the ideas aren't bad but two things mate smelt is past tense smells in this case, you can trip and fall on the floor and say something etc that way you're sticking to three lines.
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feel free to join vix in the garden since kio stormed off on him due to her misunderstandings etc
not cool, well feel free to flirt with me wherever the mood takes you hun
my friend broken my heart why did she take away my boyfriend whyshe stab me in the back *cries*
last post vix flicked your head to get you up so you can go from there and such
before i post in any of our rps i need you to post in ga kill take your time with the post within reason of course
not bad but before i post again look at the post there's a few bits that are out of place
I have ga kill to finish including your part have you done a post in lost city
i feel like crying right now my poor scar hurts *cries* in a lot of pain someone hear me
nm i'll work with it but please read next time lol
I waiting for u to post in lost city as well
waiting for you to edit hun because you've posted as vix being on top of you lol
Oh snap i forgot kio's is stright
do you want vix to fix your eye and good post
Stupid door i hurt myself with now i'm bleeding -.-
it's a little better but now you have to reply to her post again before i can reply
Good post but you just made the rift between you and even bigger so expect him to be pretty cold to you
i'll link my post to your for the zombie rp
You can take over vix to pay for you thing and then i'll ff it to the rest of the stuff
much better as i said before in a couple of days vix is going give a chance to have a long talk with him, it's going to emotional on his end as well so you might want some tissues.
lol you haven't edit the bio for our rp and when you get the chance plz move ace and hana's bio's over
Much much better only a couple of minor typos and such because of past tenses and such if you keep going you'll get the right wording and such.
A little better in the next posts try to ' and so on to your posts so you more to work with
not but the post says blushing a little at first then says a lot so it would be better to just stick with blushing a lot and be angry and thoughts like has he always been able to see the real me and do i secretly want those things he said etc
it's going to be interesting but let's wait for the others to post now so we don't spam the rp -
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