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Fantasy A Union in Chaos

@Paint The Wind[/URL] accepted most of the final product, modifying some of it along with me to make it better and adding several plot-twists along the way. Sorry that you don't like the change.


Thus the only things I admit to is rushing things and boasting too much about shit that I wrote. I would probably leave this right now if they were normal circumstances, because I need to steam off and chill out for a bit. But that? That would leave you with no Villains, and as I once said: Nothing that I make dies. And I keep my word. So if I am to leave, then only after this RP is over, unless of course that makes your creative freedom feel hurt again. In any case, with my few last posts I skipped about 30% of the good stuff that me and @Paint The Wind planned. We're about to hit the end, then you can have your freedom back and I can stop being hated because I was told to make a fucking villain, a reason for the villain to be the villain and thus a plot too.)
 
(( @Safety Hammer @FireMaiden @The Unamed Beast @Kylesar1 @Paint The Wind


After listening to "Ave Maria" for 10 minutes I calmed down and saw the errors of my ways.


Will anyone give me their ideas? You guys have made me see my mistakes. I admit. Being ordered to think this whole thing up, while no one else gives me advice of their own, except for Painty was a bad idea. I see now. So, please, tell me what you want to do with the plot so we can move it forward.


How do you want to finish this RP off?


))
 
Birdsie said:
(Here it goes, prepare for the final arc. Let's avoid the plot-twists, because you guys clearly don't give a single fuck about them and they don't interest you at all. Then we can have the next RP with your absolute creative freedom. Again, don't blame me for being ordered to think up all of the Villains for this RP and what they did.)Kaldor Dreigo


He nodded. "I see, then." he responded, then walked to his men and gave them instructions. As soon as he started talking, one of the Paladins looked behind Kaldor and said "Uh, si-" but was stopped by Kaldor. "Shut up!" he yelled, then continued. The Paladin yelled "SIR, HE'S BEHIND YOU!" Kaldor turned around saying "Who is?" to see Eliphas minding his business, he had the books.


"AFTER HIM!" he yelled and they ran, catching Eliphas with time...


Kaldor walked into the Castle, then towards the hall of wisdom. He pushed cuffed Eliphas inside and said "We found him, with the books."


@Kylesar1 @Paint The Wind @FireMaiden @The Unamed Beast @Safety Hammer


Eliphas


Eliphas kneeled on the floor, in front of Ari. He was silent, his sword thrown beside him by Kaldor.
Ari loomed over Eliphas. "Look, Eliphas. We have no qualms against you, especially with your amnesia. We just want the books." Ari took the books out of his bag. "You're free to go......set the woman free as well."


Jacob removed the seals from the woman's leg

The Unamed Beast](([URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/10876-kylesar1/ said:
@Kylesar1[/URL] Want to help make Celia Human again?))
(Let's get it.)
 
FireMaiden said:
(Wait a sec @Birdsie, finish it off?
(Yeah. @Safety Hammer told me it infringes your personal freedom, which is really bad, so we need to burn this down and forget about it as fast as possible. I feel stupid and sorry that I did notice that. I am horribly sorry. This is all mostly my fault and I admit to it.


We need to burn this RP cancer down as fast as possible and start the sequel, also as fast as possible.


Because of me and my fucking pseudo-self-evolved BPD no one enjoyed this for even a moment. Honestly, I kind of want to kill myself. Not in a literal meaning, I just feel like I'm about to collapse to the ground from shame and embarrasment. Talking about it isn't a good strategy either, but who gives a crap?


Again, let's finish this off and make the sequel already. From this point onward I will not make plots, or villains ever again. Unless they will be only 1% my ideas and 99% what people tell me that they should be.)
 
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Celia looked at Jacob and almost started to cry. "I... I'm sorry I went berserk.... I do not know what happened or where I was..." She said as she tried to hold back tears. "I get it if you want nothing to do with me..." She could barely hold back her tears.


@Kylesar1
 
Kylesar1 said:
Ari loomed over Eliphas. "Look, Eliphas. We have no qualms against you, especially with your amnesia. We just want the books." Ari took the books out of his bag. "You're free to go......set the woman free as well."
Jacob removed the seals from the woman's leg


(Let's get it.)

