Q: am i doing this right, A: no
//Character's name
Grace
//CS Link
CS LinkSCENE:
//Name of scene
School Day
LOCATION:
//Location of scene
Amanogawa Highschool, Hallway Outside Class 3-B
PARTICIPANTS:
//Name of characters involved
Gerdy (@galvanismgal), Yamazaki...
The delinquent's words were not rare to hear for Ashlynn. This one is always causing trouble, and if it weren't for the graduation preparation keeping him tame for the time, he'd likely have been the one they were chewing out in the hallway. Ashlynn couldn't help but wonder why all the promising...
Heart pounding like a motor, her mouth filled with the bitter taste of blood, and her feet slammed against the tiled floors of her school's halls as she fled. Gemma's body, exhausted, kept pushing, and the slamming of shoes against the tile echoed like an orchestra's percussion solo. Yet, the...
I have no idea how to pronounce any of the names in the document so pronunciations for when names like countries first appear would be cool
I didnt check beforehand if this was already recommended so oopsies if it was XD
Gemma Pandora {Karma}
Artist Credit: FC Made by Advarcher
Gender
Female [She/Her]
Height
5'6
Age
17
Power Lv.
Delta
Power Cat.
/Genius
Power Abil.
Prep Time, Knack for Mechanics and Inventions,
Description
Ever since she can remember, Gemma worked at her father's diner, preparing and tasting...
The beautiful sea's lullaby played below her, waves pushing against the edge of their school. To themselves, they hummed along to match the lullaby below the balcony. Ashlynn watched the moonlight dance across the waves till she grew weary. Tomorrow will be as busy as today. Graduation weekend...
Designed and coded by @Nano.
Please do not remove the credits or claim the code as your own work.
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I agree with DovahBeat's opinion
Also more text just means more material to work with. Which allows for the cultivation of more ideas so I'd say it definitely leans towards the pleasant surprise. Like imagine you found lapis lazuli but it was actually diamonds. Maybe I'm relying on metaphors too...
I sent this to a friend btw and only after they talked to me I realized, "oh wait, you can scroll past the prologue???" I finished reading it all now and my point still stands. I'm still very interested, if not more. I just think it's really funny that I missed that