Hey Solemn, you make a lot of characters who are borderline Sues, even having a few actual sues, but this dude is really crossing quite a few lines. If you really had so many issues with Bismark, specifically with him being a potential protagonist and all, you really shouldn't make a copy of...
Adley Fethawit
Adley was well aware of what typically happened to him when he climbed up walls to peak into houses. He especially knew what happened when he looked into places where one Erika Furudo lived, after all he could feel the motor in his right leg turn every time he moved the limb. He...
Name:
Adley Fethawit
Alias/Title/Nickname(s):
Addy, Witless, If I Have To Spend Another Minute With Him, Piston
Age:
23
Date of Birth/Horoscope:
August 9, Leo
Gender:
Male
Sexuality:
Erika-sexual
Crush/Lover:
Erika Furudo
Race:
Cyborg
Appearance:
His left hand, shoulder, eye, right lower leg...
Lora looked up from the reaping performed by Genevieve. It was slow, but certainly a kind way to send off the dead. A staff was an unconventional weapon for a reaper; then again, so were Lora's manriki.
Loretta could clearly see Genevieve's lack of training, but she did have potential and a...
Lora nodded distractedly, "Thank you, Miss Underworld. I appreciate your faith, and I intend to learn as much as I can for the rest of my training."
Lora was very grateful to receive the comments from Lily; any opinion from a reaper of her caliber was to be taken seriously. Loretta didn't know...
Loretta wrinkled her nose in disgust when she saw who she would be reaping; people like that never had any good stories. Despite her revulsion with the woman, Lora gently moved one of the bodies out of the vehicle.
The scantily clad woman was laid out on the ground without much ado. She let...
Lora watched as Lily left. Time to prove herself. With a nod to the Russian man she turned to Damian.
"It's a pleasure to make your acquaintance," Loretta said with a slight roll of her eyes, "Though fair warning, calling yourself the reaper that transcends the gods may bring a backlash. While...
Lora smiled a bit as her mentor finally acted. The crowd was a bit annoying; you'd think they would know that they had actual jobs to do. Loretta shook her head at that thought.
She turned back to the madman, "I can assure you that I'll be just fine. However, I still don't know who you are...
"Oh, Chrysanthemum. That's her name," Lora mumbled under her breath.
She shook her head and returned her focus to Lily and the Death kid, or dead kid. It looks like another reaper had gotten herself wrapped up in the mess. Loretta didn't want to deal with this; she wanted to start her training...
Loretta nodded at the other trainee, "I'm Loretta Velma. It'll be interesting working with you, if I do."
Lora tucked her little black book away with a dip into her cloak. Out of paranoia, she brushed her hand around the chain that wrapped around her waist in the same way as a sash would be...
A bit of tension slipped out of Lora's shoulders, "Why thank you very much, Miss Underworld. I'll do my best not to cause any problems for you in any way. I shouldn't be too much trouble as I only have half a year of training left."
Loretta studied the newly approached people after Lily walked...
Loretta wasn't nervous when she entered IGRA headquarters. Even if she did feel a bit anxious, Lora would refuse to admit it anyway. She quickly walked to the line for a new cup of coffee (Lora refused to drink the dirt they called sweet tea). As she was retrieving her drink, she noticed a pale...
Um, hey. I kinda need a mentor and I sort of want to do it as my character going around and either finding one or just not knowing who hers is if she was assigned one. Is that alright? And, uh, would someone mind becoming her mentor?
Hey, so I'm pretty new to RPNation and I was wondering if anybody was willing to look over my character (Loretta Velma) and give criticism, good and bad (though the latter is preferred). I was also hoping I could get some tips on how to roleplay her, too if you don't mind.
Name:
Loretta Velma
Age:
24
Nicknames/Alias:
Lora, Miss Velma
Gender:
Female
Identifies As:
Female
Nationality:
American
Hometown:
Raleigh, North Carolina
Date of Birth:
September 22
Horoscope:
Virgo
Appearance:
(She does look a bit older than that. She also has a thick Red Riding Hood-esque...