Eliphas



He just looked down, being freed by one of the Paladins. Then got up, taking his sword. "I can't remember who I am, but someone told me to do so." he said, then looked around. He asked "So, what now? What will you do? What if Azriel lied? What if he wants to use them for his own power?"


(NORMALLY. Kaldor would betray you guys, because Plot-Twist: He is an evil, vile fucking necromancer that used the Book of the Mind to mask himself and his men from their corruption. Plot-Twist: They are all undead, and they were undead for ages. That's why they never prayed. But since we are doing the: Your ideas approach, I am going to listen for once.)
 
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Birdsie said:
(Yeah. @Safety Hammer told me it infringes your personal freedom, which is really bad, so we need to burn this down and forget about it as fast as possible. I feel stupid and sorry that I did notice that. I am horribly sorry. This is all mostly my fault and I admit to it.
We need to burn this RP cancer down as fast as possible and start the sequel, also as fast as possible.


Because of me and my fucking pseudo-self-evolved BPD no one enjoyed this for even a moment. Honestly, I kind of want to kill myself. Not in a literal meaning, I just feel like I'm about to collapse to the ground from shame and embarrasment. Talking about it isn't a good strategy either, but who gives a shit?


Again, let's finish this off and make the sequel already. From this point onward I will not make plots, or villains ever again. Unless they will be only 1% my ideas and 99% what random people tell me that they should be.)
(Ok, well, safety and paint had some ideas about this rp that would bring back some old villains. We could keep this one going with their ideas since I'm pretty sure one, no, I know one of them is fucked up, but would be pretty interesting. But, if everyone is ok with stopping this one, then I suppose we should.)
 
FireMaiden said:
(Ok, well, safety and paint had some ideas about this rp that would bring back some old villains. We could keep this one going with their ideas since I'm pretty sure one, no, I know one of them is fucked up, but would be pretty interesting. But, if everyone is ok with stopping this one, then I suppose we should.)
(Bringing back old villains? Not that I from all people have a say at all in this. But imo this is a bad idea. Amos is twice as dead as it's possible. Alreos is just some ghost with no reason to even go back to do anything. Leon does not have a body.


They are all shitty, thoughtless ideas, but here's what me and Paint planned:


You guys can scrap and take whatever you want from this. I will use only what you guys see fit.

  • Eliphas is Arabelle and Leon's son. Jenika is her daughter, but her soul was corrupted at young age. They were both kidnapped by a Warlock that used a memory removing spell on Leon and Arabelle, then on the children and experimented, making them both into super-soldiers. Alreos found out about this and stopped him, telling the children that he is their father, then trained them for years to kill Leon and Arabelle. In-fact, they were the ones who killed Leon along with a group of well-trained and elite men, but Eliphas for some reason could not kill Arabelle, so he kept the fact that he spared her a secret from Jenika and the group. Then when Alreos died, they discovered that Arabelle was their mother. Jenika wanted to kill her, but Eliphas had a neutral approach. Wanting to help his sister he agreed. They heard about the end of the world from Azriel, so they decided to hide in the Black Library, hoping it would be strong enough to keep them within. Azriel instead wants to prevent the end of te World.
  • The Elder God is the beast with one eye, the final villain of the RP. He wants to destroy the world and reshape it in his image, but his power was limited as he fell asleep for ages.
  • Azriel would awaken the Elder God, by taking the books, reading them and absorbing the end of the world... literally. Then patching up all of the holes in the 3 realms. The Elder God would appear and they would beat him, blah, blah. Azriel absorbs him and discovers the truth about himself and Arabelle.
  • Arabelle must die, because she is an Ancient God that brings suffering onto people around her. Her soul has to be destroyed, so has Azriel's. They did not know that before, as their souls are literally incarnations, not actual Ancient Gods. They still bring suffering to the world, though.
  • The Sons of Korhal were corrupted by their book LOOONG ago, they are a cult of The Elder God, called The Sons of Malice. They were to help him in the final battle, betraying Ari and the rest.
  • Kaldor Dreigo practices Necromancy, him and the Sons of Malice are all Undead and corrupt, however the Book of the Mind taught them illusion spells on such a level that they are able to trick EVEN Gods into false belief that they are all still alive. This is why their Citadel in Korhal has no crosses, and why they don't pray and why they do not act like Paladins at all. They wanted the Books to awaken the Elder God.
 
