Fantasy Chaos in Wonderland ( OOC )

[Xan]

@Xan
*Whispers* Who's Whitey?

*whispers back* The white queen. I just now realized it could seem like a typo for Whitney

 

[Kazehana]

*whispers back* The white queen. I just now realized it could seem like a typo for Whitney

I figured it wasn't because of the quotes around it lol


By I mean, I had no idea who 'Eyebrows' was even supposed to be until she responded so

 

[Xan]

I figured it wasn't because of the quotes around it lol
By I mean, I had no idea who 'Eyebrows' was even supposed to be until she responded so

LOL its whoever has the biggest, most majestic eyebrows

 

[Kazehana]

LOL its whoever has the biggest, most majestic eyebrows

I mean.. I guess xD


Have any of the students not affiliated with either done anything yet?

 

[Xan]

I mean.. I guess xD
Have any of the students not affiliated with either done anything yet?

I think Howard is talking to Mimi, but I didn't check so that could be wrong.


I can always throw Xiahe out there, just say the word.

 

[Kazehana]

I think Howard is talking to Mimi, but I didn't check so that could be wrong.
I can always throw Xiahe out there, just say the word.

Oh yeah that might be a thing lol


I mean, it's up to you. I don't see what she would do though tbh

 

[Xan]

Oh yeah that might be a thing lol
I mean, it's up to you. I don't see what she would do though tbh

Me either but I'm good at typing posts until someone notices me

 

[Kazehana]

Me either but I'm good at typing posts until someone notices me

We'll have to make like senpai and never notice

 

[Luthor]

I'll apologise now for my absolutely awful french, used in Julian's stalker note.

 

[Kazehana]

Pansexual/Asexual

??? These are opposites

 

[NekoQueen49]

??? These are opposites

It means she doesn't have much of an interest, but if she did, she could get with anyone

 

[Needle]

I'll apologise now for my absolutely awful french, used in Julian's stalker note.

I mean, you could change the last part to ne oserais jamais le faire sans votre permission, but its pretty much perfect anyways far from awful

 

[Kazehana]

Ma reine,
Je suis très dèsolé pour cette après-midi! Je n'oserais jamais faire ça n'avec pas votre permission.


Cordialement à vous,


Julian

The opener is good, maybe with a lil' "chère" as an adjective if you want, but it's fairly meh


Your accents are wrong on désolé


L'après-midi is masculine, so it would be "cet après-midi"


Also, your preposition needs to go before the infinitive, so it would be "Je n'oserais jamais le faire"


"Ne pas" is only used with verbs, so it would be "sans permission" or I suppose "sans votre permission" to be more precise


The closer works if he considers her to be a friend, so it works fine


So it would most likely read:


Ma reine,


Je suis très désolé pour cet après-midi! Je n'oserais jamais le faire sans votre permission.


Cordialement à vous,


Julian

 

[Mitchs98]

The opener is good, maybe with a lil' "chère" as an adjective if you want, but it's fairly meh
Your accents are wrong on désolé


L'après-midi is masculine, so it would be "cet après-midi"


Also, your preposition needs to go before the infinitive, so it would be "Je n'oserais jamais le faire"


"Ne pas" is only used with verbs, so it would be "sans permission" or I suppose "sans votre permission" to be more precise


The closer works if he considers her to be a friend, so it works fine


So it would most likely read:


Ma reine,


Je suis très désolé pour cet après-midi! Je n'oserais jamais le faire sans votre permission.


Cordialement à vous,


Julian

You made my brain hurt, y u do dis

 

[Kazehana]

You made my brain hurt, y u do dis

What? I just stated a few language rules d:


You don't even know french so why did you read it?

 

[Mitchs98]

What? I just stated a few language rules d:
You don't even know french so why did you read it?

Curiosity, boredom, and jackshit to do. *shrug*

 

[Kazehana]

Curiosity, boredom, and jackshit to do. *shrug*

Don't you have a job?

 

[Mitchs98]

Don't you have a job?

Currently? No. Looking for le work and doing part time shiza

 

[Kazehana]

Currently? No. Looking for le work and doing part time shiza

Well good luck with that lol

 

[Needle]

The opener is good, maybe with a lil' "chère" as an adjective if you want, but it's fairly meh
Your accents are wrong on désolé


L'après-midi is masculine, so it would be "cet après-midi"


Also, your preposition needs to go before the infinitive, so it would be "Je n'oserais jamais le faire"


"Ne pas" is only used with verbs, so it would be "sans permission" or I suppose "sans votre permission" to be more precise


The closer works if he considers her to be a friend, so it works fine


So it would most likely read:


Ma reine,


Je suis très désolé pour cet après-midi! Je n'oserais jamais le faire sans votre permission.


Cordialement à vous,


Julian

Y u do dis ;-;


Like I am french and my grammar would never be so on point ;-;-;-;-;-;

 

[Kazehana]

Y u do dis ;-;
Like I am french and my grammar would never be so on point ;-;-;-;-;-;

Let's be real native english speakers are trash with their grammar


It's not just you

 

[Mitchs98]

Let's be real native english speakers are trash with their grammar
It's not just you

I like to think I have decent grammar d:...

 

[Kazehana]

I like to think I have decent grammar d:...

Some people really just don't though

 

[Mitchs98]

Some people really just don't though

Oh, believe me. I know. Moderating and Adminning game servers, you ask the person what their first language is to get someone who could better assist them: English.

 

[NekoQueen49]

There is almost four times the OOC than the IC, lol