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    Human Mute Ultimate Friendship Alliance (HMUFA)


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    Here at the HMUFA, mutes and humans alike gather together to drink, joke, jest, and trade. Here, any and all differences are set aside in mutual cooperation.

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how's it going? any idea what kind of character you might make?

Semblance Semblance Let me know if anything in my CS doesn't work.
Ooo your character has a lot of potential! I love that you chose a mongoose and the social structure you created for them is interesting.

Could you expand on her strengths and flaws a bit more? Maybe just an extra couple sentences for each section

Same as CelticHero37. I have no qualms with editing
I love the assassin vibe you have going with Jet. It seems like his and Celtic's character have similar motivations (one is anti-bullies and the other is pro-helping the vulnerable), so they'd probably get along well

Just a reminder tho that the Great Mutant Outbreak happened 200 years ago so Flame would not have remembered the surface at all. He would have been born and raised in the burrows. Do you mind editing the background so that it aligns with this?
 
how's it going? any idea what kind of character you might make?


Ooo your character has a lot of potential! I love that you chose a mongoose and the social structure you created for them is interesting.

Could you expand on her strengths and flaws a bit more? Maybe just an extra couple sentences for each section


I love the assassin vibe you have going with Jet. It seems like his and Celtic's character have similar motivations (one is anti-bullies and the other is pro-helping the vulnerable), so they'd probably get along well

Just a reminder tho that the Great Mutant Outbreak happened 200 years ago so Flame would not have remembered the surface at all. He would have been born and raised in the burrows. Do you mind editing the background so that it aligns with this?

...did I mention Flame remembering the surface?

All I can see is the first sentance, but I meant that to reference your starter xD
 
how's it going? any idea what kind of character you might make?


Ooo your character has a lot of potential! I love that you chose a mongoose and the social structure you created for them is interesting.

Could you expand on her strengths and flaws a bit more? Maybe just an extra couple sentences for each section


I love the assassin vibe you have going with Jet. It seems like his and Celtic's character have similar motivations (one is anti-bullies and the other is pro-helping the vulnerable), so they'd probably get along well

Just a reminder tho that the Great Mutant Outbreak happened 200 years ago so Flame would not have remembered the surface at all. He would have been born and raised in the burrows. Do you mind editing the background so that it aligns with this?
Yeah, I'll think on it a bit more. I didn't feel the best about that part myself, but I wanted to get something out to give you an idea of what I was going for.
 
...did I mention Flame remembering the surface?

All I can see is the first sentance, but I meant that to reference your starter xD
Oh I probably just misunderstood you then! I interpreted that as Flame himself got kicked off the surface but I assume you mean people as a whole

Yeah, I'll think on it a bit more. I didn't feel the best about that part myself, but I wanted to get something out to give you an idea of what I was going for.
I really like what I see so far! I would love more details in the "Inside" tab section

Semblance Semblance not too sure yet will either go with a human or maybe a lizard that is a bit obessive with "good" food.. aka thinks thier a good cook lol
Oh I think Celtic's character, Jet, is a really good cook too. Perhaps you could switch it up a bit with something else they're obsessed with? It could be totally random haha
 
Oh I probably just misunderstood you then! I interpreted that as Flame himself got kicked off the surface but I assume you mean people as a whole


I really like what I see so far! I would love more details in the "Inside" tab section


Oh I think Celtic's character, Jet, is a really good cook too. Perhaps you could switch it up a bit with something else they're obsessed with? It could be totally random haha

Ah, yeah, admittedly that was a bit confusingly worded xD

((Themself; they're nb))
 
Oh I probably just misunderstood you then! I interpreted that as Flame himself got kicked off the surface but I assume you mean people as a whole


I really like what I see so far! I would love more details in the "Inside" tab section


Oh I think Celtic's character, Jet, is a really good cook too. Perhaps you could switch it up a bit with something else they're obsessed with? It could be totally random haha
ill get my charature done a soon as possible might be by tommorow
 
Bird mannerism studies!


Feat. Platinum and Jet doin cute couple things that I have no knowledge on how to write.
 
Bird mannerism studies!


Feat. Platinum and Jet doin cute couple things that I have no knowledge on how to write.
Omg they are so cute. I never thought I would ship 2 birds so much. I love their dynamic! You should add that writing piece to your character sheet - it really brings them to life
 
Omg they are so cute. I never thought I would ship 2 birds so much. I love their dynamic! You should add that writing piece to your character sheet - it really brings them to life

Thank you, lol.

Platinum's a leucistic bat, tho.
 
Semblance Semblance Alright, I made some changes. I'll keep thinking in case you need more, but I feel a lot better about it now.
I really dig what you’ve added. I can picture her character a lot better now!

Also I’m just imaging kirri banging on her drums around Jet haha. Since Jet is part owl, I bet his hearing is more sensitive and loud ass drums probably aren’t his favorite
 
I really dig what you’ve added. I can picture her character a lot better now!

Also I’m just imaging kirri banging on her drums around Jet haha. Since Jet is part owl, I bet his hearing is more sensitive and loud ass drums probably aren’t his favorite

xD

They are, in fact, more sensitive. Eyesight and hearing, for the most part. He would not be enthused
 
Of course I mentioned Kirri loves herself some Jazz drumming too, perhaps Jet would be able to appreciate that more.
 

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