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Fantasy A Dragon and Their Rider

Pretty good! A tip that I tend to find useful would be to avoid thought emotes. As a general rule of thumb, unless every other character can see your own character's thoughts, it adds nothing to the story.


For example, instead of emoting *Frowns as he remembers the sad day his parents died.* it could be *Frowns, a drawn out sigh coming from the man as he fiddles with the grass between his folded legs.*. It gives others the opportunity to approach your character and ask, or to do whatever the hell they want
 
*That moment when you forgot to reply*


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Mephistophelian said:
Pretty good! A tip that I tend to find useful would be to avoid thought emotes. As a general rule of thumb, unless every other character can see your own character's thoughts, it adds nothing to the story.
For example, instead of emoting *Frowns as he remembers the sad day his parents died.* it could be *Frowns, a drawn out sigh coming from the man as he fiddles with the grass between his folded legs.*. It gives others the opportunity to approach your character and ask, or to do whatever the hell they want
Wow, thanks that was actually really useful! I definitely make that mistake a lot - i'll watch out for it
 
@Coal


i am sorry but wont be that active i went through some situation and RP is limited.....i am sorry
 
Coal said:
Its fine~
sorry just stress out is all and need some time to flush out and clear up,hope you understand


and the under dudes have appeared huh
 
[QUOTE="T h e F o o l]Where be the characters >->

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I dont really get your question xD you mean the rest of the Roleplayers?
 
[QUOTE="T h e F o o l]Where are the other characters I mean.. ex. Emrys

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If you mean their location in the Rp.. The base.
 
(Sorry confuse OOC!)


@Coal


well for me it was not finals or anything was more personal related and was down for long but im feeling better so im back in game,sorry if i lack on replies just you know,Wanna be off here and there
 
Coal said:
Roen [the antagonist] is creating an undead armyy. But i won't be setting this into fu;l motion until finals are over
Kk!!~ (Thx.) xD :D :3
 
Coal said:
This is my first detailed Rp, so please be lenient with me! If you have any questions I will gladly answer them.
*I'm also making a map! Hopefully it will help imagining all of this.


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