Twenty-Fifth Baam
The Irregular
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We'll I'm back.
Did I miss anything?
QuirkyAngel it´s common courtesy to at least ask to join a roleplay before posting a character on someone´s thread
Yes, make sure you read everything you're supposed to thoughMy apologies. I wanted to finish my cs before introducing myself in the ooc.
May I join?
Yes, make sure you read everything you're supposed to though
I have a bit of a headache, but everything else is fineGood morning, you lovely people~ How are y'all doing today?
Good morning, you lovely people~ How are y'all doing today?
Ah, headaches are awful. Have you taken anything for it?I have a bit of a headache, but everything else is fine
Well, I hope that you find something to do! I'll probably get up and read here directlyMornin' soul.
I'm doing fine, just bored as I've got nothing to do.
…and that was Yumi O’Flanery, the only daughter of the comedic—yet oddly powerful— hero O-Rider.
The cause is unlikely to be that of anything medication could aid in, it´s more likely to have do do with the weather here. It+s basically a waiting game for it to go away nowAh, headaches are awful. Have you taken anything for it?
In any case, I hope you feel better soon!The cause is unlikely to be that of anything medication could aid in, it´s more likely to have do do with the weather here. It+s basically a waiting game for it to go away now
Good morning, you lovely people~ How are y'all doing today?
Nah, you didn't forget! I got the notification a bit agooh Strawberraki I think I forgot to tag you in the announcements?
QuirkyAngel the more I read your character the more I have to question if you have ever seen or read boku no hero academia at all?
Well...I've seen the anime, but I'm not up to date with everything that goes on in the manga. Is there something wrong with the cs?
Well...
*genetic manipulation is not so advanced in this world you could manipulate someone in the way you described, and there most certainly isn´t a genetics lab lying around in a high school. Assuming your character did somehow invent such a form of genetic manipulation, he wouldn´t be using it on a child so soon, and likely would have been long since been kidnapped by villains and the technology could have plunged things into chaos... The implications are just too big for it to even be considered as a possibility, ey this genetic manipulation seems to be the very center of everything in your CS. Genetic manipulation in a world of genetic superpowers would equal massive hordes of power, a superweapon and it´s existence is simply not consistent with the universe the RP and the anime are set in.
*A bit along that vein too, "born with plant DNA" is not a thing. It could be her quirk, sure, but quirks aren´t genetic manipulation they are a product of evolution.
This is going at it in general though. These are the things that led me to suspect you might not have watched the show or read the manga at all. There are other issues, such as the overpowered snowballing quirk you gave your character and a personality in need of expansion, but with the genetics being such a central element to what you crafted there, the character might just need a full revamp.
Yeah, you´re gonna have to remove the thing about genetic manipulation, it simply can´t exist if this universe is to remain consistent at all.Rose isn't a product of genetic manipulation...unless you count the breeding of quirks genetic manipulation (which I guess it sort of is, in a way). Her dad only studied her. Her mother was a product of genetic manipulation (more like a homunculous), but I really don't mind changing the stuff about Crimson Ivy and making her an actual hero. She's just part of Rose's background. Rose is a child of evolution.
Accumulatting quirks like that is not gonna pass with me at all, sorry. Not only is it building on TOP of her other atributes in each individual quirk, but multiple quirk usage + being able to manipulate them to an extent and other things just no....Her quirk certainly does get more powerful overtime and I'm willing to add conditions to her quirk, so it seems less overpowered
Just give me more sides to the character, preferably not the kind which is an outright contradiction and therefore not approvable. Tell me about aspects of the character not directly related to anything you wrote in her personality so far nor to any skills she may or not have, humanize her and make her less one-dimensional.How do you think I should expand her personality?
It states in her CS that the DNA of what she takes in is used for the creation of these flower hybrids. For all intends and purposes , they are her weapon and part of her.Idea I could be wrong about this, but I don't think Rose's Quirk is focused on gaining more abilities for herself. It seems like a cross between Suneater's Quirk, along with the ones used by plant producers like Kamui Woods. Her background mentions genetics, so it could be like the passing of traits that's seen in botany.
I apologize if I'm wrong about this, but I thought I'd tried to make it a bit clearer, just in case of some misunderstanding.
Yeah, you´re gonna have to remove the thing about genetic manipulation, it simply can´t exist if this universe is to remain consistent at all.
Accumulatting quirks like that is not gonna pass with me at all, sorry. Not only is it building on TOP of her other atributes in each individual quirk, but multiple quirk usage + being able to manipulate them to an extent and other things just no....
I CAN allow you to use a quirk that allows her to copy other quirks, but I can´t allow you to accumulate them. But even just that copying, not accounting for any form of multiple quirk usage even, is already gonna require plenty of limitations.
Just give me more sides to the character, preferably not the kind which is an outright contradiction and therefore not approvable. Tell me about aspects of the character not directly related to anything you wrote in her personality so far nor to any skills she may or not have, humanize her and make her less one-dimensional.