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Birdsie said:
(Bringing back old villains? Not that I from all people have a say at all in this. But imo this is a bad idea. Amos is twice as dead as it's possible. Alreos is just some ghost with no reason to even go back to do anything. Leon does not have a body.
They are all shitty, thoughtless ideas, but here's what me and Paint planned:


You guys can scrap and take whatever you want from this. I will use only what you guys see fit.

  • Eliphas is Arabelle and Leon's son. Jenika is her daughter, but her soul was corrupted at young age. They were both kidnapped by a Warlock that used a memory removing spell on Leon and Arabelle, then on the children and experimented, making them both into super-soldiers. Alreos found out about this and stopped him, telling the children that he is their father, then trained them for years to kill Leon and Arabelle. In-fact, they were the ones who killed Leon along with a group of well-trained and elite men, but Eliphas for some reason could not kill Arabelle, so he kept the fact that he spared her a secret from Jenika and the group. Then when Alreos died, they discovered that Arabelle was their mother. Jenika wanted to kill her, but Eliphas had a neutral approach. Wanting to help his sister he agreed. They heard about the end of the world from Azriel, so they decided to hide in the Black Library, hoping it would be strong enough to keep them within. Azriel instead wants to prevent the end of te World.
  • The Elder God is the beast with one eye, the final villain of the RP. He wants to destroy the world and reshape it in his image, but his power was limited as he fell asleep for ages.
  • Azriel would awaken the Elder God, by taking the books, reading them and absorbing the end of the world... literally. Then patching up all of the holes in the 3 realms. The Elder God would appear and they would beat him, blah, blah. Azriel absorbs him and discovers the truth about himself and Arabelle.
  • Arabelle must die, because she is an Ancient God that brings suffering onto people around her. Her soul has to be destroyed, so has Azriel's. They did not know that before, as their souls are literally incarnations, not actual Ancient Gods. They still bring suffering to the world, though.
  • The Sons of Korhal were corrupted by their book LOOONG ago, they are a cult of The Elder God, called The Sons of Malice. They were to help him in the final battle, betraying Ari and the rest.
  • Kaldor Dreigo practices Necromancy, him and the Sons of Malice are all Undead and corrupt, however the Book of the Mind taught them illusion spells on such a level that they are able to trick EVEN Gods into false belief that they are all still alive. This is why their Citadel in Korhal has no crosses, and why they don't pray and why they do not act like Paladins at all. They wanted the Books to awaken the Elder God.
(Safety was gonna bring Kahn back for nefarious reasons)
 
Birdsie said:
(How is that asshole even alive? Or how is he supposed to be revived?)
(Well, if it continues and they can do their ideas, you'll see. Trust me it's fucked up, plus we could do a time skip of like a month or two.)
 
(After reading the arguments from the IC as well as our PM, I can see Bird's viewpoint. He is one of the only villains, if not only, so he really does determine the plot..........at least somewhat. I didn't really care for the whole Oblivion idea but at least the villains, motives and all that shit comes together.)

Birdsie said:
(Yeah. @Safety Hammer told me it infringes your personal freedom, which is really bad, so we need to burn this down and forget about it as fast as possible. I feel stupid and sorry that I did notice that. I am horribly sorry. This is all mostly my fault and I admit to it.
We need to burn this RP cancer down as fast as possible and start the sequel, also as fast as possible.


Because of me and my fucking pseudo-self-evolved BPD no one enjoyed this for even a moment. Honestly, I kind of want to kill myself. Not in a literal meaning, I just feel like I'm about to collapse to the ground from shame and embarrasment. Talking about it isn't a good strategy either, but who gives a shit?


Again, let's finish this off and make the sequel already. From this point onward I will not make plots, or villains ever again. Unless they will be only 1% my ideas and 99% what people tell me that they should be.)
(It's hard to tell if this is genuine or if this is sarcasm, so I'm gonna settle for sarcasm disguised as extremely over-exaggerated shame. Shakespearean style. We're already too deep in to abandon this plot. We can't all have the exact same amount of say-so since someone has to be the definitive GM, and I personally don't want it. If I did, I'd host my own. Giving influence doesn't mean stifling your own.)


(I say we either keep the plot as it is, or we abandon ship, and never speak about this again. Delete the thread and don't even mark it a failure. Scrapping the plot in favor of something else like that won't make sense.)
 
