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Fandom [Tokyo Ghoul] Glassy Sky

Miika said:
I'm so lazy >3<
but i will work on that. its a bit tricky though cause im on my phone a lot. and we all know how auto correct is sometimes.
Yeah... Should your phone at least capitalize the first letter of your sentence? How about you get a little more RP Skill under your belt, and come back here if the thread is still up... I hope to see you soon ^^
 
I type fast is all. My phone will capitalize, but when I'm typing on my computer ii don't really think about it (bad habit of mine) I just need to learn how to slow down
 
Miika said:
are the caps really the only issue? cause i havebeen roleplaying for over 7 years...
No... Grammar and spelling too. I feel like it'd be quite annoying for others in the RP... I know if I weren't the owner of this RP, I would be very upset if the owner were to let someone like that into the RP. Sorry...
 
GUYS IM NEW TO THIS SITE AND I CANT DECIDE WHICH RP TO JOIN, THIS ONE OR A MECHA ONE IN FUTURISTIC. CONVINCE ME.


also hello!
 
TPBx said:
GUYS IM NEW TO THIS SITE AND I CANT DECIDE WHICH RP TO JOIN, THIS ONE OR A MECHA ONE IN FUTURISTIC. CONVINCE ME.
also hello!
Go to the Mecha one ^^
 
Thetas said:
Go to the Mecha one ^^
Wow, feeling unwanted now. Maybe I shouldn't have came in all hyped up in caps after that little discourse on caps.
 
TPBx said:
Wow, feeling unwanted now. Maybe I shouldn't have came in all hyped up in caps after that little discourse on caps.
I'm being generous towards the other RP ^^ It's not that we DON'T Want you, but I've been really disappointed in how long the Futuristic RPs Last... They really need a lot more people over there xD Especially compared to Fandoms...
 
Quarantine said:
0.0 You couldn't decide.
That is true. I guess I'll head off to sci-fi land now. Goodbye peeps, maybe I'll come by again (most likely not, but that possible future exists). Have fun with your RP.
 
Thetas said:
I'm being generous towards the other RP ^^ It's not that we DON'T Want you, but I've been really disappointed in how long the Futuristic RPs Last... They really need a lot more people over there xD Especially compared to Fandoms...
Did not know that, I'll do my best to keep it alive then. xD
 
Quarantine said:
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Tsuki looked up, canceling the call. Uncertain who it was, as it came from a door only used by employees going inside, and on edge anyway, she took a knife from a block under the counter, about eight inches from end to end. She was a ghoul, but if it was human, it wouldn't be the best idea to use her kagune. She tried to avoid that.


The noises continued, and she gripped the wooden handle tighter, her Converse almost silent as she walked toward the unlit hallway that lead to the door. Before she got there, Asato appeared with Shii. Tsuki didn't look at him closely, but saw blood. She didn't really feel anything. It was, in itself, its own feeling.


She looked back at the hall, and went down.


Already, she could see a figure in the light that was available. Though it was difficult to tell, she realized it was Vale.


She knew Vale was in the right. He always was.


Not wanting to touch him, as he might have still had adrenaline after waking up, she looked at him closely, her breathing shallow.


"Vale," she said, her voice barely above a scared whisper. She didn't know what to do.


"Vale," She repeated, with little meaning behind the word. She said it without thinking, and she didn't even know what she was saying in that moment. Finally, she crouched down, lifting his shirt but seeing no wounds. She stopped breathing entirely for a moment, before she said the same meaningless word, in the same voice.


@MiyaTheNeko @Thetas


Call me fuckin' stupid, but I didn't understand a WORD Of that xD


Also, I dun fucked up xD But I can fix it!! *Me talking to myself*
 
Thetas said:
Call me fuckin' stupid, but I didn't understand a WORD Of that xD
Also, I dun fucked up xD But I can fix it!! *Me talking to myself*
Sorry. I'll reword it. I had to reread it really slowly to understand it too.
 
Quarantine said:
All done.
Does it check out?
Either I'm really, really tired... Or I'm just not smart enough to decode that whole thing xD


I'm so sorry, could you just explain it to me?? xD So many words there just don't fit in my mind.


I feel so stupid xD
 
(Awwww. Wittle Thetas cant wead?)


Tsuki looked up, canceling the call. The door the noise came from was reserved for employees. And if they wanted to leave, they usually used the front door.


(She heard a noise from the employee door. Employees left through the front door, so it probably wasn't a staff member.)


She was a ghoul, but if it was human, it wouldn't be the best idea to use her kagune. She tried to avoid that. The bartender grabbed a knife.


