let give an example: "I went towards the chasm, and stopped towards the edge and gazed upon the depths. It felt like I could slip and fall towards the abyss at any moment. Sweat was rolling down my neck, and there nothing but a frozen fear within me." You could also just look at others in third person for examples.

 

[Idea]

quote= Quinn rolled to the side, off of the woman he'd landed on. A tall, beautiful girl with striking blonde hair lay next to him clutching a staff and looking none too pleased about Quinn's introduction. He lifted himself to his knee and spotted his blades several yards away. As the girl lifted herself up Quinn turned back. "Apologies love, got business." With a wink and a cocksure smile he stole off after his weapons; the rampaging beast was only getting madder by the minute.


@Bawadaboo , may I respectfully ask you refrain from controlling other people´s characters? Your character fell on top of someone, and you decided a whole bunch of actions (cluntching the staff, not looking pleased, getting up...) for her without permission (to my knowledge, apologies if you did ask for permission). This is not just rude, but also against the rules. I know it doesn´t regard ME yet, however, it is likely to escalate. As such, please be more careful.

 

[Idea]

How do you rp the proper way? I've always been using "*"

@Trust You can still type in first person. It'll be like a character in first-person in a novel. Let give an example: "I went towards the chasm, and stopped towards the edge and gazed upon the depths. It felt like I could slip and fall towards the abyss at any moment. Sweat was rolling down my neck, and there nothing but a frozen fear within me." You could also just look at others in third person for examples.

Or look at mine. I do it "the proper way" in first...

 

[YoungX]

@Idea That too. I was actually referring to you, but I forgot to actually name you. Sorry about that.

 

[Idea]

@YoungX , Jesus, slow down a little.... I get it you don´t want this to take forever and all, but I can't type that fast, and there are some players who didn´t even get a chance to react the ape APPEARING yet. You can´t just do a whole fighting sequence and ignore those others were there....

 

[YoungX]

@Idea Point taken. I'll try and slow things down to an appropriate point.

 

[Idea]

@Idea That too. I was actually referring to you, but I forgot to actually name you. Sorry about that.

no need to apologize, you did nothing wrong...

 

[YoungX]

@Idea Well I'm still a growing Rper, so all this feedback is really helping me. Thanks for the help.

 

[Idea]

@Idea Point taken. I'll try and slow things down to an appropriate point.

thank you

 

[Idea]

@Idea Well I'm still a growing Rper, so all this feedback is really helping me. Thanks for the help.

No problem! I am glad to be appreciated rather than causing a ruckus... (I can get pushy, I know it.) Still, I wouldn´t advise taking what I say for granted, it would be a lie to say I´m any kind of pro.

 

[YoungX]

@Idea Perhaps, but hey it's all in the spirit of the RP right?

 

[Idea]

@Idea Perhaps, but hey it's all in the spirit of the RP right?

yeah. Either way, I gotta wait for the water dud to get my character released, so I´ll refrain from posting till then. Got plans for the longterm?

 

[YoungX]

@Idea Yeah I get what you mean, in any case I definitely have a lot of things planned, such as finding all sorts of loot to facing giants and what not. It'll be quite the adventure I'm sure of it!

 

[Trust]

Thanks, (test sentence) as i was walking down the hills of unmatched cold, i fell onto a mysterious stranger "sorry" i said as i lept off him and resumed walking down the hill


(That what it should be like?)

 

[YoungX]

@Trust Yes, but don't forget to always capitalize 'i.' Grammar can be pretty important in an RP, and I'm sure everyone will improve by the end of this Rp, whenever that is.

 

[Trust]

@Trust Yes, but don't forget to always capitalize 'i.' Grammar can be pretty important in an RP, and I'm sure everyone will improve by the end of this Rp, whenever that is.

Ok, thank you for the tips :3

 

[YoungX]

@Trust No problem. This RP is also meant to help beginners and experts alike. To be frank I'm learning a lot more right now!

 

[Idea]

Thanks, (test sentence) as i was walking down the hills of unmatched cold, i fell onto a mysterious stranger "sorry" i said as i lept off him and resumed walking down the hill
(That what it should be like?)

only one tiny detail wrong. Dialog needs paragraph. Like this:


As I walking down the hills of unmatched cold, I fell onto a mysterious stranger.


"Sorry" I said as I lept off him and resumed walking down the hill.


and what @YoungX said too

 

[Trust]

Does that mean i can go in now? Also where is the starting point, is it like a space pod or something? Or a ship of some sort?

 

[Alphaius]

Fair warning I am dyslexic and rely heavily on my iPhone autocorrect,so if I mess up my punctuation please forgive me I literally cannot see it. That being said rest assured I will put forth my best effort.

 

[YoungX]

@Trust The intro point is listed in the intro post I made. You should read that first to get the idea. Then read everything after to catch up on the situation.


@Alphaius That's fine by me. If you mess up the punctuation, then I'm sure I can just fix it.