Futuristic The Last City

[The Shadow Realm]

JUST POST MORE
IT'S SO HARD TO WORK OFF OF SO LITTLE IN A DETAILED RP T^T

True.

 

[TeaMMatE11]

Yes.
If you post more than 2 paragraphs. o-e

1) I was on mobile.


2) I was working.


._. GIMME A BREAK.

 

[Anaxileah]

1) I was on mobile.
2) I was working.


._. GIMME A BREAK.

Ididntknowpleasedonthateme ;-;

 

[Vladimir Amikov]

Ididntknowpleasedonthateme ;-;

Ana? Can I haz hugs?

 

[Anaxileah]

[QUOTE="Vladimir Amikov]Ana? Can I haz hugs?

[/QUOTE]
*hugs* You okay?

 

[Amelia White]

But really, what is the minimum? Just so I know that any post that I write needs to be at least that long before I post it. I truly thought that two average sized paragraphs would be a sufficient amount, but apparently I was mistaken. "More" isn't exactly a clear answer, as it could mean range from a word to a page.. I'd just like to know exactly where I was in the wrong.

 

[Anaxileah]

[QUOTE="Amelia White]But really, what is the minimum? Just so I know that any post that I write needs to be at least that long before I post it. I truly thought that two average sized paragraphs would be a sufficient amount, but apparently I was mistaken. "More" isn't exactly a clear answer, as it could mean range from a word to a page.. I'd just like to know exactly where I was in the wrong.

[/QUOTE]
More sentences o-o


Minimum is 2 paragraphs, but I aim for 6-8 sentences per paragraph, and I normally go for 3+ paragraphs. But that's just me. Shadow is the GM. *shrugs*

 

[Vladimir Amikov]

Guys, I need to go to bed...

 

[Anaxileah]

[QUOTE="Vladimir Amikov]Guys, I need to go to bed...

[/QUOTE]
Then sleep, child. Sleeeeeeeep.

 

[The Shadow Realm]

Fukin hell that post took me a long time to write, but alas it's now finished!

 

[The Shadow Realm]

[QUOTE="Vladimir Amikov]Guys, I need to go to bed...

[/QUOTE]
G'night.

 

[ObiSemKenobi]

[QUOTE="Amelia White]But really, what is the minimum? Just so I know that any post that I write needs to be at least that long before I post it. I truly thought that two average sized paragraphs would be a sufficient amount, but apparently I was mistaken. "More" isn't exactly a clear answer, as it could mean range from a word to a page.. I'd just like to know exactly where I was in the wrong.

[/QUOTE]
I think the key to this thing, at least in the current case, lies in Colab-posts. If you are having a conversation with another player you can hardly write three paragraphs every time any one of them says something to the other. But what you can do is once you know you are going to converse with another character is send them a PM and work out the conversation there, than post it as one big post on the forum once it's done.


As long as you advance the story I don't think you should worry too much about the literal amount of sentences, just make sure you add something that others can work with. Let us know what your character thinks or experiences. How does she feel about what's happening? Who is she going to interact with next?


Stuff like that. If you do that you will probably find your posts getting longer before you know it.

 

[The Shadow Realm]

I think the key to this thing, at least in the current case, lies in Colab-posts. If you are having a conversation with another player you can hardly write three paragraphs every time any one of them says something to the other. But what you can do is once you know you are going to converse with another character is send them a PM and work out the conversation there, than post it as one big post on the forum once it's done.
As long as you advance the story I don't think you should worry too much about the literal amount of sentences, just make sure you add something that others can work with. Let us know what your character thinks or experiences. How does she feel about what's happening? Who is she going to interact with next?


Stuff like that. If you do that you will probably find your posts getting longer before you know it.

This is true.

 

[Killthestory]

I think you guys are focusing too much on how cool your own character is and not on the consequences your actions are going to have.


I'll probably go over that in my introduction post.

 

[The Shadow Realm]

I think you guys are focusing too much on how cool your own character is and not on the consequences your actions are going to have.
I'll probably go over that in my introduction post.

My character isn't doing anything of the likes though

 

[Killthestory]

You'll know if I'm referring to you.

 

[ObiSemKenobi]

You'll know if I'm referring to you.

I think my character is pretty cool. I can hardly wait

 

[The Shadow Realm]

You'll know if I'm referring to you.

Alright, but I don't want my character to ever go full badass, full insane is more possible.

 

[Killthestory]

My post is just filled with me rambling at this point.

 

[The Shadow Realm]

My post is just filled with me rambling at this point.

Your guy got his ass beat xD

 

[Killthestory]

He could have taken them with his financing abilities if he wanted to. He went easy on them.

 

[The Shadow Realm]

He could have taken them with his financing abilities if he wanted to. He went easy on them.

Yeah, use mathjitzu.

 

[The Shadow Realm]

@TeaMMatE11 Not trying to be an ass but your newest post has quite a bit of grammatical errors, that and the fact that your character is being insanely OP. No human being could have that quick of a reaction time. (Example: You killed 3 people then sniped the forth.) Just because your character was orphaned doesn't mean you're mikasa off of AOT.

 

[Killthestory]

Your character has to have flaws to be a character and not a god.

 

[Anaxileah]

@TeaMMatE11[/URL] Not trying to be an ass but your newest post has quite a bit of grammatical errors, that and the fact that your character is being insanely OP. No human being could have that quick of a reaction time. (Example: You killed 3 people then sniped the forth.) Just because your character was orphaned doesn't mean you're mikasa off of AOT.

I do agree, but if you think about it his character has trained to be pretty good, and these are normal, sick, enraged people. They're not trained in combat, nor are they superhuman. But I do agree that his character shouldn't be invincible, maybe the bat gets ya in the stomach, @TeaMMatE11?


Also, could the 'wait until two other people post before you Post's thing be a thing here? So that people aren't just chatting it up and so others have time to make well thought out posts?