(If it was a human, she didn't want them seeing her kagune, so she took a knife.)


The noises continued, and she gripped the wooden handle tighter. Her footsteps were almost silent as she walked toward the unlit hallway that lead to the door.


(She heard more noise, and held the knife tighter. Her footsteps were quiet as she went towards the hall.)


Before she got there, Asato appeared with Shii, dragging him.


(Before she got there, she saw Asato with Shii.)


Tsuki didn't look at him closely, but saw blood. She didn't really feel anything. That was, kind of, its own feeling.


(She barely looked at him, but saw the blood. She didn't have many emotions, which was kind of like its own emotion(stoic))


She looked back at the hall, and went down.


(She went down the hall.)


She could see a figure in the light that was available. Though it was difficult to tell, she realized it was Vale.


(There wasn't much light in the hall, but she could see Vale.)


She knew Vale was in the right. He always was.


(She trusted that Vale never did anything wrong.)


Not wanting to touch him, as he might have still been angry, she looked at him closely, her breathing shallow.


(He might wake up angrily, so she tried not to touch him.)


"Vale," she said, her voice barely above a scared whisper. She didn't know what to do.


(She said 'Vale,' in a quiet, scared voice. She didn't know what to do.)


"Vale," She repeated, with little meaning behind the word. She said it without thinking.


(She was saying his name because she didn't know what else to do, and said it without thinking.)


Finally, she crouched down, lifting his shirt but seeing no wounds. She stopped breathing for a moment, before she said the same meaningless word, in the same voice.


(She lifted his shirt and didn't see any wounds. She held her breath before she said his name one last time.)


BE HAPPY.
 
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Quarantine said:
(Awwww. Wittle Thetas cant wead?)
Tsuki looked up, canceling the call. The door the noise came from was reserved for employees. And if they wanted to leave, they usually used the front door.


(She heard a noise from the employee door. Employees left through the front door, so it probably wasn't a staff member.)


She was a ghoul, but if it was human, it wouldn't be the best idea to use her kagune. She tried to avoid that. The bartender grabbed a knife.


(If it was a human, she didn't want them seeing her kagune, so she took a knife.)


The noises continued, and she gripped the wooden handle tighter. Her footsteps were almost silent as she walked toward the unlit hallway that lead to the door.


(She heard more noise, and held the knife tighter. Her footsteps were quiet as she went towards the hall.)


Before she got there, Asato appeared with Shii, dragging him.


(Before she got there, she saw Asato with Shii.)


Tsuki didn't look at him closely, but saw blood. She didn't really feel anything. That was, kind of, its own feeling.


(She barely looked at him, but saw the blood. She didn't have many emotions, which was kind of like its own emotion(stoic))


She looked back at the hall, and went down.


(She went down the hall.)


She could see a figure in the light that was available. Though it was difficult to tell, she realized it was Vale.


(There wasn't much light in the hall, but she could see Vale.)


She knew Vale was in the right. He always was.


(She trusted that Vale never did anything wrong.)


Not wanting to touch him, as he might have still been angry, she looked at him closely, her breathing shallow.


(He might wake up angrily, so she tried not to touch him.)


"Vale," she said, her voice barely above a scared whisper. She didn't know what to do.


(She said 'Vale,' in a quiet, scared voice. She didn't know what to do.)


"Vale," She repeated, with little meaning behind the word. She said it without thinking.


(She was saying his name because she didn't know what else to do, and said it without thinking.)


Finally, she crouched down, lifting his shirt but seeing no wounds. She stopped breathing for a moment, before she said the same meaningless word, in the same voice.


(She lifted his shirt and didn't see any wounds. She held her breath before she said his name one last time.)


BE HAPPY.
I AM SORRY xD The available light thing, and my mind not being used to that use of the word Right was what threw me off. Either that or the massive headache, made worse by what I'm almost 100% Sure is a fracture I got in June, and never went to the hospital for. One of the two.
 
Thetas said:
I AM SORRY xD The available light thing, and my mind not being used to that use of the word Right was what threw me off. Either that or the massive headache, made worse by what I'm almost 100% Sure is a fracture I got in June, and never went to the hospital for. One of the two.
or 2 deep 4 u
 
Quarantine said:
No worries. I'll try to use small words/sentences from now on xD
Don't!! xDD Use your full vocabulary ^^ I was just really thrown off by the use of the word 'Right'... You never see that xDD I'm aware that it CAN Be used like that... But, I only read it as the direction. Which I assume is from what feels like a concussion. And from what I hope isn't a concussion.
 

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