Fantasy The Seven

[Baconhands]

@Leo The Sagittarius[/URL]
Your character looks good.


@Decay


Hmm, I like your character idea, but I am not very enthusiastic about your grammar. Also, your character would't have become the Sin of Envy after he was dead simply because he was envious of those around him.


The Seven Deadly Sins are called that because they were born with that Sin. From the very moment their soul came into existence, they possessed that Sin. The Sin doesn't necessarily define their character, but there is nothing saying they can't be like their sin.


I can't accept your character as it is now. You'll need to fix up the grammar as well as change the fact that he became Envy after he died. As for his powers, he'll have to have a limit on the number of people he can change into at a given time. I'd also like you to be more descriptive about his Sin Form. Since his powers are shape-shifting and mind controlling weak willed people, his powers increasing ten fold doesn't make much sense.


@Baconhands


Your sin form's power is alright, however, I'm going to put a limit on how big he can be. I'm fine with a Dragon, but that form can only be as big as a truck.

Fine with me.

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

@Baconhands


Alright, then it is fine.

 

[Baconhands]

If it's okay, I'm going to give each form different reasons form him to be that form and give each one abilities.

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

I think that would be alright.

 

[Kenji Jensai]

hey I was wondering if we could incorporate the 4 horsemen in this as like beings of power who take the memories of others to replace their own lost memories


I was thinking sorta like this

they don't have to look exactly like this but interesting idea right from left to right Conquest, War, Famine, Death

 

[Baconhands]

I'll do the stuff for the dragon when I wake up tomorrow/today. Enjoy the stuff on the Hell Hound

 

[Baconhands]

[QUOTE="Kenji Jensai]hey I was wondering if we could incorporate the 4 horsemen in this as like beings of power who take the memories of others to replace their own lost memories
I was thinking sorta like this

they don't have to look exactly like this but interesting idea right from left to right Conquest, War, Famine, Death

[/QUOTE]
What happened to plague?

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

@Kenji Jensai


I'll think about it, though if I did bring them in, no one who played as a Sin could play as a Horseman.


@Baconhands I was thinking that as well. War and Conquest are actually very similar, I don't know why they would be separate.

 

[Kenji Jensai]

@Baconhands ,@Seraph Darkfire


Well actually the 4 four horseman are traditionally War, Famine, Death, Pestilence sorry for the confusion Ill change my post to that the left is pestilence which is plague

 

[Decay]

@Seraph Darkfire I have corrected my mistakes there is a reason why in my sin form tab

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

@Decay


Much better, I can accept him now. I generally don't mind minor mistakes in grammar or spelling, but the more major it becomes the more it nags at me. As long as it flows properly, I can generally ignore minor mistakes.


It actually makes me feel a little bit better knowing you have Dyslexia. You have a reason for grammatical mistakes. I don't like it when people claim to write stories or roleplay, but can't even use a period.


@Kenji Jensai


I'll think about adding the horsemen later. If I do, I'll have to find a use for them.

 

[Baconhands]

@Seraph Darkfire How long have they known that they are the embodiment of a sin? How long ago did the King approach them?

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

@Baconhands


When it comes to the King of the Underworld, he does things as he pleases. My character alone spent hundreds of years traveling around before the King introduced himself.. But as everyone is dead, no one really ages so time is a bit ambiguous. Going by human time, I'd say that all seven have been aware of their circumstances for over a thousand years.

 

[Baconhands]

@Seraph Darkfire I see. Also have you read what I wrote up for the Hell-hound? Is that okay? I've written that the others know about his other forms

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

@Baconhands


Yes, it looks fine.

 

[Baconhands]

Cool. I need to write the dragon one now, should be fun

 

[Baconhands]

@Seraph Darkfire I know I'm going to look very impatient through this, but I honestly think that if we wait too long people will start to lose interest

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

I agree, that is generally what happens. We are only missing one person. Geek said they were getting ready for Halloween, but I think we can start. I'll do a roll call


@Geek with Me


Everyone, let us know you are still around and that you are ready to start.

 

[Baconhands]

[QUOTE="Seraph Darkfire]I agree, that is generally what happens. We are only missing one person. Geek said they were getting ready for Halloween, but I think we can start. I'll do a roll call
@Geek with Me


Everyone, let us know you are still around and that you are ready to start.

[/QUOTE]
Still here

 

[Kenji Jensai]

here

 

[Baconhands]

@Seraph Darkfire May I ask what plans you have in term of plot? Or is it up to us?

 

[Baconhands]

So I know the basic story but do you have any objects planned?

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

Not really. I plan to let things play out as the characters and relationships get fleshed out.

 

[Baconhands]

Cool.

 

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