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Fandom Boku no Hero: Peace Sign Academia OOC

…and that was Yumi O’Flanery, the only daughter of the comedic—yet oddly powerful— hero O-Rider.
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I've seen the anime, but I'm not up to date with everything that goes on in the manga. Is there something wrong with the cs?
Well...
*genetic manipulation is not so advanced in this world you could manipulate someone in the way you described, and there most certainly isn´t a genetics lab lying around in a high school. Assuming your character did somehow invent such a form of genetic manipulation, he wouldn´t be using it on a child so soon, and likely would have been long since been kidnapped by villains and the technology could have plunged things into chaos... The implications are just too big for it to even be considered as a possibility, ey this genetic manipulation seems to be the very center of everything in your CS. Genetic manipulation in a world of genetic superpowers would equal massive hordes of power, a superweapon and it´s existence is simply not consistent with the universe the RP and the anime are set in.

*A bit along that vein too, "born with plant DNA" is not a thing. It could be her quirk, sure, but quirks aren´t genetic manipulation they are a product of evolution.

This is going at it in general though. These are the things that led me to suspect you might not have watched the show or read the manga at all. There are other issues, such as the overpowered snowballing quirk you gave your character and a personality in need of expansion, but with the genetics being such a central element to what you crafted there, the character might just need a full revamp.
 
Well...
*genetic manipulation is not so advanced in this world you could manipulate someone in the way you described, and there most certainly isn´t a genetics lab lying around in a high school. Assuming your character did somehow invent such a form of genetic manipulation, he wouldn´t be using it on a child so soon, and likely would have been long since been kidnapped by villains and the technology could have plunged things into chaos... The implications are just too big for it to even be considered as a possibility, ey this genetic manipulation seems to be the very center of everything in your CS. Genetic manipulation in a world of genetic superpowers would equal massive hordes of power, a superweapon and it´s existence is simply not consistent with the universe the RP and the anime are set in.

*A bit along that vein too, "born with plant DNA" is not a thing. It could be her quirk, sure, but quirks aren´t genetic manipulation they are a product of evolution.

This is going at it in general though. These are the things that led me to suspect you might not have watched the show or read the manga at all. There are other issues, such as the overpowered snowballing quirk you gave your character and a personality in need of expansion, but with the genetics being such a central element to what you crafted there, the character might just need a full revamp.

Rose isn't a product of genetic manipulation...unless you count the breeding of quirks genetic manipulation (which I guess it sort of is, in a way). Her dad only studied her. Her mother was a product of genetic manipulation (more like a homunculous with a quirk), but I really don't mind changing the stuff about Crimson Ivy and making her an actual hero. She's just part of Rose's background. Rose is a child of evolution.

Plant DNA and genetic manipulation are both part of her quirk. I suppose, it's more accurate to say her quirk is the crossing of species with plant DNA. It's specific to plants (which is related to her mothers quirk).

Her quirk certainly does get more powerful overtime and I'm willing to add conditions to her quirk, so it seems less overpowered, but if I'm going to redo it all, I may as well make another character <.< How do you think I should expand her personality?
 
Rose isn't a product of genetic manipulation...unless you count the breeding of quirks genetic manipulation (which I guess it sort of is, in a way). Her dad only studied her. Her mother was a product of genetic manipulation (more like a homunculous), but I really don't mind changing the stuff about Crimson Ivy and making her an actual hero. She's just part of Rose's background. Rose is a child of evolution.
Yeah, you´re gonna have to remove the thing about genetic manipulation, it simply can´t exist if this universe is to remain consistent at all.

Her quirk certainly does get more powerful overtime and I'm willing to add conditions to her quirk, so it seems less overpowered
Accumulatting quirks like that is not gonna pass with me at all, sorry. Not only is it building on TOP of her other atributes in each individual quirk, but multiple quirk usage + being able to manipulate them to an extent and other things just no....
I CAN allow you to use a quirk that allows her to copy other quirks, but I can´t allow you to accumulate them. But even just that copying, not accounting for any form of multiple quirk usage even, is already gonna require plenty of limitations.

How do you think I should expand her personality?
Just give me more sides to the character, preferably not the kind which is an outright contradiction and therefore not approvable. Tell me about aspects of the character not directly related to anything you wrote in her personality so far nor to any skills she may or not have, humanize her and make her less one-dimensional.
 
Idea Idea I could be wrong about this, but I don't think Rose's Quirk is focused on gaining more abilities for herself. It seems like a cross between Suneater's Quirk, along with the ones used by plant producers like Kamui Woods. Her background mentions genetics, so it could be like the passing of traits that's seen in botany.

I apologize if I'm wrong about this, but I thought I'd tried to make it a bit clearer, just in case of some misunderstanding.
 
Idea Idea I could be wrong about this, but I don't think Rose's Quirk is focused on gaining more abilities for herself. It seems like a cross between Suneater's Quirk, along with the ones used by plant producers like Kamui Woods. Her background mentions genetics, so it could be like the passing of traits that's seen in botany.

I apologize if I'm wrong about this, but I thought I'd tried to make it a bit clearer, just in case of some misunderstanding.
It states in her CS that the DNA of what she takes in is used for the creation of these flower hybrids. For all intends and purposes , they are her weapon and part of her.
It also states that she stores said DNA in her flower for future breeding. This means every piece of DNA she ever uses for this, including one capable of manifesting quirks, is retained and can be later used as is in fact exemplified by the special move.

Regardless, even Suneater can only keep manifesting things for a couple of hours (while they are still in his digestive system). And that´s already plenty powerful, so you would add kamui woods on top of that, on an untrained student?
 
Yeah, you´re gonna have to remove the thing about genetic manipulation, it simply can´t exist if this universe is to remain consistent at all.

Sure. The changes will be made when I get back from work.

Accumulatting quirks like that is not gonna pass with me at all, sorry. Not only is it building on TOP of her other atributes in each individual quirk, but multiple quirk usage + being able to manipulate them to an extent and other things just no....
I CAN allow you to use a quirk that allows her to copy other quirks, but I can´t allow you to accumulate them. But even just that copying, not accounting for any form of multiple quirk usage even, is already gonna require plenty of limitations.

What if I add conditions? I imagine the mashing of quicks would lead to a pretty unstable creature...so a time limit before the mandrake withers away?

Accumulation is the method I imagine for which Rose skill improves. I mean, I could just say her mandrakes get stronger over time, but then that wouldn't go along with her quirk, which is genetic manipulation -_- She has to steal the hair of a person with a quirk first in order to give her mandrake the quirk anyway. And I doubt people would willing assist her in the creation of an ultimate creature...especially since her quirk isn't a secret. To gain a quirk she has to first beat someone with a quirk. Or ask nicely <.<

Just give me more sides to the character, preferably not the kind which is an outright contradiction and therefore not approvable. Tell me about aspects of the character not directly related to anything you wrote in her personality so far nor to any skills she may or not have, humanize her and make her less one-dimensional.

Hmm, so more likes and dislikes? I shall ponder more sides to her when I get back home.
 

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