Kylesar1 said:
(After reading the arguments from the IC as well as our PM, I can see Bird's viewpoint. He is one of the only villains, if not only, so he really does determine the plot..........at least somewhat. I didn't really care for the whole Oblivion idea but at least the villains, motives and all that shit comes together.)
(It's hard to tell if this is genuine or if this is sarcasm, so I'm gonna settle for sarcasm disguised as extremely over-exaggerated shame. Shakespearean style. We're already too deep in to abandon this plot. We can't all have the exact same amount of say-so since someone has to be the definitive GM, and I personally don't want it. If I did, I'd host my own. Giving influence doesn't mean stifling your own.)


(I say we either keep the plot as it is, or we abandon ship, and never speak about this again. Delete the thread and don't even mark it a failure. Scrapping the plot in favor of something else like that won't make sense.)
(Well, holy crap. Thanks for seeing my point, Jesus Christ. I feel kinda relieved.)

FireMaiden said:
(Well, if it continues and they can do their ideas, you'll see. Trust me it's fucked up, plus we could do a time skip of like a month or two.)
(End of the world, thoug- Oh, right. My plot is deleted, because it infringed free will.


Okay, so how about this: We stick to my plot, and make this end as fast as possible.)
 
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Birdsie said:
(End of the world, thoug- Oh, right. My plot is deleted, because it infringed free will.
Okay, so how about this: We stick to my plot, and make this end as fast as possible.
(Ok, I think we can do that. Then in the sequel can we have Paint's and Safety's pot ideas?)
 
Birdsie said:
(( @Safety Hammer @FireMaiden @The Unamed Beast @Kylesar1 @Paint The Wind
After listening to "Ave Maria" for 10 minutes I calmed down and saw the errors of my ways.


Will anyone give me their ideas? You guys have made me see my mistakes. I admit. Being ordered to think this whole thing up, while no one else gives me advice of their own, except for Painty was a bad idea. I see now. So, please, tell me what you want to do with the plot so we can move it forward.


How do you want to finish this RP off?


))
((Ave Maria is the shit man))
 
FireMaiden said:
(Ok, I think we can do that. Then in the sequel can we have Paint's and Safety's pot ideas?)
(Yes. Why are you even asking me?


I think that I should not make plots from now on. No one enjoys my ideas except for myself. Well, Tyranny of King Valerian was my idea... but that doesn't count, because that was luck, or crap... or I wasn't an asshole back then? Whatever. In any case, I will continue with the plot that I had in mind, except it will be sped up by 500%)


Eliphas


Eliphas sighed, picking up his sword. At least he'd have peace from now on, but he stopped when he heard laughter.


Kaldor Dreigo


Kaldor laughed in a very, cheerful and friendly way, then looked at Ari. "Very good, friend. We have won this day. Now, please give me the books. Using them I will stop the coming Oblivion." he said, very happily, holding his hand out to Ari, waiting for him to give him the books.


@Kylesar1
 
[QUOTE="Paint The Wind]((Ave Maria is the shit man))

[/QUOTE]
((Y'know... they say... that Ave Maria works miracles. ))
 
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(I actually saw everything on the last page it's just with all of that I'm too far behind given how fast the plot has moved forward. I don't mean to hurt anyone's feelings but I don't think I can really work with where we are at now. I mean not unless someone could give a reason for Cross to be near Ari or anything like that.)
 
(King Valerian was by far the best RP I have personally been in. We need more of that. Less magic in general, which I and Green's Sepentireon really are to blame for.)


"Wait........" Ari's eyebrows arched in confusion. "You sent men to give us the books so we could give them to Azriel. What use could you have for them?"


@Birdsie
 
Kylesar1 said:
(King Valerian was by far the best RP I have personally been in. We need more of that. Less magic in general, which I and Green's Sepentireon really are to blame for.)
"Wait........" Ari's eyebrows arched in confusion. "You sent men to give us the books so we could give them to Azriel. What use could you have for them?"


@Birdsie
(I'd like to reboot the series, start from the beginning and do stuff the correct way, but nobody will play that shit. Maybe in a year, or something?)


Kaldor Dreigo


He sighed and shook his head. "Ari, you cannot trust that vile Warlock. He sold his soul. He could be corrupt." Kaldor tried convincing Ari, moving his hand a bit back. "I can do the same as him, using the right techniques I can fix the holes in the universe before they even start." he added.
 

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